写作微技能训练

写作微技能训练高中英语

写作微技能训练第二章句子写作微技能训练（略）第三章段落写作微技能训练一篇好文章建构于良好的段落上，没有适当的段落，即使句子没有语法错误，也不算是一篇好文章。第一节段落=主题句+发展句+结尾句由主题句加上数个支持论点和结尾句就构成一个段落，数个段落就构成一篇文章。这就是英语作文的基本框架。Ihaveanoldbikewhichmyfathergavemeformy12thbirthday.Ireceivedalotofpresentsthatday,butthebikewasmyfavoriteone.Wehadcakeandicecreamattheparty.Thenwerodeourbiketothepark.Jimhadanaccidentonhisbikeandhadtoseeadoctor.Thenitstartedtorain.Irodemybikebackhomeanddidmyhomework.AfterdinnerItookmybikeoutagainandrodearoundtheneighborhood.Allmyfriendswantedtotrymynewbike.Itwasmyfavoritepresentthatday.WhatabusybirthdayIhad!B.Mybikeisold,butitisn’tuseless.ManyofmyfriendsandfamilymemberstellmathatIshouldbuyanewbike,,butmyoldonestillworkswell.Icanrideittothestores,tothepark,andtoschool.Itissooldthatnoonewillstealit.Someonemightstealanewbike,butnotanoldone.Lastweekmymother’smotorcyclehadaproblem,sosheborrowedmybiketovisitherfriend.Sometimesabikeisevenmoreusefulthanamotorcycle!Weshouldnotthrowthingsawayjustbecausetheyareold.Weshouldusethingstilltheybecomeuseless.B练习2.猜猜看到底哪一段写得好，A段还是B段？Why?Thebirdsweresingingearlyinthemorning.Theywokemeup,andIdressedmyselfinmynewclothes.Ihadboughttheminadepartmentstorejustthedaybefore.Theywereonsale,andthereweremorepeopleinthedepartmentstorethanIhadeverseenbefore.IwasluckytofindtheclothesIwantedonsale.Afterbreakfast,Iwenttoschoolandshowedoffmynewclothes.Iheardthefirstbirdssinging,buttheydidn’twakemeup.Actually,.Icouldn’tgettosleepthatnight.Asthefirstlightenteredmybedroom,Isawthemlaidoutonmychair,justwaitingformetowear.ThedaybeforeIhadboughtthesenewclothesonsaleatadepartmentstore.Ididn’tmindallthepeoplebecauseIfoundjusttheclothesIwanted.IfeltsoexcitedbecauseIcouldshowthemoffatschool.B练习3.分析下面的段落，找出其主题句、发展句和结尾句。总共有几个论点来支持主题句？主题句与结尾句以哪些相同的字来连贯Mybrother’sroomisthemessiestroomintheworld!Ifyouopenhisdoor,youwillfirstnoticethatyoucannotwalkeasilyinsidehisroom.Oldmagazinesandcomicbooksarealloverthefloor.Idon’tthinkthatadogwouldsleepinhisbedbecauseofallthedirtyclothesonit.Hisdesklookslikeagarbagecan.Onlyapigwouldbehappyinmybrother’sroom.Canyouimagineamessierroomthanmybrother’s?B.Isupportthecitygovernment’spunishmentondrunkdriving.Manypeoplecomplainthatthenewlawagainstdrunkdrivingistoostrict,butIdon’tagree.Noonehastherighttohurtothers.Drunkdriverssometimeshitothercarsandevenkillotherpeople.Lawsaremadetoprotecteveryone,notonlypeoplewholiketodrink.Besides,youcandrinkandhavesomeoneelsedriveyouhomeorsimplytakeataxi.Drunkdrivingisdangerousforeveryone,soIsupportthestrictnewlawbythecitygovernmentagainstdrunkdriving.第二节主题句写作微技能训练大多数的段落写作，作者会在一开头就把中心思想点出。这叫主题句。主题句是由主题（Topic）加上作者对主题的看法（idea)构成。主题句不一定是一个句子，有时也可能是两个句子构成一个观点。e.g.Computersarenotalwayssoconvenient!Computers是主题，notalwayssoconvenient是作者对主题的看法练习1指出下列主题句中的主题和作者对主题的看法。Ridingabicyclecanbefun.2.Kiteflyingisnotonlyforchildren.3.Sometimes“littlewhitelies”cangetyouintotrouble.4.Myfavoritegiftcostnothing.5.Ithoughtsummercwasboringuntillastsummer.练习2.到底哪一段写得好，A篇还是B篇？