专题02写事记叙文-2024年高考英语满分作文考前必备

专题02写事记叙文一、题型解读与写作攻略1.题型解读故事性记叙文常见的形式有：故事、传记、游记、日记、新闻报道等。高中英语书面表达一般是按时间发生的先后顺序记叙一件事情。空间顺序一般用于参观某单位、某场所或某建筑物的记叙。二是在记叙的时候要注意夹叙夹议，适当地发表议论或个人感想。三是文章结尾一定要点明主题，简要说明活动的目的、意义或主要收获等。2.写作攻略写作时需要注意以下几点：1．要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。2．要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物，然后写事件的原因及发展过程，最后写结果。同时在结尾处要尽量自然，点明文章主题。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文，使整个文章融为一体。3．要把握好人称。在写此类文章时通常用第一人称或第三人称。4．要注意时态的运用。在故事写作过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加形象生动。结构方面一般遵循“三段论”的方式，文章总体框架由开头段、主体段和结尾段三部分构成：1.主题句（topicsentence）：文章展开关键句，交代文章主题（写事的记叙文一般表述事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因和结果(5”W”+1”H”)），以及感受。2.主体段（supportingsentences）：紧扣主题句展开（写事的记叙文通常叙述事情经过、发展及结果，可按时间，地点和事件发展为线索）。3.结尾句（concludingsentence）：事件带来的感想体会。二、高分模板素材1.常用词语1．常用的连接词First...Then...Next...Finally；Some...Some...Others；Theboys...Thegirls...；Some...theothers...Therestofus/them...2．时间顺序earlyinthemorning/intheearlymorning；inthemiddleoftheday/atnoon；lateintheafternoon/inthelateafternoon；far/deepintothenight；inthepast/atpresent/inthefuture；first，second，next，then，finally；atfirst，inthebeginning；atlast，intheend；shortlyafterwards，atonce，immediately，allofasudden，suddenly，soon；themoment，assoonas，thefirsttime，notuntil，nexttime，before，after，etc.2.常用句型★精彩开头1．Oneday，onthewayto...一天，在去……的路上……2．LastSunday，mymotherandIweredoing...whenwesaw/heard...上周日，我和母亲正在做……突然这时我们看到/听到……3．About...o'clockoneeveningin...，my...wasdoing...大约在晚上……点，在……，我的……正在做……★丰满主体1．Withoutdelay/hesitation，I/wedialed120/119.毫不犹豫，我/我们拨打了120/119。2．Itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulance/afireenginearrived.不久，一辆救护车/消防车到了。3．Wetriedourbesttohelp...，but...我们尽最大努力去帮忙……，但……4．Wemakeeveryefforttohelp...我们努力帮忙……5．Afterawhile，manypeoplecametohelpus.过了一会儿，许多人过来帮我们。★余味结尾1．Atlast，...wassaved/wesucceeded.最后，……被救了/我们成功了。2．Althoughwewereverytired，wefeltveryhappy.尽管我们很累，但我们很高兴。3．Whatanunforgettableexperience!多么难忘的一次经历啊！三、模板作文典型模板Liferesemblesapacketofchocolatewhichhasavarietyofflavors,whenitestooneofthemostimpressivethingsinmylife,itsuddenlyoccurredtomethatwetookpartinanafterclassactivity—……withmyfriendslastweekendinthe……,anditwasafantasticexperience.Inthemorningwearrivedat……Meanwhile,I……Intheend,allofusnotonlygained……,butalsolearnt……Whatawonderfultimewehad!ItwasaverymeaningfulactivityandnotonlycanIhave

somenewdiscoveriesbutalsoIexperiencethejoyoflabor

andenrichmyknowledge.

模板范文上周你班举行了“垃圾分类进社区”义务宣讲活动，请用英语简单介绍此次活动。内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动过程;3.你的收获。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Aimedatenhancingourunderstandingofgarbagesortingandraisingtheawarenessofprotectingourenvironment,ourclasslaunchedamunityvoluntarypublicityactivity,whichleavesmeadeepimpression.AllthevolunteersgatheredatourgateearlyinthemorninglastSaturdayandthenwetookbustothemunity.Onarrival,weweredividedintofourgroups,eachmakingaspeechtopeoplelivingthere.Wegaveadetailedpresentationaboutthemeasuresofgarbagesorting.Meanwhile,westressedthedifferenceitwouldmaketoourmunity.Moreover,aninteractivequestionandanswerhelpedpopularizetheirmonsense.Throughthisactivity,wehavenotonlyenrichedoursocialexperience,butalsomadetheawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionmoredeeplyrootedinourhearts.Isincerelyhopewecansparejointeffortstomakeourhomemoreandmorebeautiful.四、高分必背范文10篇1.【2020年全国高考英语II卷】上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1.农场情况；

2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目已为你写好。题目：MyWeekendMyweekendLastweekend,Iparticipatedinanactivityheldinthefarm,whereI

harvestedalot.Now,mybriefintroductionisasfollows.Locatedinthesuburb,thefarmismainlyintendedfortheorganicfarm.

