征文投稿作文指导课件 高考英语一轮复习

征文投稿

征文投稿一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,以议论文和记叙文居多。具体写作结构为:1.吸引眼球开头句①ZhongNanshanisoneofthepeopleIadmiremost.Itwashewho,despitelackofequipmentandthepotentialofinfection,desperatelyrescuedthoseinfectedbutstrivingforlife.钟南山是我最敬佩的人之一。尽管缺乏设备且有被感染的可能性,但正是他拼命抢救那些被感染却仍在努力求生的人。③Atpresentourcityiscarryingoutacampaign,thecontentofwhichisthatanyonewhoisridinganelectricbikemustwearahelmet.目前我市正在开展一项活动,活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴头盔。②ToenrichourlivesanddeepenourunderstandingoftraditionalChineseculture,ourschoolheldaChinesepaintingexhibitionintheschoollibrarylastweek.为了丰富我们的生活,加深我们对于中国传统文化的理解,上周我们学校在校图书馆举办了国画展。2.亮点出彩篇中句①Moreover,asisknowntoall,settingtoomuchtimeasidejustforwatchingTVisawasteoftime.

而且,众所周知,只为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。②Tochangethehabit,Iamsupposedtoputmoreemphasisonsomethingmoremeaningfulsuchasreadingandtakingexercise,whicharenotonlybeneficialtomymentalandphysicalhealthbutalsocanhelpmegetridofmybadhabit.

为了改变这个习惯,我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的事情上,比如读书和锻炼,这些不仅有利于我的身心健康,而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。③Thepurposeofthecampaignistomitigatetheconsequenceofsuchatrafficaccidentandreducethedeathrateinanaccident.这项运动的目的是减轻这类交通事故的后果,降低事故中的死亡率。3.韵味无穷结尾句①AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeakingsothattheycandeveloptheircommunicationskills.在我看来,学生们应该多听和多说来发展他们的交流技能。②Myappealisthatallourstudentsridingelectricbikesshouldwearhelmetsforthesafetyofourselvesandotherpeople.我的呼吁是,为了自己和他人的安全,我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。

LastSaturday(及其他表示活动/事件发生的时间),ourschoolheldanactivitythemed“

⁠(活动主题)”,aimingto

⁠(活动目的).

We

⁠(活动/经历).Some

⁠(一些人的活动)whileothers

⁠(另一些人的活动).Thencamethemostexcitingmomentwhen

⁠(其他活动部分).Finally,

⁠(活动/事件结果).

Throughtheactivity/experience,Iwasaware/realizedthatnotonlydidtheactivitybroadenmyhorizons

⁠(个人感想之一),butitalsofueledmyenthusiasmfor

⁠(个人感想之二).

你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Our

Oceans,

Our

ResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.

【满分范文】Our

Oceans,

Our

ResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itaimstoraisepeople’sawarenessofprotectingoceans.Oceanplays

a

key

role

inourworld.

Not

only

does

ocean

offerussufficientfood,

but

alsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.

First

of

all,whatwecandoisplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.

What’s

more,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.

The

morepeopleareinvolved,

the

bettertheoceanenvironmentis.All

in

all,

it

is

high

time

thatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【名师点评】1.文章首先介绍世界海洋日的时间和意图;然后介绍海洋的重要性;最后发出保护海洋的倡议。2.范文语言流畅,结构合理,要点齐全,较好地完成了写作任务。在遣词造句上,使用了notonly...butalso引起的倒装句、“the＋比较级

...the＋比较级”结构、以及itishightimethat等较复杂句型,并使用了高级词汇imperative和playsakeyrolein,合理使用了过渡词Firstofall,What’smore,Allinall等,提高了文章的得分档次。

最近你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿,介绍此次活动。内容包括:1.描述表格内容;2.你的观点。观点原因赞成帮助他人是美德;帮助他人就是帮助自己反对怕陷入麻烦;怕被误解注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。参考词汇:美德virtue

Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhelpstrangers.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.

参考范文:

Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhelpstrangers.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somethinkweshouldtrytohelpstrangers.Helpingothersisavirtue,andhelpingothersishelpingourselves.Wemaycomeacrosssometroublesomeday.Iftheyaren’twillingtohelpusjustbecausewearestrangerstothem,it’shardtoimaginewhatourworldwillbelike.However,someareafraidthathelpingotherscansometimesbringustro