读后续写练习写作讲义 高三英语一轮复习

试题原题第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Inhighschool,Iwasastraight

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Astudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedto（受到......折磨）peerpressure.Wantingtobe“cool!”，Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.

InJune,Iworkedpart-timeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,oneco-workerofferedmehisdriver’slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I’dseenfriendswalkintoliquor（酒）storeswithfakelicensesandcomeoutcarryingatwelve-packofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.

Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kai

askedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,

“IDo.”

Witheveryone’sadmirationandKai’stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.

Imanagedto

buyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback.“You’retheman,”

someonesaidto

me.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.

Thelast

nighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,

the

“IDman”

tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,

IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn’tokay.”

Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious.注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.

写作分析1.主要人物☞

I：曾经是一个优等生，但为迎合同伴，用他人的驾照去买酒，导致其中一位同伴喝醉出现情况☞

Kai：newfriend，提议用他人的驾照买酒喝☞Cristian：overlydrunk&almostunconscious2.前文情节我一直来都是优等生，但是为了迎合同伴的好感，在一家饭店兼职时候的一个同事把他的驾照给我，让我好好享受在魁北克的生活。之前也看到过有人用他人的驾照买酒喝，接过同事的驾照后，虽然也对自己说不会用于买酒的，但我这个人太容易被“劝说”。于是，新朋友Kai提议说用驾照去买酒喝的时候，我不知道怎么的，就答应了。当晚，当我们都沉静在快乐中的时候，Kai焦急地跟我说Cristian喝醉了，近乎失去了知觉。于是，......3.续写安排第一段：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.①（与前一句衔接）Cristian当时的情况如何②我们做了写什么③（与下文开头句衔接）当天晚些时候我对此事的反思第二段：Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.①（与前一句衔接）我主动说出了事情的真相②我受到怎样的处理③（主题升华）在此事中应该吸取怎样的教训

下水文

Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.What’sworse,heseemedtobetotallyunconscious,handsandlegsstretchingstraightandeyesopenedwide.Peopleonthescenewereshocked,notknowingwhattodo.Afewseconds’

blankmind,Icalledtheambulance.KaiandIsentCristiantothenearesthospital,worryingalltheway.Fortunately,nothingwasseriouslywrongwithhim.Afteraquicktreatment,hewentbacktohislifeanddidn’thaveanybadresults.Butlaterthatday,theguiltywasalwaysdisturbingme,whichkeptmefeelinggreatregretforwhatIhaddone.(94words)

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.Beforeheasked,ItoldhimwhathadhappenedandpromisedthatIwouldneverdosuchsillythingsagain.TherecamethepunishmentthatIlostthechancetojoinintheprogram,whichwaslessseverethanwhatI’dexpected.However,theprogramdirector’swordswerestillechoinginmyears:neverdothingsthatyouthinkarewrongjusttopleaseothers.Ireturnedthelicensetotheco-workerwithoutanyhesitationandpromisedtomyselfthatbeforedoinganything,Iwouldthinktwiceaboutitwhetherit’sworthdoing.(93words)参考范文

Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Seeinghispaleface,Istiffened,totallynotknowingwhattodo.Luckily,someonecalled911andCristianwaspulledintotheambulance,andIsawhisunconsciousfacedroopingoverthewhitesheet.IhadneverseenasituationlikethisbeforeandIwasguilty,notonlyforbuyingthebeerbutalsofortherisksIputhimat.LaterIwastoldCristian’sconditionwasserious,butfortunatelyhedidn’tsufferanypermanentdamage.Thewholenightfoundmetossingandturning,worryingaboutthemessIhad

caused.（93words）

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.HeaskedifIboughtthealcohol.Iknewthattherewasnopointindenyingthetruth.SoIadmittedeverythingthathappened.Likeacaughtcriminal,Iwasovercomewithshame.MypunishmentwasmuchlessthanwhatIdeserved:Iwasmerelyexpelledfromtheprogram.Backhome,Ishreddedthefakedriverslicenseandthrewitaway.Throughthisexperience,Ileanedanimportantlesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjustbecausesomeoneelseistellingyoutoanddon’tsacrificeanyone’swell-beingtogaintheapprovalof

