应试写作学与练

应试写作学与练（第一期）原因篇分析原因是英语议论文写作的一个常见题型。例如：Whydotoday'syoungpeoplehavedifficultyinreadingandwriting?Whyistheworldgettingsmallerandsmaller?WhyhasthedivorcerateinChinaincreasedinrecentyears?作文要求考生对这类社会现象或社会问题进行解释。先给大家归纳这种类型的作

文的基本结构模式如下：Paragraph1.Sentence(1)Problem(general)S(2)problem(specific)Paragraph2S(3)ThesisS(4)Cause1.S(5)Detail1.S(6)Detail2.S(7)Cause2S(8)Detail1.S(9)Detail2.Paragraph3S(10)Conclusion第一段中的S(1)、S(6)是引出文章要进行解释的某一现象或问题。第二段中的S(3)是作者对这一现象或问题的基本看法，也即文章的论点句。S(4)、S(5)两个句子是揭示这一现象的两个主要原因。这两个原因可以是并行的

第一、第二原因，也可以是客观的和主观的原因，或间接的和直接的原因。其中

S(5)、S(6)时详细阐述S(4)第一个原因的；S(8)、S(9)则具体说明S(7)第二个原

因的。第三段S(10)是总结句。一般说来，这句是提出解决问题的一些建议或方法。本模式可供大家参考使用，也可选择自己的写作方式写作。本期写作题目：ABoominAdulteducationDirections:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowritea

positiononthetopicABoominAdultEducation.Youshouldwriteno

lessthan150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourpositionontheoutline

(giveninChinese)below:2。出现这种成人教育热的原因是。。。3。结论给大家列出一些在原因作文里的常用句型，最好能记住多用噢！用于开头的句子：Inthelastfewyears,therehasbeenadramaticincreaseinthenumber

of……..Inrecentyears,Chinahasexperiencedagrowingtendencyin………引用调查资料等依据时说：Accordingtoarecent/newsurvey/study/research,thenumber/percentage

of………hasalmostdoubled/tripled/increased/jumpedfrom5%to8%/

decreasedparedwith……….列举原因时说：Anumberof/Severalcausesmightcontributeto/leadto/accountfor

thephenomenon/problem/suddenrise.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat……Oneofthemostmonfactors/causesisthat…………..isalsoresponsiblefortheproblem.Anothercontributingfactor/causesisthat…….Perhapstheprimary/fundamentalfactor/causeisthat……用于结尾的句子：S(10)Wemightdomorethanidentifythecauses/factors;itisimportantto

takeactionto……..Thesignificanceof…….isfarreaching;itmightexertsaprofound

influenceon………..范文：ABoominAdultEducationEveryTuesdayandFridayeveningseesMissLi,myneighboranda

secretaryinapanyrushhomeafterahardday’swork,gulpdown

hermealsandthenhurryouttocatchthebusforherEnglishclass.

MissLi’scaseisnotunique,andnowmoreandmorecityadultsspend

theirleisuretimetryingtoimprovethemselvesatschoolorcollege.Thereareanumberofreasonsforpeopletogobackfortheir

education.Somepeople,likeMissLi,aredoingittoacquireanother

degreeordiplomatoimpressthesociety.Tothemmoreknowledge,or

rather,morecredentialsmeansmoreopportunitiesforbetterjobsand

quickerpromotion.Otherpeople,especiallythosewhoarelaidofforoutofemploymentgo

tovocationalschooltopreparetoreturntothejobmarket.Theyare

eagerfornewskillssothattheycanbequalifiedforthejobsin

retailtrade,administration,educationandotherservicecategoriesto

whichtheyarestrangebecausemostofthemwerebluecollarworkersin

thefactory.TherearealsopeoplewhoetotakesuchcoursesasChinese

traditionalmedicine,painting,calligraphyandphotography.Astheir

workingweeksdeclinepeoplebegintohavetimetofulfilltheirold

dreamoftheirheart’sdesire.Outofnecessityoroutofinterest,peoplegobacktoschoolforthe

