【课件】Unit+1Reading+for+writing+课件人教版（2019）必修第一册

Writealetterofadvice

B1U1TeenageLife

ReadingforWritingLearningobjectives★1.Tolearnthenecessarypartsofaletter.★2.Togetstudentstoappreciate

aletterofadvice.★3.Tolearnusefulwritingmodule.★4.Toenablestudenttowritealetterofadvice.Asateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?generationgapwithparentspuppylovebeingaddictedtotheInternet/computergamesgreatpressurefromheavyschoolworkfeelinglonelyandhomesickinterpersonalrelationshipwithclassmateshighexpectationfromparentsandteachers......Step1Lead-inFacingtheseproblems,howwillyouseekforhelp?1communicatingfacetofacewiththepersonconcerned2turningtofriendsforhelp3askingforadviceonsocialmedia4writingalettertoaprofessionaladviser5ringinghelphotlines...Step1Lead-inChenLeiisaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.Let’sreadthepassagetoseehowwecanhelphim.1.Findouttheorganizationoftheletter.DateGreetingCloseSignatureBody

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C.2.Markthebodypartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.B.3.WhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?4.WhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?5.Besidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?Shetalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.

reasons②③①Step2ReadingConsiderate&

CourteousConcrete&ConvincingLanguageFeaturesWhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousetomakesuggestions?Circlethemintheletter.作者：Anadviser4-SquareMethodIknowwhattheproblemis.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.1234体裁：Narrative主题：Offeradvice读者：QuestionerIunderstandquitewellthat...Youwrotethat...Iamsure...ExtractsomeusefulexpressionsfromthesampleletterIrecommendthat...Itisnotunusualforyouto...Ithinkyoushould…Thinkdeeper123Whatwouldyousaywhenyouwanttoshowempathy（共情）?Whatexpressionswillyouusewhenyougiveadvice?Whatwouldyousaywhenyouendtheletterofadvice?Q1:WhatwouldyouNOTsaywhenyouwanttoshowyourunderstanding?1.Youhaveeveryrighttofeelupsetaboutthat.2.Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeellonelyandupsetwhen...3.It’stotallynormaltofeelthisway.4.Howcanyouhavesuchafeeling...NotconsiderateQuizQ2:WhatexpressionswillyouNOTusewhenyougiveadvice?1.IfIwereyou,Iwould...2.Whynot...?Ifyoudothis,youarelikelyto...3.Ifeelthatitwouldbehelpfulif...4.Youmustdo...5.Youmightaswell...NotcourteousQuizQ3:WhatwouldyouNOTsaywhenyouendtheletterofadvice?1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.2.Whateveryoudecidetodo,it’syourchoice!3.Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionspracticalanduseful.4.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.NotcourteousQuizHowtoorganizealetterofadvice?Step3Pre-writing建议信分成三段Para1第一句：很抱歉你遇到了…问题第二句：非常理解你的感受，我的建议如下Iamsorrytohearthat+问题,soI’mwritingto…Iunderstandquitewellthat…I’llgiveyoumysuggestionsbelow.Para2:(主体)建议+原因(两三个建议+原因:语气委婉/亲切、用词准确、内容具体详细)建议的表达①Irecommendthatyou(should)do…(+原因)③Whynotdo+建议?(+原因)④Ithinkitagoodideathat建议(+原因)⑤Inmyopinion,itiswisetodo+建议(+原因)⑥IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo+建议(+原因)多个建议应该如何串连起来呢？Part2:(主体)建议+原因（建议与建议之间用过渡词串起来）分点叙述过渡词（conjunctivewords)不要直接用序号1.2.3.第一点建议：firstofall,tobeginwith第二点建议：moreover,what’smore,inaddition第三点建议：besides,atlast,finally,lastbutnotleastPart3:(ending)wish/hope+期待回复①Ihopethatmysuggestionswillbeofgreatuse/helptoyou.②Iamsurethat(youcould…)③IwillbegladifyouconsidermytipsLearntowrite

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structure:Writingmethod:Emotionalresonance(情感共鸣)Writing:Differentwaysofofferingsuggestions.Goodexpressions.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Iknowwhattheproblemis.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).134Iunderstandhowyoufeel.2体裁：Narrative主题：Offeradvice读者：Questioner作者：AnadviserIrecommendthat…Ithinkitagoodideathat…Whynotdo…?Inmyopinion,itiswisetodo…SummaryIfIwereyou,Iwould…Step4Writing【2019年高考全国卷Ⅱ应用文试题】

假如你是李华，你的朋友James来信说，随着高考的临近，学习和心理压力日益加大，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰

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提出建议并说明理由。【审题】体裁：人称：时态：内容：Para1:

写信原因及目的：

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。Aletterofadvice第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)为主一般现在时/一般过去时得知你（James）的问题，表达理解和安慰，故写信给建议提出2个建议，并说明理由希望+祝愿【Translation】Para1：①很遗憾听到你很焦虑，这影响了你的学习和生活(定语从句)，所以我写信是想看看我能不能帮上忙。短语affectstudiesandlife影响学习和生活看看能不能帮上忙seeifsb.canhelpI'msorrytohearthatyouareanxious,whichhasaffectedyourstudiesandlife,soI’mwritingtoseeifIcanhelp.②我很理解你感觉很糟糕。下面是我的建议。短语understandquitewellthat…非常理解…感觉很糟糕Iunderstandquitewellthatyoufeelterrible.I'llgiveyoumysuggestionsbelow.feelterriblePara2：③首先，为什么不通过制定适当的学习计划和锻炼来保持学习和休息之间的平衡呢？短语tobeginwith首先保持学习和休息之间的平衡制定适当的学习计划KeepabalancebetweenstudyandrestmakeaproperlearningscheduleTobeginwith,whynotkeepabalancebetweenstudyandrestbymakingaproperlearningscheduleanddoingexercise?④只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。通过这样做你会发现自己更放松。短语findyourself…发现自己…AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Youwillfindyourselfmorerelaxedbydoingso.⑤此外，我建议你与亲密的朋友或老师交谈，以获得鼓励。短语recommendthatsb.(should)dosth.建议某人做…获得鼓励getencouragementInaddition,Irecommendthatyoutalkwithclosefriendsorteacherstogetencouragement.Para3：⑥我希望我的建议对你有用。期待你早日答复。短语beofgreatusetosb.对…有用期待你早日答复Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofgreatusetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.【Draft】DearJames,

I'msorrytohearthatyouareanxious,whichhasaffectedyourstudiesandlife,soI’mwritingtoseeifIcanhelp.Iunderstandquitewellthatyoufeelterrible.I'llgiveyoumysuggestionsbelow.

Tobeginwith,whynot

keepabalancebetweenstudyandrestbymakingaproperlearningscheduleanddoingexercise?AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Youwillfindyourselfmorerelaxedbydoingso.Inaddition,Irecommendthatyoutalkwithclosefriendsorteacherstogetencouragement.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofgreatusetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganizedingoodorder?Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?Isthehandwritingeasytoread?

Usethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyourpartner'sdraft.ChecklistEvaluation

Step5AssignmentsPolishyoupassagewiththeskillswehavelearntthisclass.1askforsomeadvice2beworriedabout3playcomputergam