高中英语写作指导课课件

WritingClass——Vivi2021/5/91Warmingup考考反应力：随着音乐拍手跺脚，老师说turnleft,同学就turnright；老师说turnright,同学就turnleft；老师说turnround,同学就juststand；老师说raiseyourighthand,同学就raiselefthand;老师说raiseyourlefthand,同学就raiserighthand;。2021/5/92老师阅卷看什么？一看字体（字体工整）二看语言（语言高级）三看内容（要点齐全）四看结构（三段式结构）2021/5/93一看字体2021/5/94二看语言（语言高级）2021/5/951.高级词汇短语基本原则词组优先原则避免重复原则后高长原则——后学到、较高级、较长词汇2021/5/961.词组优先原则【原文】Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.[修正]Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2021/5/972.避免重复原则[原文]Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【修正】Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision2021/5/983.后高长原则

——后学到、较高级、较长词汇

原词：HardVeryPayattentiontoHappyMoreandmore替换词：DiligentlyRather,extremelyAttachimportancetoDelightedenjoyableTheincreasingnumberof2021/5/99电脑在我们的生活中是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.Computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.2021/5/910为了学习音乐，她去了美国ShewenttoAmericainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAmericaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.我突然想到了个好主意SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.2021/5/9112.句式多样，文章增“靓”各种从句非谓语动词倒装句强调句被动句With的复合结构…….2021/5/912他昨天下午来的。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.(倒装句）Itwasyesterdayafternoon

thathecamehere.（强调句）2021/5/913Game:连词滚雪球每人拿一张写有连词的纸条，向后一个同学传达自己的连词，后一个同学给后面的同学传达时需要先讲前面同学的连词再讲自己的连词。最后一个同学，把自己一组所有的连词讲出来，对一个加小组加一分，漏了不扣分。2021/5/914第一组：Atfirst(首先）;firstly（首先）;beside(此外）;secondly(第二）；Afterall(毕竟）；fortunately(幸运地）；Asaresult(结果）；finally（最后);第二组：Firstofall(首先）；now（现在）Infact(事实上）；forexample（例如）Luckily（幸运地）；inspiteof（尽管）Atlast(最后）；inaword(总之）2021/5/915第三组：Lately(最近）；tostartwith(首先）Inorderto(为了）；then(然后）Anyway（无论如何）；however(然而）Allinall(总之);finally（最后）第四组：Asaresult(结果）therefore（最后）Infact(事实上）；unfortunately(不幸福地）Beside(除此）；forexample(例如）Firstly(首先）；recently(最近）2021/5/9163.连词一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。atfirst最初

；firstly第一；inthebeginning起初

firstofall首先；onetheonehand…ontheotherhand

一方面….另一方面

………2021/5/917（二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。Besides/what’s

more

而且；此外

in

other

words

换句话说in

fact

事实上

……..（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见luckily

幸运地however

然而；无论如何though/although

尽管……..

2021/5/918（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。eventually

最后

in

conclusion

总之，最后in

a

word

总之

……….

2021/5/919名人名言、谚语Thereisanoldsayingthat…….(常言道，）Game:将打乱的单词组成一句完整的名言或谚语。抢答，哪个小组对了加一分，错了不扣分。2021/5/9201.mothersuccessofisthefailure

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失败是成功之母。willaistheretherewhere,wayais

Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。2021/5/9213.RomeroadstoleadallAll

roads

lead

to

Rome.

条条大路通罗马。4.louderspeakthanwordsactionAction

speak

louder

than

words

事实胜于雄辩impossibletoamindiswillingnothingNothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上无难事，只怕有心人2021/5/9226.ishalfwelldonebegunhalfWell

begun

is

half

done

好的开端是成功的一半7.thandonesaideasierEasier

said

than

done

说起来容易做起来难2021/5/923

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失败是成功之母。Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。All

roads

lead

to

Rome.

条条大路通罗马。Action

speak

louder

than

words

事实胜于雄辩2021/5/924Nothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上无难事，只怕有心人W