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Thechartshowsthenumberoffemalestudentsper100malestudentsinprimary,secondaryand

tertiaryeducation.

OnAverage,moreboysthangirlswereenrolledinschoolbothin1990and1998inallthecountries,

exceptintertiaryeducationindevelopedcountries.Thenumberofgirlsper100boyswasbiggerin1998thanin1990inthetwocountrygroupsandinalltheeducationalstages.

Turningtothedetail,thereweremoreboysthangirlsinprimaryandsecondaryeducation.Ascanbeseen,developingcountriessawabiggerdiscrepancybetweenthenumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsthandevelopedcountries,withthenumberofgirlsper100boysat83in1990and87in

1998inprimaryeducation.

However,indevelopedcountries,thebalanceofthetwowasmuchclosertotheideal,particularly

insecondaryeducation,with98girlsper100boysin1990and99in1998.

Regardingtertiaryeducation,thebalancewasevenworsethaninanyotherlevelsofeducationindevelopingcountrieswith66girlsenrolledforevery100boysin1990and75in1998.Ontheotherhand,indevelopingcountries,thenumberofgirlsovertookthatofboysat105per100boysin1990

and112in1998.

(213words)

AcademicWritingSampleTask1#44

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThemapbelowisofthetownofGarlsdon.Anewsupermarket(S)isplannedforthetown.

Themapshowstwopossiblesitesforthesupermarket.

Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmake

comparisonswhererelevant.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeor

experience.

modelanswer:

Thefirstpotentiallocation(S1)isoutsidethetownitself,andissitedjustoffthemainroadtothetownofHindon,lying12kmstothenorth-west.Thissiteisinthecountrysideandsowouldbeabletoaccommodatealotofcarparking.ThiswouldmakeitaccessabletoshoppersfrombothHindonandGarlsdonwhocouldtravelbycar.AsitisalsoclosetotherailwaylinelinkingthewhotownstoCransdon(25kmtothesouth-east),apotentiallylargenumberofshopperswouldalsobeableto

travelbytrain.

Incontrast,thesuggestedlocation,S2,isrightinthetowncentre,whichwouldbegoodforlocalresidents.Theoricallythestorecouldbeaccessedbyroadorrailfromthesurroundingtowns,includingBransdon,butasthecentralareaisano-trafficzone,carswouldbeunabletoparkand

accesswouldbedifficult.

Overall,neithersiteisappropriateforallthetowns,butforcustomersinCransdon,Hindonand

Garlsdon,theout-of-townsite(S1)wouldprobablyoffermoreadvantages.

(179words)

AcademicWritingSampleTask1#57

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThetablebelowgivesinformationaboutFavoritePastimesindifferentcountries.

Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmake

comparisonswhererelevant.

Writeatleast150words.

Modelanswer

Thistableclearlypresentsandcomparesfavorablepastimesineightdifferentcountries.The

pastimes,acrossthetopofthetable,areanalyzedinrelationtoeachcountry.

Ascanbeseen,about60%ofCanadians,AustraliansandAmericanslikewatchingtelevision.Ontheotherhand,thisfigureisquitelowforChinawhereonly15%ofpeoplewatchtelevision.

Predictably,Americanslikemusicat23%,whereasonly2to5%ofpeopleintheothercountriesfeelthesameway.20%ofpeopleinEnglandenjoysleepingasapastimewhereasinCanadaandtheUSA,forexample,thefigureisonly2%.Interestingly,theChineselikehobbiesthemostat50%,asopposedtoonly20%inFrance.Itisn’tsurprisingthatthehighestpercentageofbeach-loversis

inAustraliaandtheUSAat30%.

Itseemsthatpastimesofpeopleofdifferentnationalitiesmaybeinfluencedbyanumberoffactors

suchasthesocio-economicsituationortheclimate.Thesefactorsinfluenceculturaldifferencesbetweendifferentnationalitiesandmakecross-culturalexperiencesmoreinteresting.

(175words)

AcademicWritingSampleTask1#37

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

From30-50yearsold

TV

Sport

Reading

Hobbies

Music

Beach

Sleep

Canada

60

22

15

40

3

0

2

France

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30

20

4

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England

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30

21

4

/

20

Australia

65

30

15

45

5

30

4

Korea

22

21

60

45

2

2

4

China

15

25

60

50

0

5

5

USA

60

23

15

42

23

30

2

Japan

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ThegraphsshowenrolmentindifferentcollegesintheHigherCollegesofTechnologyin1999.Writeatotalof150-200wordsabouttheinformationinthethreegraphs.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationgiven.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

modelanswer:

ThechartsshowsstudentenrolmentbygenderandlevelindifferentcollegesoftheHigherCollegesof

TechnologycollegesintheUAE.