mongoaltoimprovethemselves,andthisboominadult

education,inturn,helpstoraisetheintellectualstandardofthe

wholecountry.应试写作学与练（第二期）理由篇叙述理由的文章需要先对某观点表明自己的态度和立场，然后再解释为什么要这

么做，列举理由。例如：WhydoIprefertospendmostofmytimereading?WhyteachingisthejobIlikebest?Whyisitagoodplaceforyoutolivein?这种类型的作文基本结构如下：Paragraph1S(1)TopicS(2)Thesis:MyattitudetowardsitParagraph2S(3)Thesis(morespecific)S(4)Reason1S(5)SupportingdetailS(6)Reason2.S(7)Supportingdetail…………….Paragraph3Conclusion第一段中的S(1)引出文章要讨论的主题，如职业选择、交友、娱乐等等。S(2)则

是作者对这个主题的基本态度，如选择A事情，不要B事情，赞成或反对等。第二段中S(3)是一个承上启下的句子，即更具体的重复S(2)论点的内容，有简略

的点一下为什么吃这样态度的一般理由。之后是几个具体的理由。可以用事实依

据和数据等作论据解释理由。最后一段是全文的总结，可以再次声明自己的态度，也可提出某些建议等等。本期写作题目：ALettertotheUniversityPresidentDirection:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopic:Alettertotheuniversitypresidentabout

thecanteenserviceoncampus,youshouldwriteatleast100words,and

baseyourpositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:假设你是李伟，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信，内容涉及食堂的饭菜

质量、价格、环境、服务等等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之

。应试写作学与练第二期参考范文：January11th,2003DearMr.President,Asaregularstudentatourcollege,Ihavesomeplainttomake

aboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.Firstly,thecanteenenvironmentisverybad.Actually,itisbeing

moreandmorecrowdedandnoisywithaneverlargerpresenceof

vocationalstudentseveryterm.Secondly,thecanteenworkersare

badmannered.Farfrombeingwarmandkindhearted,theyalwaysseemto

becoldandrudetousstudents.Thirdlyandmostimportantly,the

dishesatourcanteenaretooexpensive,thoughtheyarebynomeans

goodqualityordelicious.ThesurveytheStudentUnioncarriedout

lastweekrevealsthatonaverageastudentwillspend10to12yuanon

mealseveryday.Thisisformorethanthefoodexpensesofstudentsin

theneighborhoodcolleges.Nutritiousanddeliciousmealswellwithinthestudents’meansare

veryimportantforyoungstudents.Ireallywishmeasurescouldbe

takentoimproveourcanteenservice.Sincerelyyours,LiMing此类理由型的文章还有以下一些典型题目：1．ThemostunforgettablepersonIeverknew2．ThejobIlikebest3．Aletterofapplication4．WhyIlikelearningEnglish应试写作学与练（第三期）比较篇比较型议论文通常是运用比较手段阐述自己的观点。例如：Wheretoliveinthecityorinthecountry?Doyouprefertoindependentlyaftermarriageorcontinuetolive

togetherwithyourparents?WhichisyourpastimewatchingTVandlisteningtomusicortaking

partinsportsandgames?这种类型的作文在具体写作时，要根据自己的观点对赞成的事物，其优点要多写

详写，而对其缺点要少写，甚至略过；而对反对的事物，其优点要少写略写，一

笔带过，对其缺点则要不惜笔墨，大写特写。这样处理，作者的观点才能得以体

现。我们可以从两种结构模式来学习比较型作文的写作。一种是A1A2A3B1B2B3整体比较法：Paragraph1S(1)Topic:ThesubjectstobeparedS(2)Thesis:YourpreferenceforBoverAParagraph2S(3)ConcedeA’sadvantageS(4)ButA’sdisadvantage1S(5)A’sdisadvantage2…….S(7)IllustrateB’sadvantage1S(8)B’sadvantage2……….Paragraph3Conclusion文章开头引出要比较的两个事物，点明作者的观点：赞成哪一个，反对哪一个。

