浙江省Z20名校联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期第二次联考英语试题作文讲义

假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的市科技馆研学活动。请你在校英文论坛发表一篇帖子，分享此次经历，内容包括：1.活动过程；2.个人感悟；3.期待评论本题渗透的话题是“科技”,对应教材主题语境为“科技发展与信息技术创新，科学精神单元对应为:人教版:必修二U3:TheInternet选择性必修一U2:Lookingintothefuture外研版:必修=U3:TheworldofScience选择性必修三U4:Aglimpseofthefuture[语料利用]AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTour审题:1.文体：网络发帖（正式或非正式均可）2.话题：科技馆研学活动3.对象：全校师生4.人称：第一、二人称5.时态：一般过去时为主本篇试题重难点分析：这篇题目的话题是大家熟悉的，要点也是大家比较熟悉的模式，但是要写得「具体深入」还是需要些思考和功夫的。框架搭建：首段，背景介绍：上周末我参加了学校组织的市科技馆研学活动，给我留下了深刻的印象。1.

首段注意要把题干里交代的细节全部踩到，重点有【上周末】你参加了【学校组织的】【市科技馆】【研学活动】。Lastweek,IhadtheincredibleopportunitytoparticipateinaschoolorganizedexplorationtourtotheCityScienceandTechnologyMuseum.Itwasacaptivatingjourneyintotherealmofinnovationanddiscovery.一段进入创新和发现领域的迷人旅程。LastweekIparticipatedinafabuloustechexplorationtourinthecitysciencemuseumwhichwasimpeccably无可挑剔organizedbyourschool.正文，活动过程+个人感悟：1.活动过程(23个环节即可)：以下环节可供参考展览参观环节；现场提问和分享环节；现场感受体验环节（workshop）；科技讲座环节…;科技馆可参考的主题有「AI机器人」「航空航天」「生物奥秘」等要点1活动过程一定要写得有先后顺序，参观展览：Itbeganwithaninsightfulguidedtourthroughthemuseum'sinteractiveexhibits.showcasingcuttingedgetechnologiesandscientificbreakthroughs.Fromvirtualrealitytohandsonexperiments,everymomentfeltlikeafascinatingexplorationofthewondersofscience.首先，在导游的带领下参观了博物馆的互动式展品。展示前沿科技和科学突破。从虚拟现实到动手实验，每一刻都像是对科学奇迹的迷人探索。动手实验:Onehighlightofthetripwasthehandsonexperimentsthatallowedustoexperiencescience(firsthand.Wehadtheopportunitytobuildsimplecircuits,conductchemicalreactions,andevencontrolrobotsusingcoding.Itwastrulyexhilaratingtoseetheoreticalconceptsetoliferightbeforeoureyes.这次旅行的一个亮点是动手实验，让我们亲身体验科学。我们有机会构建简单的电路，进行化学反应，甚至用编码控制机器人。看到理论概念在我们眼前变得栩栩如生，真是令人振奋。虚拟现实:Additionally,themuseumofferedvirtualrealitysimulationsthattransportedustodifferentenvironmentsanderas.Fromexploringthedepthsoftheoceantowalkingonthemoon,thesesimulationsallowedustoexperiencethewondersofscienceinawhollynewway.此外，博物馆还提供虚拟现实模拟，将我们带到不同的环境和时代。从探索海洋深处到在月球上行走，这些模拟让我们以一种全新的方式体验科学的奇迹。活动过程和个人感悟既可以抓住研学活动中一个具体的活动来展开，比如原创范文一里面我抓的是「中国载人航天」这个角度；也可以是铺开来介绍科技馆的很多内容，比如原创范文二里写的多种主题。但要注意，个人感悟一定要和活动过程的内容有呼应和连接，不能各说各的。要点2个人感悟最好有两个层次。个人感悟：科技类活动常见个人感悟角度可供参考：科学家的精神带来的激励、身临其境感受科技的奇妙、对个人行为和志向的影响、对国家发展进步的自豪感Personally,thisexperienceleftmeaweinspiredandignitedanewfoundcuriosityfortheendlesspossibilitiesthattechnologyholds.Witnessingtheimpactofscientificadvancementsonourdailyliveswasbothenlighteningandmotivating.Itreinforcedmybeliefinstayingcuriousandembracingtheeverevolvingworldoftechnology就我个人而言，这次经历让我感到敬畏，并点燃了我对技术所拥有的无限可能性的新好奇心。目睹科学进步对我们日常生活的影响既具有启发性又鼓舞人心。它加强了我对保持好奇心和拥抱不断发展的技术世界的信念@自豪与信念扎根Appealingandilluminating,thetournotonlyinstilledmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvancesbutalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.这次旅行既吸引人又有启发性，不仅让我对我们的科学进步感到自豪，而且在我心中种下了科学探索的种子。@丰富体验与思考:Throughoutthetour,knowledgeableguidesprovidedexplanationsandansweredourquestions,makingtheexperienceevenmoreenriching.Theyencouragedustothinkcriticallyandtoconsiderthepotentialapplicationsofthetechnologiesweencountered.在整个游览过程中，知识渊博的导游为我们讲解并回答我们问题，使体验更加丰富。他们鼓励我们批判性地思考，并考虑我们所遇到的技术的潜在应用。