人教版英语必修四新素养讲义Unit4Bodylanguage5SectionⅤWritingWord版含答案

SectionⅤWriting慰问信eq\a\vs4\al()文体感知1．慰问信是向对方表示关怀和慰问的信函。它是以组织或个人的名义向对方表示问候和关心的一种信函。2．慰问信的格式和一般英文信件格式相同，要明确慰问信的对象。3．明确文章结构：开头，表明写慰问信的原因；主体，向对方的遭遇表示同情并鼓励对方或表达自己想帮助对方的愿望或具体措施；结尾，表示写信者的良好祝愿或同情之心。4．语言要亲切、生动，感情要充沛、真挚。eq\a\vs4\al()增分佳句1．I’mshocked/sorrytohearthatyouareworriedaboutyourfigure/shape.听说你在为你的体型而忧虑，我感到很惊讶/抱歉。2．I’mwritingtoexpressmydeepsympathy/careforyou.我给你写信来表达我对你的同情/关心。3．Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow./Iknowthewayyoufeelverywellnow.我理解你现在的感受。eq\a\vs4\al()写作模板Dear××，I’msorrytoknowthat________(问题).Thetruthiseveryonewillexperience________，soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Herearethreeusefultips.First________(建议).Thisisagoodwayof________.Second,________(建议)．..Lastbutnotleast,________．Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.eq\a\vs4\al()写作要求(2019·大连高一检测)假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：1．健康的重要性；2.学生的任务；3.合理的建议。注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；参考词汇：stateofmind心态。eq\a\vs4\al()审题谋篇eq\a\vs4\al()词汇推敲1．减肥 loseweight2．多锻炼 get/takemoreexercise3．不健康的饮食习惯 unhealthyeatinghabits4．影响你正常的生活 affect/influenceyournormallife5．保持一个健康的心态 keepahealthystateofmind6．克服困难 overedifficultieseq\a\vs4\al()遣词造句1．完成句子①像你这个年龄的女孩希望看起来漂亮。这是很自然的。Younggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.Itisnatural．②对一个学生来说，学习是最先考虑的而容貌是其次。Forastudent,studyingisthefirstthingtoconsiderwhileappearanceisthesecond.③通过多锻炼以及改变不健康的饮食习惯来减肥是一个好主意。Itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingunhealthyeatinghabits.④最重要的是你要保持健康的心态，因为这有助于你的学习，而且有助于你克服节食中的困难。Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,asitwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouoveredifficultiesindieting.2．句式升级⑤合并句①Itisnaturalthatyounggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.⑥用非限制性定语从句改写句④Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,whichwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouoveredifficultiesindieting.eq\a\vs4\al()妙笔成篇DearXiaoWang，Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearXiaoWang，Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Itisnaturalthatyounggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.However,inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeauty.Forastudent,studyingisthefirstthingtoconsiderwhileappearanceisthesecond.Sodonotletothers’opinionsaffectyournormallife.However,ifyoudowanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingunhealthyeatinghabits.Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,whichwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouoveredifficultiesindieting.IhopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyouandI’mlookingforwardtoyournextletter.Yours，LiHua假定你是李华，从报纸上得知你的美国笔友James的家乡遭遇了飓风。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，给予关心和安慰。注意：1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJames，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearJames，Iwasgreatlyshockedtolearnthatahurricanetookplaceinyourhometownfromtoday’snewspaper.Iamwritingtoextendmydeepestsympathy.Itbrokemyhearttoseelotsofhomeshadbeendestroyedinthetragichurricane.Icanimaginehowdifficultthistimemustbeforyouandyourfamily.Butwherethere’slifethere’shope.Someorganisationsinmycountryarelaunching