2021高考人教版英语二轮专题复习《统考版》35分写作规范抢分练（五）

35分写作规范抢分练(五)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)[2020·成都市高三第一次诊断性检测]LastsummerIdecidedtogetmyfirstjob.Thiswaspossibleoneofthehardesttasks.Forme,itwasanotherstepmovedfromadependentchildtoafairlyindependentadult.Ihadneverholdajobbeforebecauseofmyparentswantedmetofocusonschool.SoIhadneverworkedthedayinmylife.Atfirst,itisextremelytough.Isentapplicationshopingtogetmyfirstcoupleofchoice.YetIgotneithercallsoremails.Luckily,halfwaythroughthethirdweek,Ifinallygotacall.Itwasnotmyfirstchoice,butwecouldnotsayno.Andaftertheinterview,IwasmorethanreadystartworkingthefollowingMonday.第二节书面表达(满分25分)[2020·“四省八校”高三第二次质量检测]假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Zack将要来中国旅游，回国前想给家人和朋友买一些有中国特色的礼物，他给你发邮件寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示欢迎；2．推荐礼物；3．表达祝愿。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：Chinesecharacteristic中国特色________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________35分写作规范抢分练(五)第一节答案与解析：LastsummerIdecidedtogetmyfirstjob.Thiswaseq\o(possible,\s\do16(①possibly))oneofthehardesttasks.Forme,itwasanotherstepeq\o(moved,\s\do16(②moving))fromadependentchildtoafairlyindependentadult.Ihadnevereq\o(hold,\s\do16(③held))ajobbeforebecauseeq\o(,\s\do16(④))myparentswantedmetofocusonschool.SoIhardneverworkedeq\o(the,\s\do16(⑤a))dayinmylife.Atfirst,iteq\o(is,\s\do16(⑥was))extremelytough.Isentapplicationshopingtogetmyfirstcoupleofeq\o(choice,\s\do16(⑦choices)).YetIgotneithercallseq\o(or,\s\do16(⑧nor))emails.Luckily,halfwaythroughthethirdweek,Ifinallygotacall.Itwasnotmyfirstchoice,buteq\o(we,\s\do16(⑨I))couldnotsayno.Andaftertheinterview,Iwasmorethanreadyeq\o(∧,\s\do16(⑩to))startworkingthefollowingMonday.①possible改为possibly。形容词和副词混用。分析句子结构可知，此处在句子中作状语，故应用副词形式。②moved改为moving。非谓语动词误用。在本句中，was为谓语动词，move与其逻辑主语构成主谓关系，作step的后置定语，故应用moving。③hold改为held。动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，本句时态为过去完成时，基本结构为haddone,hold的过去分词为held，故应用held。④删除because后的of。介词多用。because是连词，其后接句子；becauseof是介词，其后接名词、代词等。此处后接的是一个句子，故应把of删除。⑤the改为a。冠词误用。此处表示在这之前我连一天都没工作过，此处表泛指，且day的发音以辅音音素开头，故应用a。⑥is改为was。动词时态误用。根据首句中的时间状语Lastsummer和语境可知，该处描述的是发生在过去的事，应用一般过去时，故把is改为was。⑦choice改为choices。名词的单复数误用。coupleof表示“几个……”，后接可数名词复数，故应把choice改为choices。⑧or改为nor。固定搭配误用。此处表示我既没有接到，也没有收到邮件。neither...nor...“既不……也不……”为固定搭配，故把or改为nor。与其易混淆的搭配为：either...or...“或者……或者……”。⑨we改为I。代词误用。此处表示它不是我的第一选择，但是我不能拒绝。此处人称应为我，而非我们，故应把we改为I。⑩ready后加to。不定式符号漏用。bereadytodosth.意为“准备好做某事”为固定用法，故在ready后加to。第二节参考范文：DearZack，IammorethanhappytoknowthatyouareplanningtotraveltoChina.Wele!AndIamverywillingtoremendsomegiftswithChinesecharacteristicstoyou.Firstly,Isuggestthatyoubuysomesilkproducts.Asisknown,Chinaisfamousforsilk.Youmayfindavarietyofsilkproducts,whicharelightandeasytocarry,suchasscarfsandhandkerchiefs.Secondly,papercuttingworksarealsogoodchoices.TheyareasymboloftraditionalChinesefolkculturea