Therearecleardifferencesinmaleandfemaleenrolment.Femalesoutnumbermeninallthecolleges,with

almost25%morestudentsinDubaiWomen'scollegethaninDubaiMen's.RasAl-KhaimahWomen'sCollegehasalmost180students,comparedtoonly100intheMen'scollege.

Femalesalsooutnumbermalesbylevel,withalmostdoublethenumberofmenatHigherDiplomalevel

(330comparedto181).OnlyatDiplomaleveldoesthenumberofmenslightlyexceedthatofwomen.

OverhalfthestudentsareinCertificatelevel,withlessthanaquarteratHigherDiplomaorBachelorlevel.

Inconclusion,moststudentsintheHigherCollegesareenrolledatDiplomalevelorbelow,andthemajority

ofstudentsarewomen.

(143words)

IELTSWritingSample#27

Therisinglevelsofcongestionandairpollutionfoundinmostoftheworld'scitiescanbeattributeddirectlytotherapidlyincreasingnumberofprivatecarsinuse.Inordertoreversethisdeclineinthequalityoflifeincities,attempts

大作文

mustbemadetoencouragepeopletousetheircarslessandpublictransport

more.

Discusspossiblewaystoencouragetheuseofpublictransport.

Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

modelanswer:

Anyonewholivesinacityisawareoftheincreasingnumberofcarsontheroadandthekindsofproblemsthiscreates:trafficjams,airpollutionandlongercommutingperiods.Aseconomiesgrowandaccesstocarsspreadstoincreasingnumbersofpeople,thistrendislikelytoworsen.Thesolution,itwouldseem,isforgovernrnmenttoencourage

theuseofpublictransportinurbanareas,thusdecreasingdependenceonthecar.

Onewaytostimulatepublictransportuseistomakeprivatecarusemoreexpensiveandinconvenient.Theintroductionoftollsalongurbanmotorwayshasbeensuccessfullyemployedinmanycities.Othersuchmeasuresarehigh-pricedpermitsforparkinginurbanareasandtherestrictionofparkingtoalimitednumberofcars.Facedwithhighcostsornoplacetopark,commuterswouldperhapsbemorewillingtoabandontheir

carsinfavourofbusesortrains.

Therearealsolesspunishingwaysofspurringpublictransportuse.Theconstructionoffreecarparksatsuburbantrainstationshasprovensuccessfulinquiteanumberofcountries.Thisallowscommuterstodrivepartoftheway,buttakepublictransportinto

thecentral,mostcongested,urbanareas.

Indeed,makingpublictransportmorecomfortableandconvenientshouldworktoattractmorecommutersanddecreasetrafficcongestion.Publictransportthatisconvenientandcomfortableretainsitspassengers,muchlikeanybusinessthatsatisfiesitscustomers.Themorecommuterscommittedtotakingpublictransport,theless

congestiononcitystreets.

IELTSWritingSample#19

Ithasbeensaid,"Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks."Compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.

Inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?Why?

Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

•

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Youshouldgivereasonsforyouranswerusingyourownideasandexperience

modelanswer:

"Experienceisthebestteacher"isanoldcliché,butIagreewithit.Wecanlearnalotofimportantthingsfrombooks,butthemostimportantlessonsinlifecomefromourownexperiences.Throughoutthedifferentstagesoflife,fromprimaryschooltouniversityto

adulthood,experienceteachesusmanyskillsweneedforlife.

Aschildreninprimaryschool,welearnfactsandinformationfrombooks,butthatisnotallwelearninschool.Ontheplaygroundwelearnhowtomakefriends.Inourclasswork,welearnhowitfeelstosucceedandwhatwedowhenwefail.Westarttolearnaboutthethingsweliketodoandthethingswedon't.Wedon'tlearnthesethingsfrombooks,but

fromourexperienceswithourfriendsandclassmates.

Inouruniversityclasses,welearnalotofinformationandskillswewillneedforourfuturecareers,butwealsolearnalotthatisnotinourtextbooks.Inourdailylivesbothinclassandoutofclass,welearntomakedecisionsforourselves.Welearntotakeonresponsibilities.Welearntogetalongwithourclassmates,ourroommates,andourworkmates.Oursuccessesandfailureshelpusdevelopskillswewillneedinouradult

lives.Theyareskillsthatnobookcanteachus.

