专题03新高考英语读后续写典例分析03-A-Beautiful-Brooch

专题03新高考英语读后续写典例分析03新高考英语ABeautifulBrooch目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.让他心跳加速2.他没有了勇气。3.他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。4.我气的说不出话。5.贫困使他们情况每况愈下

sethisheartracingCouragedesertedhim.Anxietytorehimintopieces.Angerchokedmywords.povertykeptthemdown.表达积累6.东方破晓的时候，他早已经上路了。7.他笑得一脸皱纹。8.猪肉太贵，他吃不起。9.突然下了一阵雨，风停了。10.他因家庭贫困而辍学

Dawnfoundhimwellalongtheroad.Smilecrumpledhisface.Porkhaspriceditselfoutofhisdish.Asuddenshowerkilledthewind.Thewantofhisfamilyhadkepthimfromschool.表达积累11.我没有时间把这一话题说完。12.我没有得到这样一个机会。13.乐观变成了怀疑14.他突然感到不寒而栗。15.他觉得万念俱灰

Timefailsmetofinishthetopic.Suchachancedeniedme.optimismhadgivenwaytodoubtAchillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.Despairseizedhim.表达积累16.他把她搂在怀里17.我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆。18.你早点出发的话，中午就能到。19.会议一片寂静20.晚会上人们非常激动。

gatherherintohisarmsA10minutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.Anearlystartwillgetyouthereatnoon.Ahushfellupontheassembly．Excitementknowsnoboundsattheparty.02原文分析ABeautifulBroochIn1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch(胸针)inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice－fivedollars－wastoohighforReubenEarle.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhisfamily.Reubencouldn'taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehome,thegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtosupporttheirfivechildrenbutshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.原文分析男孩喜欢上了这个胸针，但是太贵。家庭的贫困生活Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop'sweathered(风化的)doorandwentinside,Standingproudandstraightinhisflour－sack(面粉袋改做的)shirtandwashed－outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,"ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditforsometime?"I'lltry,"theshopkeepersmiled."Peoplearoundheredon'tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile.“Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.原文分析尽管如此尽管没钱，男孩还是决定要这个胸针小孩贫穷穿着的细节描写Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldgetsurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammeringfromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags(装钉子的麻袋).PeoplebuilttheirownbuildingsinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusednailbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.原文分析Thesoundofhammeringgavehimanidea.孩子想到了赚钱的办法：卖用过的麻袋Paragraph1：

Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Finally,thetimecame!_______________________________________________________________________原文分析本段可以从孩子如何实行计划进行续写。通过上一段的努力，孩子终于能买得起胸针了。后面应该是妈妈收到礼物时的感动。03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Lookfornailbags…Othermethodstomakemoney…Hiseffort…Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Finally,thetimecame!Heboughtthebrooch…Giveittohismother…Hismothermoved…句子润色鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，仔仔细细地寻找麻袋。Reubenwascoldandhungry,andhesearchedforthenailbagscarefully.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedthestreets,searchingforthenailbagscarefully.Coldandhungry非谓语替换句子润色为了攒更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。Tosavemoremoney,heevendecidedtodeliverpapersintheearlymorning.deliverpapersintheearlymorning句子润色尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。Exhaustedandtiredashefelt,hestillstucktotheplan.Though/AlthoughAs…While…Though/AlthoughhefeltExhaustedandtired,hestillstucktotheplan.As引导让步状语从句需要半倒装，（名词/形容词/副词放到主语前面）句子润色商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。Thebroochintheshopwindowremindedhimthatwhathedidwasworthwhile.Itwasthebroochintheshopwindowthatremindedhimthatwhathedidwasworthwhile.Whathedid句型结构的多变:强调句句子润色经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。Afteralongtimeofhardwork,hemadeiteventually.makeit句子润色他拿出汽水罐子，把硬币倒出来，开始数。pouroutHetookoutthesodatin,pouredthecoinsoutandbegantocount.一句话表达三个动作，A,BandC句子润色五美元！他的努力得到了回报！payoffFivedollars!Hishardworkpaidoff!句子润色鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Rushforsp.Reubenheldthesodatinfirmly,andrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.句子润色当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在Dora和apos的手里。Whenhegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandputitinDora&apos’shand.burstthroughthefrontdoorThemomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora&apos’shand.高级词汇替换句子润色多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Dorahadneverreceivedsuchagift.高级句式替换句子润色她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。Shewasspeechlessandhappy,andheldhersontightlyintoherarms.Tearswelledinhereyes.Holdsbintoone’sarmsSpeechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.tearswellupinhereyes高级句式替换04续写赏析续写赏析Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedthestreets,searchingforthenailbagscarefully.Tosavemoremoney,heevendecidedtodeliverpapersintheearlymorning.Exhaustedandtiredashefelt,hestillstucktotheplan.Itwasthebroochin