考点07如何让作文更具“色彩”高二英语寒假大培优讲义

考点07如何让作文更具“色彩”·模块一运用高级词汇·模块二运用多变复杂句式·模块三运用衔接手段·模块四范文赏析·模块五实战演练15篇（2024年四校八校精选考题）模块模块一运用高级词汇词组优先原则丰富的英语表达少不了用到一些常用的词组。事实上，词组的使用范围远大于单个单词。写作时需要我们运用平时所积累的一些词组，尽量增加文章的文采。例如:(1).Theinventionofrobotsistosomeextentavoidtheemotionaleffectsfromhumanbeingatwork.(2).putersplayaveryimportantrole/ofgreatimportanceinourlife.(3).Suddenlyagoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.(4).Infaceof

ademandingchallenge,thespeechofSteveJobsservesasagreatguide.(5).Therefore,everyoneshouldsparenopains,notroubleandnoexpensetoscalehisorhernewheightsandstepintoabrandnewprospect.核心高级词汇原则普通词汇（表达）VS核心高级词汇（表达）普通表达高级表达important重要的crucial/vital/critical/significantfamous杰出的outstanding/renowned/eminent/prestigioussometimes有时候occasionally/onceinawhilethink/consider认为，考虑takesthintoconsideration/accountpayattentionto注意attachimportancetohard努力地diligentlyclever聪明的bright/intelligentdisagree反对，抵制oppose/objectto/resisttheideathatuse使用employ/utilize/optimize/makefull/thebestuseofsay/tell告诉,表达voiceone’sopinion/convey/delivertheideathatIthink/IbelieveInmyhumbleopinion我相信，我主张Imaintain/hold/IamfirmlyconvincedthatIholdtheopinionthat/holdstrongbeliefthatAsfarasIamconcerned,…/Inmyperspectivesupport/agree赞成，提倡IaminfavoroftheproposalthatIstronglyremend/suggest/advocatethatIthinkhighlyof/Ispeakhighlyof/singhighpraiseforsthconsidersthasextremelyimportant高度重视,认为…很重要lay/put/placegreatemphasisonattachgreatimportanceto/putahighvalueon weallknowthat众所周知ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatItismonknowledgethatgoodside好处//优点strength/strongpoints/advantage/benefit/meritbadside坏处/缺点weakness/weakpointsdisadvantage/drawback/defect避免重复原则同义，近义替换如果一个词在一篇重复出现文章可读性必然降低，因此，要使文章生动，可以在上下文中用同义词或词组替换同一个意思的词语。例如：①

Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.—Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoys/isfondof/iskeenonwatchingtelevision.②

thearrivaloftheageofinformation—theapproachoftheInternetera

—theemergenceofthedigitalage—theriseofthenetworkasawaytorelievestress③makestudentsinterestedinstudy

stir/stimulatestudents’interestinstudy

arousestudents’passioninlearning

makestudentsselfmotivatedinacquiringknowledge（2）词性转换对于一些高频使用的词，不妨尝试用一下它的词性，使语言不“落入俗套”。例如：①

Rocketshavebeen

applied

toexploretheuniverse.

—Rocketshavefound

application

fortheexplorationoftheuniverse.②

Somepeopleare

reluctant

todonatemoneybecausethecharitysysteminChinaisstill

immature.

—The

immaturity

ofthecharitysysteminChinacausedpeople’s

reluctance

indonation.③

Thatthemobiledevicescan

recognize

thespeaker’svoiceismoreandmorepopular.—Speech

recognition

onmobiledevicesisgrowinginpopularity.

（3）一句多表对于同样的意思可以通过不同的句式来表达，以增加文章的表达多元化。例如：—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,carryingaheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,withaheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,aheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.表达地道原则使用俗语成语：为了用地道的英语语言写出漂亮的作文，形象化、生动化及趣味性的词语或词组也应进入我们的备考词典。例如：能言善辩haveasilvertongue害群之马ablacksheep

成天看电视的人acouchpotato

喜欢乱说话的人abigmouth

有经验的新手agreenhand

视而不见turnablindeyeto

备受关注inthespotlight

轻而易举的事情apieceofcake

没前途的工作deadendjob

最后的忍耐极限thelaststraw

茫然不知情inthedark

金科玉律goldenrule

使用插入语：看似漫不经心的插入语，其实能显示作者的功底，也是许多阅卷老师青睐的表达方式。插入语能使句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉。副词、连接词和短语都可以当作插入语，放在句子中间，它们一般位于主语之后，动词或助动词的前面，两边分别加上逗号。例如：A.Aperson,

likeamodity,

needspackaging.B.Themainreasonwhypeopletravelis,

perhaps,forpleasure.C.Students,

atlarge,havetofaceatoughchoicewhenchoosingmajors.D.Lifeis,

inasense,aharshbattle.E.Somestudents,

duetotimidity,don’tdaretoaskquestionsinclass.F.Protectingtheenvironment,

asIseeit,hasafarreachinginfluenceonfuturegenerations.

