读后续写周周练度假骑马迷路导学案高三英语写作专项复习

读后续写周周练主题：人与自然类型:人与动物类题目：度假骑马迷路第二节(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawn(黎明)onmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboy(牛仔)hats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpine(松树)trees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark._______________________________________________________________________________文本分析1．头脑风暴1.Whatwasmyreactiontotherabbit?2.Howdidtheygetlost?3.Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?4.Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?5.HowdidIfeelandwhatdidDadreact?6.Didwefindthewayout?How?2.重点词汇和表达单词音标词义背诵dawn[dɔːn]n.黎明；曙光；拂晓；破晓graze[ɡreɪz]v.放牧；吃青草；放牛cowboy[']n.骑马牧人；牛仔pine[paɪn]n.松树woven[ˈwəʊvən]adj.编织的Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpine(松树)trees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.这里非常宁静祥和，棕色岩石的颜色、深绿色的松树和傍晚的阳光混合在一起，营造出一个神奇的场景。3.文本要素分析elementscontentWhoWhatWhenWhereHow【参考答案】：Who：I,Dad,Paul,Tina,Ryan,Kyle,；What：tookavacation,tookahorseride；When：Onesummer；Where：theWildWest,UnclePaul’sfarmhouse；How：Wecameacrossalittlerabbitandgotlostbecauseitwasdark.Theme(主题):Thepurposeofthepassageistotellustobecalmwhengotlost.4.故事结构图plotlineplotline故事情节线climaxclimax（高潮）Whathappened?WhatdidIdo?________________________________________________________________________________________________developmentWhathappened?WhatdidIdo?________________________________________________________________________________________________development，developmentdevelopment，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________beginningstorymountainbeginningstorymountainMydadandIwenttoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.eMydadandIwenttoUnclePaul’sfarmtoexperiencethefarmlife.endingpositivepositiveresolution解决action行动conflict冲突resolution解决action行动conflict冲突【参考答案】：development：SeeingDadandUnclePaulridinghorses,Iwantedtotryhorseridingmyself.climax：Alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.ending:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark…5.文本概要父亲带一家人去UnclePaul的农场度假，体验农场生活，“我”看着父亲和叔叔一起放羊，同时看到父亲骑马很是潇洒，也想上马体验。父亲同意了“我”的请求，并陪我一起去骑马。续写结构分析Paragraph1:SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseThehorsegotscaredXXX首句呼应上文.ThehorsegotscaredXXX首句呼应上文_________________________________________________________________中间刻画细节ThethingsIandmyfatherdidXXX中间刻画细节ThethingsIandmyfatherdidXXXWegotlost.尾句衔接过渡_Wegotlost.尾句衔接过渡Paragraph2:Ifeelfearwhengotlostsay\do\feel中间刻画细节首句Ifeelfearwhengotlostsay\do\feel中间刻画细节首句呼应上文finallygothome，finallygothome，unforgettableexperience尾句萃章显志向cui’zhang’xian’zhi___________________________________________________________________【详解】1.续写构思 ①第一段所给首句“Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.”这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从兔子出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写因追赶兔子而迷路，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。②第二段所给首句“Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.”这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的嘱托——不要误了晚饭、不要迷路，可以从如何寻路返回入手去写续文。前文提示农场附近有河流，并且river为标有下划线的关键词语，所以可以从沿着河流回到农场的角度拓展。2.续写线索所给短文共四段。第一、二段介绍了故事发生的背景：人物、时间、地点、目的；第三段描述了作者来到农场后和父亲在农场的所见所闻所做所感：听——蛙声和水声；做——喂鸡牧羊；看——父亲和保罗叔叔骑马；感——羡慕他们骑马的英姿。所有这些为下文故事的展开埋下了伏笔。第四段是故事的开端：在征得保罗叔叔同意且在父亲陪伴下作者终于尝试了骑马的体验之旅。旅途一始，美景的欣赏仿佛是“暴风雨前的平静”，紧接着续写的第一段兔子的突然出现使故事发生了转折，之后发生的一切使作者和父亲陷入了困境；第二段则应重点围绕作者和父亲如何脱险、迷途知返展开。3.词汇激活情感：panic，__________动作：run，__________环境：scenery，__________4.续写训练马变得害怕，失控地跑了起来。（scared；wildly）2.我是如此的害怕以至于紧紧地握住缰绳以免摔下去。（so…that…；frightened）3.“我们肯定迷路了。”我低声说，害怕的感觉包围了我。（whisper；afeelingoffear）4.终于，我们安然无恙的回到了农舍（safe；sound）5.“情绪描写惊慌恐惧”高分句型1.Afloodoffearwelledupinhim.他从心底害怕。Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她浑身发抖，感觉像坐在针脚上。3.Lastnight,Idreamedaboutbeingchasedbyanangrydog.Ireallyhadmyheartinmymouth.昨晚，我梦见被一只恶狗追赶。我真的被吓坏了。4.Asnakecameoutofthebrushwoodandscaredmetodeath.一条蛇从灌木丛爬出来，把我吓坏了。【参考答案】:3.词汇激活relief，nervous，worried；cry，thinktooneself；mountain，range，valley，river，lake，forest，wind，blow4.续写训练1.Thehorsebecamesacredandranawaywildly.2.IwassofrightenedthatIheldonthereinstightlyandtriednottofall.3.“Wemusthavegotlost!”Iwhispered,afeelingoffearsurroundingme.4.Finally,wereachedthefarmhouse,safeandsound.7.范文展示Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorsewasscaredandranawaywildly.IwassofrightenedthatIheldonthereinstightlyandtriednottofall.“Becareful!Keepcalm!“Mydadshoutedandtriedtokeepupwithme,extremelyworriedaboutmysafety.Itseemedacenturyhadpassedbeforethehorsesloweddownandcametoastop.Ifoundariverinfrontofus.“Whereweare？”Iaskedmydad.Soonwerealizedwehadgotlost.Welookedaroundtryingtofindthetrack,butfailed.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.“Wemusthavegotlost!”Iwhispered,afeelingoffearsurroundingme."Don'tworry,myson.”Dadtriedtofortme.“Irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.Wecanfollowtherivertogoback."