第二段中先承认所反对的事物也有优点，然后着重揭示其缺点。评完所反对的事

物后，转去评论所赞成的事物。主要是详写其优点或作者赞成的理由，也可用半

句或一句承认他也有不足之处。另一种结构是A1B1A2B2A3B3的分项比较法。Paragraph2S(3)ConcedeA’sadvantagesS(4)ButA’sdisadvantage1S(5)B’scorrespondingadvantage1S(6)A’sdisadvantage2S(7)B’scorrespondingadvantage2S(8)A’sdisadvantage3S(9)B’scorrespondingadvantage3这种类型的典型例句列举如下：用于文章开头的句型：1.Withtheadventof/developmentof/theimprovedstandardof……….

……..playsanimportantrole/partinourdailylife.(increasing

attentionisdrawn/calledto………)2.Whileitismonly/generally/widelybelieved/acceptedthatA…

..,IbelieveB……用于进行比较时使用的句型:3.Studies/Researches/Experimentsshow/demonstrate/revealthat……..4.Onthecontrary/Ontheotherhand,theadvantagesofB…….5.faroutweigh/carrymoreweightthanadvantagesofA……..6.AlthoughBfailsto/cannot………,fewthingscanbepared

with/match/equalBintermsof…………7.Theadvantage/significanceofBismorethan………应试作文学与练第三期作文题目(1)：LargepaniesandSmallpaniesDirections:WriteapositiononthetopicLargepaniesandSmall

paniesinthirtyminutes.Youshouldwritenolessthan120words

andbaseyourpositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。2.有的人则认为在小公司工作更能锻炼人。3.我的看法。参考范文：LargepaniesandSmallpaniesUpongraduationfromcollege,youngmenandwomenfacethefirstchoice

intheircareerlife:togotoalargepanyorasmallone?Although

manygraduatesareattractedbytheprestigeoflargepanies,I

believethesmallonewillaffordmorechancesofsuccessandmore

opportunitiestodevelopyourability.Therearetwobasicdifferencesbetweenthelargeandsmall

enterprises.First,workinginthesmallpanyyouoperateprimarily

throughpersonalcontacts;youhavemorechancetodevelopyour

municationabilityandtheabilitytohandlevariouskindsof

personalities.Incontrast,inthelargepanythereareestablished

policiesandfairlyrigidprocedures.Eventhemanatthetopisonlya

coginabigmachine:youneedn’tmakeanydecisionandcan’tseethe

effectofyourwork..Second,inasmallbusinessyouarenormally

exposedtoallkindsofexperiencesandexpectedtodoagreatmany

thingswithouttoomuchhelporguidance.Thus,youmayacquiremuch

moreskillsandexperience,anddeveloptheabilitytohandle

different,plicatedthings.Butinthelargecorporation,sinceyou

arenormallytaughtonethingandlimitedtooneprocedure,youmay

beethemanwhoknowsmoreandmoreaboutlessandless.Obviouslyifyouwanttogainmoreexperienceandabilityneededin

businessorganizationsandtobeeanexcellentmanagerorexecutive

inyourfuturecareer,workinginasmallpanyisyourbestchoice.比较篇写作题目（2）WhichModeofTravelDoYoulike?Directions:Forthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicWhichModeofTravelDoYoulike?Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutline

(giveninChinese)below:1.有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游（packagetours)2.有的人喜欢自己独立行动（travellingonone'sown）3.比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是..........本期范文：Withthegeneralstandardoflivingimprovingandtheworkingweek

beingshorter,moreandmorepeopleareabletomakeaholidaytrip

toplacesofinterest.Whilemanyliketojoinpackagetoursfro

convenience,Iprefertotravelonmyown.Iliketravellingonmayownnotonlybecauseitcostsmuchlessbut

becauseitgivesagreatdegreeofindependenceandfreedom.Travelling

onmyown,I’mmyownboss;andcandecidewhentostartonmyway,

wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedoverto

saveenergyortimeforanotherspot.Icanalwaysadjustmyplan.On

thecontrary,inapackagetouryou’redeprivedofasmuchfreedomas

inamilitarybase.Atthesoundofthewhistle,youhavetojumpup

fromasoundsleepand,withheavyliddedeyes,hurrytothegathering

placewhereyouarecollectedandcountedtoboardacoach.Atthe

sightofthelittleflagwaving,youmustimmediatelytakeyourself

awayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhose

soleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohimstrictschedule,

regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.True,youmayencounterinconveniencesifyoutravelindividually,for

instance,gettingacmodationsforthenightandfindingaplacefor

meals.Butnothingcanbeparedwiththefreedomwhichisvitaltoa

personwhotakesaholidaytripmainlytoescapefromconstraintsof

hisroutinelife.应试写作学与练（第四期）分析篇分析型议论文主要是判断和分析所讨论的事物或观点的性质。具体地说就是阐述

其重要性，正确性，必要性或荒谬性，危害性等。例如：Thebenefitsofmakingfriendsofdifferentkinds;Theimportanceofmakingcitiesgreener;TheharmfuleffectsofheavyexposuretoTV.此类论文基本结构如下：Paragraph1S(1)TopicS(2)Thesis(myattitudetowardsit)Paragraph2S(3)Thesis(morespecific)S(4)Benefit(oreffect)S(5)DetailS(6)Benefit(oreffect)S(8)DetailS(9)Benefit(oreffect)Paragraph3Conclusion第一段引出要讨论的主题，如离婚率上升、体育锻炼热等，然后提出对这些问题

的基本态度和看法，是赞成还是反对。第二段S(3)把为什么赞成或反对的基本理由先扼要的提一下。接着从几个方面来

阐述赞成或反对的理由，即阐述事物的重要性或危害性。S(5)S(7)S(9)则用具体

的实例来论证之前提出的重要性或危害性。最后一段是总结。有时分析不一定从同一方向进行，也可以从正反两个方向进行。例如：在一篇提

倡体育锻炼的文章中，当中一段可以先说体育锻炼的重要性，然后说如不进行体

育锻炼可能带来的后果。此时的第二段结构为：Paragraph2S(3)Thesis(morespecific)S(4)Importance(withit)S(5)Detail1S(6)Detail2S(7)Consequence(withoutit)S(8)Detail1S(9)Detail2此类作文的常用句型如下：1。Oneofthebenefitsderivedfrom/harmfuleffectson…….is……2。Tohaveabetter/fullunderstanding/appreciationof……,wemay

lookat/turnto……3。There’shardlyamanorwomanwhodoesn’t…..4。Anotherbenefit/effectisconcernedwith/relatesto…..5。Agoodcaseinpoint/typicalexampleofthisis……6。Ofallthebenefitsresultingfrom,nonehasbeen/nothingismore

significantthan/assignificantas…..7。Thus,itcanbeseenthat……….分析篇1写作题目：MyViewsonExaminationsDirections:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicMyViewsonExaminations.Youshouldwriteno

lessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutline(givenin

Chinese)below:1.我们现在都用考试来衡量学生的成绩。范文：Inmostschoolsandcollegestheexaminationisusedasachiefmeans

ofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringa

particularsubject.Althoughitdoesthejobquiteefficiently,its

sideeffectsarealsoenormous.Themostundesirableeffectisthatexaminationsencouragebadstudy

habits.Astheexaminationscoreistheonlycriterionforhisacademic

performance,astudentisdriventomemorizemechanicallyratherthan

tothinkcreatively.Examinationsdonotmotivateastudenttoseek

moreknowledge,buttorestricthisreading;theydonotenablehimto

studyconsistentlythroughoutthesemester,buttoinducecramming

duringexamweek.Examinationsalsolowerthestandardsofteaching.

Sinceteachersthemselvesareoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults,they

areoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults,theyarereducedtotraining

theirstudentsinexamtechniques.Andnosubjectscanbetaught

successfullymerelythroughbeingapproachedwithintenttotake

examinations.Actually,fewofusadmitthatexaminationscancontributeanything

reallyimportanttothestudents’academicdevelopment.Ifthat’sthe

case,whycan’twemakeachangeanddevisesomethingmoreefficient

andreliablethanexaminations?优秀作文：MyViewsonExaminationsSinceschoolesintobeing,theteststandardhasbeenusedto

appraiseperformanceofstudents.Sofaritisstillbeingused,which

maysuggestthatactuallytherearesomeadvantagesinit.However,it

isalsohighlypossiblethattheteststandardisanotidealwayto

findoutwhatstudentshavelearnedandwhattheyhaven't.Mostschool

isstillusingitjustbecausethereisnobettermethodtoreplaceit.Inmyopinion,thefollowingthreepointsarethecriticalflawsinthe

teststandard.Oneofthemostharmfuleffectsonthetestmethodisthatitwill

forceustostudyjustforpassingtests,notforacquiringknowledge

especiallyinChina.Obviouslythefinalobjectofeducationismaking

usintellectivebylearningmoreknowledge.Whilethetestisonlya

waytoexaminethelevelofstudents'studies,ithasbeendeteriorated

toasifterdecidingthefateofstudents.Whycanitbecalleda

terriblesifter?Nowinthetests,whichdecidewhocanenterahigher

school,thousandsofpoorstudents,whowantasplendidfuture,must

prepareforthetestsbyfinishingagreatdealofpractices.Those

practicetestsareheavyladentothem.Sointhiscase,howcanthey

beexpectedtostudytoobtainknowledge?Tothemthatareenoughif

theycanreachthelevelwhichtestsneed.Intheendwhatournation

willget,genuinepersonswithabilityorjusttestrobots?Secondly,testswillbringtheexamineesgreatpressure,whichcan

affecttheirlives.Atypicalexampleofthisisthatmostyoung

studentshavewornglasseseventhoughsomeofthemarestillchildren.

Forpreparingfortests,theymustspendalotoftimeondoingtheir

homeworkssothattheireyesightbeeworseandworse.Andthemore

timetheyspendonthose,thelesstimetheyhaveforplayingand

relaxing.Consequently,thereisabadinfluenceontheirhealth.Thirdly,infact,testsystemitselfcannotveraciouslyestimatewho

isbetterthanothersbecausetherearemanyfactorsimpactingthe

resultsoftest.Forinstance,someonecheatedintestsothathis

scorewouldbehigherthanothers.Orsomeonewhowastoonervousto

performwellfellinthetest.Onlyinsparetimeandnopressureoftestsexistent,studentscan

studysimplyforthefun,forobtainingknowledgeandforthethings

thattheyarereallyinterestedin.Butnowthetestsystemistheonly

waytoselectwhichoneisbetter,whocanreachbetterschoolandwho

cangetgoodjob.Thenwhatwecandoistoimprovethetestsystemor

hopethatsomethingbetterwillbeinventedandreplacethetest

system.——————————————分析篇2作文题目：BeliefsDirection:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

positionentitledBeliefs.Yourpositionshouldbeatleast120

wordsandcontainthefollowinginformation.Outline:1.importanceofhavingbelief;2.Differentbeliefswillleadtodifferentresults.优秀作文兼范文：Belief,acreationofhuman'swise(wisdom),alwaysplaysanimportant