Overalltheactivitywasaremarkableblend（bination)ofeducationandentertainment.Itnotonlyexpandedourknowledgeofscienceandtechnology,butalsofosteredasenseofwonderandcuriositywithinus.总的来说，这次活动是教育和娱乐的完美结合。它不仅扩展了我们的科学技术知识，而且培养了我们内心的惊奇和好奇心。尾段：期待评论Anybodywhosharesthesamefeelingwithme?Eagerlyanticipatingyourments!2Pleasefeelfreetoshareyourthoughtsandexperiencesfromthetrip.Let'scontinuethisconversationandinspireeachotherwiththelimitlesspotentialofscienceandtechnology!Doesanyoneresonatewithme?Eagerlyanticipateyourlikemindedments!有人和我有同样的感觉吗?热切期待您的评论!请随时分享你的想法和旅行经历。让我们继续这场对话，用科学技术的无限潜力相互激励!有人和我有共鸣吗?热切期待您志同道合的评论!范文一：AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourIwasfilledwithimmenseexcitementtoparticipateinthetechexplorationtourorganizedbyourschoolattheCityScienceandTechnologyMuseum.参加学校在市科技馆组织的科技探索之旅，我充满了无比的兴奋。Itmenced/startedwithacaptivatingguidedtourthroughtheChinaMannedSpaceExhibition,duringwhichItookacloselookattheextraordinarythirtyyearhistoryandremarkableengineeringachievements.AfterthatcameavividintroductiontotheShenzhouspacecraft,themodelofthespacestationandvariouscarrierrocketmodels.Bathedintheenchantment/charm/magicofscienceandtechnology,Iwasdeeplyinspiredbyscientists’talentsanddiligenceanddeterminedtodevotemyselftoascientificcareer.Whataboutyourfeelings?Leaveyourmentsbelowforsharing!（110words）在导游的带领下，我参观了中国载人航天展，近距离了解了中国载人航天展30年的非凡历史和卓越的工程成就。接着，他生动地介绍了神舟飞船、空间站模型和各种运载火箭模型。沐浴在科技的魅力中，我被科学家的才华和勤奋深深打动，决心投身于科学事业。你的感受呢?在下面留下你的评论分享吧!范文二：AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourIwasextremelyimpressedbyourschoolorganizedtechexplorationtourattheCityScienceandTechnologyMuseumlastweekend.上周末我校组织的市科技馆科技探索之旅给我留下了深刻印象。Itstartedwithavisittodiversedisplays,includingtheBiodiversityGallery,EarthScienceGalleryandChina'sMannedSpaceExhibition,offeringavisualfeastoficonicexhibits.Followingthevisit,weengagedinvariousinteractiveactivitiesandworkshops,andI,ascifienthusiastactivelyparticipatedinthesciencefictionthemedparttouncoverfascinatingconnectionsbetweensignificantscientificinnovations.Notonlydiditimmersemeinthemagicworldofsciencebutalsosparkedadesiretocreatesciencefictionworksinthefuture.ShareyourthoughtsbelowI'meagertohearyourfeeling参观了生物多样性展览馆、地球科学展览馆和中国载人航天展览馆等不同的展览馆，提供了一场标志性展品的视觉盛宴。参观结束后，我们进行了各种互动活动和工作坊，我是一个科幻爱好者。积极参与科幻主题部分，发现重大科学创新之间的迷人联系。它不仅让我沉浸在神奇的科学世界中，而且激发了我未来创作科幻作品的愿望。在下面分享你的想法吧——我渴望听到你的感受AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourTouche渡学英语LastweekendsawstudentsembarkingonacaptivatingjourneyattheCityScienceCenter.There,withlivesciencedemonstrationsandinteractivegamingexperiences,studentsgottointeractwiththeuptodatetechnology,andgrasphowadvancesintechnologyshapeeveryone'sdaytodaylife.ThehighlightoftheeventhasgottobetheAlpoweredexperiencethatallowedstudentstohaveindepthconversationswithsomegreatscientists,includingAlbertEinstein,StephenHawkingandsoon.Forme,itwasadayforadventureanddiscovery,exploringtheintersectionofscience，engineeringandimagination.Icouldn'thelpnoticingnotasinglestudentreachedforsmartphoneduringtheprocess.That'ssomethingforusdigitalnatives,isn'tit?Leaveyourmentsbelowsothatwecanexchangethoughtsonthisevent.