加强对中小学生的劳动教育 热点07 -中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点07加强对中小学生的劳动教育一、材料作文1．国家提出了将劳动教育（LaborEducation）纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目EnglishWorld就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchool”为题，写一篇短文参赛。写作要点：1.劳动教育的意义（学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……）2.校内劳动教育建议（开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……）3.……写作要求：1.内容必须包含给出的所有信息；2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchoolIt’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschools._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchoolIt’sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschools.Ithinkit’simportant.Wecanlearnsomelifeskillsandformgoodhabits.Bothwillhelpusalotinthefuture.Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanofferclassestoteachushowtodothecleaningandgrowplants.What’smore,theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchascookingclubandpaper-cuttingclub.Theschoolcanalsoholdcompetitionstoseewhoisthebestinmakingcakes.Suchactivitieswillmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Iamlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.IbelieveIwilldowellinit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文；②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；③提示：写作提示已经给出，校内劳动教育的建议是本文的写作重点，需要细化，且可以适当补充。[写作步骤]第一步，表达劳动教育的意义；第二步，表达校内劳动教育建议，这是写作重点，细化具体建议；第三步，表达自己的愿望。[亮点词汇]①asfor至于②offerclassestoteachushowto...提供课程教我们如何……③makeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful让我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩和有意义④lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]Theschoolcanalsoholdcompetitionstoseewhoisthebestinmakingcakes.（宾语从句）2．劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此，青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期，育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历，以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。要求如下：1.请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动；2.重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议；3.文中不得出现真实个人信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Let’sTakePartinLaborActivitiesLaboristhesourceofallhappiness.Laborisoneofthenecessaryconditionsforstudents’all-rounddevelopment.AndIthinkitisgoodtodohousework.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.Iusedtobelazyathome.Seeingthis,mymothercameupwithanidea—Ihavetoearnmypocketmoneybydoinghousework.Itchangedmealot.Forexample,whenIcan’tworkoutamathproblem,Iprefertosweepthefloorortidyupmyroomtoclearmymind.Oncemymothertoldmetobuysomefruit.Iquicklymadealist,comparedpricesandboughtfreshfruit.InowhaveahabitofmanagingmoneyandIknowit’sgreatofmymothertolookaftermyfamilysowell!ThisishowIlearntodohousework—it’saskillthatlastsalifetime.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍经常参加的劳动以及参加劳动的收获并提出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。3．“双减”活动开展以来，学生有更多的时间去参加校内、校外以及家庭的各种劳动了。比如参好加学校、街道清洁卫生、到敬老院开展志愿服务、以及在家里当小厨师等等。你校英语社团以“我（们）劳动,我（们）快乐”为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要点提示：（1）分享一次你难忘的劳动经历；（2）谈谈你的劳动感受；（3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。要求：1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥；2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.Alittletiredbuthappy.IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.Ithinkit’sourdutytosharesomehousework.Asteenagers,weshouldtakeactiontohelparoundthehouse!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写作要点提示已经给出；②时态：时态是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意用适当的逻辑词语连接，使得行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，结合要点提示，分享自己一次劳动经历；第二步，就这次劳动经历谈及自己的感受；第三步，最后总结自己的观点，并发表倡议。[亮点词汇]①getupearly早起②feelproudof为……自豪③takecareof照顾④takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.（句型Itwasthefirsttimeforsbtodosth表示“某人第一次做某事”）②IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.（because引导的原因状语从句）4．日前，中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》(Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducation)，提出了中学生应该树立“劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽”的劳动精神。校英文报社以此为主题，举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面提示，写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，并提出建议。写作要点：1.你认为培养劳动精神重要吗？至少给出两条理由。2.从以下几个方面谈谈你参加的有助于培养劳动精神的活动：a.Whathouseworkdoyouusuallydoathome?b.Whatout-of-classactivitiesdoyoutakepartinatschool?3.就“如何培养劳动精神”给出你的建议。要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.Thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.

Iusuallydohouseworkathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingsomedishes.Ialsotakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoenrichmyreal-worldworkexperience.