G.Otherindividuals,

however,

taketheattitudethatthegovernmentshouldtaketheresponsibilitytotakecareoftheold.H.Agoodteachernotonlyoffersknowledge,

butmoreimportantly,healsoteachesstudentshowtobehavewell.模块模块二运用多变复杂句式1、肯定不如双否好①Thepostmanesontimeeveryday.——Thepostmanneverfailstoeontime.②IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.——Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.③Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle，itisnotwithoutitsproblem.2、陈述不如倒装妙倒装句：否定词或词组放句首时，句子要部分倒装。Notonly...butalso...前后连接两个句子时，notonly后的句子要用部分倒装，但butalso后的分句不用倒装。“Only+状语”位于句首时，要用部分倒装，only后的状语可以是副词、介词短语、从句等。让步状语从句也可以倒装，结构为:副词/形容词/名词+as+主语+动词(名词放在句首时，冠词要省略)。例如:Thereisnodenyingthatweallleadabusyschoollife,butbynomeansshouldthisbeanexcusefornotdoinghousework.NotonlydoestheInternetprovideuswitheasyaccesstoawealthofinformation,butalsoithelpsustoescapefromthepressureinreality.SmallasArmstrong'ssteponthemoonis,itisagiantleapforthehumanbeing.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary,whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.3.主动不如被动巧(1)Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.→AtmostWecanborrowfivebooksatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020.→AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020.I'mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.→I'mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.4.、非谓语结构不能少非谓语动词：非谓语动词改变了动词只能作谓语的功能，使其在英语句子中的用法更加灵活、多变。非谓语动词包括动名词、不定式和分词。对于语法基础牢固的学生来说，应该多尝试运用非谓语结构的表达，这是在英语写作中使文章增色的重要手段之一。例如：Governmentsoughttomakeeffortstoreducetheincreasinggapbetweencitiesandcountryside.(不定式）Tomakethemostofourabilitiesandfindthepositionsthatmostfitusinsocietyareshortcutstofulfillourvalue.(不定式)Itisnousecryingoverthespoiltmilk.(动名词)Themajorityofpeopleobjecttosmokinginpublic.(动名词)Governmentshouldenforcerelevantlawsorregulationstoseverelypunishthefactoryproducingagreatnumberofpollutantsandthepeoplelitteringorspittingdeliberately.(现在分词)Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.(现在分词)PresidentObamasaideducationalsuccessandeconomicwellbeingarelinked,especiallyinaworldeconomydrivenbyinformationandtechnology.(过去分词)LostintheInternetworld,youloseyourpassionforlife,missthebeautyofnatureandmakeanindifferentpersonofyourself.(过去分词)5、单句不比从句强复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句。作文中运用复合句，表达较为复杂的逻辑关系。例如:Aspeople’sdesiretogetwealthandfamegrows,manycasesarefoundinsportsgameswhereathletescheatinthegamesorviolentconflictsbetweentheplayershappen(时间状语从句，限制性定语从句)Alotofpeoplestillholdtheopinionthatappearanceisfarmoreimportantthancapabilityis.(同位语从句；比较状语从句)Everyonepossessesadream.That'swhytheyestablishaheadofthemselvesaseriesofgoalsandaremotivatedtofulfilltheultimatedream.(表语从句)Homeislikeaharbor,wherewecanrestwhenwefeelupsetorfrustrated,andthenwecansetoutagainwithencouragementandconfidence.(非限制性定语从句；时间状语从句)Sincewecan'tremovestressfromourlives,weneedtofindwaystohandleit.(原因状语从句)

Ifwecareforaperson,ifwearealwaysreadytohelpthatpersonandifwesharemostofourthoughtsandfeelingswithaperson,theyareourgenuinefriends.