Why?Iworkedveryhardyesterday,butIfeltreallygoodattheendofthatlongday.Myfatheraskedmetohelphimpaintournewapartmentyesterdaymorning.AtfirstIwantedtowatchTVorgooutwithmyfriends.Afterthinkingaboutit,though,IrealizedthatIshouldhelparoundourhouse,too.Ourhouseisnotahotel.Besides,myfatheroftendoesalotofthingsforme.Weworkedtogetherallmorningandafternoon.BydinnertimeIwastiredandhungry,butIfeltgood.Wefinishedthepainting,andthehouselookedandsmellednew.Playingaroundisnottheonlywaytofeelgood.Myfatheraskedmetohelphimpaintournewapartmentyesterdaymorning.AtfirstIwantedtowatchTVorgooutwithmyfriends.Afterthinkingaboutit,though,IrealizedthatIshouldhelparoundourhouse,too.Ourhouseisnotahotel.Besides,myfatheroftendoesalotofthingsforme.Weworkedtogetherallmorningandafternoon.BydinnertimeIwastiredandhungry,butIfeltgood.Wefinishedthepainting,andthehouselookedandsmellednew.Playingaroundisnottheonlywaytofeelgood.A选出最恰当的主题句，并简要分析原因。_________Youmaythinkthattheringhasadiamondinit,butitdoesn’t.Youmaythinkthattheringismadeofgold,butitisn’t.Youmayalsothinkthattheringwasveryexpensive,butyou’rewrong.Itcostnothingtomake.Myboyfriendmadeitoutofsomeoldleather,buthemadeitwithlove.Thatiswhyitismyfavoritegift.A.Myboyfriendmadealeatherring.BMyfavoritegiftisaringfrommyboyfriend.CMyfavoriteringisadiamondring.D.Myboyfriendgavemeagoldring.BB.___________.MyneighborJoeisaquietboy.Hedoesn’thavemanyfriends.Nooneinviteshimtopartiesbecausetheydon’tknowhimverywell.OnedaywhenIwaswalkinghome,someboysfromanotherschoolstoppedmeandaskedmeformoney.WhenIsaidno,oneofthemstartedhittingme.Aminutelater,Joewasbymysidehelpingme.Theotherboysranaway.Peoplesay,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Joeisnowmybestfriend.A.AgoodfriendishardtoknowwellB.HowImetmybestfriendataparty.C.NowIunderstandwhatarealfriendis.D.Joeismybestfriendwhodoesn’tlikeparties.CC___________Testcanbeuseful,butnoteverythingimportantisontest.Wecantestwhatininsideofbooks,butwecannottesthowwefeelorwhatweimagine.Studentsneedmoretimetothinkabouttheirownlives,notonlytaketestsinschool.Teachersshouldhelpstudentstolearnbyexperience,notonlyreadingandwriting.Fortheabovereasons,Ithinkteachersshouldgivestudentsfewertests.Testplayapartinlearning,soweneedtests.Shouldteachersgivestudentsalotoftest?Idon’tthinkso.C.Shouldteachersgivestudentstimetothinkaboutlife?Ithinkso.D.Shouldteachersgivestudentsaboutlifeexperience?Ithinkso.BD._________changingthecolorofone’shairislikechangingthecolorofone’sclothes.Ifastudentwearsblackshoesonedayandbrownshoesthenext,hashedoneanythingwrong?Whyshouldstudentslookallthesame?Modernpeoplearefreetochoosetheirownclothes.Whyshouldn’tstudentshavetherighttochangethecoloroftheirownhair?Ithinkstudentsshouldnotcolortheirhair.Ithinkcoloringtheirhairisanewtrendforstudents.Ithinkcoloringtheirhairmakesstudentslookcool.