2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题8社会服务课件新人教版

写作专题专题八社会服务Ⅰ．应用文写作感谢信(2019·浙江卷6月)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；

3．临别祝愿。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAlex，①Learningthatyou'releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I'meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelp．Honestlyspeaking,it'ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills．Underyourprofessionalguidance,Ihavemade

unbelievableprogressinEnglish．It'sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest．②WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmandconfidence．③NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam．Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome．Yours，LiHua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如leavefor,eagerly,expressone'sheartfeltgratitudeto,honestlyspeaking,underone'sprofessionalguidance,makeprogress,unbelievable,rankfirst,encounter,cheersb．up,helpsb．out,fuel,enthusiasm,convey等。2．句式美：①句Learningthat...是动词-ing形式短语作状语。②句Whenever引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。③句enough后接不定式作结果状语，同时运用了how引导宾语从句，这两处表达增强了感情色彩。(2022·郴州一模)假定你是校学生会成员李华，你校学生会组织了图书捐赠及互换活动，外教Smith先生捐赠了许多英文图书。请你代表学生会给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表达感激之情；2．回顾活动以及Smith给予的帮助。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMrSmith，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearMrSmith，OnbehalfoftheStudentUnion,I'mwritingtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudeforyourgenerousdonationofsomanyEnglishbooks．LastFriday,weorganisedabookdonationandexchangeevent．Manystudentsandteacherstookanactivepartinit．It'ssokindofyoutobringbookscoveringawiderangeoftopics．Besides,thebooksyoudonatedwereverypopular,allofwhichweretakenawayinashorttime．Thereisnodenyingthatyourgenerosityandcontributionmadeabigdifferencetoourevent,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess．Thankyouonceagainforyoursupport．Yourssincerely，LiHua(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity．Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs．[悬念1]Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet．Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges．Ⅱ．读后续写MrsMeredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman．Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor．Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp．Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem．Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore．Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy．Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch．“Iwishyoucouldseehim，”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara．“Heissuchahelptohismother．Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando．”[悬念2]Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard．“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney，”saidClara．“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch．”“SodoI，”saidHarry．“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem．”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)．”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention．WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone．“Itellyouwhatwecando，”saidJohn．“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit．[悬念3]”注意：续写词数应为150左右。When

Mrs

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everything

ready,Bernard

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business．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键：Who:theMeredithfamilyWhere:inasmallcommunityWhen:onemorningWhat:Thefamilywantedtohelpapoorfamily．How:Theydecidedtomakepopcorn．大意：善良的Meredith一家帮助一个贫困家庭的故事。Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意，让贫困家庭的孩子Bernard去卖爆米花。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：Meredith一家生活没有受到经济滑坡的影响吗？悬念2思考：妈妈为什么回家跟孩子们说这些事情？悬念3思考：孩子们的主意妈妈会同意吗？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①妈妈同意孩子的想法，他们会做哪些准备呢？②到家做完爆米花之后会送到Bernard家吗？他们将怎样指导Bernard卖爆米花？③Bernard一家收到爆米花会有什么反应？段首句2思考：①Bernard会怎样卖爆米花？会赚到钱吗？

②Bernard会自己做爆米花吗？③Bernard长大后会成为成功人士吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1：买装爆米花的纸袋→做爆米花→送到Bernard家→教Bernard如何卖→Bernard一家的感受Paragraph2：Bernard卖爆米花→Bernard学做爆米花并改良口味→取得成功→回报社会When

Mrs

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of

John's

idea,she

thought

it

was

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good

one,too．So,theywenttothelocalsupermarkettobuypaperbags．Whentheygothome,theymadealotofpopcornandputitinthepaperbags．Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard'shome．TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn．Bernardandhisparentswereverygrateful．AndtheMeredithfamilyalsofeltveryhappytohelpthisfamily．With

everything

ready,Bernard

started

out

on

his

new

business．Hetookthepopcornaroundtothehousesandsoldallhispopcorn．Heearnedalotofmoney．Then,hewantedtobeself-dependent．Therefore,heaskedMrsMeredithtoteachhimhowtomakepopcorn．Afterthat,notonlydidhemakeplainpopcorn,buthealsoaddedcreamandsalttothepopcorntomakeittastebetter．Bernardgrewuptobearemarkableman．HedidnotforgetthehelpoftheMeredithfamily,andhealsodidwhathecouldtohelpthoseinneed．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①第一段中副词very的运用凸显了当时人物的心情。②第二段中形容词remarkable的运用形象表明了Meredith一家的帮助给Bernard带来的影响。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①文章中高级词汇grateful,earnmoney,add...to...的使用为文章的一大亮点。②notonly...butalso...倒装句的使用是文章的增分点。③文章多处使用不定式，语言简洁明快。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Overtheyears,I'vebeenguiltyofhurriedlyshuttingthefrontdoortomanystrangerswhentheycametomyhomeknockingwiththeintentionofsellingthings．Ihateditwhentheytriedtheirbesttopersuademetobuythethingstheypromoted．Butearlierthisyear,adearfriendofmine,Linda,hadanexperiencethatchangedmymindandattitudetowardsthese“intruders”．Lastwinter,Lindawentthroughaverymessydivorceandwasverydepressed．SoshequitherjobandleftLosAngeles,wheresheencounteredherex-husbandincollege．SheflewtoBostonontheeastcoastoftheUS．Later,shesettledinanewneighbourhoodinEastBoston．However,shortlyafterwards,thecompanywheresheworkedwentbankrupt(破产)．Sufferingaseriesofbitterblows,shefellill,aseverecaseofflu．Shehadtostayathomeforthewholeweek,feelingextremelybadandhopeless．Earlyonemorning,Lindalayinbed,feelingpainfulallover．Thenallofasudden,therewasanupsettingknockonherfrontdoor．Strugglingoutofthebed,shedraggedherselftothewindow．There,outside,shesawayoungladycarefullyholdingsomeleaflets(传单)andaTVsetmodel．SheknewofalargeTVsetestablishmentnearbyandassumedamessagewasabouttobegentlydelivered．“ThisisthelastthingIneedtoday，”shemutteredtoherselfandhesitantlyopenedthedoor．Coughingbitterly,Lindastuckherheadout．“Excuseme,madam...”theyoungladysaidwithasmile．“I'msorrybutIamnottheslightestbitinterestedinanyTVwhatever．”Lindainterruptedherimpatiently．“Asamatteroffact,Iamfeelingterriblyawful．”“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou,madam？”theyoungladyaskedwithconcern．“Nothanks,justleavemealone．”Lindathenshutthedoorinherface．Theyoungladypolitelyturnedandleftinsilence．注意：续写词数应为150左右。A

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