Module3Unit6单元写作课件牛津深圳版英语九年级上册

Translatethesentences我的老师问我觉得这本关于幸福的书怎么样。从这本书里，我学会了不要取笑别人。我告诉老师我真的很高兴有这个机会阅读这本书。Personaltask:2minsFindyourshiningpointandraiseyourdoubt.Groupsharing:

4minsShareyouproblemsinwritingandyourshiningpoint!Tip:Takedownthewonderfulphrasesandsentencesfromthesharingofyourgroupmembers.MistakesI’mwritingtosomesuggestionstohowtokeephealthy.→___________________________________2.banlaced(拼写)→___________________________________3.manyfood(语法)→___________________________________4.Listenmusicisa

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relax.(语法)→___________________________________5.Happyisveryimportantforus.___________________________________I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtokeephealthy.balancedalotoffoodListeningtomusicisagoodwaytorelax.Beinghappyisveryimportantforus.6.Itisveryimportanttofullofsleeptime/keepenoughsleep.→___________________________________7.juckfood→_______8.Theseareallmyadvice.→________________________9.Itnotonlymakeusstrongerbutalsomakeusfullofenergy.→____________________________MistakesjunkfoodItnotonlymakesusstrongerbutalsomakesusbefullofenergy.Thisisallmyadvice.Itisveryimportanttohaveenoughtimetosleep.Goodpoints拓展要点1：Sleepearlyandraiseearlywhichcanmakeyouhaveenoughsleepsothatyoucanpayattentiontostudying.(文昊)拓展要点2:Havingabalanceddietisalsoanimportantwaytokeepyouhealthy.Youshouldeatdifferentkindsofhealthyfood,suchasfruitsandvegetables.(智扬）拓展要点3：1.Doingsomesportsisgoodforourhealth.Itcanmakeourbodystrongandhelpfightagainstdiseases.(卓然）2.Itisnecessaryforyoutodomoreexerciseandplaysports.Inthisway,youcannotonlyexerciseyourbodybutalsoaddenergytostudyduringthisprocess.(家昊，有添加改动）3.Ifinditnecessarytodosomesportsbecausesportscanmakeourbodystrong.(妤婷)拓展要点4：

1.Itisveryimportanttofullofsleeptime/keepenoughsleep.→___________________________________2.juckfood→_______3.writting,eatting→________________________4.I’mwritingtosomesuggestionstohowtokeephealth.→___________________________________

Mistakesjunkfoodwriting,eatingItisveryimportanttohaveenoughtimetosleep.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowtokeephealthy.Goodpoints拓展要点1\2：Makesureyoucansleepenougheverydaysothatyouwillgetaquickermindandastrongerbody.(政澍)Eatmorevegetablesorfruitscankeepushealthy.Ifyouwanttoprovideyourselfwithprotein,youcaneateggs.(雅婷)Second,haveabalanceddiet.Itmeanseatingmorevegetablesandfruits,atlessdairyproducts.使用书本对balanceddiet的解释(熙文)If

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junkfood,yourbodywillbeinaprettypickle.(家杰)拓展要点3：Doingexerciseisoneofthebestwaystoimproveourbody.Thoughitistiring,wecanmakeourbodyhaveabigchange.(叶锋)Youshoulddomoresportstoexerciseyourself.Youmustkeepanenduring(持久的)exerciseinsteadofephemeral(短暂的)one.(柏然)Youwillstayfromillnessifyoudoexerciseeveryday.(润喆)拓展要点4：

Finally,holdagoodfeeling.Believeyourselfcansolvealltheproblemsanddon’tlookdownupononyourself.Thinkyouarethecreamofthecrop.(芷晴)Finally,weshouldputdownourmobilephone.Manyteenagersspen