Throughoutouradulthood,experienceremainsaconstantteacher.Wemaycontinuetoreadortakeclassesforprofessionaldevelopment.However,ourexperiencesatwork,athome,andwithourfriendsteachusmore.Thetriumphsanddisastersofourlivesteachushowtoimproveourcareersandalsohowtoimproveourrelationshipsandhowtobe

thepersoneachoneofuswantstobe.

Booksteachusalot,butthereisalimittowhattheyteach.Theycangiveusinformationorshowusanotherperson'sexperiences.Thesearevaluablethings,butthelessonswelearnfromourownexperiences,fromchildhoodthroughadulthood,arethemost

importantoneswelearn.

IELTSWritingSample#30

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

MillionsofpeopleeveryyearmovetoEnglish-speakingcountriessuchasAustralia,BritainorAmerica,inordertostudyatschool,collegeoruniversity.WhydosomanypeoplewanttostudyinEnglish?

WhyisEnglishsuchanimportantinternationallanguage?

Givereasonsforyouranswer..

Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

modelanswer:

IamnotsurprisewhenIreadinthenewspapersthatmanypeoplemovetoEnglishspeakingcountries.IamanengineerinaprocesscontrolsincetenyearsandIunderstandthenecessityofEnglishlanguage.Forexample,whenIreadtechnicalEnglishspecifications,whenImeetJapaneseIndustrialstobuildtogethersomeelectronicmaterialsorwhenIgoonholidaysinItalywherethebestway(forme)tocommunicateistospeakEnglish.Therefore,today,it'snecessarytolearnEnglishandthebestwayistostudyinEnglishassoonaspossiblewhenweareatschoolbutalsowhenwehaveajob.It'ssoImportanttocommunicatewithforeigners,becauseofwork.Forexample:toseafoodsinUSA,tobuildelectroniccardswiththeJapanese,toobtainacertificationwithFDA(Americanorganization)inordertosellsomepharmaceuticalproducts.Infact,jt'sImportantforeverybody,theworkers,thevisitors,thescientists,

etc...

ThesearethemainreasonwhichexplainwhysomanypeoplegotoEnglishspeakingcountries(thebestwaytolearn)andwhyEnglishissuchanImportantInternational

language(thecommunicationbetweenmanythepeopleovertheworld).

Comment:

ThisisananswerwrittenbyacandidatewhoachievedaBand6score.Hereistheexaminer'scomment:

Thisresponseisunderlengthandismarkeddownbecauseofthis.Onlyafewrelevantideasarepresentedandtheseareusedratherrepetitivelyandareinsufficientlydevelopedorsupported.However,thewritingcommunicatesfluentlyandasatisfactory

rangeofstructuresandvocabularyareused.

IELTSWritingSample#34

Manypeoplebelievethattelevisionprogramsareofnovalueforchildren.Doyouagree?Whyorwhynot?

Providereasonsandexamplestosupportyourresponse.

Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

Allowyourself40minutesforthistask.

•

modelanswer:

Televisualmediahasbecomeapervasiveforceinthelivesoffamiliesaroundtheworldtoday.Yet,acentralquestionremainsregardingwhetherwatchingtelevisionisharmfulorbeneficialforchildren.Ananalysisofthisquestionrevealsthattelevisionprogramspresentthreemajorconcernsinthecaseofchildren,includingdepictionsofviolence,

theuseofprofanelanguage,andtherepresentationofpoormoralrolemodels.

Televisionprogramsthatportrayviolenceareaparamountconcernforparentsnowadays.Recentresearchhasshownthatchildrenmaycommitactsofviolencebecausetheywishtoemulatethebehaviorthattheyseeontelevision.Thisisespeciallytruewhenviolentactsarecommittedbywell-knownaction“heroes.”Inaddition,televisionprogramsshowcartoonfigures,aswellasactors,committingviolentacts.Usingcomicsituationstodepictviolentthemescausesfurtherproblemswiththewayin

whichyoungpeopleviewviolence.

Televisionprogramsthatcontainprofaneordisrespectfullanguagealsoworryparentswithyoungchildren.Becausecensorshiplawshaverelaxedoverthepastfewdecades,ithasbecomeverycommonfortelevisionprogramsofeachandeverykindtoshowcharactersexpressingimpolite,rude,andinsultingutterancestooneanother.Bearingresemblancetothecaseofportrayalsofviolence,childrenunfortunatelyoftentryto

imitatetheseactionstheywatchontheirtelevisionscreens.

Finally,someparentsareupsetaboutthemoralbehaviordepictedontelevision.Astheystruggletoteachtheirchildrenmoralandethicalvalues,parentsmightdespairaboutthelackofmoralsandethicsrepresentedinsomeoftheso-calledrolemodelsontelevision.Forinstance,certaincharactersnotonlyhavenoremorsefortheirimmoral

actions,butalsofrequentlygounpunishedbylargersociety.

