重点话题突破02助人善行义举类（读后续写高频主题分类）（讲义）高考英语一轮复习（新教材新高考）

►读后续写重点话题突破02助人、善行、义举1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型（2023·湖南师大附中校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThechainofkindnessTherainwascomingdownsohardthateachdropseemedtoexplodeasithittheroofofthecar.Tomlookedoutintothecoal-blacknight,strugglingdesperatelytokeephiscarontheroad.TherainbeatdowncontinuouslyandtheroadwasdesertedexceptforTomandhiscar.Tomcouldseehiswheelchairinthebackseatfromtherear-viewmirrorandquicklylookeddownathisthin,brokenlegs.Hecouldfeelafamiliarwaveofdespairstarttowashoverhim.Suddenly,aloudnoiseshookhimoutofhismomentofhopelessnessasthecarbegantobumpdowntheroad.“Great,”hethought,“aflattyre.”Withaheavysigh,Tombroughtthecartoastop,restinghisheadonthesteeringwheel,defeated!Afterafewseconds,helookedupandpeeredoutofthewindow.Inthedistance,hecouldseealighttwinklingintheblackness.WhenTomapproachedthehouse,ayounggirlaroundtenyearsoldwasstandinginthedoorway.Hepulledupandrolleddownthewindow.“Areyourparentsathome?”heshoutedoverthewindandrain.“IhaveaflattyreandIneedhelp.”“Waitaminute,”thegirlrepliedandwentintothehouse.Afewminuteslater,shereturnedwithanoldman.Thegirlheldhisarmandsmiledlovinglyupathim.Tomexplainedtheproblemtotheoldmanandadded,“Ineedhelpbecausemylegsareparalyzed.”Thewordscameoutflat.Buthedidnotknowhowelsehecouldconveythefactthatheneededhelpfromthisweakoldmaninthemiddleoftherainstorm.Theoldmansimplynodded.Theoldmanandthelittlegirlconcentratedontheirworkandtherainwassoakingthem.Onceagain,Tomcouldn’thelpbutfeelhewasuseless.Soontheoldmansteppedtothewindow.“You’reallset,”hesaid.Tomhandedsomemoneytotheoldman,buthemadenomovetotakeit.Finally,theyounggirlsaid,“Grandfatherisblind.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tomdidnotknowwhattosay.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inspiredbythechanceencounter,Tomstartedtoseeeverythingdifferently.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】

Tomdidnotknowwhattosay.Hejustgesturedtowardsthegirlandtheoldmanhelplesslyashestumbledthroughanexplanationthathewouldliketopaythemfortheirhelp.Thegrandfatherwavedahandandsaid,“Thereisnoneed.Justbecarefulaboutgettinghomeandcontinuethechainofkindness.”Tomgotbackontotheroad.Therainwasnowonlyalightmist,revealingtheroadahead.Ashedrovethroughthenight,hefoundhimselflookingforwardtothejourneyahead.Inspiredbythechanceencounter,Tomstartedtoseeeverythingdifferently.Hecontactedhisdoctorthenextdaytoseeifhecoulddosomethingtoincreasehismobility.Later,hepursuedhislong-lostdreamofbecomingateacherandreconnectedwithhisfamily.PerhapsTomwasdisabledinoneway,buthedecidedthathewouldnotletthisdefinewhohewasorwhathecouldaccomplish.Mostimportantly,hebegantolookforwardtoeachnewdayandviewitasanopportunitytohelpotherssothathecouldcontinuethechainofkindness.【情节分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述一天夜里双腿残疾的Tom独自一人驾车行驶在倾盆大雨之中，突然他发现他的车子爆胎了。Tom将车开到路边的一幢小屋求助。