四级写作1汇编

审题：在本题的漫画中，一位老师正在教一群小学生乘法表，孩子们却面露疑色，其中一个学生向老师表达了大家心中的疑虑：“Nooffense，butbythetimewe’reinthejobmarket，won’tthatstuffbeoutdated?”结合写作指令(expressyourviewsontheimportanceoflearningbasicskills)，考生不难看出这幅漫画意在强调学习基本技能的重要性。第一页第二页，共24页。第一段：开门见山，简要描述一下漫画内容，并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意，是手段而不是目的，所以描述要简洁明快，一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是，写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述，因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。第二段：表达考生对漫画寓意的看法，这是文章的重心所在。比如，就第一道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言，考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。第三段：指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义，或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是，结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析，其主要作用是总结和升华，使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要，点到即止。第二页第三页，共24页。第三、论证方法漫画作文的第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法，这是文章的核心段落，也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此，考生在这一段要浓墨重彩，写深、写透。在写这一段时，考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理，避免空泛的议论。第三页第四页，共24页。第四页第五页，共24页。Theoverusingofcellphones

Thispictureportraysanironicsituation:ontheroad,standsaman,whoiscompletelyconcentratingonhiscellphonewhereasusingastickfordirection,whichimpliestheunprecedentedpopularityorevenoverusingcellphonesnowadays.

Exaggeratedasthepictureis,thephenomenonbehinditisratherthought-provoking.Withthedevelopmentofhigh-techequipment,especiallysmartphones,peopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtotheexcessiveuseofthem.AccordingtoasurveycarriedoutinChinaDailyseveraldaysago,almost47%ofcitizensexplainthattheywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesathand.Meanwhile,theoverusingcellphones,firstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.What'sworse,itwouldperformnegativeeffectsininterpersonalrelationshipsincewehavelesstimetocommunicate.