roleinhuman'ssociety.Asasay(saying)goes:"Ifone'smindisfull,

itwon'tbefilledin(with)anybadidea."Anyonewhohasstrong

beliefscanenjoyacolorfullife.Otherwise,hewilllosehimselfin

hiswayoflife.Beliefesaresoimportantthatitcanchangeone'sfate.Twolittle

micefellinabucketofcream.Thefirstmousequicklygaveupand

drowned.Thesecondmousewouldn'tquit.Hestruggledsohardthat

eventuallyhechurnedthatcreamintobutterandcrawledout.Obviously,thelattermouseistheonewhohashisownbeliefs.There

arealwayshopesinhiseyesthatencouragehimtofight,andfight,

andfight.Henevergivesupwhenheisinsomedifficultysituations.

Becausetheoptimistseestheopportunityineverydifficulty,while

thepessimistseesdifficultyineveryopportunity.Thefirstmouseis

oneofthiskindofpessimists.Heholdnobelifeinhislifeand

beetheslaveofhisfate.Thus,itcanbeseenthatonewithfirmbeliefsislikelytoget

successfulandmasterhisownlife.——————————————分析篇3作文题目：PrivacyofFamousPeopleDirections:youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaynolessthan

120wordsonthefollowingtopic.Newspapersandmagazineshavespecialinterestintheprivatelivesof

famouspeople.Whatcanyouexplainit?Whateffectitwillhaveonthepeoplebeingexposed?Andwhatisyouropinionofit?范文：Inrecentyears,manynewspapersandmagazinesfocusontheactivities

offilmstars,popsingersandsomeotherfamousmenandwomen.

Reportersdisguisetheiridentities,infiltratethesubject’sbusiness

andfamily,orevenbugandwiretapthemtogetthenewsbywhatever

meansarenecessary.Itisnotdifficulttoexplainthereasonfortheirsurprisingamount

ofinterestinfamouspeople’slives.Theyareinthespotlight,

renownedornotorious,theyarethetopicofordinarypeoplewholike

toknoweverythingaboutthem.Tosatisfytheircuriosity,or“the

people’srighttoknow”,journalistsoftenfindittheirdutyto

reporttheiractivities.Moreover,whatmatterstoanewspaperoramagazineisthenumberof

readers.Alargereadershipmeanstheriseinthecirculationoftheir

publications,henceahugeprofit.Sincefilmstarsandpopsingersare

newsworthyfigures,andtheirstoriesdrawsfarmoreattentionthan

thoseofotherpeople,itisnaturalthatthepresstriestoattract

themtobuytheirmagazinesbyfeaturingprivatelivesoffamous

people.However,thoseexposedpeoplecanbeseverelyinjuredbysuchpress

attention.Sensationalstoriesabouttheirprivatelivescausegreat

unhappinesstothem.Toescapereporters,theycan’tevenleada

normallife.Sometimestheirliveswillbeindanger.Forexample,

PrincessDianadiedinacaraccidentassheattemptedtoescape

photographersinachasethroughParis.Famouspeoplearealsocitizens.Theyhavetherighttokeeptheirown

privacylikeordinarypeoplethebasicrightwhichshouldbe

respected,protectedandguaranteedbyourlawsinwhatever

circumstances.应试写作学与练(第五期)评论篇评论型议论文也成为开放型议论文，因为文章只是客观的分析和评论某一事物的

正反两方面，或在某一问题上反映出来的两种不同看法，并不下结论说这个事物

对或不对，这个看法正确或错误。这种作文形式尤其适用于评论电视、电脑、小

汽车、安乐死等这类很难绝对说好或不好的主题。此类作文的基本结构如下：Paragraph1S(1)Topic:theissuetobementedS(2)Thesis:differentattitudestowardsit.Paragraph2S(3)Itsadvantagesoroneside’sopinionS(4)DetailsS(5)TransitionS(6)Itsdisadvantagesortheotherside’sopinionS(7)DetailsParagraph3S(8)Thebalancedview第一段S(1)引出要评论的事物或观点。S(2)是简单扼要的提一下在这个问题上人