在那里，一个小女孩和她的爷爷冒雨为Tom修好了车。当Tom准备给这对爷孙钱以示感谢时，他发现爷爷竟然是一位盲人。【写作步骤】段落续写：①根据第一段首句“Tom吃惊得说不出话来”可知，下文可描写Tom付钱给老人，但被拒绝，老人告诉他可以把这份传递下去。②根据第二段首句“这件事让Tom大受鼓舞，他决定联系医生来改善自己的行动能力”可知，下文可描写Tom不再颓废，重拾自己的梦想，并努力将这份信念转化为有益于他人的行动。续写线索：吃惊——付钱——拒绝并叮嘱将爱心传递下去——受到鼓舞——不再颓废，重拾梦想——帮助他人【高分词汇】行为类①发现：find/feel/realize②联系：contact/getintouchwith③决定：decide/determine/makeupone’smind情绪类①善良：kindness/goodness②无助地：helplessly/hopelessly【高分句型1】Ashedrovethroughthenight,hefoundhimselflookingforwardtothejourneyahead.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Hecontactedhisdoctorthenextdaytoseeifhecoulddosomethingtoincreasehismobility.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）【高分句型3】Mostimportantly,hebegantolookforwardtoeachnewdayandviewitasanopportunitytohelpotherssothathecouldcontinuethechainofkindness.（运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句）2.（2023·湖北·开滦第二中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完善的短文。Markgrabbedhiskeys.Heneededtogetoutofthehousequickly.Hehadbeentryingtosaveasmuchmoneyaspossiblefromthegovernmentassistancehereceivedduetohisdisability,butitwasharderandharderwithpricesrisingdaily.Unfortunately,helosthalfhisrightarminacaraccidentseveralyearsago,anditwashardtofindanewjobinhistowninTampa,Florida.Helosthispreviousjobrecentlywhenthecompanywentbankrupt(破产).Fornow,heonlyhadthosegovernmentcheckskeepinghimfed,buthewastappingintohissavingsforeverythingelse,andtheywererunningoutfast.Oneofhisfriendshadgottenhimaninterviewandhewasonhisway.Butafterclosingandlockinghisdoor,Markturnedaroundandgottheshockofhislife.Apregnant(怀孕的)womanwaslyingonhislawn,and/hehadnoideahowlongshehadbeenthere.Hegrabbedhisphoneandcalled911quickly,andsuddenly,itstartedtorain.Finally,itcame,andheexplainedtothedoctorsthathehadtomoveherbecauseoftherain.“Don’tworry,sir.She’scold,soitwasgoodthatyoumovedher.Doyouknowthiswoman?”askedthedoctor.Markshookhishead.“CanIgiveyoumyphonenumber?Ifyoudon’tfindherfamilyoranyone,canyoucallme?MynameisMarkHiggins.”“I’llseewhatIcando,”thedoctorsaid,notingdownhisnumberandleavingwiththewoman.Markclosedhisdoorandsatdownonhiscouch,hopinghisheartwouldstopbeatingsofast.Suddenly,herememberedhisinterviewandlookedattheclock.Hewaslateforit.Hedashedtohiscar,prayingtheywouldwaitforhim.注意:1,续写词数应为150左右；2,请按如下格式作答。Hegotnocalls,whichmeanthisinterviewersprobablydidn’tlikehimduetohisbeinglate.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeinghislostrightarm,DavidcameupwithanideatorewardMark.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】

