2020浙江高考英语读后续写解读讲评及写作技巧指导课件

2024年新高考英语读后续写近五年真题最新模拟题分析与写作技巧策略2020年浙江卷6月

拍摄北极熊遇险目录CONTENTS1读原文

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填表格2读P1P2首句

定情节发展列大纲

两段12句法3写句式

招招升级45写句式

招招升级

水到渠成

范文赏析1读原文

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Onefall,

mywifeElliandI

hadasinglegoal：tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandI

cookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybear

followedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.2020年浙江卷6月真题原文Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws（爪子）.Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇）,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’ tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoI

approached

ouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.

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（adj./v./短语）（主要）角色1acouple,wantingtophotopolarbears（主要）角色2ayoungmalepolarbearhungryandfierce背景事件MywifeandIwantedtophotographpolarbears.微情节

动作(v.)/情绪(adj.)

ElliandIcookeddinner.(p3)Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp(p4)Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactions.(p5)Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.(p6)Weusepepperspraytoburnthebear’seyes.(p7)ElliandI

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定情节发展Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp._______________________________________________________Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._______________________________________________________2Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.P1大意P1角色续写思路theangrybearElliandI

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定情节发展Theangrybearcamebackandhitthefencemorefiercely.ElliandI;

theangrybear2①Whatdidthebeardo?②Howdidwefeel?③Whatdidwedo?④howdidthebearreact?Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.P2大意P2角色续写思路

动作(v.)

情绪(adj.)

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定情节发展Wewererescuedandphotographedthebearonboard.theangrybearElliandI

2②whatdidtheangrybeardo?①Seeingthehelicopter,howdidwefeel?whatdidwedo?ElliandI;

theangrybear③Afterbeingrescued,whatdidwedo?列大纲：两段12句法3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

列大纲：两段12句法

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2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？

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列大纲：两段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

结局/升华主旨续写首段首句续写二段首句承接首段首句3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

列大纲：两段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Itwasanunforgettableexperience.Itsmashedthefencemadly.Thehelicopterthrewaropetous.Thebearwasnearingus.Wewereterrified.

Ellifetchedthegarlicbread.Wethrewthebreadtoit.Thebreadusedup.Weclimbeditquickly.

Wewererescued.Thebearheadedforourcamp.

Iphotoedthebear.3Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.写句式

招招升级4Step4.写句式

招招升级

e.g.:1）Angeroverwhelminghim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthewirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.2）Suddenly,Ellidashedtothekitchen,shoutingthatshewenttofetchthegarlicbread.3）Atthisonce-in-a-lifetimemoment,Ireachedintomybackpackandpulledoutthecamera,photographingthatimpressivescene.招式1：

非谓语动词常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

写句式

招招升级e.g.:4）MuchasIwantedtophotographtheapproachingbear,mysurvivalinstinctovertookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.招式2：as引导倒装句，意为“虽然”

...as主+谓，xxx.

4Step4.写句式

招招升级

e.g.:5）Withnothingtoeat,theguywildlybangedagainandshovedthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlycollapsing!6）Withthisangrygiantbeastwithinastone'sthrow,IhuddledwithEllitightly.招式3：

with复合结构常用句式：

with复合结构：with+n.+doing/done/todo/介词/adj...

写句式

招招升级

e.g.:7）Thrilledbutrelieved,wecaughttheropetightlyandeventuallylandedonthehelicoptersafeandsound.招式4：

形容词作状语，表示情绪感受

常用句式：①Adj.+adj.,...②...,adj.+adj.4

水到渠成

范文赏析5Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.

Angeroverwhelminghim,hesmashedhispawsmadlyagainstthewirefence,thrustinghissharpclawsatus.MuchasIwantedtophotographtheapproachingbear,mysurvivalinstinctovertookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.Suddenly,Ellidashedtothekitchen,shoutingthatshewenttofetchthegarlicbread.Thenwethrewthebreadattheintruderalittlebitatatimeuntilitranout.Withnothingtoeat,theguywildlybangedagainandshovedthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlycollapsing!Withthisangrygiantbeastwithinastone'sth