(127w)上周末，学生们在城市科学中心开始了一段迷人的旅程。在那里，通过现场科学演示和互动游戏体验，学生们可以与最新的科技互动，并掌握科技的进步如何影响每个人的日常生活。这次活动的亮点一定是人工智能的体验，它让学生们能够与一些伟大的科学家进行深入的对话，包括阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦、斯蒂芬·霍金等。对我来说，这是一个冒险和发现的日子，探索科学、工程和想象力的交集。我不禁注意到，在这个过程中，没有一个学生拿起智能。这是我们数字原住民的事，不是吗?在下面留下你的评论，这样我们就可以交换意见了AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourLastweekendIparticipatedinafabuloustechexplorationtourinthecitysciencemuseumorganizedbyourschool.ItkickedoffwithanexhibitionofthehistoryofChinesescience,unfoldingtheawestrikingwisdombehind.Whatfollowedwasahandsonexperience.whichuncoveredthesecretsofscience.Withalectureontheprospectofscience,thetourwasbroughttoanend.Notonlydidthetourinstillmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.（thetourwasprospectofscience,）Anybodywhosharesthesamefeeling?Anticipatingyourments!上周末，我参加了学校组织的城市科技馆精彩的科技探索之旅。它以中国科学史展览拉开序幕，展现了背后令人敬畏的智慧。接下来是亲身体验。揭开了科学的秘密。随着一场关于科学前景的演讲，这次旅行结束了。这次旅行不仅让我对我们的科学进步感到自豪，而且还在我心中种下了科学探索的种子。(这次旅行是对科学的展望，)有人有同样的感觉吗?期待您的评论!你觉得本文的得分是理由与可取之处:AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourInthecitymuseum,lastweekendsawatechexplorationtourimpeccablyorganizedbyourschool,fromwhichIgraspedamoreprofoundinsightintothescientificfield.Thetourmencedwithanextraordinaryexhibition,whichacquaintedparticipantswiththeremarkableachievementsthroughoutthehistoryofChinesescience.Whatfollowednextwasapracticalhandsonsession.Undertheinformativeguidanceofprofessors,Iunveiledthemysteryofsciencebyconductingintriguingexperiments.Ultimately,thehighlightwasdefinitelytheinteractivetechnologies,rangingfromvirtualrealityto3Ddisplays,whichshowcasedthecuttingedgescientificoutesofChina.Jubilantly,Iwasblessedwiththischancetoimmersemyselfinshiftingamongmultifariousscenesofverisimilitude.Thisrefreshingexperiencewassofruitfulandmemorable!Doesanyoneresonatewithme?Eagerlyanticipateyourlikemindedments!上周末在市博物馆，我们学校组织了一次完美的科技探索之旅，让我对科学领域有了更深刻的了解。参观以一个特别的展览开始，让参加者了解中国科学史上的卓越成就。接下来是实际操作环节。在教授们翔实的指导下，我通过有趣的实验揭开了科学的奥秘。最终，亮点绝对是互动技术，从虚拟现实到3D显示，展示了中国的前沿科学成果。高兴地，我有幸有机会沉浸在各种逼真的场景中。这令人耳目一新的经历是如此的富有成效和难忘!有人和我有共鸣吗?热切期待您志同道合的评论!你觉得本文的得分是理由与可取之处:AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourLastweekend,ItookalonganticipatedtechexplorationtourintheCityScitechMuseum，whichwaseyeopeninganduplifting.Ourfirststopwasatthe“AdmirableAchievements”section,whereIwasspellboundbyhowthescientistsinourcity,againstallodds,madestunningacplishmentswithinashortperiodoftime.Especiallyamazingweretheinteractiveexhibitsandhandsonactivities,offeringmeadeeperinsightintohowmoderntechnologyinfluencesandshapesourlife.Asthelastlegofthetour,Iattendedaninformativelectureonthepromisingprospectsoftechnologyexploration/innovationsgreatlymotivated.Thetourwastrulyalearningexperience,inspiringmetostrivetomakeourcountryatechnologypower.Areyoualsomotivated?Lookingforwardtohearingyourvoices/Pleasepostyourmentsbelow!我们的第一站是“令人钦佩的成就”部分，在那里，我被我们城市的科学家们如何克服重重困难，在短时间内取得了惊人的成就所吸引。特别令人惊叹的是互动展览和实践活动，让我更深入地了解现代科技如何影响和塑造我们的生活。作为参观的最后一站，我参加了一场关于技术探索/创新前景的讲座，内容丰富，深受鼓舞。这次旅行是一次真正的学习经历，激励我努力使我们的国家成为一个科技强国。你也有动力吗?期待听到你的声音/请在下面留言!