Unit4Livingwithtechnology(写作指导宝库万能模板实战演练)高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020选择性）

Unit4Livingwithtechnology单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度新闻报道 科技生活新闻报道是应用文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。新闻报道一般由标题，导语，主体及结语四个部分组成。1)标题是新闻的题目，是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括和提炼；2)导语往往为全文的中心句（topicsentence），主要讲清what（事件），when（时间），where（地点）和who（人物）；3)主体要补充事件的过程和细节，往往包括why（目的或原因）和how（具体过程）等。写新闻报道时，应保证事件的真实性、准确性、及时性。语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。结语要谈对事件或活动的认识或评价。[基本框架]Para.1活动基本情况一（活动的目的、举办方、时间、地点等）Para.2活动基本情况二（活动的参与人员、内容等）Para.3活动的结果(成功)+活动的重要意义【应用文素材话题词块】1.innovation创新2.science科学3.technology技术4.shopping5.highspeedrailway高铁6.artificialintelligence（AI）人工智能7.bigdata大数据8.abilitytoinnovate创新能力9.scientificandtechnologicalinnovation科技创新10.scientificandtechnologicalprogress科学技术进步11.modernizationofscienceandtechnology科学技术现代化12.haveamajorinfluenceonpolitics,theeconomy,andsociety对政治、经济、社会有重要影响【读后续写话题佳句】Asisknowntous,smartphoneshavebeeanimportantpartinourdailylife.Weneedthemtochat,tosurftheInternetaswellasentertainourselves.众所周知，智能已成为我们生活中重要的一部分。我们用聊天、上网、娱乐。Buttheproblemisthatanumberofmiddleschoolstudentsaregrowingincreasinglyaddictedtophones.但是问题是许多中学生沉溺于。3．However,nomatterhowattractivetheInternetis,weshouldn’tbeseparatedfromourlovedones.Therefore,weshouldstopsurfingtheInternetandspendtimewithourfamilies,enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether.然而，无论网络对我们的吸引力有多大，我们都不应该与我们所爱的人分开。因此，我们应该停止上网，与家人在一起享受美好的时光。4．Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoderntechnologybringsusconvenienceandfortinlife.毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适。5．Acellphonecanmakemekeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilywhile

theInternetcanprovidemewithalmostallinformation.能让我与朋友和家人保持联系，同时网络可以提供给我几乎所有的信息。6．Mostimportantly,thewideuseoftheputerhasbroughtusmoreconvenienceinourlives.最重要的是，电脑的广泛应用已经给我们的生活带来了更多的便利。【必备短语】旨在…/目的是…/为了….

Inorderto/Aimingtodosth;

Aimedat/Targetedat/Intendedfor;

Withthepurpose/aimof;

Forthepurposeof/Forsakeofdoingsth

具体目的：增长见识

enrichourextracurricularlife/broaden/widenourhorizons/openoureyestoawiderworld

提供平台/渠道/全新角度

offerusaplatform/achannelto;

renderusabrandnewdimensionto…

深入志愿服务/探索未知领域

probeintovoluntaryservice/todiginareasbeyondknowledge

深入了解deepen/promote/enhanceourunderstandingofalibrarian’sresponsibility

getadeeperinsightinto…/gain/obtain/enrichtheknowledgeaboutorganizingandpublicizing(宣传)

体验魅力

experience/appreciatethecharm/fascinationofjoininghandsinhelpingothers

培养劳动意识和奉献精神

cultivate/fosterstudents’senseoflaborandspiritofdedication

描写活动过程

First/Tobeginwith，….Then，….Lastly,…

Thehighlightshouldbe…

Theactivitybegan/startedwith…,followedby….

Weendedthedayby…

Thereweremanyactivitiesheld,rangingfrom…to…Thevariousactivitiesheldrangedfrom…to…

Whatimpressedusmostwasthat…Themostthrilling/challenging/strikingpartcamewhen…

具体劳动项目参与义务劳动

participatein/getinvolvedin/engageoneselfinvoluntarywork

彻底打扫图书馆

cleanupthelibraryfromtoptobottom

归置书本到书架

sortthebooksandlaythemoutontotheshelves

设计张贴海报

designandputupposters

【句式积累】Thisactivityisofgreatsignificance.