Hegotnocalls,whichmeanthisinterviewersprobablydidn’tlikehimduetohisbeinglate.Thefollowingday,Markcheckedhisphoneandsawnocalls,whichmeantthathisinterviewersprobablydidn’tlikehimduetohistardiness.Butonthebrightside,theyhadn’tcalledfromthehospitaleither,sotheymusthavefoundthepregnantwoman’sfamily.Hesatdownathiskitchentableandstartedbrowsinghisphoneforpossiblejobopeningswhenhisdoorbellrang.Heopenedthedoorandsawamansmilingwidelyathim.Heisthehusbandofthepregnantwoman,David,andtheylivenextdoortoMark.HecameovertoexpressgreatgratitudetoMarkforwhathehaddoneandofferedtorepayhim.Seeinghislostrightarm,DavidcameupwithanideatorewardMark.Davidisabiomedicalengineer.Hehasbeenworkinginthehospitaltomakeartificiallimbs.HewantstoprovideMarkwithaprostheticlimbforfreeasathank-yougift.TheywentbackandforthforawhileuntilDavidtoldhimitwouldhelphimtestthesenewdesignsonsomeone.Intheend,Markagreedbecauseitwasagenerousofferandcouldhelphimgetanewjobatsomepoint.Markhelpedtheunconsciouswomaninhisyard,eventhoughitmadehimlateforhisjobinterview.Butintheend,itwasthebestdecisionofhislife.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了马克因为救助自己院子中的一个孕妇，导致他面试迟到，但是孕妇的丈夫是个生物医学工程师，作为感谢为他提供了一幅免费假肢，帮助孕妇成为了马克一生中最正确的决定。【写作步骤】段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“他没有接到任何电话，这意味着面试官可能不喜欢他，因为他迟到了。”可知，第一段可描写马克需要重新寻找工作，这时孕妇的丈夫大卫来感谢他。②由第二段首句内容“看到自己失去的右臂，大卫想出了一个奖励马克的主意。”可知，第二段可描写大卫免费为他提供了一幅假肢。续写线索：准备去面试——看到孕妇——帮助孕妇——面试迟到——大卫来感谢他——提供假肢作为感谢【高分词汇】行为类①浏览：browse/lookthrough②提供：offer/provide③测试：test/examine情绪类①感谢：gratitude/appreciation/gratefulness②无意识的：unconscious/comatose/senseless【高分句型1】Thefollowingday,Markcheckedhisphoneandsawnocalls,whichmeantthathisinterviewersprobablydidn’tlikehimduetohistardiness.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Markhelpedtheunconsciouswomaninhisyard,eventhoughitmadehimlateforhisjobinterview.(eventhough引导的状语从句)（2023·河北保定·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheGreatestThanksgiving“Areyougoinggroceryshoppingtoday?”myhusband,RoyaskedwhenIpickedupthetelephone.“Iplanto,”Ianswered.Thanksgivingwasonlyacoupledaysaway.Everyoneinourfamilywouldbecomingtoourhouse.Myfundswerelimited,thereforemyboxofcoupons(优惠券)awaitedmeinthecar.IknewIhadtobecreativeinmyshoppingthatday.Ihadtostretcheverydollar.Forafewseconds,Roysatsilentlyontheotherendoftheline.“Whydoyouask?”Iuttered,fearingwhathemightsay.“Nancy,there’safamilywithahalfdozenkidsthatwillnothaveanythingtoeatforThanksgiving.Thelittleoneisonlyfiveyearsold.Whileyou’reatthestore,couldyoupossiblybuysomethingforthem?”Roy’swordsechoedinmyheart.Myheadbegantospin(眩晕)thinkingaboutthefiftydollarsIhadreservedforourfamily’sThanksgivingdinner.InthebackofmymindIcountedthehungryguestswhowouldbecomingtoourhousefordinner.Iputmyheaddownonmydesk,alreadyfeelingdefeated.There’snowaypossible,Ithought.ButthesympathyIheardinmyhusband’svoicestruckanerveinsideme.“Sure.”Ireplied.Ifinishedmyworkandprayedallthewaytothenearestgrocerystore.Theturkeyswereindeedonsale—29centsapound,butIdiscoveredonebigproblem.WhenIreadthesignpostedonthefreezerdoor,myheartsank.“Limitone.”“ButIneedtwo,”Iutteredtomyself,Idecidedtofindthemanager.Iexplainedtheproblem.Hemadeanexception.Aftertossingtwoturkeysinthecart,Ibeganmyshopping.Itwasamazinghowmanybuy-one-get-one-freeitemswerebeingfeaturedthatday.Inaddition,IhadalltherightcouponstogetexactlywhatbothfamiliesneededforaheartyThanksgivingdinner.Iheldmybreathwhilethecashierrangupmygroceries.Tomysurprise,Ihadenoughmoney.Iwasevenabletopurchaseapackageofcookiesforthefive-year-oldwhohadstolenmyheart,eventhoughIhadnevermether.