你觉得本文的得分是理由与可取之处:完整(pleteness)清楚(Ciarity)简要(Conciseness)礼貌(Courtesy)连贯(Coherence)[相似背最链接(议论性质)]:你刚在某英文科技论坛中加入一个讨论组，讨论内容是“ShouldwefightagainstChatGPT?”，网友们意见不同。请你就该问题在讨论组中发帖，表达自己的看法，内容包括:1.ChatGPT的优势:2.ChatGPT的劣势:3.你的看法。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ShouldwefightagainstChatGPT?ChatGPT4hasgainedpopularityasachatbotcapableofgeneratinghumanlikeresponsesinnaturallanguageconversations.Whileitoffersseveralbenefits,therearealsodrawbacksthatneedtobeconsidered.Itsmultipleadvantagescontributetoitswidespreaduse.Firstly,itsavesusers’timebyprovidingquickandaccessibleinformation.Secondly,itoffersassistanceinlearningandproblemsolving,whichisparticularlyvaluableforstudentsseekingimmediateguidance.Despiteitsbenefits,ChatGPThascertainlimitationslikethepotentialformisinformationorbiasedresponses.Anotherissueisthelackofempathy,soitsometimesprovidesinsensitiveorinadequateanswers,diminishingthequalityoftheconversation.Inconclusion,ChatGPT4isapowerfulnewAItechnologythathasthepotentialtorevolutionizethefuture.Simultaneously,givenitsdisadvantages,itiscrucialtoaddressthesechallengescriticallyandcultivateresponsible.safe,andbeneficialuseofChatGPT.[话题热点语料:AI科技拓展]The(融合)ofartificialintelligence(Al)ineducationaltechnology(EdTech)(效率)tohasbrought(pare)convenienceandclassroomsworldwide.However,despitetheseadvancements.itiscrucial(recognize)thechallengestheseAldriventoolsposetotheautonomyandprofessionaljudge)ofinstructors.However.Aldriventoolsrestricttheirabilitytodosoeffectively,(result)inaonesizefitsallapproachthatfailstoinspirestudentstoreachtheirmaximum(潜力).Bydecreasingtheroleofinstructorsas(facilitate)ofmeaningfuleducationalinteractions,wetheriskofpreventingthegrowthofrun(批判性思维与解决问题的能力)amongstudents.202312Z20犟驴父子世纪大和解主题：亲情本篇命题让大家写感人一幕，同时融合上毕业典礼的场景，情节主线较为清晰，更多的需要注意从“我”的视角出发，富有镜头感地描写。AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDrHolstrom.”Wait!tooimmediatelucaughtontowhat'sgoingonherethecarefullyarrangedsurprisewasmeanttobridgethehugeandundesiredgapbetweenfatherandson.Insteadofwalkingaway,IgrabbedaseatnearDr.Holstromtokeephimpanyandtowitnessthisremarkablemomentunfold.Afewminuteslater,Jeff‘ssisterturnedupwithouttheexpectedcapandgown.Ahintofuneasinessinvoice,shebrokethethrillingnewstoherfathermeanwhileobservinghisreaction.Forabriefmoment,therewasadeadsilence.Onlytheslightlytremblinghandsbetrayedthefather'sexcitementandmixedemotions.Together,wesatamongmanyotherproudonlookersasonenamewasreadoutafteranother.Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Havingtakenoverhiscertificateandshakenhandswiththeprincipal,heturnedtoscanthecrowdforus.Whenthetwolockedeyessettledintheirgaze,theoncesternandunyieldingfather,whomJeffhadoncedefied,wasnowclappingandcheeringforhisson'sachievement,anachievementacplishedwithinvolvement.Theceremonyover,Jeffcamerunningtous.Dr.Holstromapproachedhissonandembracedhim.Thewallstandingbetweenthetwoforyearswasfinallytorndown.IcapturedapictureofJefftossinghishatintheairnexttohisfatherandsister,thegleamofhappinesssparklingintheeyesoftheapprovedson.(115w)本文写作时，因是第一人称视角，应防止出现从“我”的视角看不出的东西——比如其他人内心深处的心理活动等。这篇文章挑战同学们必须将情绪外显，类似这样的第一人称视角的题目都是如此。AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”