others.（95words）读后续写第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheannualHalloweenarrived,duringwhichkidsdressedintraditionalclotheswenttoneighbor'shousestoaskforcandy.Allisonlivedinasmalltown.Thatdayafterdinner,Allisonputonherdressherfatherhadjustboughtforher.Thedresswascheapandsecond-handbecauseherfamilywaspoor.ButAllisonstillthankedherdadandsaid,"Everyonewilllovemydress!"Then,sheleftforneighbors’housestoaskforcandy.Ontheway,shecameacrossAnnaandherfriendsandwantedtojointhem."No!Lookatyourdress!It'sugly!"Annasaid.Herfriendsalsolaughed."Lookatourdresses,especiallymine!It'snewandbeautiful,"Annaadded.Herfriendsnodded,andinsomewaytheywereright.Anna'sdresswasshinyandlookedexpensive.Shealwayshadthebestclothesbecauseherparentswererich.Allisonwasshockedandsad.Thekidsnotonlydislikedherdressbutmadefunofit."Youcan'tcomewithus!"Annastressed.“Wewouldneverhangoutwithyou!"Theotherkidsagreedandlaughed.TheyalllefttostartcollectingcandyforthenightwhileAllisonwasleftalone,embarrassedinthemiddleofthestreet.Anyway,sheknewalltheneighbors.Sheoftenhelpedaroundcarryingtheirgroceriesandhelpingthemwiththeirgardens.Peoplearoundthereknewher.Shedidn'tneedtohangoutwithAnnaorherfriends."I'llgojustalone,"thelittlegirlsaidtoherselfandstartedwalking.SheaswellasAnnaandherfriendswalkedinthesamedirection:towardstheirfirstneighborMrsVaughan'shouse.ButAllisonwalkedbehindandkeptherdistancefromthem.AndshestoppedwhenAnnaandherfriendswerenearMrsVaughan'shouse.Justthen,MrsVaughanlookedoutofherwindow.ShenoticedthatAllisonwasbeingexcludedbyAnnaandherfriends.SheknewitwasprobablybecauseofAllison'spoordress.SheimmediatelyfeltpityforAllison,whooftenhelpedherandotherneighbors.ShedecidedtogiveAllisonmuchmorecandyasarewardandteachAnnaandherfriendsalesson.参考答案:WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.Thegirlsgreetedher,showedofftheirbeautifulclothesandaskedforcandy.MrsVaughan,whoheldabagofsweets,askedthemtowaitforamoment.Then,shewavedtoAllison,callingout,“Dear,comehere!”WhenAllisoncame,MrsVaughansaid,“Oh,howbeautifulyouaretoday!”Then,shegaveAllisonmostofhercandyalthoughthegirldeclined.WhenAllisonwalkedaway,MrsVaughandividedtherestofthecandyamongAnnaandherfriends,whowerealittleangryandconfused.(87)Annalookedupandsaid,“Ourclothesaremorebeautiful!ButyougaveAllisonmorecandy!Why?”MrsVaughanlookeddowncalmlyandexplainedthatAllisonwasalwaysfriendlytoneighbors.“Shehasgreatinnerbeauty.Innerbeautyismoreimportant.Whynotbefriendswithher?”MrsVaughanadded.Hearingthat,Annaandherfriends’facesturnedredandtheyrealizedtheyhaddonesomethingwrong.TheysaidgoodbyetoMrsVaughan,caughtupwithAllison,andsincerelyinvitedAllisontojointhem.Allisonnoddedgladlyandhadnewfriends,whowouldnolongerjudgeherbyherclothes.(85)下水作文:WhenAnnaandherfriendsknockedonherdoor,MrsVaughanopenedit.“Trickortreat?!”amixtureofjoyouscriesandmischievousyellspoundedhereardrums.Annaandherfriendsstoppedherinthedoorway,eyesgluedtothecandybaginherhand.Asdesigned,MrsVaughangavet