Unit5HumansandNatureWritingWorkshop课件-高一英语北师大版

Unit5WritingWorkshopABrochure新课导入

Let’stalkWhatdisastercanyouseeinthefollowingvideo?课堂学习GetreadyforwritingWhichdisasterdoyouwanttowriteabout?Whatadvicewouldyougiveonsurvivingit?

Youaregoingwriteabrochureaboutsurvivingadisaster.Discusswithyourpartner.ReadforwritingReadthepassage.Underlinewhatyoushoulddowhenyou’reindoors,outdoorsandinacar.2FocusonstructureandlanguageReadbrochureagain.Completethetable.3HowtoSurviveanEarthquakeSituation1Situation2Situation3Ifyou'reindoorsIfyou'reoutdoorsIfyou'reinacarDon'trun,butprotectyourself.Drop,coverandholdon.Moveawayfromanythingthatcanfall.Findashelterwhereyoucanstay.Waitbeforemovingtoanotherplace.Stop.Stayseated.Drivecarefullywhenthequakestops.LookattheSentenceBuilder.WriteafewsentencesthatyoumaywanttoincludeinyourbrochureaboutDosandDon’tsforsurvivingaparticulardisaster.4ImperativesforDosandDon'tsDosDropdownontoyourhandsandknees.Coveryourheadandneckwithyourhands,armsorhardobjects.Don'tsDon'ttrytorunoutofthebuildingduringanearthquake.SentenceBuilderPre-writing宣传册一、定义生活中各种宣传册随处可见，例如：产品宣传、节目介绍、旅游指南、操作指南、生活常识宣传，还有各种自然灾害预防和救援知识宣传等。这类小册子属于指导性说明文，旨在为读者提供未知的知识和原理，或使读者阅读后对文章所阐述的事理有所了解，或使读者掌握解决问题的方法。知识性和科学性是这类说明文的主要特点，是一种实用性很强的文体。二、注意事项

（1）正确运用时态。说明文的时态常用一般现在时。（2）突出写作重点。在写作时，要抓住对象的本质特征，重点描述，做到“突出重点”。（3）优化文章结构。可采用“总一分”、“总一分一总”等结构以使文章层次分明、条理清晰。如在文章开头先对需要说明的对象作总体介绍，然后通过举例子、做比较、列数字等方法进行具体阐述。也可以附上图形、图片或简笔画等。（4）选好说明顺序。根据说明对象的不同安排，可采用时间、空间、逻辑等说明顺序，使文章通顺、连贯，给人一种一目了然的感觉。（5）体现文体特点。说明文的语言要简洁、准确而且富有逻辑性。在写作中可适当穿插一些祈使句、省略句等句式结构。UsefulExpressions三、

常用表达First,Second,Third,Atlast...First,Next,Then,Finally…Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith...Secondly...Besides/Inaddition...Lastbutnotleast...Dos...Don'ts...Ifyouare...,do...Wecandrawtheconclusionthat...Inshort/Inbrief/Inaword...Itseemsclearthat…Wecanknow/learnthat.….ComposeyourwritingComposeyourwritingOutlining写大纲Drafting撰写内容Editing修改润色OutlingComplete

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profilebasedonActivities3and4.5While-writing标题式提纲：写出行文各段的标题DraftingUseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.6WritingaBrochureIt'simportantto:beclearanddirect;usesimpleandclearlanguage.Maketheinformationeasytoremember;giveadvicewithreasonsforactionsindifferentsituations;usethepresenttenseandimperatives;includepicturesandkeywordstoshowtheimportantactions.WritingHelp根据提纲内容，写出每段小标题。然后再进一步详细阐述。Editing

Edityourbrochureinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.7Doesthewriterfocusonacleartopic?Doesthewritermakeclearanddirectpoints?Doesthewriterusesimpleandclearlanguage?Doesthewritergiveadvicewithreasonsfordifferentsituations?Doesthewriterusethepresenttenseandimperatives?SampleHowtosurviveatornadoItisoftensaidthattornadoesarenature'smostviolentstorms.Whenatornadostrikes,youreverychoicecanmeanthedifferencebetweenlifeanddeath.SurvivinginabuildingMoveimmediatelytoanundergroundshelter,wheneverpossible.Atthefirstsignofatornado,orifatornadowarninghasbeenissued,stopwhateveryou'redoingandseekappropriateshelterimmediately,evenifyoudon'tseeatornado.Awarningmeansanactualtornadohasbeensightedorindicatedbyradar.Stayinawindowlessroomonthelowestlevel,ifyoucan'tgounderground.Inabuildingwithnobasement,avoidwindowsandgotothelowestfloor.Alternatively,seekshelterinasmallroomthatislocatednearthecenterofthehouse,underastairwell,orinaninteriorhallwaywithnowindows.Regardlessofwhereyouare,crouchlowtothegroundorliedown,facedownandcoveryourheadwithyourhandsandarms.Takecoverunderastrongtableifpossible,andcoveryourselfwithamattress,cushions,orblankets.Knowwherenottoseekshelter.Notallhidingspotsarecreatedequally.Thefollowinglocationsshouldbeyourabsolutelastresortduringatornado,astheyallhavethepotentialtobeseverelydamagedbyhighwinds.PreparingforatornadoPayattentiontotornadowatchesandwarnings.Atornadowatchmeansthatthereisathreatoftornadoeswithinyourareaandthatyoushouldkeepaneyeonthenews.Atornadowarningismuchmoreserious.Tornadowarningsmeanthatasignofrotationhasbeendetectedandthatyoushouldtakeimmediateactiondependingonthetornado'slocationanditspredictedtrack.Craftanemergencyplaninyourhouse.Makeaplanforwheretogoduringatornado.Havethisplaninplaceand