2024届高考作文课件：如何从草稿到成文课件

磨刀不误砍柴工从草稿到成文OurSloganDon’tbeshy!Neversaydie!Justdoit!Try,try,try!Teachingaims：Learningaims:

1.leadstudentstoformagoodhabitofdrafting2.showstudentstheprocessofacompositionAbilityaims：1.howtomakeadraft2.necessitiesforagoodcompositionEmotionalaims:

1.buildupstudents’confidence2.getridofthefearofwriting总分15分，5个档次。文章内容和语言初步定其档次。词数<80或词数>120的减2分。内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6.书写较差影响交际，降低一个档次。高考作文命题组评分原则打草稿的四个关键步骤：审：内容要点（瞻前顾后）2.选：动词或动词词组（精挑细选）3.组：句式（灵活变化）4.连：关联词（恰如其分）5.誊（扮）：形容词，副词，插入语，变化语序书面表达五1.中秋节在中国农历的每年8月15日。2.我突然想到了一个好办法。3.骑自行车有利于身体健康。TheMid-Autumnfestivalfallsonthe15thoftheeighthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Agoodidea

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important--vitalbeautiful—appealing,charming2.短语优先:makefulluseof,beofgreatbenefittodoharmto,haveagreateffecton3.“具体化”词优先:Agoodteacherkind,patient,considerate,knowledgeable4.大纲词汇的衍生词优先:Undoubtedly,low-spirited,withgratefulnessWordsfailedme.RulesforAdvancedWords/PhrasesAdvancedSentencesClausesNounclause（名词性从句）Attributiveclause（定语从句）Adverbialclause（状语从句）5.Inversion（倒装）3.Emphasis（强调句）4.SubjuntiveMood（虚拟语气）2.Structuresdoingdonetodowith….6.Voices(语态)月亮当空，我们坐在一起吃月饼，水果，讲故事。2.汽车已经成为了一种受欢迎的交通工具，给我们生活带来很多方便。Withthebeautifulmoonupinthesky,Wesit

togethertoeatmooncakesandfruits,sharingourstories.Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,Carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.确定好谓语动词和非谓语动词Sittogethertoshareourstories,enjoyingmooncakesandfruits.母亲的健康每况愈下，我十分担心。Asmymother’shealthwentfrombadtoworse,Igotincreasinglyworried.Mymother’shealthwasbreakingdowndaybyday,whichworriedmemost.Whatworriedmemostis

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wearingglasses.实验楼坐落在校园中心

校园广场的西面是教学楼。学生宿舍的对过是我们学校的操场图书馆被一个小花园包围着。环境优美，是学习生活的理想之处。乘9,13路公交。假如你是武安三中学生李华，你的美国笔友想了解一下你就读学校的情况，请你写一份电子邮件作简要介绍。内容要点：1.学校布局和校园环境。2.到学校的乘车路线。Beinfrontof/behind/ontheleftstandliein

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liesinSurroundedby…,thelibrary…It’sapleasantplace,where…TakeNo.9,13buses,whichareaccessible…审（自己熟悉的表达）假设你是武安三中的学生李华，上周你和爸爸去看望了你们资助了两年的贫困学生小明。下面四幅图描述了事情的全过程，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。

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