Thenameringinginmymind,Ifrozeonthespot.JeffHolstrom!Couldthisbethecold,sternfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhishomeagain?Curiosityanddoubtbubblingup,IturnedaroundtogetaglimpseofDr.Holstrom,attemptingtofindsomefacialresemblances.Beamingandscanning,Dr.Holstromseemedtobelookingforhisdaughter.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,invitingthemontothestageonebyonetoreceivetheirdiplomas.(89w)Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.

Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy.Suddenly,alonefigurepoppedintohiseyes

–Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeffspottedhiminthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.Dr.Holstrom,gazingatJeffthoughtfullyforafewseconds,openedhisarmsasiftoembracetheairaroundhim.Foramomenttimeseemedtostandstill.Jeffcamedown,smilingwithtearsineyes.“Myfatherishere,”hewhisperedtome,“IthinkI’mgoinghome.”(90w)Z20

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终于给我们带来了一篇本月浙江联考中有水准的续写题。续写点丰富，续写段设计发挥空间大，具有开放性，并不是那种所有同学一看就能想到一块儿的情节，

有多种设计方式。于是

挑战就出现了，到底采用哪种设计能让整体情节更精彩

能最好地服务于矛盾的解决

情感的转变等等。此外，还是要强调

多观察利用原文重点词句，让它们在续写段中在恰当的位置自然再现，多呼应，提高与原文的契合度。Paragraph1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr.Holstrom.Stillsmiling,Ireplied,“Wishyouanimpressivesurprise,Dr.Holstrom”andthenleftforJeff.Isharedwithhimwhatencounteredandmentionedtheman'sname.ThemomentJeffheardthe“Holstrom”,someglintflashedthroughhiseyes,whichsoonwasextinguishedbyadeepsighandwasreplacedby/gavewaytoawaveofpain.Whatfollowedthisplexfacialexpressionwassomeevenmorestrangewords,“Neverwoulditbepossible.”Beforeanywordsofinquiryslippedoutofmymouth,theceremonywasdeclaredtostart,witnessingnumerousdistinguishedgraduatessteppingontothestageforashortspeech.当我离开他时，他说:“谢谢你。顺便说一下，我是霍尔姆斯特伦医生。我依然微笑着回答说:“希望你能给我一个惊喜。然后去找杰夫了。我告诉他所遇到的情况，并提到了那个人的名字。杰夫听到“霍尔斯特罗姆”的那一刻，眼睛里闪过一丝光芒，但很快就被一声深深的叹息所熄灭，取而代之的是一阵疼痛。在这个复杂的面部表情之后，是一些更奇怪的话:“这是不可能的。”我还没来得及问话，毕业典礼就宣布开始了，许多杰出的毕业生走上舞台，发表了简短的演讲。Paragraph2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Smilewasshiningonhisface,underwhichtherestillseemedtohidesomeindescribablepain.Butanyway,hemanagedtotakeoverthedegreecertificateandstarthismomentousgraduationspeech.”Delayedasthedegreeis,duetomypursuanceofmypersonalpassion,Ifinallyachievedit,notforanyoneelse,butformyself.Nevergiveupyourpassion,butalsoremembertoacplishpersonalimprovement,suchasattendingacollegeandgainingadegree.”AsJeffsteppedbacktohisseat,hegotfrozen.ItwasDr.Holstrom,standinginhisway,withboththumbsupandsmileofreliefblossomingonhisface.