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Laterthatafternoon,RoyandImadeaspecialdeliverytoahomefilledwithchildrenofallages._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnthatThanksgivingDay,myentirefamilyalsosharedaheartymealwithus.【范文模板】

Laterthatafternoon,RoyandImadeaspecialdeliverytoahomefilledwithchildrenofallages.Iwillneverforgetthesmilesonthesixkids’faces,astheymadeseveraltripsfrommycarcarryingnumerousbagsofgroceriesinside.Surprisedandexcited,theycouldn’twaittotalkabouttheirThanksgivingdinner.Meanwhile,thelittleonelitupatthesightofthecookies,jumpingwithgreatjoy.Theparentstightlyheldourhandswithwateryeyes,“Thankyouformakingourday.”OnthatThanksgivingDay,myentirefamilyalsosharedaheartymealwithus.Wehadplentytoeat.Weevenhadenoughfoodleftoverfortheeveningmeal.Thatafternoon,whenIhadtimetothinkaboutwhathadhappened,Iimaginedahome,notfarfromwhereIlived,wheretherewasamother,afatherandsixchildrensittingaroundthekitchentable,laughingandrejoicing.Theyenjoyedthesamemealthatourfamilyhadsharedtogetherthatday.RightthenIrealizedthatmiracleshappenwhenwestepoutinfaithandallthingsarepossible.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了在感恩节前几天，作者的丈夫打电话问她是否要去商店买感恩节用的东西，作者回答是，丈夫告诉作者有个家庭有六个孩子他们感恩节什么吃的都没有，所以问作者能不能给他们买点东西，虽然作者预留资金也不多，但是作者答应了。于是作者拿着预留资金和一堆优惠券去了商店，给自己和那家人买了东西。幸运的是，作者带的钱足以支付买的东西。【写作步骤】段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“那天下午晚些时候，罗伊和我专程把东西送到一个满是各个年龄段孩子的家里。”可知，第一段可描写作者和丈夫给这家人送东西，以及这家人的反应。②由第二段首句内容“在那个感恩节，我们全家也一起吃了一顿丰盛的大餐。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家有足够的吃的，以及作者对自己和丈夫给这一家人送东西的感受。续写线索：送东西——表现——感谢——全家吃大餐——作者感受【高分词汇】行为类①高兴起来：lightup/cheerup②考虑：thinkabout/consider③发生：happen/takeplace情绪类①惊讶的：surprised/amazed②兴奋的：excited/thrilled【高分句型1】Iwillneverforgetthesmilesonthesixkids’faces,astheymadeseveraltripsfrommycarcarryingnumerousbagsofgroceriesinside.（由as引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Thatafternoon,whenIhadtimetothinkaboutwhathadhappened,Iimaginedahome,notfarfromwhereIlived,wheretherewasamother,afatherandsixchildrensittingaroundthekitchentable,laughingandrejoicing.（由when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句，和where引导的宾语从句）【高分句型3】RightthenIrealizedthatmiracleshappenwhenwestepoutinfaithandallthingsarepossible.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）4.（2023·山东泰安·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mary’shusbanddiedafewyearsagofromanaccident.Tomakeendsmeet,shehadtotakeonseveraljobsandbringupherfivechildrenalone.Fortunately,heroldestchildrenunderstoodherandhelpedtolookaftertheyoungerkids.Maryalwaysfeltterribleaboutthat,buttherewasnothingshecoulddo.Shedreamedofhavingavantotransportgoodsforotherssothatshecouldhaveanothersourceofincome.Inthemornings,Marycleanedthehousesforsomefamilies,andworkedasacashieratasupermarkettherestoftheafternoon.Atnight,sheworkedatagasstation’sconveniencestore.Everynight,shecamehometired,andmostofthekidshadbeenasleepbythen.Oneafternoon,Marywaswalkingtothesupermarkettostartherdutywhenshesawanoldmanstaringatthewindowofthebakerynextdoor.Thesmelloffresh-bakedbreadpermeated(弥漫)theair.However,themanmerelysighedandstartedwalkingaway.Maryfeltawfulforsomeunknownreasonandstoppedtheman.“Hey,sir.IthinkI’veseenyoubeforeatthestore,”shesaid.“Yes.I’mHector.Nicetoseeyou,”theoldmannoddedatherandstartedtowalkaway.“Wait,doyouneedanything?”Marysaid,smilingkindly.“Honestly,therewasaleakinmyroofthismonth,andIhadtospendmyentiremonth’spension(退休金)onit.Idon’thavemuchmoneyfordesserts,”hesaid.“Idon’tknowwhenI’llbeabletobuysomeagain.”1．写作词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:MaryaskedHectortowaitandshewentintothebakery.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Oneday,MarysawanewvaninthedrivewaywithHectorstandingnexttoit.【范文模板】

MaryaskedHectortowaitandshewentintothebakery.SheboughtsomebreadforHector.“Hereyougo,”shesaid,handinghimthebagwhensheexitedthebakery.“Ican’tacceptthis,”hetriedtoreject,butMaryinsisted.“Please,letmedosomethingforyoutoday,”shecontinued.HectorthankedMaryandthenwalkedaway.Inthefollowingdays,MarywouldseeHectordailyandbringhimsomethingtoeat.Withtimegoingby,theybecamegoodfriends.Theyevenchattedabouteverythingwitheachother.Oneday,MarysawanewvaninthedrivewaywithHectorstandingnexttoit.“Surprise!Thisvanisyours!”Hectorsaid.Marycouldn’tbelievethat.“Mary,youhavehelpedmealot.Icanneverrepaythat,butIhadanoldwatch.Itwasworthaprettypenny,”hesaid.“Ican’ttakethis.Youneedmoney,too,”Maryrefused.“Acceptthevan,andyoucanquitoneortwoofyourjobstoaccompanyyourchildren,”Hectorsaid.MarywasdeeplymovedandshehuggedHectortightly,thankinghimforhiskindness.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Mary为了养家糊口，打了几份工，希望能有个送货的工作能节省出时间照顾孩子，一天遇到了一位身处困境中的老人，这次偶然的善意使她圆了自己的梦想。【写作步骤】段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“玛丽让赫克托等一下，然后她走进面包店”可知，第一段可描写作者进到店里帮Hector买了些面包，并经常去看望Hector，他们成为了好朋友。②由第二段首句内容“一天，玛丽在车道上看到一辆新面包车，赫克托站在旁边”可知，第二段可描写Hector帮助Mary买了一个货车，圆了她的梦想。Mary受到感动，感谢Hector的善良。续写线索：让Hector等待——Mary进店买面包——推辞——经常交流，成为好朋友——Mary看见新货车——Hector卖掉名表——圆梦、感动——拥抱【高分词汇】行为类①拒绝：reject/refuse②购买：buy/purchase③看望：see/visit/payavisitto情绪类①感动的：moved/touched②感谢某人：thanksbfor/showappreciationfor【高分句型1】Withtimegoingby,theybecamegoodfriends.（运用了with复合结构）【高分句型2】MarywasdeeplymovedandshehuggedHectortightly,thankinghimforhiskindness.（现在分词短语作状语）5.