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtocolortheirhair.DE._______LastmonthItookanimportantmathtestatschool.Isatnexttothesmartestkidinourclass,andIcopiedalmostallofhisanswers.Hegot98onthetest,andIgota92.Myparentswerehappy,myteacherwashappy,andmyclassmateswereproudofme.ButIfeellousy.Ididn’tlearnanything.Ican’tcheatallthroughmylife.Fromnowon,I’mgoingtoworkhardersoIdon’thavetocheatagain.I’llnevercheatonatestagain.I’llcopyharderfromnowon.Feelingproudisnotgoodforus.Gettinggoodgradesmakesmefeelhappy.AF._____.FromtheearlymorningbeforemyalarmringsuntilafterIgotosleepatnight,thatdogisalwaysmakingnoise.Heisfriendlytomyneighbor,ofcourse,butheisunfriendlytoeveryoneelseintheneighborhood.Childrenareevenafraidtowalkbyhishousebecauseofhisdog.Whenevertheyseethatbig,browndog,theyrunhomequickly.Iwouldliketotellmyneighborabouthisdog,butI’mafraidofit,too!Dogsarepeople’sgoodfriends.Idon’tlikemyneighbor’sdog.Barkingdogswon’tbite.Dogssometimesaredangerous.B给下面的段落写出恰当的主题句。偷偷地告诉你一个秘笈，下笔前先看看结尾句A.___________________________________________.WhenIdecidedthatIreallywantedtolearnEnglish,ImadethemistakeofthinkingthatIcouldlearnitquickly.Iboughtsomebooksandtapesthatsaid,“LearnEnglishinthreemonths!”Nonsense!Noonecanlearnaforeignlanguagequickly.IevendatedanAmericangirl,butIpaidmoreattentiontoherthanherEnglish,soIdidn’tlearnverymuch.NowIunderstandthatonlyifIworkhardforalongtimewillIlearnEnglishwell.NobodycanlearnEnglishwellveryquickly.B________________________________________________.First,learninghowtodress,wearmakeup,andgroomourhairareallimportantsocialskillswhichwillbecomeimportanttousaftergraduation.Mostkidswhohavetowearuniformslooklikeslobs()ontheweekend.Anotherreasonthatstudentsshouldnotwearuniformsisbecausestudentslooklikepiecesofmachineryinafactory.InthismodernInformationAge,creativityismoreimportantthanconformity().Howcananyonebecreativewhenhelookslikeeveryoneelse?Finally,wearinguniformscanbeuncomfortable.We’resupposedtochangeourwinteruniformtoourspringuniformonacertaindayeveryyear,butnobodytoldMotherNaturethat!Wefreezeorsweatbecauseofthisseveraldayseveryyear.Fortheabovereasons,Iamtotallyopposed(反对的）tostudentshavingtowearuniformstoschool.Iamstronglyagainsttheideathatstudentsshouldalwayswearuniformtoschool.第三节结尾句写作微技能训练结尾句是把段落内所提过的事情，再简要地叙述一遍，从而形成完整的文章。常常换句话再把开头的主题重申一次或重申之外再加上某种教诲或感受。练习1选出最恰当的结尾句，并简要分析原因。Whatisyourfavoriterestaurant?MineisFriday’s,ofcourse!AtFriday’sIcanorderanykindofWesternfoodIlike,suchashamburger,salad,Frenchfries,steak,andallkindsofsandwiches.Thewaitersandwaitresseswearfunnyandinterestingclothes,too,andtheirserviceisverygood.AlthoughFriday’sisnotascheapasMcDonald’s,itisnotveryexpensive,either.______________.A.Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurantbecauseofitsdeliciousfood.B.Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurantbecausetheyservewell.C.Tosumup,becauseitspriceishigh,Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurant.D.Allinall,becauseofthegoodfood,greatservice,andreasonableprice,Friday’sismyfavoriterestaurant.DB.Afieldtriptoamuseumisthebestwaytolearnaboutart.LastmonthourartteachertookusonafieldtriptotheMuseumofModernArt.Wetookabustothemuseumandspenttwohoursthere.Lookingatrealpaintingsandsculpturesismuchmoreinterestingandeducationalthanlookingattheminbooks.Themuseumalsogaveeveryoneasmallbooktoexplaintheart._____________Lookingatpaintingsandsculpturesinbooksgivesusmuchfun.Schoolsarrangefieldtripsforstudents.Seeingrealworksofartinamuseumisthebestwaytoappreciateart.Amuseumgivesstudentsalotofinformationaboutart.CC.Ofthefourseasonsinayear,summerismyfavorite.Inautumn,youneverknowwhattowear.Onedayishot,nutthenextdayiscold.Winterinnotonlycold,butitisalsothetimewhenmanypeoplegetsick.Springbringstoomuchrain.Summeristhetimefortravel,relaxationandfun._______________.That’swhypeoplelikesummerverymuch.Forme,summeristhebestseasonoftheyear.Summerbringsusalotoffun.Springisthebestseasonofall.BD.Doyouknowthedifferencebetweenredmeatandwhitemeat?Redmeatmeansmeatswhichareredincolor,likebeefandpork.Whitemeat,ofcourse,meansmeatswhicharewhiteincolor,likechickenandduck.Seafoodisusuallyconsideredwhitemeat,too.Doctorssaythatwhitemeatisbetterforourhealththanredmeat,butitisallrighttoeatsomeredmeat._________Redmeatandwhitemeatareboththesame;theyareofthesamekind.Althoughwhitemeatisbetterforourhealththanredmeat,remembernottoeattoomuchmeat.So,thereisnodifferencebetweenredmeatandwhitemeat.Truly,peoplelikebothredmeatandwhitemeat.B练习2下面有两篇文章，请选出较好的一篇，并分析原因。“Practicemakesperfect”isreallyagoodsaying.Atthebeginningofoursummervacation,myfriendsinvitedmetogoswimmingwiththem.IwasembarrassedtotellthemthatIcouldn’tswim.MybestfriendJilltoldmethatshewouldhelpme.Everydayduringthevacationforanhourortwo,Jillslowlytaughtmehowtoswim.Beforeourclassesbeganagain,Icouldswimonetimeacrosstheswimmingpool.HowhappyIwas!Inowunderstandthetruemeaningoffriendship.NowIreallyunderstandwhat“Practicemakesperfect”means.Halfayearago,Ididn’tknowhowtoswim.Tobehonest,Iwasevenafraidofgoingintoswimmingpool.MybestfriendJilltoldmethatshewouldhelpme.Dayafterdayduringthesummervacation,Jillspentanhourortwowithmeeveryday,showingmehowtoswim.Attheendofthesummervacation,Icouldswimonceacrossthepool.Ineverfeltsohappyinmylife!NowIrealizethat,ifyouwanttosucceedatanything,youmustpracticedayafterdayuntilyouaresuccessfulB第四节发展句写作微技能训练发展句是用来细述主题句的中心思想，把观点解释清楚。主题句NightmarketsareverypopularinAsiabecausetheyprovidemorethangoodsandservice.发展句Bothdayandnightmarketsofferfood,clothing,andschoolsupplies,etc.Theybothofferfurniture,thingsforthehome,andmedicine.However,mostlyhousewivesusethedaymarket.Atnight,thewholefamilycangoouttoeatorshoptogetherandenjoythegamesandshows.结尾句Thus,nightmarketsarealsoanimportantformofentertainmentinAsiansocieties.

练习1请找出主题句，发展句及结尾句。A.Choosingtherightgiftdoesnothavetobeaproblem.Knowingthepurposeofthegiftisveryimportant.Youdon’twanttobuyfoodforsomeone’sgraduationorwedding.Knowingthepersonwellhelps,too.Whatdoesyourfriendorrelativelikebest?Don’tworryabouttheprice.Remember,“It’sthethoughtthatcounts.”Asimple,practicalgiftismoreappreciatedthananexpensivebutuselessone.Keepingtheaboveadviceinmindwillmakeshoppingforyournextgiftmucheasier.B.Manypeopletrytoloseweight,buttheyusuallyfail.Therearetwomainreasonstoexplainthis.Peopleoftentellthemselvesthattheycanlosealotofweightinashorttime.Actually,losingweighttakesalongtimeifyouwanttostaylighter.Eatingstrangefoodsdoesnothelp,either.Peoplewillloseinterestintheirdietandgobacktotheiroldways.Eatinglessgraduallyisthebestwaytoloseweight.C.EveryoneknowsthatlearningEnglishisveryimportanttoday.Inourcity,however,Englishisnotusedverymuch.HowcanastudentlearnEnglishwellinsuchanenvironment?Besidesreading,studentscanlistentoEnglishonradioprogrammeseveryday.TheycanjoinanEnglishclubatschooltopracticelisteningandspeaking.Theycanalsopracticespeakingwithclassmates,relatives,orotherswhoknowsomeEnglish.MakingEnglishahabitisasurewaytosucceedatlearningit.