“Thishasbeenthemostimpressivesurprisetomesinceyouleft.I'msorryforwhatIdidbeforeandproudofwhatyouaredoingnow.ItwasrightatthismomentthatthehiddenpaininJeff’seyesfinallywascured.Itwasalsosincethatmomentthattheconversationbetweenasuccessfulphysicianandasuccessfulbusinessplannerwithadegreehasresumed.第二段:杰夫是最后一个穿过舞台的人。他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容，但笑容下似乎还隐藏着一种说不出的痛苦。但无论如何，他设法接过了学位证书，开始了他那意义重大的毕业演讲。”学位虽然姗姗来迟，但由于我对个人激情的追求，我最终完成了学位，不是为了别人，而是为了自己。永远不要放弃你的激情，但也要记住实现个人进步，比如上大学并获得学位。”当杰夫回到座位上时，他僵住了。原来是霍尔斯特罗姆医生，站在他面前，竖起大拇指，脸上露出如释重负的微笑。“这是你离开后给我印象最深刻的惊喜。我为之前的所作所为感到抱歉，为你现在所做的感到骄傲。”就在这一刻，杰夫眼中隐藏的痛苦终于被治愈了。也是从那一刻起，一个成功的医生和一个有学位的成功的商业规划师之间的对话又重新开始了问鼎：动作描写+情绪描写难以置信/吃惊Para.1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,cThankyou.Bytheway,mynameDr.Holstrom.”衔接句HowdidIfeelabouthiswords?复现人物及动作+引发的反应1.听到他的话，我惊掉下巴，震惊得瞪大眼睛。(非谓语+独立主格Hearinghiswords,myjawdroppedindisbelief,myeyeswideninginshock.2.眨眼之间，Inablink,3.我的头脑一片空白，一阵震惊席卷全身(独立主格)Mymindwentblankforamoment,awaveofshockwashingoverhim4.当他。。。心理描写1Para.1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,mynameDr.Holstrom.过渡句Dr.Holstrom··这个名字听起来很熟悉。杰夫曾经提到他父亲是位成功的医生。突然，豁然开朗。DrHolstrom是杰夫的父亲Dr.Holstrom...thenamesoundedfamiliar.AndJeffoncementionedhisfather.心理描写2Para.1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,mynameDr.Holstrom.过渡句.Dr.Holstrom?有可能吗?我忍不住把他的外表和杰夫的比较起来。他们有相似的特征一同样明显的下巴轮廓和坚定的眼睛。我突然意识到Dr.Holstrom是杰夫的父亲。微场景上台领取毕业证11.毕业典礼上的音乐把我带回现实。很快学生们就会被召集到舞台上领取毕业证书。每个学生都带着骄傲和兴奋走过舞台。Themusicatthegraduationceremonybroughtmebacktoreality.微场景上台领取毕业证2毕业典礼开始，毕业生的名字将逐一宣布。伴随着观众的掌声和欢呼，每个学生都带着期待和骄傲走上舞台。Asthegraduationceremonymences,onebyone,thenamesofthegraduatingstudentsareannounced.Withanticipationandpride,eachstudent动作描写+情绪描写领奖1在观众的掌声和欢呼声中，他伸出双手从院长那里领取毕业证书满怀感激和自豪，他们紧紧地握着证书。Withasmileonhisface,heextendedhishandstoreceivethegraduationcertificatefromthedeanamidstapplauseandcheersfromtheaudience.Gratefulandproud,theyheldthecertificatetightly.2.2.拿到毕业证书后，他转向观众，高兴得容光焕发。Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy.微场景描写父子重归于好1Para.2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.HowdidJeffrestoregoodrelationswithhisfather?1他的眼睛仔细打量着人群。在茫茫人海中，他看到了他一一他的父亲。他们四目相对，在那一刻，所有的痛苦和怨恨似乎都消失了。他们的目光承载着一种语言永远无法表达的深情。杰夫可以看到他父亲眼里的骄傲，一丝对过去那些伤人的话的遗憾。杰夫毫不犹豫地向他的父亲走去，在人群中穿梭，直到他们面对面当他们拥抱时，双眼都涌上了泪水，他们之间有一种沉默的理解。就在那一瞬间分隔他们长久以来的墙在父亲的爱和儿子的宽恕的力量下倒塌了。Hiseyesscannedthecrowd.Inthatseaoffaces,hecaughtsightofhimhisfather!微场景描写父子重归于好2脸上流着眼泪，杰夫从舞台上走下来，向他的父亲走去。当他靠近他的父亲时，他们的目光相遇了。在那一刻，他们的脸上闪烁着一种复杂的情绪。Dr.Holstrom严厉的表情缓和了露出了一丝骄傲。杰夫也再也无法掩饰自己的情绪了。在共同的注视中，他们之间徘徊了多年的怨恨和失望似乎已经消失了。当杰夫手拿毕业证书，他知道他不仅实现了自己的梦想而且他也让他的父亲感到骄傲。他们之间的爱，深埋了这么久，终于回到了。微场景描写父子消除隔阂3当他站在站台上时，他的眼睛打量着观众，寻找着熟悉的面孔。突然，他与父亲四目相对，父亲现在难以置信地站在那里。他们互相凝视着，眼睛里充满了未说出口的话语，时间似乎静止了。杰夫的心里充满了喜悦和紧张。慢慢地，他父亲的脸上露出了笑容，眼睛里涌起了泪水。