（2023·湖南常德·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThatyearIwastenyearsoldandmyfatherwasaway,leavingmymotherandmebehind.Mymotherwasasurgeonandworkedatthelocalclinicafewblocksfromwherewelived.Itwasanoisyandcoldwinter,when1learnedavaluable1esson.ThebellrangandthoughtsofChristmasweretheonlythingonmymind.Iracedhomefromschool.TheapartmentwasemptywhenIarrivedandanotewasattachedtotherefrigerator.Mymotherwasworkingadoubleshinandleftmeinstructionsfortheday.Ibecameangryandtorethenoteinseveralpieces.WehadplannedonmakingChristmasbiscuitstogether,butmymotherspoileditbyworking.IsuddenlyrealizedmymothermusthavehiddentheChristmaspresentssomewhereinherbedroom.Ihuntedthroughmother’scloset,findingthegiftsforChristmaswrappedbutone,amodelplane.AtthethoughtofmylonelinessonsuchanightIcouldn’thelpbutthrowitontothefloor,itswingsbroken.Istoodfrozenwithmyeyesandmouthwideopen,staringdownattheplane...Thenmymothercamethroughthedoorandsawtheplane.“Danny?”“Yeah,Mom?”“Icamehometotakethetoyplanetooneofmypatients,but...”shesaid,hereyesmovingfromthefloortome.Istoodsill,unabletocomeupwithagoodexplanationforthetoy’sruin.Thesilencewasterrible.Ididnothearmymotherscoldme.Shejustleanedagainstthewallwithhertiredbody.Afeelingofguiltfloatingintomymind,Igatheredmycouragetotellherthehorribletruth.Shehuggedmeandaskedmetoputmycoatonandfollowher.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Wepulledupatastore,andMotherhandedme5dollars._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withmecarryingthetoyplane,wecametoabedintheclinic._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】

Wepulledupatastore,andMotherhandedme5dollars.ForafewmomentsIjustfeltconfused.Motherexplainedthatherpatientwasaboy,wholovedplanes.Hisparentscouldnotaffordtobuyhimone,becausehewasseriouslyill,andtheyspentalltheyhad.Thewordsdeeplytouchedme.TearsrolleddownmyfaceandIwassoguilty.Ienteredthestoreandchoseaplanethatcostthetotal5dollarsfortheboy,notforme.Strangely,nowthoughtsoftheboyinsteadofChristmasweretheonlythingonmymind.Withmecarryingthetoyplane,wecametoabedintheclinic.Inthebedwastheboy,wholookedverysick.Seeingtheplane,theboygotexcited.Thearrivalofusandthetoyplanelituphisthinfaceandhistiredgrayeyes.Whenweleft,Icouldseetearswellingupintheboy'sandhisparents'eyes.Wegotoutoftheclinic.Thoughitwasalittlelate,theholidayspiritwasstillintheair.IfeltluckythatMothergavemeaspecialmemoryonthatholiday.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了圣诞节时，作者放学回家搜寻妈妈买的圣诞礼物，发现圣诞节礼物包得满满的，只有一件，一架飞机模型。作者很生气，忍不住把它扔到地板上，它的翅膀折断了。后来妈妈告诉他，这个玩具是给一个身患重病的小男孩的。然后作者和妈妈一起为小男孩重新选圣诞礼物的故事。【写作步骤】段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我们在一家商店停车，母亲递给我5美元。”可知，第一段可描写作者和妈妈买玩具。②由第二段首句内容“我提着玩具飞机，我们来到诊所的一张床前。”可知，第二段可描写作者和妈妈送玩具。续写线索：拿钱——选购——送——激动—感悟【高分词汇】行为类①流下：rolldown/streamdown②进入：enter/gointo③走出：getoutof/gooutof情绪类①困惑：confused/puzzled/ataloss②感动：touch/move【高分句型1】ForafewmomentsIjustfeltconfused.Motherexplainedthatherpatientwasaboy,wholovedplanes.（运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Seeingtheplane,theboygotexcited.（运用了现在分词作状语）【高分句型3】Thoughitwasalittlelate,theholidayspiritwasstillintheair.