Judgingfromtheevidenceabove,certainmeasuresshouldbetaken.Firstly,certaininstitutionsinChinashouldlaunchrelevantcampaignstolimittheexcessiveuseofcellphones.Moreover,we,ascollegestudents,shouldputemphasisonitrightfromourselvesasastart.第五页第六页，共24页。Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthencommentonthekid’sunderstandingofgoingtoschool.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.“WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?”第六页第七页，共24页。Simpleastheymayseem，basicskillsserveasthefirststepinthechainofsuccess.Thisisanalogoustolearningtoplaybasketball.Ifshooting，dribblingandpassingarenotmastered，learningadvancedskillswillbecomedifficult，ifnotimpossible.Agrowingbodyofresearchhasalsodocumentedthatsuchbasicskillsasreading，writingandcomputingarehighlycorrelatedwithsuccesslaterinlife.A2012studysurveyed300CEOsofFortune500companiesandfoundthat87%attributedpartoftheirsuccesstothebasicskillstheylearnedinprimaryschool.第七页第八页，共24页。Undoubtedly,heiswayoffthemark.Inmyview,educationismorethanjustlearningtoobtaininformation.WilliamYeats,theIrishpoetanddarmatist,wasrightwhenhesaid“Educationisnotthefillingofapail,butthelightingofafire”Therealtaskofeducationistoinspirestudentstoexploreandtothinkcritically.What’stheuseofeducationifamanwhohastheheadfilledwithfactsisn’tcapableoffiguringoutcreativesolutionstotheproblemsfacingmankindandmakingtheworldabetterplace?第八页第九页，共24页。第九页第十页，共24页。Themoderntechnologyhasgreatlyalteredthemodeofcommunicationamongpeople.WiththehelpoftheInternet,peoplecaneasilycontacteachotheranytimeanywhere.However,thesideeffectisthatmanypeoplehavebecomeover-dependentontheInternetandneglectedface-to-facecommunication.AsfarasI'mconcerned,electroniccommunicationcannotfullyreplacethedirectcontactamongpeople.Althoughitseemstobringeveryonetogether,itactuallyestrangespeopleanddecreasestheeffectivenessofcommunication.Atypicalexampleisthat,traditionally,peopleworkinginthesameofficesimplywalktoothersandtalk.Today,however,co-workerstendtosende-mailsorinstantmessagesthroughtheInternetevenwhentheyaresittingnexttoeachother.Aswordscanneverconveythefullmessage,itusuallytakesmuchmoretimeandroundsofconversationthanface-to-facecommunication,inwhichpeoplecandiscussmoredirectlywithlesslossofinformation.Toconclude,theInternetenablesmoreeffectivecommunicationinsomesituations,butover-dependenceonitactuallypullspeopleapart.第十页第十一页，共24页。Internetdoesexertsuchaprofoundeffectonourlifethatitrevolutionizesthewayofpeople’slivingandthinking.Asissubtlyrevealedintheportrayal，therearetwoparentssittinginthefrontofcomputer，whoarechattingwiththeirchildontheinternet.Whatameaningfulpicture!第十一页第十二页，共24页。Convenientasitis,electroniccommunicationcannotreplaceface-tofacecontact,beitinpersonallifeorprofessionallife.Arecentstudyfoundthataround67.2percentofemployeesfeeltheywoulddobetteratworkiftheirseniorsspoketothemface–to–faceinsteadoforderingthemaroundovertelephoneorthroughe-mails.Meetingpersonallyisespeciallyimportantwhenyouarecommunicatingwithyourfolks.Adailycalltoyourelderlyparents,forinstance,isnosubstituteforaweeklyvisit,forthefeelingofintimacyisirreplaceable.第十二页第十三页，共24页。Hence,itisnecessaryforustouseInternetinareasonableway.Afterall,Internetisinventedtoconnectyouandme,andtobringconveniencestoourliferatherthansetabarriertokeeppeoplebeyondreach.Ifwewanttokeepourinterpersonalrelationshipmoreeffectively,weshouldspendmoretimewiththemfacetofaceinreallife.Onlyinthiswaycanwenotonlymakefulluseofthecommunicationtoolonthenetbutalsomakeourrelationshiptighter.第十三页第十四页，共24页。Directions：Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneedbutnoteveryman’sgreed.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpoint.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.第十四页第十五页，共24页。Deforestationisagoodcaseinpoint.Treesgiveustheoxygenwebreathethepaperweuseandthefruitsweeat.Butforests—thecradleofmanycivilizations—havebeenshrinkingatanalarmingrate.Manhasbeenruthlesslycuttingdowntreestomeethisinsatiableappetitefortimberfirewoodorfarmlandcontributingtothegreenhouseeffectwhichscientistsbelievecouldbedisastrousforhumanbeingsifwedonotstopthisinsanity.第十五页第十六页，共24页。Directions：Forthispart，you’reallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofreadingliterature.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.第十六页第十七页，共24页。审题：本题的漫画反映的是一个社会现象。在漫画中，老师把一本厚厚的书交给学生，并对他说：“Justthinkofitasifyou’rereadingalongtext-message.”结合题目中的写作指令(expressyourviewsontheimportanceofreadingliterature)，考生可以得出这幅漫画所反映的社会现象：随着新的电子媒体的出现，文学阅读日渐式微。需要提醒考生的是，漫画中的text-message象征着当代层出不穷的新媒体，这里并不需要对其做过于狭隘的理解。第十七页第十八页，共24页。Composition1Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexplainwhethernewsstandsshouldbeabandoned.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.第十八页第十九页，共24页。Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexplainwhethernewsstandsshouldbeabandoned.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

forklift第十九页第二十页，共24页。Anyonewhosaystheyhaveonlyonelifetolivemustnotknowhowtoreadabook.

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Ifkidsareentertainedbytwoletters,imaginethefunthey'llhavewithtwenty-six.

Openyourchild'simagination.

Openabook.

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