2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习专题五应用文写作先文体再添彩第二讲润色添彩“洋”气十足课件

第二讲润色添彩·“洋”气十足策略(一)

“包装”让词汇高端起来1．求新求变同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：①[2022·全国甲卷]Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayanimportantpartinglobalecosystem.→Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayacrucialpartinglobalecosystem.②[2022·全国乙卷]ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlymakeup18%and12%respectively.→ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%respectively.③[2021·全国乙卷]WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，moreandmorepeoplebecomeonlinelearners.→WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，anincreasingnumberofpeoplebecomeonlinelearners.2．求准求精写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。①[2021·全国乙卷]Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinebetter.→Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinemoreefficiently.②[2021·全国甲卷]Iamwaitingforyourearlyreply.→Iamwaitingforyourearlyreplyeagerly/witheagerness.3．短语优先恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。①[2022·全国乙卷]However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsunderstandEnglishbetter.→However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsgainadeeperunderstandingofEnglish.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Ibelievethatyourarrivalwillbeimportanttoourshow.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatyourarrivalwillbeofgreatsignificancetoourshow.③[2022·全国乙卷]Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,manywaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.→Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,awiderangeofwaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.◎针对训练1——升级加黑词汇①[2022·全国乙卷]ArecentsurveysuggeststhatmoststudentsbeinginterviewedtendtolearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs.________________②[2022·辽宁省联考二]Tomakeusknowtheimportanceoftheenvironmentprotection,ourschoolheldaspringtreeplantingactivityinthehillnearourschoollastSaturday.________________③[2022·全国甲卷]Countriesshouldteamupwithoneanothertomakepracticalplansregardingoceanprotection.________________④[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.________________⑤[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]Whenfeelingsad，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofgoodstories.________________themajorityofraiseourawarenessofworkoutoconsideration/accountdepressed;imaginative策略(二)

“换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。1．特殊句式，风景独好(1)运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：①强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”；②借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。◎针对训练2——对加黑部分进行强调①[2022·浙江省五校5月联考]Underyourprofessionalguidance,wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.→________________________________wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.②[2022·邯郸市一模]Wedidn'tgobacktoschooluntilnoonundertheguidanceofourteachers.→______________________wewentbacktoschoolundertheguidanceofourteachers.③

[2022·全国甲卷]Ibelievethatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.→I________________thatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.ItwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethatItwasnotuntilnoonthatdobelieve(2)运用倒装句，以示强调。在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：①“only＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装；②notonly...butalso...句子用部分倒装；③在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装；④表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。◎针对训练3——用倒装句式升级①[2022·全国甲卷]Oceansnotonlyprovideabundantresourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.→__________________________resourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.②[2022·湖南师大附中模拟二]Wecanmakegreatprogressinourprogressonlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently.→Onlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently____________________．Notonlydooceansprovideabundantcanwemakegreatprogressinourprogress③[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写]Theirfatherinstructedthemsopatientlythatthetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.→__________________________________thetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.④AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain__________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.Sopatientlydidtheirfatherinstructthemthatstandsanoldtemple(3)运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。◎针对训练4——句型转换①[2022·山东师范大学附中考前打靶]Whenyouprepareforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.→________________________，

youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.②Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.→____________________，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.WhenpreparingforthecompetitionIfpossible2．三大句式，编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句：◎针对训练5——句型转换①[2022·山东省德州市高三二模]TheactivitywilltakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.TheactivityaimstopromoteChineseculture.→Theactivity,______________________________，

willtakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.②[2022·武汉市模拟一]Variousactivitieshavebeenheld.Thepurposeofthemwastoraiseourawarenessofcampussafety.→Variousactivitieshavebeenheld,________________________________________campussafety.whichaimstopromoteChineseculturethepurposeofwhichwastoraiseourawarenessof③[2022·青岛市高三一模]MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m.InQingyuancommunityweweredividedintofivegroupstocarefortheelderlyandtellthemsomehealthknowledge.→MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m,____________________________________________andtellthemsomehealthknowledge.whereweweredividedintofivegroupstocarefortheelderly(2)运用名词性从句：◎针对训练6——补全句子①[2022·3月福州市质量检测]我十二岁生日，我最想要的是一辆新自行车。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,and__________________.②[2022·全国甲卷]不可否认，我们将共同努力，对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。______________________________________themarineenvironmentwithjoinedefforts.③[2022·深圳市高三二模]这次经历给我的教训是，只有勇敢地承担失败的全部责任，而不是指责别人，才能取得成功。______________________________________onlybybravelytakingfullresponsibilityforfailureratherthanblamingotherscanwesucceed.whatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycleThereisnodenyingthatwewillmakeadifferencetoThelessonIhavedrawnfromthisexperienceisthat(3)运用状语从句：◎针对训练7——补全句子①[2022·山东省淄博市二模]我们首先需要接受自己，因为这有助于我们承认自己的缺点。通过这样做，当我们遇到失败时，我们更有可能吸取教训。Weneedtoacceptourselvesfirstly______________________________.Bydoingso,wearemorelikelytolearnthelessons__________________．②[2022·济南市高三模拟]虽然这是一个非常简单的任务，但我很自豪，因为它在维持现场秩序方面发挥了重要的作用。__________________________，

Iwasveryproudofit______________________________maintainingtheorderofthescene.becauseithelpsusacknowledgeourshortcomingswhenweencounterfailuresAlthoughitwasaverysimpletaskbecauseitplayedanimportantrolein3．活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。◎针对训练8——用非谓语升级句式①[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]IrepresenttheEnglishprogramofourschool'sradiostation.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.→_____________________________ourschool'sradiostation,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016.Itaimedtoprovideagoodplatformforthestudentstosharetheirschoollife.→Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016,________________________________________tosharetheirschoollife.RepresentingtheEnglishprogramofaimingtoprovideagoodplatformforthestudents③[2021·全国乙卷满分作文]WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→_____________________________________，

wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet4．适时感叹，必要强调◎针对训练9——补全句子①[2020·全国Ⅱ卷满分作文]________________________(我们玩得多么开心啊)!Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷](早餐多么美味啊！)______________________！WhatawonderfultimewehadHowdeliciousthebreakfastwas策略(三)

“改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1．增加同位语或定语从句◎针对训练10——补全句子①[2022·南京市高考模拟卷一]I'mLiHua,________________________________(来自中国的交换生),andI'mlookingforaroommatetoco­rentaflatduringmystayintheUK.②[2022·潍坊市高三二模]Theydon'thaveenoughtimetoattendtotheoldpeopleintheirfamilies,________________________________(这已经成为社会的一个问题).(whois)anexchangestudentfromChinawhichhasbecomeasocialproblem2．列举具体的实例来补充说明①suchas.../like...将来，我认为我们学校可以提供一些活动。[2022·全国乙卷]Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasreadingbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudents'interestinlearningEnglish.②forexample/instance如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3．添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容◎针对训练11——补全句子①[2022·湖北省新高考协作体2月联考]MyclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.→__________________________________________________________(为了更好地理解历史课上的“中国古代发明”),myclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.②[2022·全国乙卷]AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking.→AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking________________________________________(这样他们就能培养自己的沟通技巧).Inordertobetterunderstand“AncientChineseInventions”inthehistoryclasssothattheycandeveloptheircommunicationskills③[2022·全国甲卷]Wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.→__________________________(只要我们尽力),wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.④[2022·湘潭市一模]However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits.→However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits_____________________________(通过吃垃圾食品和熬夜).⑤Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→________________________________________(知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣),Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.AslongaswetryourbestbyeatingjunkfoodandstayinguplateKnowingthatyouareinterestedinourCherishLifeactivity4．表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等◎针对训练12——补全句子①AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.→AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid______________________________________(因为我学到了耕种的知识).②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.→Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，______________________________________________________________(从中我学到，如果可能的话，我们应该帮助有困难的人).③[2022·焦作市第四次模拟]Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife，____________________________________(因为它使我享受劳动的乐趣).becauseIgotaknowledgeoffarmingexperiencefromwhichIlearnthatweshouldhelppeoplewhoareintroubleifpossiblebecauseitmademeenjoythepleasureoflabor策略(四)

“化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体