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句）（2023·江苏·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AnothertermhadstartedandIhadtoattendthefirstlectureofthenewcourse.Thelecturertoldustomakegroupsoftwostudentsforaproject.IlookedtotherightandtherewasmyclassmateJacksittingthere.AndIdecidedmyselfthathewouldbemygroupmember.Ontheleftside,therewasanolderwomanwhowasfromanopenuniversity.Wetalkedabouttheprojectanddecidedtomakeagroupofthree.Duringthebreak,shetoldmethat,lastyear,shedidn’tmanagetopassthecourse,soshewouldtryagain.Laterwegotanemailfromourlecturersayingitwasnotallowedtomakegroupsofthreestudents.Theoldladythentriedtofindsomegroups,butfailed.Iknewshewouldn’tfindothergroups,soItoldherthatwecoulddotheprojecttogether.IhadtosaygoodbyetoJack.Aftermanymeetings,wefinishedtheproject.Inthelastmeeting,ItoldherIhaddifficultyinfindingasummerjob.Iwaslivinginasmalltownandthereweren’tmanyjobsavailableandneitherhadIanypreviousexperience.Sheadvisedmetokeepdoingit,asonewouldfinallyanswersomeday.Shethenthankedmeforhelpingherandbeforeleavingshesaid“seeyou”.Twoweekslater,Igotanemailfromacompanysayingtheyhadreceivedmyjobapplicationanddecidedtocallmeforajobinterview.Iappearedfortheinterviewandansweredthequestionsinterviewersraised.Intheend,theyaskedmewhereIhadlearnedabouttheopenjobposition.Infact,IhadnoideasoItoldthemIdidn’trememberwell.TheycalledmethreedayslaterandtoldmeIcouldstartinMay.ThatwouldbethefirsttimeIwouldbeworkingasasoftwareengineerandIcouldn’tdescribewhatIfeltlike.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneday,IarrivedatworkandInoticedonefamiliarcar.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shetoldmethatshereallyunderstoodmeatthattime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】

Oneday,IarrivedatworkandInoticedonefamiliarcar.Theregistrationnumberandcolorweresomehowknowntome.IwascertainIhadseenthiscarbefore.Anyway,Iwentinsidethebuildingandopenedmylaptop.Atthismoment,Iheardsomeonesaying“Hi,howisitgoing?”.ThatladyIhadhelpedinuniversitywasinfrontofmyeyes.Isaid“Hi,wow,doyoualsoworkhere?”,shereplied“yes,Iworkhere.”Iwasinshock.Shetoldmethatshereallyunderstoodmeatthattime.BecauseshehadbeeninasimilarsituationwhenshewasyoungandthatIhadhelpedhersomuch,shetriedtoconvincehermanagertogivemeachance.WhenIaskedherwhydidn’tshetellme,shesaid:“Iactuallysaid‘seeyou’,didn’tyourealizeit?”Thatmoment,IrealizedthatmyattitudewasrightandIshouldkeepit,astheladysaid.Weshouldalwayshelpotherpeopleinneed.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加新课程的第一节课时，讲师让他们两人一组做一个项目，一开始他和他的同学杰克组成一个小组，后来有一个上年纪的女人一直没有找到组，讲师还不允许他们组成三人组，于是作者和这个女人组成小组，让杰克去另寻小组，最终他们完成了这个项目，女人给予了作者鼓励的故事。【写作步骤】段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“一天，我去上班，注意到一辆熟悉的车。”可知，第一段可描写作者在上班的地方又遇到他曾经帮助过的女人的经过。②由第二段首句内容“‘她告诉我，那时她真的很理解我。”可知，第二段可描写那个女人为什么和如何帮助作者的。续写线索：偶遇他曾经帮助过的女人——震惊——女人解释帮助作者的原因及经过——感悟【高分词汇】行为类①帮助：help/assist②说服：convince/persuade③保持：keep/maintain情绪类①确定的：certain/sure②震惊的：beinshock/shocked【高分句型1】ThatladyIhadhelpedinuniversitywasinfrontofmyeyes.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)【高分句型2】WhenIaskedherwhydidn’tshetellme,shesaid:“Iactuallysaid‘seeyou’,didn’tyou