们的两种不同看法，第二段S(3),S(4)是一种看法，如赞成的观点或事物的优点

。S(5)使承上启下的过渡句，引出下面另一种看法。S(6)S(7)就是反对的观点

或事物的缺点。第三段则是平衡这两种看法，谈谈作者的观点。评论型作文的句型如下：1.Theanswerstothesequestionsoftenvaryfrompersontoperson.2.Attitudestowardstheproblemusuallydiffersharply/widely.3.Whetherithasmoreadvantagesorviceversa,onethingiscertain:

……..4.Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat………5.Itcertainlyofferpeoplegreateropportunityto……..6.Despite/Foralltheadvantages,italsobringsitsownproblems…….7.Agoodcaseinpoint/exampleis……….8.Asopposed/contrarytowidely/monly/generallyheld/accepted

ideas,Iargue……9.Theymayberightabout…..,buttheyseemtofailtomention/take

intoaccount……10.Whatthesepeoplefailtounderstandisthat……..11.Take….forexample,12.Supposethat…….本期作文题目：TheDevelopmentofaPrivateCarDirections:Forthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicTheDevelopmentofaPrivateCar.Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositiononthe

outline(giveninChinese)below：1.小汽车开始进入中国普通家庭。2.小汽车带来的方便和舒适。3.小汽车带来的交通和污染问题。4.我的看法。范文：Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinary

Chinesefamiliesbegintoaffordacar.Yetopinionsofthedevelopment

ofaprivatecarvaryfrompersontoperson.Someclaimthattherearemanyadvantagesinpossessingacar.Itgives

amuchgreaterdegreeoffortandmobility.Theownerofacarisno

longerforcedtorelyonpublictransport,andbusesortaxies.Witha

carhecangowherehelikesandwhenhewants,somuchsothathecan

enjoyhisleisuretothefullbymakingtripstothecountryorseaside

ontheweekends,insteadofbeingconfinedtohisimmediate

neighborhood.However,othersstronglyobjecttodevelopingprivatecars.They

maintainthatasmoreandmorecarsareproducedandruninthestreet,

alargevolumeofpoisonousgaswillbegivenoff,pollutingthe

atmosphereandcausingactualharmtothehealthofpeople.Infact,

privatecarscontributetotrafficcongestionsogreatlythat

advantagesgainedinfortandfreedomareoftencancelledoutbythe

frustrationcausedbytrafficjams.WhetherprivatecarsshouldbedevelopedinChinaisadifficult

questiontoanswer.Yetthedesireforthefortandindependencea

privatecarcanbringwon’tbeeliminated.——————————评论篇2作文题目：ShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized?Directions:Forthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized？Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositiononthe

outline(giveninChinese)below:3.我的看法。范文：Euthanasia,aquietandeasydeath,or“mercykilling”aswecallit

recentlyhasmadetheheadlinesfrequently.Manypeopleapplauditand

arguethateuthanasiashouldbelegalized.Asispointedout,topractiseeuthanasiacanbenefitboththepatient

andhisfamily.Toaterminallyillpersonwhoissuffering

excruciatingpainsdayandnightorliving“likeavegetable”,tobe

allowedtoendhislifepainlesslyisagoodrelease.Tohisfamilyit

isalsoabigreliefconsideringthefinancialandemotionaldrainon

themthathavingtosustainhislifeentails.However,thelegalization

ofeuthanasiamayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhasnot

previouslyfaced.Isithumane,forexample,thataterminallyill

patientisthuscausedtofeelguiltyforremainingalivebecausehe

doesnotwanttodie?Isitwisethatapatientiskilledalivesimply

becauseofamistakenterminaldiagnosis?Andisitpossiblethat

euthanasiacouldbetakenadvantageofforsomeulteriororeven

criminalpurposes?Sincethelegalizationofeuthanasiawillraiseseriousmoraland

socialissues,thedecisionoursocietymakesabouteuthanasiawill

undoubtedlyhavetremendousconsequencesinsociety.应试写作学与练（第六期）批驳篇批驳型议论文主要是对某一观点或做法进行批评与驳斥。在这种类型的作文中，