Becauseofthesefactors,manyparentsbelievethattelevisionprogramssendtheiryouththewrongkindsofmessages.Theemulationofthispoorbehaviorbytheirchildrenissomethingtheywishtoavoidatallcosts,andtheyhaveaccordinglydecided

tobantelevisionintheirhouseholdsforthesereasons.

IELTSWritingSample#74

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Businessesshouldhireemployeesfortheirentirelives.Doyouagreeordisagree?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

modelanswer:

Iwouldhavetocompletelydisagreewiththestatementabove.InthefollowingparagraphsIwill

outlinethebasicconceptsofmyposition.

Firstofall,Iwillleastthemajordisadvantagesforemployers.Onthetoday'smarketacompanymustbeveryflexibleinordertocompetewithotherfirms.So,imaginethesituationwhenacompanycannotfireitsemployeestostayonthemarket.Itwillleadtoloosingnotonlyaprofit,buttheclients,marketshareandcompetitiveability.Now,imaginethesituationwhenacompanyisgrowingfast,everythingisgoodandthenextfewyearsaregoingtobeexcellent.So,employersneedmorepeopletoextendtheproduction.However,nobodycantellwhatwillhappeninafewyears.Inthiscase,employerswillbeafraidtohirenewpeopleandextendtheirbusinessbecausetheywillnotbeabletofirethemifsomethinggoeswrong.Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthatacompanycannothavethebestemployees.Itcannothirethebetteronewithoutdismissinganother

employee.

Whatkindofdisadvantageswillhaveanemployeeinexchangeforthiskindofjobsecurity?Firstofall,itwillbeverydifficulttofindajobifoneisnotthebest,becauseanemployerdoesnotwanttospendmoneyonone'seducation.Besides,employerwillnothaveachancetofireoneifhedoesnotdohisjobwell.Secondofall,employeeswiththiskindofsecuritytendnottoperfectthemselves

becauseaftertheyarehiredtheycannotlosetheirjob.

Inconclusion,Iwouldliketoaddthatthisstatementhassomepositiveaspectstoosuchasconstancy,astrongspiritofthecompany,etc.ThissystemtakesplaceinJapanandsomecompaniessucceededinit.ButIthinkthatthereasonofitsubsistsintheJapanesetraditions,theparticularculturalfeatures,habitsandcustoms.However,ontoday'smarkethereintheUnited

Statesacompanycannotaffordtohireemployeesfortheirentirelife.

(349words)

IELTSWritingSample#165

EssayTip

For聽WritingTask2,youmaybeaskedtodiscussaproblemandpossiblesolutionstoit.Forthistypeofquestion,youshouldexplainexactlywhattheproblemis(itscausesandeffects)andthen

considerthemeritsanddrawbacksofvarioussolutions.

Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.

Asthenumberofprivatecarshasincreased,sotoohasthelevelofpollutioninmanycities.

Whatcanbedonetotacklethisincreasinglycommonproblem?

Writeatleast250words.

Modelanswer

Asthenumberofprivatecarshasincreased,sohasthelevelofpollution.Overrelianceoncarsat

theexpenseofpublictransporthasmadethisproblemevenworse,causingmanyconcernedcitizenstolookforasolutiontotheproblem.

Onepotentialsolutiontothisproblemistodiscouragetheuseofprivatecarsbyraisingtaxes.Ifthecostofpetrolwasincreased,thenmanypeoplewouldconsiderusingalternativeformsoftransportorevenwalking.Admittedly,therewouldbeanumberofcomplaintsfromcardrivers,butthese

wouldnotbeofmuchimportancewhenbalancedagainsttheenvironmentalbenefits.

Anothersolutioncouldbetolookatmorespecificcausesoftheproblem.Moderncarsarefittedwithcleanerburningenginesandcatalyticconverters.Accordingly,theydonotcauseasmuchofanenvironmentalhazardassomeoldercars.InJapan,forexample,carsareheavilytaxedoncetheyhavebeenontheroadforthreeyearsormore,encouragingpeopletobuynewcarswhichpolluteless.Byheavilytaxingoldervehiclesfromtheroad,someoftheworst-pollutingvehicleswouldbetakenofftheroad.However,thiswouldnotreallybefairtothosewhocannotaffordanew

carwithsuchregularity.

Animprovementinthequalityandefficiencyofpublictransportwouldalsoencouragepeopletousetheircarsless.InLondon,forexample,asystemhasbeenoperatingforsometimeinwhichpeo