Inordertodevelophardworkingspirit,weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.Weshouldtrytoformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己对于培养劳动精神的看法；第二步，谈谈自己通常在家做什么家务以及参加什么课后活动；第三步，就“如何培养劳动精神”给出建议。[亮点词汇]①comeout出现②buildup增进③takepartin参加④suchas例如⑤trytodosth尽力做某事[高分句型]Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.（动词不定式作目的状语）5．近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括：1.上劳动课，学习生活技能；2.参加实践活动，如：植树、洗菜等；3.学做家务，如整理房间、学做菜等；4.养成良好的劳动习惯。注意：1.词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加词汇，使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：ahardworkingspiritclass劳动课，lifeskills生活技能，guideline指导方针Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Aguidelineonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutrecentlyinordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.

Asamiddleschoolstudent,Iwelcomeitwarmly.Firstly,weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskillsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,wecantakepartinout-of-classactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorgrowingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also,weneedtrytodosomechoresathome,liketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingsomedishes.Aboveall,wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.

Inaword,thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，根据提示介绍如何培养劳动精神；第二步，介绍参加劳动的好处；第三步，最后做总结。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②trytodosth尝试做某事③aboveall首先④inaword总而言之[高分句型]wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsandvaluetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.（and连接两个并列句）6．日前，加强中小学生劳动教育这一话题受到社会各界广泛关注。为积极响应国家政策，今年3月1日起，全国各地不少中小学开设诸如插秧、种地、烹饪等劳动课程。同学们也通过这样的课程感受到了劳动的乐趣与满足感。校刊英语专栏以“Laboristhemostglorious(劳动最光荣)”为主题，向全校学生征稿。请你结合自己一次劳动经历，写一篇英文征文。参考要点：1.自己的一次劳动经历（过程、感受）2.你对劳动教育的看法（观点、原因）3.……要求：1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。提示：labor

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n.劳动LaboristhemostgloriousPrimaryandsecondaryschoolsinmanycitieshavesetupatleastonelaborclasseveryweekstartingfromMarch1._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LaboristhemostgloriousPrimaryandsecondaryschoolsinmanycitieshavesetupatleastonelaborclasseveryweekstartingfromMarch1.Asforme,Ihavelearnedsomecookingskillsintheschool.Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutfiveorsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedme.Therefore,Ifelthappyandwasproudofmyself.Ithinklaboreducationisveryimportant.Throughlaborlessons,wecannotonlylearnsomelifeskillsbutalsohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Atthesametime,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Ilovelaborlessons!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中对劳动教育的看法，注意要点要齐全。注意动词时态的转换。[写作步骤]第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己的一次劳动经历和感受；第二步，介绍自己对劳动教育的看法；第三步，书写结语。表达自己对劳动教育的喜爱。[亮点词汇]①asforsb.就某人而言②beproudof对……感到自豪③notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……④atthesametime同时[高分句型]①Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedme.（when引导时间状语从句）②Ithinklaboreducationisveryimportant.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）二、电子邮件7．为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Linda对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给Linda回一封邮件。要点:1.劳动教育的目的：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)要求:1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：劳动教育thelaboreducation劳动课thelaborlesson/course

手工课themanualtraininglesson/courseDearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】:DearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.Iwouldliketosharesomethingaboutitwithyou.Asweknow,thelaborcourseissettoeducatestudentstorespectandhonorhardwork,andformgoodworkinghabits.Inourschool,weareofferedvariousChinesetraditionalmanualtrainingcourses,suchaspaper-cutting.Welearntodohouseworkaswell.Someteachersteachustocookseveralkindsofsimpledishes.Inmyview,throughthelaboreducation,westudentscanacquiresomelifeskills.Meanwhile,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；第三步，表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某物③formgoodworkinghabits养成良好的工作习惯④teachsb.todosth.教某人做某事[高分句型]Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.（省略that的宾语从句）三、讲稿8．劳动课即将走进我们的课程中，你作为一名即将完成义务教育阶段学习任务的学生，请你为在校同学写一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你对新课程方案的看法和建议。词数80左右。内容包括：1.初中学生的学习任务应该有哪些?（写2点）2.课程方案规定，初中学生能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。对此你有何想法?（2点）3.你对在校同学的倡议（2点）作文要求：1.文章的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；2.语句连贯，书写工整；不得出现单位或个人真实名称。参考词汇：课程方案：curriculumplan；设计食谱designrecipes；AnewsubjectwillbecarriedoutinschoolThenewchangeaboutthelaborclassinschoolhashadaheateddi