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情景作文

写作评分细则内容全面，七个数据都有正确表述，并且有必要的过渡语言和适当的细节支撑，写出了自己的看法，语言流畅，定为第二档（15-17分）。根据语言质量决定是否升档或降档；漏写一个数据，一般应定为第三档（12-14分），根据语言质量决定是否升一档或降档，但若漏写饼状图关键数据“不信任40.34%”则定为四档；漏写两个数据，一般应定为第四档（6-11分），根据语言质量决定是否升一档或降档；漏写三个数据，定为第四档中、低分段。根据语言质量决定档内中、低分或是否降档；漏写四或五个数据，定为第五档（1-5分）。视语言质量，决定档内高、中、低分段；只写出两个数据，给2分；只写出一个数据，给1分；一.审题：

假设你是红星中学高中学生李华，最近，你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调查，结果见下图。请根据图示提供的信息给某英文报纸写信，反映调查的实际情况，并寻求建议。二.情景作文题目要求分析

介绍调查结果——全面描述四个数据(要点1-4）；注意陈述的逻辑性，避免语言重复。关键词语——认为……Believe,think,holdtheopinion/viewthat…isthemaincause,此文内容为反映问题，所以上述词可以引申为:Complainabout,blame…forthis,consider…asanotherfactor,其它词汇的处理本文共有四个数据需要处理72%：burden,heavy,stressful16%:support,infavorof8%:opening-time/hours,short,notenough4%:highprice/costof,can’tafford,stop改错Therehasalotofstudents,about72%Onlyhave4%ofthestudentsthink…16%studentsThelibraryonlyhavelessbooksTherearesomepeoplethinkthelibrarynotoftentobeopenThelibrarybooksinschoolisn’ttoomuch.

好句Thebooksisnotenoughforevery-agedstudents.(许）8%ofthemagreethattheschoollibraryofferusbooks(京）Whilethereare4%refusingtoreadcomplainingabouttheshortopeningtimeoflibraries.(慧）First，mostofthestudentsblametheheavyhomeworkburdenforthemaincause.(宇）2、寻求建议：适当过渡，礼貌寻求建议（要点5）Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonthisissue,buthowcanwedealwiththeaboveproblems?Youaresokindifyoucouldofferussomeadvice,lookforwardtoyourreply.3、文章时态——根据所给首句判断，全文应为现在时态；

情景作文题目要求分析

三、语法问题：1.谓语动词（基础）2.从句3.非谓语动词高考水平1.谓语动词改错1.72%studenthasnottimetoreading.2.4%peoplebelievedmanybookisexpensive.3.Themostimportantishardlystudy.4.8%ofthereasonisdependonthelibraries.5.About16%ofthestudentsparentsarenotallowedtheirchildrenreadtheoutside-classbook.2.从句改错1.Itistosaidthatmanylibraries'openingtimeistooshortthatstudentscan’tgotoreadsomebooksandgetagreathelpfrombooks.2.Therearesomepeopleabout16%thinkthereasonisthestudents’parentdon‘twantthemtoreadoutside-classreading.

3.Studentof8%reducereading,becauseofdon’thavetimetoreading.4.Thereare4%peoplebelievethatthebooksareveryexpensive.3.非谓语动词改错

1.Inmyopinion,readthebookisgoodforourstudy.2.Iwantschooldon’tgivepeoplemoreandmorehomework.翻译句子练习：Attention:Believe,think,holdtheopinion/viewthat…isthemaincause,72%的学生认为，家庭作业占了他们一天的大部分时间，给他们留了很少的看课外书时间。2.16%的人抱怨家长不支持，家长只关注孩子是否完成家庭作业。3.8%的学生不满意学生图书馆的开放时间和有限的藏书。4.4%的学生认为书太贵，因此他们买不起想读的书。5.我非常期待您关于如何鼓励我们阅读的建议。Deareditor,Ourstudentunionhasrecentlyconductedasurveyonwhatmayaffectstudents’outside-classreading.Theresultisasfollows:72%ofthestudentsthinkthatschoolworktakesupmostoftheirday,leavingverylittletimeforoutside-classreading.Meanwhile,16%complainthattheirparentsdonotsupportthemenough.Parentsareconcernedthattheirchildren’sattentionmaybetakenawaybythenon-schoolrelatedreading.Besides,8%ofthestudentsarenotsatisfiedwiththeopeninghoursofthelibraryandlimitedbookcollectionsthere.And4%ofthestudentsthinkbooksaretooexpensivenowadays,sotheycan’taffordtoreadasmuchastheywant.Weallknowthatreadingisbeneficial.

However,giventhefactsabove,howcanwereadmore?

Iwouldverymuchappreciateyouradviceonhowtoencourageourreading.与学生学习问题有关的自我看法的句子背诵Inmyview,…playsveryimportantroleinourstudentslife,sotheschoolhavethedutytotakethisintoconsiderationandgivemorefreetimetous.Educationissupposedtodevelopeachstudentinanall-roundway--morally,mentallyandphysically.Onlyinsuchwaycanwegrowheathily.开放性文章

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboyisholdingapairofhugescissorstocutasmallpieceofpaper,butinvain.(描图)

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thatapropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal.Inourdailylife,weconstantlyneedtocarryoutdifferenttasks,whethertheyaresimpleorcomplicated.Weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatadoptingapropermethodisthemostimportantthing.Ifnot,whatevereffortswemake,we’llaccomplishnothing,justliketheboyinthepicture,whoisusingawrongwaytocutpaper.Itmaybewiseforhimtochangethescissorsintoasmallpairorjustusehisownfingers.Onlyinthisway,canhetearthepaperintopieces.

Inmyopinion,choosingasuitablemethodisveryimportantbothinourstudyandinourlife.Justlikethecaseinthepicture,sometimeswhenwefacesomedifficultiesormeetsomechallenges,itisinsuchahurrythatwegetdowntosolvingthe