(状语从句)Successandfailureisoftenwronglydefinedbygradeswhereexamorientededucationispopularized.(地点状语从句)Ourrelationshipissodeepandclosethatmostofthethingsareautomaticallyunderstoodbyeachother.(结果状语从句)Ecologistspointedoutthataclusteroftallbuildingsinacityoftenoverburdenspublictransportationandparkinglotcapacities.(宾语从句)Whateverthefuturemayhaveinstore,wewillbewellpreparedforitifwelearntoacceptchangeandappreciatewhatisnewanddifferent.(让步状语从句，条件状语从句，宾语从句)注意：值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。补充英语作文亮点句型亮点句型：英语中有大量的好句型和惯用句式，如果在平时的学习或复习中能够有意识地、积极有效地积累、总结和归纳这些句型和句式，就能在写作时增强语言的表现力，丰富语言的色彩。例如：一、the+est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)~~~themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。二、Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V例句：Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.没有比接受教育更重要的事。三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch/can’tbetoo(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过)例句：Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否认的……)例句：Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(大家都知道……)例句：Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。六、Thereisnodoubtthat+~~(毫无疑问的……)例句：Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。七、Anadvantageofisthat+句子(……的优点是……)例句：Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon'tcreate(produce)anypollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。八、Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子(……的原因是……)例句：Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。九、So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子(如此……以致于……)例句：Sopreciousistimethatwecan'taffordtowasteit.时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。十、Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,S+V(虽然……)例句：Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。十一、The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+VThe+more+Adj+S+V,~~~the+more+Adj+S+V(愈……愈……)例句：Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.你愈努力，你愈进步。十二、By+Ving,can(借着……，……能够……)例句：Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。十三、enable+Object(受词)+to+V(……使……能够……)例句：Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~(我们绝对不能……)例句：Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。十五、Itistime+S+过去式(该是……的时候了)例句：Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施解决交通问题的时候了。十六、Thosewho~~~(……的人……)例句：Thosewhobreakthelawshouldbepunished.违法的人应该受处罚。十七、Thereisnoonebut~~~(没有人不……)例句：Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.没有人不渴望上大学。十八、be+forced/pelled/obliged+to+V(不得不……)例句：Sincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner,Iampelledtogiveupdoingsports.由于考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。十九、Itisconceivablethat+句子(可想而知的)Itisobviousthat+句子(明显的)Itisapparentthat+句子(显然的)例句：Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演着一个重要的角色。二十、Thatisthereasonwhy~~~(那就是……的原因)例句：Summerishot.ThatisthereasonwhyIdon'tlikeit.夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。模块模块三运用衔接手段英语作文衔接手段包括逻辑衔接、语法衔接、词汇衔接。对于高中英语作文，这里重点讲解逻辑衔接手段，所谓逻辑衔接手段可分为：并列关系、解释关系、转折和让步关系、递进关系、例证关系、因果关系等等。例1：Becauseitismorelikelynowthatbothparentswork,thereislittleopportunityforchildrentostayintheirownhome.Instead/Rather,theywillprobablygotoanurseryschoolwhentheyaremuchyounger.（转折）例2:Apartfrom/Inadditionto/Besidesthesetensionscausedbyculturaldifferences,internationaltourismmayalsoleadtoconflictsbetweentouristsandalocalmunity.（递进)例3：Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.(让步)例4：Theywill,forexample,beabletoflyplanesandtheywillbeabletocoordinatethemovementsofseveralplanesinthevicinityofanairport.（举例）模块模块四范文赏析Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求：1．描述漫画内容；2．分析漫画所揭示的问题；3．提出你的看法。写作指导：第一步：审题定体裁。典例为议论式图画作文，体现其特点的常用句型有：开始句：用一句话概括漫画内容句型一：从这幅图画中我们可以看到一家三口正走在红地毯上。Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.句型二：正如上面图画生动呈现给我们的是一家三口正走在红地毯上。Asisvividlypresentedinthepictureabove/Asthepictureabovevividlypresentstous，afamilyofthreearewalkingonalongredcarpet.(使用as引导的非限制性定语从句)中间过渡句：用一句话揭示图画的含义它反映了当今的一个普遍现象：孩子是家庭的中心，肩负着父母的希望。Itshowsamonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies，shouldering(shoulder)thehopeoftheirparents.结束句：用一句话强调所提建议的重要性(常用only引起的倒装句)只有用这种方式，他们才能在成长过程中学会独立，才能成为真正意义上的成功者。Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.第二步：要点全而不漏要点要全：①描述漫画内容；②分析漫画所揭示的问题；③提出你的看法。核心词汇：①穿着讲究的：bewelldressed②朝前弯腰：bendforward③家庭的中心：thefocusoffamilies④肩负……的期望：shoulderthehopeof...⑤为孩子安排一切：arrangeeverythingforchildren⑥不遗余力：sparenoeffort⑦结果：asaconsequence⑧不独立思考，没有创造力：havenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas⑨表明……的普遍现象：Itshowsamonphenomenonthat…第三步：根据要点提示，写出句式要点一：儿子精心打扮，高傲地挥手走在中间。Thesoniswelldressedandwavesproudlyinthemiddle.要点二：在后面，父亲向前倾着托起上衣。Thefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacket.要点三：在前面，母亲汗流浃背地展开地毯。Themotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.要点四：父母为孩子安排好了所有的事情，不遗余力地为孩子的成功铺平道路。Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.要点五：孩子们对于父母变得如此依赖以至于他们没有独立的想法或创造性的观点。Childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.要点六：这种状况让人感到忧心忡忡。Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.要点七：过度保护和太多的关心对孩子的发展极其有害。Overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.要点八：父母应该鼓励孩子克服困难，激励孩子独立发展而不是为他们做一切事情。Parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentooveredifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselvesratherthandoeverythingforthem.第四步：词汇、句式升级升级句式一：用分词短语“welldressed”作定语改写要点一Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddle.升级句式二：用and连接要点二、三Thefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.升级句式三：用while连接升级句式一、二Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.升级句式四：把要点四中的后半句改为分词短语作状语Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildren，sparingnoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.升级句式五：把要点五改成倒装句Soreliantdochildrenbeeontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.第五步 巧用过渡词升级句式四和五之间为因果关系，可以使用过渡词语asaresult/consequence；要点七、八是针对上文提到的社会现象发表的个人观点，故可以使用inmyopinion作为过渡词语。第六步 正确分段第一段：描述漫画内容(开始句；升级句式三)第二段：分析漫画所揭示的问题(中间段的开始句；升级句式四、五)第三段：提出自己的看法(要点六至八；结尾句中的强调句)第七步 完善成文Onepossibleversion：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.Itshowsamonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies，shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence，childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion，overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentooveredifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.模块模块五实战演练15篇一、书面表达1．（2023下·上海·高二上海市建平中学校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.学校将在新学期增设如下选修课程：园艺(gardening)、烹饪(cooking)、护理(nursing)，请从中选择一门你最感兴趣的课程，并谈谈你为什么选择这门课程。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