考生往往看到这样的题目：ShouldCapitalPunishmentBeAbolished?DoesMoneyMeanEverything?MyviewonForcedRetirementPolicies等。也就是说，要求考生在这些有争议的问题上所反映出来一种作者认为不正确的看

法进行批评，然后阐述自己在这方面的看法和观点。这种作文的基本结构如下：Paragraph1S(1)Topic:TheissuetobearguedaboutS(2)Thesis:MyopinionoftheissueParagraph2S(3)Other’sargumentsabouttheissueS(4)DetailsS(5)Writer’sobjectionS(6)Writer’sownargumentsS(7)DetailsParagraph3Conclusion第一段引出文章要争论的问题，表明作者对这个问题的基本立场，或赞成或反对

，这是全文的中心论点。第二段S(3)S(4)是作者反对并要驳斥的观点。S(5)则是作者的具体驳斥。

S(6)S(7)是作者对这个问题的自己看法。最后是结论，归纳全文的阐述。有时候作者反对并要批驳的观点并非一点道理也没有。在这种情况下，可以先退

一步承认其可取之处，然后才阐明自己正确的主张。这时候，当中一段可改为：Paragraph2S(3)Others’argumentsabouttheissueS(4)DetailsS(5)ConcedetheirvalidityS(6)Writer’sownargumentsS(7)Details批驳篇1作文题目：IsStressaBadThing?Directions:Forthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicIsStressaBadThing?Youshouldwriteno

lessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutline(givenin

Chinese)below:1．有的人害怕压力2．有的人认为压力并不是一件坏事3．我的看法范文：“Ican’tstandthepressureandpetition,”explainedonefriendof

minewhenaskedwhyhedecidedtoquithishighlypaidbutdemanding

positioninhispanyrecently.Myfriendmayhavehisownreasons,

butIdon’tthinkhisdecisioniswiseinreality.It’struethatmyfriend’scaseisnotunique.Inthelastfewyears

quiteanumberofmenandwomenhavechosentodosomethingless

petitiveatthecostofafortable,easylifeahighlypaidjob

canobtain.Theyareafraidthatthestressesandstrainsofworkwill

robthemofjoyandhappinessanddothemharmbothphysicallyand

mentally.Infact,however,stressisn’tthebadthingitisoften

supposedtobe.Unlessitgetsoutofcontrol,acertainamountof

stressisvitaltoprovidemotivationandchallenge,andtogive

purposeandsignificancetoanotherwisemeaningless,idlelife.People

understresstendtoexpresstheirfullrangeofpotentialandto

actualizetheirownpersonalworththeveryaimofahumanlife.Stressisanaturalpartofeverydaylifeandthereisnowaytoavoid

it.Whatwecandoistodevelopouradaptiveabilitiestodealwithit

ratherthantoescapefromit.——————————————应试写作学与练批驳篇2写作题目：ShouldWomenReturntotheKitchen?Directions:Forthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

positiononthetopicShouldWomenReturntotheKitchen?Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourpositionontheoutline

(giveninChinese)below:范文：Thetraditionalbeliefisthatawoman’splaceisthehomeandthata

womanoughtnottogoouttoworkaftermarriage.Nowonceagainwe

hearsuchwords.Peopleholdtheviewbasetheirargumentonthetwoassumptions.First,

sincejobsnowarescarceandunemploymentrateshigher,ifwomen

returnedtothekitchen,therewouldbemorejobsavailabletomen.

Second,themajorityoffemaleworkersearnalittle,onlyonefifthof

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