这是一个纯粹联系的时刻，分开他们这么久的屏障都失了，取而代之的是深深的理解和爱。Ashestoodontheplatform,hiseyesscannedtheaudience,searchingforthefamiliar...202312强基（城市游+苦命人笑对生活）DearDaniel,Ihopeyou'rehavingawonderfultimetouringourcity.YoutoldmeearlierthatyouarefreethisSunday,somaybewecandoacitywalktoexploresomelesserknownsitesandexperiencetheauthenticlifestylehere.Hereismyplan,We'llmeetat9:00am,attheoldpagodanearmyschooltoadmirethebeautifularchitectureandsoakinitsculturalgrandeur.Then,wecanheadtotheruinsofthecitywallbuiltaround2,000yearsago,andfeelfirsthandtheweightofhistory.Ournextstopwillbeanordinarybridgedecoratedwithdelicatelycarvedstonelions,whosedistinctfacialfeaturesandvividexpressionswillblowyouaway!Afterthat,wecanhitthesnackstreettosamplesomestreetfoodandbrowsetheuniquehandicrafts,someofwhichcanmakeperfectsouvenirs!Thiscitywalkwillmakeyourtriptrulyplete.IreallywanttospendthisSundaywithyouanddiscoverthesehiddengemstogether.So,areyouin?Sincerely,LiHua我希望你在我们的城市玩得愉快。你之前告诉我这周日你有空，所以也许我们可以去城里走走，探索一些不太知名的景点，体验一下这里真正的生活方式。这是我的计划，我们上午9点在学校附近的老宝塔见面，欣赏美丽的建筑，沉浸在它的宏伟文化中。然后，我们可以前往大约2000年前建造的城墙遗址，亲身感受历史的重量。我们的下一站是一座普通的桥，桥上雕刻着精美的石狮子，它们鲜明的五官和生动的表情会让你大吃一惊!之后，我们可以去小吃街品尝一些街头小吃，浏览独特的手工艺品，其中一些可以成为完美的纪念品!这段城市漫步将使你的旅行真正完整。我真的很想和你一起度过这个星期天，一起发现这些隐藏的宝藏。那么，你加入吗?参考范文一DearDaniel,Delightedtoknowthatyou’retravelinginmycity,Ican’twaittoinviteyouhaveacitywalkwithmehere.OurjourneywillstartatShangxiajiuStreet,atypicalregionwithtraditionalCantonesearchitecturewhereyoucanfindsometimeweatheredsnackbarshiddenamongalleys.Thenwe’llwalkalongthePearlRiver,feastingoureyesonvariousscenesandhelpingourselvestoallkindsofdelicacies.Finally,thehighlightistheCantonTower,amodernlandmarkaswellasthecenterofofGuangzhou,surroundedbybustlingmercialshops.Thewholejourneywilltakeusabouthalfaday,butyou’llhaveaclosercontactwithandhaveadeeperinsightintothiscity.I’mconvincedthatyou’llhavegreatfuninthiscitywalk.Letmeknowifyou’reinterested.参考范文二，DearDaniel,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwellandenjoyingyourtimeinourcity.Iheardaboutyourvisitandthoughtitwouldbefantasticifwecouldspendsometimetogetherexploringthelocalsights.HowaboutjoiningmeforaCityWalkthisweekend?WecankickoffouradventureattheiconicCityParkaround10:00AM.Fromthere,we'llwanderthroughthecharmingOldTown,whereyoucanexperiencethehistoricalessenceofourcity.We'llalsoexplorethevibrantlocalmarkets,samplingsomedeliciousstreetfoodalongtheway.I'llbehappytoshareintriguingstoriesaboutthecity'spastandpresent.Ibelieveit'llbeagreatwayforyoutosoakinthecultureandbeautyofourhometown.Letmeknowifthissuitsyourplans,andwecanmakethenecessaryarrangements.Lookingforwardtoexploringthecitytogether!续写SowegottoBradyandIsaid,"Well,thisistheendofmyline."

