高考英语复习作文专项读后续写环境描写讲义

环境描写环境描写在续写中一般配合人物经历或故事情节推进出现，服务于人物、细节的塑造，而非“为了写景而写景”，故不应该占据太长的篇幅。一、地点方位描写句式1：在哪+谓语+主语常用“完全倒装”这一句式。例1：森林中央有一个美丽的湖。Inthemiddleoftheforestliesabeautifullake.例2：现在，不远处，篝火周围有许多人手拉手跳舞。Now,notfaraway,aroundthebonefirearedancingmanyhumanshandinhand.例3：其中一张桌子旁坐着一家人，他们有两个女人，都和MeiMei差不多大。AtoneofthetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereaboutMeiMei’sage.例4：海边矗立着高大的棕榈树，树上挂着绿色的椰子。Attheseasidestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreencoconytshangingfromthem.例5：雾蒙蒙的山上星星点点地散落着小农场和村落。Mistcoveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsandvillages.句式2：方位+lie/stand+景，介词+whichis+物/人在....有一个.....，在它的....有...例1：森林中央有一棵大树，旁边是一间小屋。Inthecenteroftheforeststandsagianttree,besidewhichisasmallcottage.二、环境的直接描写景/物描写对景、物等的描写通常会直接使用物作主语，或者用拟人化的修辞手法。（2023年浙江卷1月）Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那明亮的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。（2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题）Afewhoursintothetrek,hesaweyesinthedistance,sohegrabbedhisbatbeforerealizingitwasjustastraydog.长途跋涉几个小时后，他看到了远处的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意识到那只是一只流浪狗。Themoonwashedthewoodsinagentlelight.Thestarstwinkledlikeachild’scuriouseyesblinkingwithanticipation.月亮用柔和的光洗刷着树林星星闪烁着，像孩子好奇的眼睛闪烁着期待。Thesoundcameswiftlynearer,andbecameawildroar,fillingthewholevalley.这声音很快就走近了，变成了狂吼，响彻整个山谷。5.Duringautumn,thesesamemountainsaregold,andinwintertheyarecoveredinsheetsofwhitefrost.在秋天，这些山是金色的，而在冬天，它们身披白露。6.Theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirdsmakeupthemusicofthecoast.海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫组成了海岸的音乐。7.Theleaveshadalmostallfallenoff,creatingaseaoffierycolorsthatcrunchedbeneathourfeet.几乎所有的叶子都掉下来了，在我们的脚下形成一片火红色的海洋。我们踩上去发出嘎吱嘎吱的声响。8.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.漫步街头，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉落，在微风中轻轻摇摆，飘然落地。9.Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thesearippledandsparkledcharmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下,荡漾着迷人的波光。10.Inaninstant,everythinghadsuddenlygonequiet.Birdsdidn'tchirp,leavesdidn'trustleandinsectsdidn'tsing.Afeelingofstillnesscreptuponme刹那间,万物突然安静。鸟儿不再鸣叫,树叶不再沙沙作响,昆虫停止歌唱。一种寂静的感觉悄然向我袭来。11.Birdswerechattering/twitteringsomewhere.鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。12.Onaquitemorninginthemountains,feelthesunonyourskinandbreatheinthesweetscentoffreshflowerswhilebirdsgreetthenewdaywiththeirmorningsong.山中宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在你的身上，呼吸鲜花的芳香，聆听鸟儿们用它们的歌声迎接新的一天。天气描写天气的描写属于情节的一部分，但不建议大篇幅进行描写。为了渲染气氛，烘托情节，可以细化到风、雪、雨、雷、阴、晴等。Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。ThewindwassobonechillingthatIcouldn'tstopshiveringfromthecod.寒风刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。Outside,thewindsblewthetreesandbeatagainstthehouse,whichmadepeopleunabletoonetheireyes.外面，风吹着树，拍打着房子，使人们无法睁开眼睛。Asthewindblows,wecanheartheleavesrustlinginthetrees.随着风的吹拂,我们可以听到树沙沙作响。Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。Thebreezegentlykissedhischecks.微风轻柔地亲吻着他的脸庞。No.2.雨Iwasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。Immediately,sheetsofbitterlycoldrainfilledtheair.顷刻间，空中下起了阵阵刺骨的冷雨。Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆，溪水上涨，狂风咆哮这撞击房屋。Thoughtherainstopped,thewindrushedbyandwhistledandmadestrangesounds.雨虽停了，风却呼啸而过，发出奇怪的声音。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨滴敲打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。6.Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterschool,andIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放学的时候下着倾盆大雨，我到家时全身都湿了。7.Therewasaheavydownpour.Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain.下了一场大暴雨。不幸的是，Tom在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。No.3.雪1.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。2.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。3.Thecountrysidewastransformedintoahugewhiteplainbythesnow.It'sdarknowandthesnowisfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingdown.乡村被雪变成了一片巨大的白色平原。现在天黑了，雪还在下，一片片湿漉漉的雪花飘落下来。4.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的画。No.4.雾Theviewwasobscuredbyfog.雾中景色朦胧。2.Thehillswereenvelopedindensefog.群山被浓雾笼罩着。3.Themorningfogblockedourview.清晨的雾挡住了我们的视线。