Agreatnumberoftouristscanbeattractedtoexperiencethevariousactivitiesthere.However,whatinterestedmemostwasthefruitssectionwhereIfreelycarriedthebasketstogetwhatIwanted,suchaspeaches,strawberries

andcherries.

Whiledoingthetask,Ihadagoodknowledgeofthefruitsplanted,includingthenutritioncontainedandtechnologyapplied.Personally,Ifinditmeaningfultotastetheculture.

Beingfarawayfromthefarm,Ionceknewalittleaboutthefarming.Butmyhorizonisbroadenedandknowledgeisalsoenrichedthistime.SomygreatthanksshouldbegiventotheschoolUnionandthenextexperienceisexpected.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；第二步：列提纲（重点短语）tookpartin；wasresponsiblefor；ameaningfulday；shouldtreasure第三步：连词成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits

theotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受2.表示并列补充关系：and;But;Through第五步：润色修改1、非谓语动词：activityheldinthefarm（done作后置定语）；Locatedinthesuburb（作状语）；thefruitsplanted（done作后置定语）；thenutritioncontainedandtechnologyapplied（done作后置定语）；Beingfarawayfrom...（Being作状语）2、定语从句：...whereweharvestedalot...3、主语从句：...what

interestedmemostwasthefruitssection...

getwhatIwanted4、被动句：...touristscanbeattractedto...Butmyhorizon

isbroadened

andknowledgeisalsoenriched

thistime.SomygreatthanksshouldbegiventotheschoolUnionandthenextexperienceisexpected2.【2020年全国新高考Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员:2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACrossCountryRunningRaceACrossCountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrosscountryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthepetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.[解析]这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:2.跑步路线第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/drawone'sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:连词成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrosscountryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthepetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so...状语从句连词:because/if/though/although...定语从句连词:which/that/when/where...第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【高分短语及句型]1.enthusiasticparticipants充满激情的参赛者2.giveuphalfway半途而废3.perseverein坚持4.enrichourschoollife丰富我们的校园生活5.thesignificanceofpersistence坚持的重要性6.Notonlydidtheraceenrichourschoollifebutmadeusrealizethesignificanceofpersistence.这场比赛不仅丰富了我们的校园生活，而且让我们意识到坚持的重要性。(本句中notonly位于句首，其后面的分句用部分倒装)3.【2021年6月浙江卷】昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Inordertoenrichstudents’afterschoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollibrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks;everystudentisweletovisit.【高分词汇、短语及句型]绘画:drawing→painting激发:spirit→spark欣赏:appreciate→admire欢迎:greet→wele原句:Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks;everystudentisweletovisit.合并句:Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,duringwhicheverystudentisweletovisit.[高分句型1]anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.(本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。)[高分句型2]Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.(本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。)[高分句型3]Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.(notonly...butalso连接的并列句。)4.【2023·浙江·统考模拟预测】假如你是李华，某英文网站发布了以“ASymbolofChina”为题的征稿启事，请你撰稿介绍你眼中的中国象征。内容包括：1.象征物名称；2.象征物特色；3.推荐理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ASymbolofChinaASymbolofChinaAmongthemanysymbolsrepresentingChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.TheGreatWallisoneofthegreatestmiraclescreatedbytheancientChineseasthewitnessofChina’slonghistory.OriginallybuiltbyEmperorQinshihuangandexpandedandstrengthenedintheMingDynasty,itbecametheworld’slargestmilitarystructure.Anditshistoricandstrategicimportanceismatchedonlybyitsarchitecturalsignificance,makingitasymboloftheunityandstrengthoftheChinesepeople.TheGreatWallisnowthebiggesttouristattractioninChina.Astheoldsayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman”.Soeandexperienceitatfirsthand.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一篇英文稿，介绍自己眼中的中国象征，包括象征物名称、象征物特色和推荐理由。许多的：many→numerous奇迹：miracle→wonder旅游景点：touristattraction→scenicspot亲自：atfirsthand→byoneself简单句变复合句原句：AmongthemanysymbolsrepresentingChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.拓展句：AmongthemanysymbolsthatrepresentChinaanditsuniqueculture,theGreatWallistoponmyremendationlist.【点睛】【高分句型1】OriginallybuiltbyEmperorQinshihuangandexpandedandstrengthenedintheMingDynasty,itbecametheworld’slargestmilitarystructure.（运用了过去分词作状语）【高分句型2】Astheoldsayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman”.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）5.【2023·福建模拟预测】假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ATraditionalChineseCultureWeekATraditionalChineseCultureWeekAtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.Everyoneofuschoseonetoourtasteandweenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包括：活动目的；活动内容；活动反响。增加：enhance→boost参加：participatein→takepartin许多：numerous→massesof获得：gained→obtained简单句变复合句原句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.拓展句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschool,whosepurposewastoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.【点睛】[高分句型1]Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.(运用了非谓语动词作宾语)[高分句型2]Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)6.假设你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音(TikTok)而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.表示理解和关心；2.沉迷抖音的影响:花费大量时间观看和分享视频，影响学习。3.提出具体建议:1）开始一些其他的爱好，如阅读，听音乐或下棋。2）通过面对面的交流来结交更多的朋友要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJohn,IamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromTikTokaddiction.Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.Therefore,immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopit.Youshouldstartsomeotherhobbies,suchasreading,listeningtomusicorplayingchess.Besides,youhadbettermakemorefriendsthroughfacetofacemunication.Isincerelyhopethattheseideascanhelpyouwiththeproblem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。朋友John沉迷抖音而无法自拔，要求考生给朋友John回封邮件，表示理解并提出建议。【详解】诚挚的：sincere→genuine专注：payattentionto→focuson采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction/takesteps不能做某事：can’tdosomething→makesbunabletodo简单句变复合句原句：Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTok.Theyspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline.Itmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.拓展句：Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.【点睛】【高分句型1】IamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromTikTokaddiction.（hear后跟that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Actually,itismonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）7.【2022·云南师大附中高三阶段练习】假定你是学生李华,你的外国朋友Sherry非常喜欢2022年北京冬奥会开幕式，但她对其中展现的一些中国元素不甚了解，请你写一封电子邮件向她介绍一下开幕式中部分中国传统文化的元素。主要内容包括：1.开幕式以24秒倒计时代表了中国24个节气；2.引导员服装展示了中国国画风格和虎年的标志。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇：二十四节气the24solarterms;立春theBeginningofSpring;虎年YearoftheTigerDearSherry,TheopeningceremonyofBeijing2022WinterOlympicGameswarmedChinesepeople’sheartwithsomuchexcitementandChineseculturethatIwillattempttoexplainthemtoyou.TheopeningceremonybeganonFebruary4th,whichcoincideswiththe“BeginningofSpring”,thefirstofthe24solartermsoftheyear.ThisdesignindicatesthattheWinterOlympicswillpaveawayforthevibrantfuture.Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwiththefeaturesoftraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.TheirhatsandshoesarecharacterizedwiththeYearoftheTiger,demonstratingpeople’sgoodwishesforthenewyear.Furthermore,snowflakesofunityandpapercutofjoybothshowedsplendidChineseculture.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutourculture,I’mherewaitingforyouringtoChina.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于告知信。要求考生给外国朋友Sherry写信，向她介绍2022年北京冬奥会开幕式中部分中国传统文化的元素。【详解】开始：begin→start表明：indicate→show充满生机的：vibrant

