Unit1WritingWorkshop课件高一英语上学期北师大版

写作课——私人电子邮件UNIT1LIFECHOICES

课前准备：课本，导学案，过关条，红笔和黑笔1.junior2.formal3.informal4.adapt5.gym6.moment7.presentation8.slide9.forward10.adapttosth.11.atthemoment12.lookforwardto(doing)sth.1.adj.低年级的2.adj.正式的，官方的3.4.vi.（使）适应5.n.体育馆，健身房6.n.某一时刻7.n.报告；陈述，说明8.n.幻灯片9.adv.向前；进展10.适应某事11.此刻，目前，眼下12.期待，盼望复习重点单词:(3mins)学习目标：1.通过学习例文，掌握电子邮件的结构及写作技巧。2.通过学习写作技巧，学会写电子邮件。LeadIn:Youaregoingtowriteanemailtoajuniorsecondaryschoolclassmateaboutyournewschool.1.Whoareyougoingtowriteto?2.Whatdoyouwanttotellhim/her?3.Whatdoyouwanttoknowfromhim/her?Now,let'sreadanemailtotalkabouthowtowriteapersonalemail.WriteanemailWriteanemailReceiverSubjectlineBodyDearMrsXu,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingto......Ihope...Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouasearlyaspossible.Allthebest!XXX自学指导1：阅读邮件并回答下面的问题。1.WhoisFangLan?WhyisWangYingwritingtoher?2.HowdoesWangYingfeelabouthernewschool?3.HowmanyaspectsdoesWangmentionaboutherschoolinherwriting?4.WhydoesWangYinghavetofinishthe

email?①FangLanisthewriter'sfriend.②Reasons:a.tosayhello;b.tosharehernewseniorsecondaryschoollifewithFangLan;c.toaskaboutFangLan'snewschoollife.Sheloveshernewseniorsecondaryschool.e.g.“Ilikethe'newme'”.She'sgotapresentationtomorrowandsheneedstofinishherslides.

自学检测1：Readtheemailquicklyandlabeltheelements(a-g)oftheemail.()()()()()()()cbefdag

a.endingandwishes

b.greeting问候

c.subjectline标题

d.reasonstofinishwriting

e.questionsabouttheotherperson

f.informationaboutone’sownlife

g.signature签名自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧1.写电子邮件的注意事项(1）明确对象定称呼：不同的对象可以使用不同的称呼，一般常用Dear…，如果彼此是比较熟悉的朋友，也可以用Hi…(2）明确目的定内容：如果是回信，应仔细阅读来信，有针对性地子以回复。(3）明确内容定时态和人称。自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧2.正文篇章结构(1)首段：开门见山表明意图。在邮件的第一段就要表明写信的原因，以及收到信的开心之情。(2)主体段：陈述事由。主体部分需要有针对性地对来信内容进行回复。(3）结尾段：礼貌地提出自己的愿望或希望。第一段主要写:

⑴_____________________________________________;⑵__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑶________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑷___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑸_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑹________________________________________________________________________简单的自我介绍,

如：I

amLiHua,whois...直截了当表明写信意图，如：①Iamwritingtoask...此次写信我想咨询一下……

②I'mwritingtoexpress...我写信是为了表达……表示关心与询问,如：①Howareyoudoingthesedays?最近在忙什么②Howareyougettingonthesedays?最近几天过得怎么样？③Howareyougettingonwithyourwork/studies?你的工作/学业如何？表示高兴,

如：①Iwassoglad/pleased/happytoreceiveyouremail.我很高兴收到你的邮件。②Iamgladtohearthat...我很高兴得知……③I'mverypleasedtotellyou...我很乐意告诉你……④Gladtoreceiveyourletterof1June.很高兴收到你六月一日的来信。表示感谢，如：①Thankyouforyourwonderfulgift/interestingemail.感谢你精美的礼物/有趣的邮件。②Iwanttosaythankyou...我想对你说谢谢你……表示歉意，如：①I'msorrythat...很抱歉……②I'msorrytolearnthat...很遗憾得知……自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧第二段是信的主题部分，注意审题，明确写信主要内容，为了使要点分明，最好使用诸如此类的词：①__________________________________________________________________;②___________________________________________________________________;③___________________________________________________________________;____________________________________________________________________;④___________________________________________________________________.⑤___________________________________________________________________________Firstly/Tostart(begin)with/Fisrtofall,weshould...

首先，我们应该……自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧Secondly/What'smore/Besides,it'sagoodhabitto...此外，……是个好习惯。Thirdly/Inaddition/Finally/Intheend/Lastbutnottheleast,youshould...最后，你应该……Isuggestyou...我建议你……You'dbetter...

你最好……第三段是结束段落，这段可以展示同学们的高情商，你可以向对方表达你的意愿，如__________________________________________________或结束书信的委婉理由，如__________________________________________,或表达你真诚的邀请，如________________________________________________________________________,或表达你的热情耐心，如_________________________________________________;最后一定要以这句经典的句型结束你的书信_______________________________________.

自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧Ireallyhopemyintroductionisofgreathelptoyou.

Imustgotodomyhomework,soIhavetofinish.Ifyouwanttoknowmore,don'thesitatetocontactme.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

温馨提示：1.

考试必须用书面英语，不可以hi,well,hello…等语言。2.如果你想拿作文高分，漂亮的书写和排版是标配。3.课后要求背诵并默写以上内容。

自学检测2：根据上面所学，完成下面的典题演练。假定你是李华，你的好朋友Tom在升入高中后感到学习压力很大。请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。内容包括：1．快乐学习，轻松减压；2．参加体育活动和听听音乐；3．多与同学交流。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。DearTom，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________