练习2下面有两篇文章，判断哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Ifyoucouldhaveonlythreebooks,whatwouldtheybe?Iwouldfirstchooseadictionary.Adictionaryisnotveryexpensiveandhasalotofinformationinit.Therearedictionariesforeverylanguage.MaybeIwouldbuyaChinese-Englishdictionary.ThenIwouldwantahistorybook.Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinhistory.IlovetowatchmoviesonTVaboutourcountry’shistory.Theirlivesweredifficultbutinteresting.ThelastbookIwouldwantwouldbeamedicalbook.Ihopetobecomeadoctorsomeday,andIwouldhaveplentyoftimetoreadabouthealthinthatbook.Doctorsmakealotofmoney,andthenIcouldbuymorebooks,iftherewereanymore.Whatbookswouldyoubuy?B.Ourteacheraskedus,“Ifyoucouldhaveonlythreebooks,whatwouldtheybe?“Ithoughtaboutthisquestionalongtime.ThefirstbookIwouldwantisadictionary.Adictionaryhasalotofinformationinitandisthemostimportantbookaboutone’slanguage.Thenextbookisahistorybook.Everyoneshouldknowhiscountry’sandhispeople’shistory.Ifwedonotknowourownhistory,wecan’tknowwhoweare.Finally,Iwouldwantabookabouthealth.Weallhavemanyofourgoodfriends,books,withus,butifwehavetochoosethreebooks,Iwouldchooseadictionary,ahistorybook,andabookabouthealth.B第五节连接语写作微技能训练写作时，除按逻辑组合信息点外，还要学会灵活运用连接性词语。连接语是上下文之间的润滑剂。表递进besides,what’smore,what’sworse,inaddition;表列举foronething…andforanotherthing,firstly,secondly,thirdly,lastbutnotleast表总结inshort,inaword,inconclusion,inbrief,generallyspeaking,tosumup,allinall.练习1下面有两篇文章，判断哪篇更好，并分析原因。Doyouknowhowtomakeasandwich?Itisreallyeasy.Here’showtomakeone.H\First,ofcourse,youneedbread..Mostpeopleusetwopieces,butifyou’rereallyhungry,youcanmakeaverybigsandwichwiththreepieces.Whatkindofsandwichdoyoulike/Therearethousandsofkindsofsandwich.Next,justputthefoodyouwant,likemeatorvegetables,ononepieceofthebreadandthencoveritwiththeotherpiece.Youcanaddbuttertothebreadfirst,ifyoulike,too.That’sall.Nowyoucanfindsthyouliketodrinkandenjoyyourownsandwich.Asandwichisoneoftheeasiestfoodstomakeintheworld.B.Mybigbrothertaughtmehowtomakeasandwichyesterday.Ithoughtmakingasandwichwouldbehard,butactuallyit’sveryeasy.You’llneedbread,thingsforthesandwich,andmaybesomebutterifyoulikeit.Thebreadkeepsthethingslikemeatorvegetablestogether.Youcanaddbuttertothebread.Besuretoputthebutterontheinsideofthebread..Whenyoufinish,you’llhaveasandwich.Itoldyoumakingasandwichwaseasy,didn’tI?Nowyoucanenjoymakingasandwichwhenyouarehungryandwantjustalittletoeat.A练习2下面有两篇文章，判断哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Everyonecanprotecttheearthfrompollutioninsimplebutimportantways.First,everyonehastogoshopping,butnoteveryonehastouseaplasticbageachtimehebuysth.Ifyoudon’tneedabag,don’ttakeone.Betteryet,takeyourownbagswithyouwhenshopping.Second,don’twastefood.Growingfoodtakesupalotofland.Finally,usepublictransportationinsteadofacarormotorcycle.Thisreducesairpollution.Thesesimplewayswillmakeourplanetcleanerforall.BEveryonecanprotecttheearthfrompollutioninsimplebutimportantways.Everyonehastogoshopping,butnoteveryonehastouseaplasticbageachtimehebuysth.Ifyoudon’tneedabag,don’ttakeone.Betteryet,takeyourownbagswithyouwhenshopping.Don’twastefood.Growingfoodtakesupalotofland.Finally,usepublictransportationinsteadofacarormotorcycle.Thisreducesairpollution.Thesesimplewayswillmakeourplanetcleanerforall.A练习3下面有两篇文章，判断哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Mostpeopleenjoyplayingbaseballorbasketball,butmyfavoritesportisvolleyball.Inbaseball,theplayersarefarapartfromoneanother.Youcan’ttalktoyourteammateswhileyouplay.Basketballcanbeaveryviolentgame.Manypeoplearehurtwhileplayingbasketball.Volleyballplayersplaytogetherlikeasingleperson.Ilikethatfeeling.Iknowwhateveryoneofmyteammatesisdoingallthetime.Weworktogetherlikeafamily.Volleyballisandwillalwaysbemyfavoritesport.BMostpeopleenjoyplayingbaseballorbasketball,butmyfavoritesportisvolleyball.Inbaseball,theplayersarefarapartfromoneanother.Youcan’ttalktoyourteammateswhileyouplay.Basketballcanbeaveryviolentgame.Manypeoplearehurtwhileplayingbasketball.Ontheotherhand,volleyballplayersplaytogetherlikeasingleperson.Ilikethatfeeling.Iknowwhateveryoneofmyteammatesisdoingallthetime.Weworktogetherlikeafamily.Forthesereasons,volleyballisandwillalwaysbemyfavoritesport.B第六节人称一致性微技能训练写文章时，人称尽量要一致，不要第一、第二、第三人称夹杂使用。首先，要认真审题，该用第几人称来完成写作；其次，人称要尽量一致，除非有必要。练习1.请把下面文章中人称不一致的粗体字加以改正，并说明理由。Letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.Itisanaveragefamily.Ihaveparents,anolderbrother,andayoungersister.Thisfamilyhasadog,too.ItsnameisCloudbecauseitisallwhitewithsofthair.Myfatherisateacher,andmymotherisahousewife.Thebrotherisacollegestudent,andthesisterisajuniorhighschoolstudent.I’mafirstyearhighschoolstudent.Thisfamilydoesnotsoundimportant,butitisthemostimportantthingintheworldtome.EveryonelikesTV,right?Wrong!SomepeopledonotwatchTVverymuchorevenatall.Theyliketoreadorspendtimewiththeirfriendsinstead.Youcanreadgoodbooksorthenewspaper,oryoucanchatwithyourfriendsinyourfreetime.ThesepeoplethinkthatTVdoesnothavegoodenoughprogramstowatch.TheyalsothinkthatTVisalittlestupid.Youcandobetterthingswithyourfreetime,andIthinkso,too.练习2下面有两篇文章，判断哪篇更好，并分析原因。A.Shouldseniorhighschoolstudentstrytomakeboyfriendsorgirlfriends?Parentsandteachersusuallyagreethatseniorhighschoolstudentsshouldworkhardsothattheycanentergoodcollegesanduniversities.Whenseniorhighstudentsarealittleolder,theyarebetterabletokeepagoodrelationshipwithothers.Besides,ifyoureallyfallinlovewithsb.,youcanwaitforthatpersonuntilheorshefinishedhisorhereducation.Don’tbeinsuchahurry!Truelovewaitsforyou.Seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldconcentrateontheirstudiessothattheywillhaveamorecomfortablelifewiththeonetheylovelater.Don’twasteyourtimenow.Getbusyandstudy!