Helookedatmewithgratitudeinhiseyesandthankedmeagainfortheride.Ashesteppedoutofthecar,I

couldn'thelpbutthinkofhisstoryandstruggleforlife.SoIadded,“Whenwestop,I'mgoingtogiveyousomemoneytoosoitwillbesomehelponyourway."Thisisadecision

hadsubconsciouslymadeinthisinstance.AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Helookedatmewithgratitudeinhiseyesandsaid,“Thankyou,butIdon'tneedyourmoney.Justyourkindnessandconversationwereenoughforme.Aswesaidourgoodbyes,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofadmirationforthisman,Despitethehardshipshehadfaced,hecarriedhimselfwithgraceandagenuineloveforothers.Hetaughtmethatsometimes,themostvaluablegiftwecangivesomeoneisourtimeandunderstanding.所以我们到了布雷迪，我说，“好吧，我到此为止了。”他带着感激的目光看着我，再次感谢我载他一程。当他从车里走出来时，我不禁想起了他的故事和为生活而奋斗的经历。于是我又说:“当我们停下来的时候，我也会给你一些钱，这样你就能在路上有所帮助了。”“这是在这种情况下下意识做出的决定。正如我提到的，我告诉他我要给他一些钱。他用感激的眼神看着我说:“谢谢你，但我不需要你的钱。对我来说，你的友好和交谈就足够了。当我们道别的时候，我不禁对这个人产生了一种钦佩之情。尽管他面临着困难，但他表现得很优雅，对别人有一种真诚的爱。他教会了我，有时候，我们能给别人的最宝贵的礼物就是我们的时间和理解。参考范文一，SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”

Helookedoutside,smiledheartilyandthankedme,“Thankyoufortakingmesofar.Haveaniceday!”Ashewasabouttoleave,Icouldn’thelpasking,“What’syournextplan?”Heturnedaroundandlookedatme,“trymylucktotakethenextlift.Hopefully,IwillsoongobacktoKansasCity.”Hiseyeswasglitteringwithsincerityandhope.Thinkingofhisunappealingappearanceandhispoorcondition,

Ithoughtthatalittlefinancialhelpmightdohimafavor.

AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.

“Thankyoubutno.Youhavehelpedmealot.Icandotherest.”hedeclinedpolitelyandsmilingly,wavingthepackofcigarettesinhishand.Hemightbeshabbyoutside,butdeepdownhewasjustandstrongwilled,which

waswhyIbrokemyrules.Whenhisfigurebecamesmallerandsmallerinthesettingsun,Ididn’tfeelsadbutonlyrespectforhim.IrememberedwhatRusselRolandhadoncesaid,“Thereisonlyoneheroismintheworld:toseetheworldasitisandtoloveit.”Iwasluckytowitnessahumblehero.参考范文二，SowegottoBrady,andIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline."

Hethankedmefortherideandexpressedhisgratitudefortheconversation.Ashesteppedoutofthecar,hehesitatedforamoment,asifdebatingwhethertosharesomethingmore.Finally,helookedmeintheeyesandsaid,“Youknow,Iappreciateyourkindness.Notmanypeoplestopforsomeonelikemethesedays.It'sbeenatoughjourney,butmeetingsomeonelikeyoumakesitabiteasier”.

WhathesaidtuggedatmyheartstringandI,admiringhiscourageandresilience,thoughtofaidinghimwithsomemoneysothathewouldlivebetter.

AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.

However,hepolitelydeclined,explainingthathewasn'tlookingforcharitybutsimplyachancetosharehisstory.Itbecameclearthatthisman,withhisweatheredappearance,possessedaremarkableresilienceandanunwaveringbeliefinthegoodnessofpeople.Intheend,Irealizedthatpickingupsuchahitchhikerwasn'tjustanimpulsivedecision;itwasanopportunitytobreakdownstereotypes,connectwithafellowhumanbeing,anddiscoverthestrengththatresideswithineventhemostunassumingsouls.Themilesbetweenusmayhavebeenshort,buttheimpactofthatchanceencounterleftalastingimpressiononbothourhearts.其他夸奖老人的句子：HeembodiedthequintessentialHemingwayhero–amanofaction,resilience,andquietfortitude,facing