Notonlydoesthematchpromotethefriendshipbetweenusbut

alsoitarousesthestudents’

interestinsports.Thoughtheschoolteamlostthegame,thevalue/essenceofthe

petition

liesnotinvictorybut

thefriendshipdevelopedbetweentheschools.Itissuchameaningfulandunforgettablematch,asbothteamshavenotonlyrealizedtheirstrengths

andweaknessesbutalsodeveloped/strengthened/built/establishedaclosefriendship.【谚语积累】1、抓科技必须同时抓教育。Graspthetechnologymustgrasptheeducationatthesametime.2、富人靠科技，穷人靠变异。Scienceandtechnologytherichandthepoorbymutation.3、科技引领时代，与时俱进。Leadingtheeraofscienceandtechnology,advancingwithTheTimes.4、科技就是，创造与毁灭的共生体。Isthescienceandtechnology,creationanddestructionofsymbionts.5、虚拟的科技把我们心中的梦想实现。Virtualtechnologytothedreamsofourheart.6、高科技的发展又确实是一柄双刃剑。Thedevelopmentofhightechisbothablessingandacurse.7、一个尊重商业和科技的社会总是会进步的。Arespectforthebusinessandtechnologywillalwaysprogressofsociety.8、很多纯朴的东西，在科技更新的年代里淹没。Alotofsimplethings,submergedinthescienceandtechnologyupdates.9、新时代的科技让所有人情世故都像过眼烟云。Aneweraofscienceandtechnologytoletalltheworldislikethepassingclouds.10、在这个高科技时代，人跟人之间几乎没有距离。Inthehightechera,almosthasnodistancebetweenpeopleandpeople.【万能写作模板】写作模板Inorderto

____活动目的____

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a____活动名称___

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attractedmuchinterestfromstudentsandeveryoneislookingforwardtonextyear’s

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____活动意义1_____

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___活动意义2_____.