I’mverygladtohearthatourschoolwilladdseveralcoursesincludinggardening,cookingandnursingnextterm.Iwanttoattendacourseaboutgardening.Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,makingmymindandmannerscultivated.Therefore,I’dliketolearnhowtoplantdifferentkindsofgrass,flowersandtreesinthegardenandIwanttoknowhowIshouldmaintainthegrassindifferentseasons.Besides,ifIgainabitmoreknowledgeofgardening,Icanhelpmaketheenvironmentbeautiful.Atthesametime,thecoursecanhelpmemajorinthegardeningafterattendingcollege.Inaword,I’dappreciateitifitcanteachmemoreaboutgardening.【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生从学校下学期将要增加的选修课程中选择一门最感兴趣的，并谈谈为什么选择这门课程。【详解】1.词汇积累空闲时间：sparetime→freetime此外：besides→what’smore同时：atthesametime→meanwhile总之：inaword→inall2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,makingmymindandmannerscultivated.拓展句：Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,whichcanmakemymindandmannerscultivated.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mverygladtohearthatourschoolwilladdseveralcoursesincludinggardening,cookingandnursingnextterm.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Besides,ifIgainabitmoreknowledgeofgardening,Icanhelpmaketheenvironmentbeautiful.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）【高分句型3】Inaword,I’dappreciateitifitcanteachmemoreaboutgardening.（运用了固定句型，it作形式宾语）2．（2023上·上海金山·高二上海市金山中学校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.英国作家JohnRuskin有一句名言：“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutapass”,请以“GoalSettingIsImportant”为题，以具体事例谈谈你对这句话的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文GoalSettingIsImportantAsJohnRuskinputsit,“Livingwithoutaimislikesailingwithoutapass.”Goalsoflife,withoutdoubt,determinewhatwearegoingtobe.IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.Asaresult,myparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.However,itwaswhatmyEnglishteachersaidtomethatreallyhelpedmeout.ShetoldmethatImusthavemyowngoaloflife,otherwisemyfuturewouldbehopelessandaimlessandthatplayingputergameswasfunandattractivebutitwouldn’tguaranteemeabrightandpromisingfuture.IfinallyrealizedthatImustsetupaclearandachievablegoalandworkhardtowardsitrightaway.Inthedaysthatfollowed,wheneverIfelttiredorhadanurgetoplayputergames,Ithoughtofmygoalandsoonregainedstrength.Asthesayinggoes,alifewithoutagoalisalifewithouthope.Bearingmygoaloflifeinmind,Iamalwaysfullofenergyinmystudy.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“GoalSettingIsImportant”为题，以具体事例谈谈对英国作家JohnRuskin的名言：“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutapass”的理解。【详解】1.词汇积累因此：asaresult→asaconsequence意识到：realize→beaware疲倦的：tired→wornout充满：befullof→befilledwith2.句式拓展用定语从句合并句子原句：IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.Asaresult,myparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.拓展句：IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind,asaresultofwhichmyparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.【点睛】【高分句型1】IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.（运用了“so…that…”句型和倒装句）【高分句型2】However,itwaswhatmyEnglishteachersaidtomethatreallyhelpedmeout.（运用了what引导的主语从句和强调句型）3．（2023下·上海·高二上海市南洋模范中学校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。请以此为素材写篇短文。你的作文必须包括：简要描述漫画内容；就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OperaisthetreasureoftheChinesenation,butfewerandfewerpeoplegotoseeit.Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.ThecartoonreflectsthatnowadaysyoungpeoplearenotinterestedintraditionalChineseoperaculture.IthinkyoungpeopleshouldactivelypromotetraditionalChineseculture,especiallyoperaculture.Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

