06 多彩社团与课外活动中考英语满分作文赏析

06多彩社团与课外活动NO.1（2022·湖南长沙·中考真题）新学期来了，学生社团又要招新啦！假如你是社团招新工作负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文，为同学们介绍社团的情况（包括名称、活动及目的）。要求：（1）介绍下表中第1和第2两个社团，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充介绍第3个社团；（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。1.PublicSpeakersActivities:practicespeakinginpublicandgivespeeches;…Purposes:tovoiceopinionsclearlyandconfidently;toovercomefearandshyness;…2.CoolCooksActivities:design（设计）healthymenusandlearnhowtocook;…Purposes:tohavebalanced（均衡的）andhealthyeating;toenjoylife;…3.____Sports____Activities:chooseyourownfavouritesportsanddoexercisewithfriends;…Purposes:tokeepfitandloseweight;tomakemorefriends;…ClubsAreCalling!Thenewtermishere.Areyoureadyforaninterestingandcolorfulschoollife?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourclubs.IntheclubofPublicSpeakers,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】

ClubsAreCalling!Thenewtermishere.Areyoureadyforaninterestingandcolorfulschoollife?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourclubs.IntheclubofPublicSpeakers,youwillpracticespeakinginpublicandgivespeeches.Thepurposeistovoiceopinionsclearlyandconfidently.Byjoiningthisclub,youcanovercomeyourfearandshynessandbecomemoreout-going.TheCoolCooksclubisreallycool.Itholdsactivitiessuchasdesigninghealthymenusandlearninghowtocook.Youcantastedifferentfoodanddevelopabalancedandhealthyeatinghabit.Itwillmakeyourlifemoreenjoyable.Ifyouwanttoloseweightorjustkeepfit,theSportsClubisyourbestchoice.Therearemanykindsofsportsinthisclub.Youcanchooseyourownfavouritesportsanddoexercisewithfriendsandotherstudents.Soyouwillmakemorefriendsatthesametime.Youcanchoosemorethanoneclub,dependingonyourinterestandtime.Ibelievetheseclubswillmakeyourschoollifefullofsurprises.Joinusnow!【解析】1.题干解读：题干要求根据表格中所给的两个社团的信息，并补充第三个社团信息，介绍这三个社团，包括它们的名称、活动内容和目的。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现时和一般将来时，以第三人称介绍俱乐部。写作时承接所给开头，对三个俱乐部的活动和目的分别进行描述，最后另起一段表达期望并呼吁同学们加入。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。NO.2（2022·贵州铜仁·中考真题）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。要求：（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。提示词：laborpracticebase（劳动实践基地）diggingtheland（松土）；respect（尊重）。ColorfulAfter-SchoolActivitiesI’mLiHua.Gladtosharethecolorfulafter-schoolactivitiesofourschool.Inourschool,wecanchoosewhatweareinterestedin.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】ColorfulAfter-SchoolActivitiesI’mLiHua.Gladtosharethecolorfulafter-schoolactivitiesofourschool.Inourschool,wecanchoosewhatweareinterestedin.IfyouwanttoimproveyouroralEnglish,youcanchooseEnglishClub.Youcanlearnabouthowtorecitehere.Ifyouaregoodatdrawing,youcanjoinDrawingClub.Youcanalsolearnaboutpaper-cutting.Ifyouareinterestedingrowingvegetablesandplanting,youcanjoinLabourPractice.Ifyouwanttokeephealthy,youcanjoinSportsClub.Youcanlearnhowtoswim,playfootballandsoon.Theseafter-schoolactivitiesnotonlyenrichourafter-schoollives,butalsoteachussomebasicskills.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.3（2022·四川泸州·中考真题）开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free-timeActivities”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你及朋友们的课外活动开展情况。要点提示：1.内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读……。2.好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。3.个人观点：……。要求：1.词数110词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：volunteer，relax，knowledge，skillFree-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】Free-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers.MyfriendsandIhaveavarietyoffree-timeactivities.First,weoftenrunforanhouronweekendsandwealwaysplayfootballafterclassbecausewealllikeplayingit.Ifwehavetime,wewilldrawsomebeautifulpicturestodecorateourschool.What’smore,weoftenhelpourparentsdothehousework.Evensomeofusdosomevolunteerwork,suchascleaningtheparkandvisitingtheold.Andwealsoreadsomeinterestingbooksandshareourideastogether.Free-timeactivitiesarebeneficialtous.Wecannotonlyrelax,butalsowecanlearnsomeknowledgethatcan’tbelearntinclass.Besides,wecanlearnsomeskillsthatareimportanttoourlife.Themostimportantisthatwecanmakemanyfriendswhohavethesameinterest.Inmyopinion,weshouldsparesometimetodofree-timeactivitiesinordertogrowuphealthily.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“Free-timeActivities”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段从不同方面介绍自己和朋友的课外活动；第三段介绍课外活动的好处；最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.4（2022·浙江丽水·中考真题）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。SocialPracticePlanWhattodoWhytodoso●volunteertodo...●makeasurveyabout...●haveagraduationtripto...●…●behelpful...●learnmoreabout...●openone’seyes...●…注意：1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3）词数：80~100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid,Gladtosharemysocialpracticeplanwithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【满分作文赏析】DearDavid,Gladtosharemysocialpracticeplanwithyou.Asitwillbethelastsummerholidayinjuniorschool,someclassmatesandIplantogoonagraduationtriptoHangzhou,thecapitalcityofZhejiang.Byenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryandcolorfulculturesthere,wecanopenoureyesandbringsomeunforgettablememories.Afterthetrip,Iwillvolunteertohelpinourcitylibrary,sortingoutbooks,guidingreaderstotherightbookshelves,andofcourse,communicatingwithdifferentpeople.I’msurethisexperiencecannotonlyenrichmylifebuthelpmeunderstandthetruemeaningoflearningbydoing.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划；最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.5（2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）读下面的文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。Doyoufeeltiredofthesameeverydaylife?“Survival(生存)Holidays”isforchildrentogointothelonelyplaceforexcitingactivities.About1,100schoolswilltakechildrenintothegreatoutdoorswithouttheirparentsthissummer.Whydopeoplelike“SurvivalHolidays”?Becausetheythinkbeingclosetonatureisgoodforchildren.ManychildreninbigcitiesspendalltimewatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.“SurvivalHolidays”givesthemanimportantchange.Is“SurvivalHolidays”awonderfulidea?Itis.Childrenwillhavemorefreetimetoplayandlearntofacedanger.Theydon’tknowwhattodowhentheyareindanger.Evensomethinglikecrossingasmallriverseemstobeahardchallenge.Childrenarenotcomfortablewithdanger.Evensmalldangerlikegettingtheirfeetwetorfallingdownseemsveryterribletothem.Manypeoplethinkthesurvivalactivitiesaregoodforchildren.Evenyearslater,theywillstillrememberwhattheyhavelearned.Somehavelearnedtostayclamindifficulttimes.Somehavelearnedhowtokeepsafe.Othershavelearnedhowtoworkinateam.Alltheseskillswillhelpthemalotintheirlives.1.Whatis“SurvivalHolidays”?2.Whydopeoplelike“SurvivalHolidays”?3.Is“SurvivalHolidays”awonderfulidea?Whyorwhynot?4.Whatarethegoodpointsofthesurvivalactivities?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________