B.seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldnottrytomakeboyfriendsorgirlfriends.Seniorhighschoolisatimeforstudentstopreparefortheirfuturecareers.Theycanhavefriendsanytime.Inseniorhighschool,studentsmuststudyhardtopasstestsothattheycanmoveaheadtomoreeducation.Theydonothavetimetogooutondatesallthetime.Theywillhavemoretimeincollegetostudyandmakefriends,evenboyfriendsofgirlfriends,then.Besides,iftwopeopletrulyloveeachother,theycanwaituntilschoolisfinishedbeforetheybecomeseriousabouttheirrelationship.Inmostcases,therefore,itisbettertowaituntilone’seducationisfinishedbeforestartingalovecareer!BA篇人称不一致第五章写作微技能实战演练第一节英语写作流程微技能写作实战流程6+1：审题—列纲—造句—连句—修改—抄写—---复查（以上步骤和环节可根据不同阶段的需要或时间进行取舍。）

第二节英语造句成文六原则小词语原则：即少用那些空洞的大词，如形容一个人好的时候，不要用nice、good等既普通又空乏的词，而最好用generous，kind-hearted，considerate等形象而具体的小词。状语提前原则：即把句子的状语提到句子的开头，以增强连贯性和可读性。短语优先原则：即合并简单句，简化复合句，单词换成短语等。如cause可改为leadto/contributeto/resultin.MybrotherwasridingthebikeandIwassittingbehindhim.Mybrotherwasridingthebikewithmesittingbehindhim..4.并列句、复合句原则：即合并简单句，使用特殊句式如强调句，倒装句等，以提升文章的档次水平。练习：a.当遇到困难的时候，我们不要灰心，而要勇敢面对。只有这样我们才能克服困难。b.在进入大学后，我计划要在学习上建立新的目标，改进我的学习方法。Whenmeetingwithtrouble,weshouldnotloseheartbutfaceitbravely.Onlyinthiswaycanweovercomeit.AfterIentercollege,Iplantosetnewgoalsinmystudyandimprovemywayoflearning.5.长段句交替原则：即一篇文章中，根据表达的需要，交替使用长短句，简单句与复合句，使句子错落有致，以提升文章的节奏感和可读性。多样化的句式，能显示较强的语言功底，提升作文档次。6.整洁、分段原则：为使文章条理清楚，文章要分层分段，高考一般分二至四段即可。落实到书面上，要求书写整齐美观，富于美感，以提高印象分。

第三节分类实战演练一、记叙文语篇模板（交代活动内容、活动的时间、地点和目的）We

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onthemorningofApril10th,talkingandlaughingalltheway.（描述过程）Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes;somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees,andotherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleaving,wetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.（感想）Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement./wefeltproud,thoughalittletired.二、说明文语篇模板（描述现象）Withthedevelopmentofsociety,heavytraffichasarousedgreatconcern.Somepeoplethink…,whileothersthink…（分析原因）Therearemanyreasonsinvolved.Amongthem,theincreaseofprivatecarsplaysanimportantrole…（指出趋势或措施）Thefirstmeasureistolimitthenumberofprivatecarsrunningonthestreeteveryday.Immediateafterthat,weshould….Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblem.模拟训练1某杂志就现代人的健康状况进行了调查，其结果是与以前相比，人们的健康状况有所下滑，其主要原因有：1.工作忙碌，压力过大，缺少锻炼；生活没有规律，熬夜，休息不够；3.不少人有抽烟喝酒的习惯。请根据调查情况写一篇短文，内容包括：1.调查结果；2；主要原因；3建议：养成良好的生活习惯、戒烟，戒酒，多运动。三、议论文语篇模板1（提出论点）Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.（列举论据）ononehand,advertisinggreatlypromotessales.Ontheotherhand,intheireffortstotellpeopleaboutproductsandevents,advertisersprovideuswithgreatamountofthelatestinformation.Therefore,ithasbecomepartofourdailylife.Meanwhile,tomakeanadvertisement,alotofpeoplewillworktogetheronit.Sowiththedevelopmentofadvertising,alotofjobsarebeingprovided.（得出结论）Inconclusion,advertisingisanimportantbusiness.语篇模板2(点明讨论主题)Thestudentsinourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhethertheonlywayforseniorhighstudentstosucceedistogotocollege,whichinfactisahottopicnowadays.Theresultisasfollows:(描述讨论结果或正反方观点）About75%ofthestudentsthoughtitnecessarytogotocollegewhile15%hadoppositeopinion.Thereststatedthattherewasnoneedtalkingaboutitfortheydidn’tcare….（发表自己观点）Inmyopinion,goingtocollegeisgoodforustolearnmoreandimproveourselves.Also,ithelpsusmoreeasilytofindasuitablejobinthefuture.However,therearedifferentroadstoRome,whichmeanstobesuccessfulmayhaveotherchoicesbesidesgoingtocollege.模拟训练2失败一定是坏事吗？生活中，失败是常有的事，不同的人对失败有不同的态度，你对失败的态度是什么？请以“IsFailureaBadThing?”为题写一篇短文。

IsFailureaBadThing?Failureiscommonthinginourdailylife._______________________________________________________________四、应用文应用文种类较多，此处只选几个典型范文模板。（1）书面通知模板

Notice（时间地点）AmeetingisgoingtobeheldinRoom213ofBuilding3at7o’clockontheeveningofDecember13.(内容）Problemstobetalkedaboutatthemeetingincludethesafetyofthedormitories,properuseofelectricity,whattodoincaseoffir