2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习读后续写Continuation+Writing

2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习

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Continuationwriting

读后续写Whatisagoodstory?......Problem1Problem2Problem3SucceedJourneytotheWest①原文一致性原则②曲折性原则③正能量原则frecklesn.

雀斑Howwouldyoufeelifyouhadfrecklesonyourface?Howwillyoutreatyourfreckles?

WhenIwasakidofabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles（雀斑）.IhadreachedtheagewhenIbegantoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasupset.Para.1

IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawless,peaches-and-creamcomplexion（肤色）.Icouldn’thelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Para.2

Andthen,

inthebackpagesofElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.Forthreeweeks,Iwenttothemailboxeverydayexactlyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifanyoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.Para.3

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatsomethingthatwouldmakemebeautiful.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermyface.ThenItookmyhoe（锄头）andwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies（虎皮百合）,seeminglyuglywithsmallblackspots.Para.4

Thesunwassostrongthatmyfacestartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike,“I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore.”WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,

Iburstintotearsandhidinthebathroom.Para.5WhenIwas12,Iboughtfreckle-removercreamandapplieditonmyfaceonlytofindmoreonmyfaceafterhoeingthefield.toremovemyfreckles,Mainidea:

Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,

butIignoredher.

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Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroomdoor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Howwillthestoryproceed?Backsteppingmethod逆推法

①根据原文已知情节和第二段开头的给出句，找出里面的关键词（关键信息），合理推出第一段发生的故事情节；②利用第一段的给出句，找出里面的关键词（关键信息），提出问题和假设，使故事情节合理发展。

Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,

butIignoredher.

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Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroomdoor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Backsteppingmethod逆推法

原文已知情节：Iburstintotearsandhidinthebathroom.WhatdidIdoduring“whatseemedlikeacentury”.WhyandhowdidIgofromthebathroomtothebedroom?.Howdidmymotherreacttomyignoringher?Whomightbeknockingatmydoor?Whatdidthepersonintendtodo?AndhowdidIreact?WasIstillbotheredbymyfrecklesintheend?Tipsforwriting:

Findouttheloadedriflesandletthemgooff!(Respondtothedetailsmentionedinthegivenmaterial)UsefulExpressions无灵主语：

情绪n.+v.+人+as/whensb.didsth.eg:AsenseofachievementseizedmewhenIfinishedtheBigCleaningPlan.情绪转变：情绪n.+gavewayto+情绪n.+as/whensb.didsth.eg:Mom’sconfusiongavewaytoastrongsenseofsurpriseandmovement.

Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,

butIignoredher.

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Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroomdoor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Brainstorming!WhatdidIdoduring“whatseemedlikeacentury”.WhyandhowdidIgofromthebathroomtothebedroom?