4.Thefogsoonenpassedthewholevalley.雾很快笼罩了整个山谷。5.Thetownwascoveredinathickblanketoffog.大雾笼罩着这个城镇。6.Theheavyfogseemedtobecastinganetoverme.浓雾似乎在我身上撒下了一张网。No.5.太阳Thisweatheristerrible.Iamsweatinglikeapig,althoughI'mnotdoinganything.天热得吓人，虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。Inthisheat,eventhetreesappeareddefeated,withleavesdroopinglifelessly.在这种炎热的天气里、连树木都显得萎靡不振,树叶都毫无生气地垂落着。Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上，我好像烤架下的培根一样。Thewaterwasdeepblueandthesunlightglitteredonitsglassclearsurface.湖水深蓝，阳光在风平浪静的湖面上熠熠生辉。No.6.雾Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云层散开，几乎遮住了整个天空。Theskywasfullofdarkmassesofclouds.天空中乌云密布。Byafternoon,thecloudshaveclearedaway.到了下午，云已经散去。4.Theskywasovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都被笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。No.7.雷电1.Anashoflightningflashedacrossthesky.一道闪电划过天空。2.Outside,thunderboomedandcrashed.外面雷声隆降，发出巨响。3.Thunderboomedintheskyoverhead,雷声在头顶上的天空中隆隆作响。4.Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnowitwassunny.Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是晴空万里，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，开始了狂风暴雨。5.Thethunderwasrumblinginthedistance.远处雷声隆降。6.Thunderrumbledinthemountainsallaroundandrainbegantofallinheavydrops.山里雷声隆隆雨点开始大颗大颗地往下落。IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelightsflickeredonceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds,castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.我正在研究一个芭比娃娃，在脑子里做一些简单的计算，，突然一阵惊天动地的雷声从外面的暴风雨中呼啸而出。我听到噪音吓了一跳，把娃娃扔在地上。灯光闪烁了一次，然后熄灭了，一片漆黑地笼罩了一切。雷声继续震动着天空，闪电照亮了商店好几秒钟，在我的脑海中投下了可怕的阴影。No.8.星空Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars.天上繁星点点。Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar.蓝蓝的天空高高耸立。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.深蓝色的夜空给这一场景增添了童话般的色彩。5.Atmidnight,thestormquieted,thecloudspartedandthestarsshonethroughthedarksky.午夜时分,暴风雨停了，乌云散开,星星在黑暗的天空中闪罐。6.hestarsshinelikediamonds.星星如钻石般闪耀。气氛描写（2023年浙江卷1月）Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.看到这个健康的和感激的生物，我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏，我知道，当我爬上我的车，开车离开时，我会永远珍惜我们分享的回忆。（2023年浙江卷1月）Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.一阵短暂的动作引起了我的注意。我转过身，看到那只蜂鸟在空中盘旋。(2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题)Withthesunpeekingoverthehorizon,John’sfaceglowedwithgratitude.Feelingenergetic,hecouldn’twaittogetstarted.太阳在地平线上掠过，约翰的脸上洋溢着感激之光。他感到精力充沛，就迫不及待地想开始工作。Anairofsadnesssettledoverthegroup.人群中笼罩着一种悲伤的气氛.5.Itwasawfullyquietexceptforourfootstepshittingtheroad,andmyheavybreathing.除了我们走在路上的脚步声和我沉重的呼吸声外，这里非常安静。6.Itsuddenlyseemedfrighteninglyquiet.Theairwaschargedwithtension.突然安静得可怕,空气中弥漫着紧张的气氛。环境比喻Afilled/litupB,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoC.A充斥/点亮B，好似魔法般，B变成了C例1：夕阳照亮了这条河，这条河仿佛变魔术似的，变成了一条金色的丝带。Thesettingsunlituptheriver,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoagoldenribbon.例2：犬吠声响彻了整个房子，仿佛被施了魔法似的，房子变成了一个游乐场。Thebarksfilledwiththehouse,which,asifbymagic,hadtuurnedintoaplayground.例3：爆米花的香味弥漫了整个房子，仿佛变魔术似的，房子变成了一个游乐场。Thesmellofthepopcornfilledwiththehouse,which,asbymagic,hadturnedintoaplayground.环境幕布Bdoing/done,sb....环境....，人物.....例1：明月高悬天际，人们把酒言欢。Thebrightmoonhanginginthesky,peoplefeastedongrandmeals,talkinginhighspirits.例2：爆竹声充斥大街小巷，人们看着春晚，分享着趣闻。Thestreetsfilledwiththesoundoffirecrackers,peoplewatchedtheSpringFestivalGala,exchanginganecdotes.例3：医生巨响打破了寂静，它升到空中，消失在夜色中。Aroarbreakingthesilence,itroseintotheairandoffintothenight.用环境衬托人物环境反衬句式1Though+环境描写，itseemed+adj./nountosb.虽然环境...，但是在某人看来...例1：虽然这是一个寒冷的夜晚，但是在Robin看来，却好似春日。Thoughthenightwasfreezingcold,itseemedlikespringtoRobin.Freezeingcoldas/thoughthenightwas,itseemedlikespringtoRobin.例2：虽然教室里坐着的都是白发老人，但是在我眼里他们大声朗读的样子非常年轻。Thoughthepeoplesittingintheclassroomwereallwhitehaired,theyseemedsoyoungtomewhentheywerereadingloudly.Allwhitehairedthoughthepeoplesittingintheclassroomwere,theyseemedsoyoungtomewhentheywerereadingloudly.环境反衬句式2AgainstA,B...在A的对比下（在...中），B显得...例1：在商场的嘈杂声中，她嘴里说出这些温柔的话语，在我听来却格外清晰。Againstthenoiseintheshoppingmall,thesesofewordsutteredfromhermouthsoundedsocleartome.例2：在桌上铺着的这些亮闪闪的礼物中，这块毯子显得格外丑陋，这让Lucy尴尬地脸红了。Againstalltheshinypresentsspreadonthetable,thecarpetseemedextremelyugly,whichmadeLucyblushwithembarrassment.环境反衬句