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____活动反响____.Itwasa

rewarding

day.（尾段表达活动的反响和意义）2021·6月浙江卷昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.观展感受；3.推荐观展。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】lnordertoenrichstudents’afterschoollife,anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollibrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoenableyouunderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,everystudentisweletovisit.（2022·陕西咸阳·高三期末）中国的传统文化博大精深源远流长。国潮兴起的背后是中国制造水平的提高，是民族自信的提升。为弘扬中华传统文化，上周五你校举办了“国潮文化节”。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的：2.活动内容；3.活动影响。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditionalculture,theChinaChicCulturalFestivalwasheldonourschoolplayground.Asisannounced,theterm“ChinaChic”characterizestheriseofChina’snativefashiontrends.//Ithasexpandedtheconceptof“MadeinChina”,whichisusuallyregardedastheassuranceofthequalityofproducts.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）Thefestivalwasmadeupofmanykindsofmeaningfulactivities,includingfashionshow,Hanfudesignandsoon,whichwereallaimedatraisingthestudents’senseofnationalpride.//Havingfiredourpassion,theeventbecameasuccess.（运用了现在分词作状语）Afterthefestival,allthestudentswereproudofbeingaChineseandlivinginsuchapeacefulcountry.【词汇积累】弘扬：developandexpand→promote由……组成：bemadeupof→consistof各种各样：manykindsof→varietiesof活动：activities→events【简单句变复合句】原句：LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditionalculture,...拓展句：LastFriday,inordertodevelopandexpandtraditionalculture,theChinaChicCulturalFestivalwasheldonourschoolplayground,whichhadanimportantimpactonus.1．（2022·全国·高三专题练习）假定你是李华，10月27日下午，你校举办了一个二手书市活动，书市吸引了各个年级的同学们踊跃参加，请你为本次书市写一篇英文新闻报道。内容包括：1.活动目的、时间和地点；2.活动情况；3.对本次活动的评价。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得透露学校名称；4.标题已给出，不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Aimedatprovidingaplatformwherestudentscanhaveachancetoexchangeandmakegooduseoftheirbooks,ontheafternoonofOct.27th,asecondhandbookfairwasheldonthecampussquareofourschool.//Thefairattractedahugecrowdfromtheentireschool,whosold,purchased,andexchangedtheirsecondlandbookswiththeirpeers.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)//Atthefair,therewerebooksondiversetopics,includingsomehandwrittennotesfromseniorstudentswhichappealedtomanyfreshmen.Mostbooksweresoldatalowerprice.Manystudentsgottheirfavorite.Thebookfairnotonlymotivatesstudentstofurtherdevelopgoodhabitofreading,butalsoraisespublicawarenessofgreencampusandenvironmentalprotection.Everyonemustbenefitalotfromit.【词汇积累】机会：chance→opportunity吸引：attract→draw→appeal购置：buy→purchase意识到：beawarenessof→realize【简单句变复合句】原句：Mostbooksweresoldatalowerprice.Manystudentsgottheirfavorite.拓展句：Mostbookswhichmanystudentsgotweresoldatalowerprice.2．（2022·江苏·高三阶段练习）假定你是李华,为了丰富学生的暑假生活,你所在的社区提供了丰富多彩的托管服务活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括：1.活动的目的；2.活动的内容；3.活动的反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】//Toprovidebothenrichmentandchildcare,mymunityorganizedaseriesofactivitiesduringthesummerholidays.(运用了不定式做目的状语)//Schoolchildrenwerepletelyimmersedintheextracurricularcourses,rangingfromjudo,baking,musicandchesstoputerprogramming,whichwereonofferforstudentsattendingdaycareprogramsduringsummervacation.Thekidsrantowardeachotherwithopenarmsintheplayground,beautifulmelodiesfloatoutoftheclassrooms,andthewholeclassroomwasenvelopedbythetantalizingaromaoffreshlybakedcookies.Theprogrammeswhichhavebeenwellreceived,haverelievedburdenforbothparentsandchildren.【简单句变复合句】原句：Theprogrammeshavebeenwellreceived.Theprogrammeshavealsorelievedburdenforbothparentsandchildren.拓展句：Theprogrammeswhichhavebeenwellreceivedhaverelievedburdenforbothparentsandchildren.3．为了增强学生的劳动意识，你校组织学生改造了校园内的一处废弃花园。请你就此给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1．活动时间与地点；2．活动内容（除草、种花等）；3．活动的意义。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Toraisestudents’awarenessoflabor(劳动意识),ourschoolorganizedanactivitytorebuildadeserted(废弃的)gardenoncampus(在校园)lastFriday.Over60studentsfromeachclasstookanactivepartintheactivity.On/Uponarrivingatthegarden,allthestudentsweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsiblefor(负责)weedingthegardenandtheothergroupwasinchargeof(负责)plantingflowers.Afteroneandahalfhours’hardwork,theactivitycametoanend(结束).Tiredasthestudentswere,theyhadgreatfunandsenseofachievement.Theactivitywasthought/spokenhighlyof(被高度评价)byalltheparticipantsandturnedout/provedtobe(结果是/证明是)agreatsuccess.Notonlydoesitofferstudentsanopportunitytogetclosetonature,butitalsomakesstudentsrealizetheimportanceoflabor.重要句型必背1.On/Uponarrivingatthegarden,allthestudentsweredividedintotwogroups.一到达花园，所有学生就被分成两组。on/upondoingsth一...就介词短语结构在句中作时间状语，相当于时间状语从句Assoonastheyarrivedatthegarden,allthestudentsweredividedintotwogroups.(assoonas一...就)2.Tiredasthestudentswere,theyhadgreatfunandsenseofachievement.尽管学生很累，他们玩得很开鑫并且很有成就感。Tiredasthestudentswere为as引导的让步状语从句，形容词放句首需倒装，相当于让步状语从句Although/Thoughthestudentsweretired,theyhadgreatfunandsenseofachievement.3.Notonlydoesitofferstudentsanopportunitytogetclosetonature,butitalsomakesstudentsrealizetheimportanceoflabor.它不仅提供给学生一个亲近自然的机会，而且使学生意识到劳动的重要性。Notonly放句首需用倒装，倒装结构为notonly+助动词+主语+行为动词或notonly+be动词+主语：Notonlydoesitbuildupourbody,butitalsoenrichesourschoollife.它不仅强健我们的身体，而且也丰富我们的校园生活。Notonlyisheascientist,butheisalsoafighter.他不仅是位科学家，也是一名战士。(2020山东高考真题）假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野