Allinall,Chineseopera,especiallyPekingOpera,isthequintessenceofChineseculture.Thecontemporaryyouthhavetheresponsibilityandobligationtocarryitforward,passonthequintessenceofChineseculture,andmakeitpopularathomeandabroad.【分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文，所给漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。要求考生以此为素材写篇短文。文章必须包括：简要描述漫画内容；就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→haveinterestin→showinterestin总之：allinall→inshort→inbrief另外，此外：inaddition→furthermore→moreover反应，回应：reaction→response→reflection2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.拓展句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingthesameplay,towhichtwopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.

(运用了由并列连词while连接的并列句，前后形成鲜明对比)[高分句型2]Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

(运用了sothat引导的结果状语从句)4．（2022上·上海奉贤·高二校考阶段练习）课文《2050》向我们展示了2050未来的生活。有同学认为机器人给我们带来很多方便，也有同学认为机器人会带来很多麻烦。请你谈谈未来机器人的带来的利弊，并谈谈你的看法。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Withthedevelopmentofscience,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconfusedaboutwhetheritisgoodorbadtoletrobotsreplacehumanbeingsinsomefields.Everycoinhastwosides.Robotsbringnotonlymuchconveniencetoourlifebutalsounemploymentofmanypeople.AsfarasIamconcerned,ithassomepositiveeffectsonourlife.Theadvantagesofrobotsarefarmorethanthedisadvantages.Tobeginwith,robotsmakeourlifemoreconvenient.Wecandoalotofthingswiththehelpofrobotsthatcouldn’tbedoneinthepast.Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction.Factoriescanreduceproductioncostsbyusingrobots.Androbotsdon’tgetsick,whichisverygoodforproducinggoods.Lastbutnotleast,robotscansavemorepeopleincaseofdisaster,becausetheydon’tfeelpain,theycansavemorepeoplewithoutfeelingtired.Allinall,theworldischanging,andweshouldchangeourthinking.Ifrobotsbecameapartofourlife,ourlifewouldbemorecolorful.【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇议论文，要求学生就未来机器人的带来的利弊，谈谈自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累：越来越多：anincreasingnumberof→agrowingnumberof疲惫的：tired→exhausted而且：additionally→inaddition/what’smore/furthermore在我看来：asfarasIamconcerned→inmyopinion/frommypointofview2.句式拓展：原句：Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction.Factoriescanreduceproductioncostsbyusingrobots.拓展句：Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction,bywhichfactoriescanreduceproductioncosts.【点睛】【高分句型1】Withthedevelopmentofscience,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconfusedaboutwhetheritisgoodorbadtoletrobotsreplacehumanbeingsinsomefields.（运用了whether引导宾语从句。）【高分句型2】Androbotsdon’tneedtoeatorgetsick,whichisverygoodforproducinggoods.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。）5．（2022上·上海嘉定·高二校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.一项调查显示，近七成受访者表示他们不愿意对父母开放微信朋友圈；“屏蔽父母”主要理由是，认为父母“过度关心、管教太多、无法沟通”。对此现象，请你写一篇文章谈谈你的看法，你的文章须包括以下内容：1.你是否对父母开放你的朋友圈；2.请说明你这样做的理由；3.谈谈你对“屏蔽父母”这种做法的看法。参考词汇：屏蔽父母don’tsharemymomentswithmyparents微信朋友圈WeChatMoments___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,itseemsthatMomentssectionof