→exciting/energetic此外：besides→moreover/inaddition简单句变复合句原句：Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwiththefeaturesoftraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.拓展句：Besides,alltheguidesworeclothingwhichfeaturesthetraditionalChinesepaintingtoshowthebeautyofourfinearts.【点睛】[高分句型1]TheopeningceremonybeganonFebruary4th,whichcoincideswiththe“BeginningofSpring”,thefirstofthe24solartermsoftheyear.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]ThisdesignindicatesthattheWinterOlympicswillpaveawayforthevibrantfuture.(运用了that引导宾语从句)8.【2022·湖北武汉·高三期中】你是校英文报主编，你报近期推出的“Myfavourite…”征文活动圆满结束，你打算写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动简介；2.活动评价。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Recently,theEssayWritingactivityheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.Manystudentsfromallgradesparticipatedinitactively.Theyhandedintheiressaysexpressingwhattheylikebest.Somelikemusic,somearefavouritefordrawing,andothersprefersports.Inordertodoittotheirbest,theykeptpracticingeverydayandhavewonmanyprizes,whichprovethattheirhardworkhaspaidoff.Allthejudgesandstudentsthoughthighlyoftheirabilitiesandskills.【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生对校最近举办的“Myfavourite…”征文活动写一篇报道。【详解】活动：activity→game举办：hold→throw结束：etoanend→beover参加：participatein→takepartin简单句变复合句原句：Recently,theEssayWritingactivityheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.拓展句：Recently,theEssayWritingactivitywhichwasheldlastmonthhasetoanendsuccessfully.【点睛】[高分句型1]Theyhandedintheiressaysexpressingwhattheylikebest.（由what引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2]Inordertodoittotheirbest,theykeptpracticingeverydayandhavewonmanyprizes,whichprovethattheirhardworkhaspaidoff.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）9.你擅长中国书法，最近创作了一幅作品，准备参加新西兰朋友Jason下个月在他当地举办的青少年书法展。应参赛方要求，你需要为作品写一份英文介绍，内容包括:1.创作目的;2.作品简介;3.观展要求。注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AnIntroductiontoMyWorkIloveChinesecalligraphyandI’mgoodatit.TheChinesechar