辽宁名校联盟3月读后续写讲义-猫猫霸占树屋-高考作文复习

续写题目来源：辽宁省名校联盟2024年高三3月份联合考试试题【下面除提供续写题目外、还提供（一）检测学生是否读懂的「预设情节填空」，（二）在讲范文前引导学生思考续写方向的「问题及答案」，（三）续写思路概述，（四）TCEE范文】续写题目：猫猫霸占树屋Ourneighbor,Mrs.Mooreisanoldartist,wholivesalonewithhercatTaffy.Herhusbandpassedawayyearsagoandherchildrenworkinothercities.Mrs.Moorealwayswearsaseriouslookbutinfactsheisaveryniceneighbor.ShedoesthreethingseverydaypettingTaffy,paintingandbaking,amongwhichbakingisthepartIlike.Wheneverthemouthwateringsmellgetsoverthefence,IcouldexpectapaperbagcontainingdeliciouscookiestobepassedoverthefenceandsharedbymysisterJenniferandme.Toreturnthisfavor,mydadwouldmowthelawn（修剪草坪）forMrs.Mooreandhelprepairthewaterpipes.Lastyear,Dadputhisideaofbuildingatreehouseforusinourbackyardintoaction.Dadshotfromthehip（干事利落）andgoteverythinginplacewithintwoweeks.Itwasayellowtreehousewithredroof,whichmadeagreatplaceforJenniferandmetogetoutofthesightofMomandDadtohavefunandtalkaboutourgirlishmatters.Wecouldn’twaittogetinonlytofindTaffyhadtakenoccupationofitandmesseduptheinside.Weourselveswereunwillingtotalkaboutsuchaproblemtoourniceneighbor,butwehadnootherchoice.DadwastheonewesenttoMrs.Moore’shouseforafriendlytalkabouttheissue.Afterthetalk,DadtookMrs.Mooreonaninspectionofthetreehouse,atwhichshewasextremelyastonished,sayingshehadneverexpectedTaffycouldbesofascinatedwithit.Shepromisedtotakecareoftheproblembuttoourdisappointment,thecatcouldstillfindwaystoclimboverthefenceandgetintothetreehouse.Afterathousandapologiestous,Mrs.Mooregavetheproblemacarefulconsiderationandcameupwithabigdecision:InviewofTaffy’sobsession（痴迷）withatreehouse,whynotbuildonespeciallyforhim?Paragraph1:Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixeditupinhergarden.Paragraph2:Mrs.Moorerackedherbrains（绞尽脑汁）andworkedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.一、预设情节填空1.Mrs.Moorelivesalonewithhercat_______.(Answer:Taffy)2.Mrs.MooreenjoyspettingTaffy,________,andbaking.(Answer:painting)3.Theneighborkidsreceivedelicious_______overthefencefromMrs.Moore.(Answer:cookies)4.To_______,theirdadhelpsbymowingthelawnandrepairingwaterpipesforMrs.Moore.(Answer:returnthefavor)5.Thefatherbuildsa_______intheirbackyardforhischildren.(Answer:treehouse)7.TheyfindTaffyhastakenoverthetreehouseand_______theinside.(Answer:messedup)8.ThefathergoestotalktoMrs.Mooreaboutthe______withTaffyandthetreehouse.(Answer:problem)9.Mrs.MoorewasastonishedthatTaffywasso_______withthetreehouse.(Answer:fascinated)10.Mrs.Mooredecidestobuildatreehousespeciallyfor_______.(Answer:Taffy)续写思路引导教师在向学生呈现续写范文前，应先引导学生进入正确的续写思路中，这也是我设计下列问题的目的所在。大家可以根据自己学生的实际水平，决定是用中文还是英文呈现这些问题；并根据自己预留的续写讲解时间，决定是否要对下列问题进行删减。WhatwasMrs.Moore'ssolutiontoTaffy'sobsessionwiththetreehouse?Answer:Mrs.Moore'ssolutionwastobuyareadymadetreehousespecificallyforTaffyandhaveitinstalledinhergarden,hopingtodivertTaffy'sattentionfromthechildren'streehouse.（1）对于Taffy对树屋的痴迷，Mrs.Moore有什么解决办法?答：Mrs.Moore的解决方案是专门为Taffy买了一个现成的树屋，并把它安装在她的花园里，希望把Taffy的注意力从孩子们的树屋上转移开。WhatmighthavepromptedMrs.Mooretothinkofexchangingtreehouses?Answer:AfternoticingTaffy'sunwaveringinterestinthechildren'streehouseandpossiblyconsideringthesize,design,orlocationoftheboughttreehousenotfullysatisfyingTaffy'spreferences,Mrs.Moorethoughtexchangingtreehousescouldbeamoreeffectivesolution.（2）是什么促使Mrs.Moore想到交换树屋?答：在注意到Taffy新树屋不敢兴趣，而仍然痴迷孩子们的树屋时，Mrs.Moore认为交换树屋可能是一个更有效的解决方案。HowdidMrs.Mooreplantoconvincethechildrenandtheirparentsaboutexchangingthetreehouses?Answer:Mrs.Moorelikelyconsideredofferingaplanthatbenefitsbothparties,possiblyincludingimprovingthechildren'streehouseorprovidingadditionalbenefitstomaketheexchangeappealingandfairtothechildrenandtheirparents.（3）Mrs.Moore打算怎样说服孩子们和他们的父母交换树屋?答：Mrs.Moore可能考虑过提供一个对双方都有利的计划，可能提供额外的好处，使这笔交易对孩子们和他们的父母都有吸引力和公平。三、续写思路概述Paragraph1:Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixeditupinhergarden.（1）我们带Taffy来到树屋门口，期待看到Taffy的反应。（2）Taffy不感兴趣（3）我们后来又尝试着把Taffy吸引来新树屋，但是都失败了。Paragraph2:Mrs.Moorerackedherbrains（绞尽脑汁）andworkedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.Mrs.Moore再次道歉，并承诺：如果你们同意的话，我会每天都为你们做曲奇。我和Jennifer同意各自有了归宿（4）我和Jennifer终于有地方talkaboutourgirlishmatters了。我们的笑声和曲奇的香味充满了新树屋。四、TCEE范文Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixitupinhergarden.Withanticipation,weledTaffytotheentranceofthenewtreehouse,eagertoseehisreaction.Unexpectedly,aftercirclingthenewtreehouseafewtimes,Taffysprintedbackoverthefenceandintoourtreehouse.Hisdisinterestshockedus.WeattemptedseveralmoretimestolureTaffyintothenewtreehousewithhisfavoritetoysandtreats,butalleffortsendedinvain.ItseemedthatTaffyhadgrowntoofondofourtreehouse,andnonewstructure,nomatterhowappealing,couldswayhisloyalty.摩尔太太从网上商店买了一个现成的，让一些工人在她的花园里把它修好了。我们满怀期待地把太妃带到新树屋的入口处，急切地想看看它的反应。出乎意料的是，在围着新树屋转了几圈之后，太妃糖又跑过篱笆，跑进了我们的树屋。他的冷漠使我们震惊。我们又试了几次，想把太妃糖带进新的树屋，给他最喜欢的玩具和零食，但所有的努力都白费了。似乎太妃太喜欢我们的树屋了，任何新的结构，无论多么吸引人，都不能动摇他的忠诚。Mrs.Moorerackedherbrainsandworkedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.SheapologizedagainforTaffy'stroubleandpromised,"Ifyouagree,I'llbakecookiesforyoueveryday."Thethoughtofthosedeliciouscookiesm