2024届高考英语作文复习专项：读后续写“自我成长”类范文12篇 讲义素材

读后续写“自我成长”主题12篇

力第J一篇Attj

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawriting

contest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,so

Englishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmy

teacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,

whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?His

reply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou9rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhavea

goodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere9shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（银匠）in

BostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritish

soldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse'smouth.Notabrilliant

idea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse9schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?

Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.

But,likeRevere9shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyolder

sistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthe

library.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,"Great.

Now,writeitagain.'Twroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,the

thoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfTdidn'twin,Iwouldn't

care.

Pl:A4wweefa1later,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethe

P2:/we加to加”teacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

范文：

Pl:A表vvweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecametheaevvs.

•Onthatseeminglyordinaryday,myteachersuddenlyinformedmethatIwonthe

secondprizeandtherewouldbeanawardpresentationforthewritingcontestwinners.

Itwasreallyadelightfulsurprise.

•Whenthedayfinallyarrived,Ifoundmyselfstandingamongagroupoftalented

writers.Aseachwinnerwascalledtothestage,applauseandcheersHlledtheair.

•Walkinguptoreceivemyaward,Ifeltasurgeofprideandaccomplishment,

knowingthatmyhardworkanddedication/devotion/commitmenthadbeen

recognized.

P2:/toteacher'sofficeafteythecrwardpresentation.

•Onseeingme,hegavemeasincerecongratulationandsharedhisjoyinseeingme

succeed.

•Iexpressedmyheartfeltappreciationforpushingmebeyondmycomfortzone,for

believinginmyabilitytotellstories,andforexploringmyloveforwriting.Itwasa

momentofdeepconnectionandmutualrespect.

•Thatday,Ilefttheofficewithasenseofconfidencetocontinuepursuingmypassion

forwriting,andtheknowledgethatwithdetermination/persistence,eventhemost

difHcultandpainfulchallengescouldbeconquered.

最终自测：

A龙卬weekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontest,therecamethe几ews.

令在那个看似普普通通的一天，我的老师突然告诉我，我获得了二等奖，还会有一

个获奖者的颁奖典礼。这真是一个令人愉快的惊喜。

令当这一天终于到来时，我发现自己站在一群才华横溢的作家中间。当每个获胜者

都被召集到舞台上时，空气中弥漫着掌声和欢呼声。

令走上去接受我的奖项，我感到一阵骄傲和成就，因为我知道我的努力工作和投入

已经得到了认可。

/we"/towryteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

令见到我，他向我表示了衷心的祝贺并分享了他看到我成功的喜悦。

令我表达了我衷心的感激，他推动我走出了舒适区，他相信我讲故事的能力，他探索

我对写作的热爱。这是一个深深联系和相互尊重的时刻。

令那天，我离开了办公室，带着一种继续追求我对写作的热情的自信，并知道通过

决心/坚持，即使是最困难和痛苦的挑战也可以被克服。

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BobandIhungoutthewholesummer,runninginthefield,swimminginthelakeand

exploringeverywherejoyfully.

Itwasatypicalsummerafternoon.Bobsuggestedweskipalanguagelessontoplay

basketball.Aha!Iwouldshowmydefense,lay-upsandthree-pointshooting.Ilovedto

explore,Ilovedsports,andIlovedbasketballmost.IbelievedIwouldbethenextLeBron

James.

ButmypassionforsportscametoasuddenstopwhenIbeganexperiencingextreme

backpainlaterthatday.Afterseveralvisitstodoctors,finallyIwastoldthataspine（脊柱）

surgerywasnecessary.Unfortunately,thesurgeryaccidentallydamagedmyspinalcord（脊髓

）.Iwasinthewardhangingfacedowntorelievethepressureonmyspine.

Afterfour-monthrehabilitationtraining（康复训I练）inhospital,realityslowlysetin-I

wasunabletowalkagain.Icouldn'tbelievethisshouldhavehappenedtome,thatitwasn't

possibletorecover,thatIwouldn'tbecomeafamousbasketballplayer,thatmylifeasIhad

knownit,wasover.Myfuturewouldbechainedtoawheelchair.Iwasjust16yearsold!

Backhome,Ilearnedhowharditwasgoingtobetogetaroundinawheelchair.I

withdrewfrommyfriendsandmybasketball.AtBob'srepeatedinvitation,Iagreedtogoto

ourregularswimminghole.Unabletomakeitdowntheriverbankalone,Iwastooproudto

askforhelp.WhenIfinallyrealizedmypridewouldkeepmeawayfrompeopleandsportsI

loved,IletBobcarrymeonhisbacktotheriver9sedge.

Allowingotherstohelpwasaturningpoint.Irealizedmyattitudewasthebiggest

barrierIhadtoface.HowcouldIexpectotherstoseemypotentialifIdidn'tseeitmyself?

HowcouldIrealizemybasketballdreamifIwithdrewintomyself?

Pl:Oneday,Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketballgame.

P2:WithBob'sencouragement,/decidedtohweatryat加"dream.

范文：

Paral:Oneday,Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketballgame.

•Itwasaneye-openingexperienceforme.AsIwatchedtheplayerscontrollingtheir

wheelchairswithincrediblespeedandprecision,myadmirationforthemgrew.They

displayedalevelofdeterminationandresiliencethatinspiredme.

•Bobtoldmethateverythingdependedonmyownattitudetowardsmydisability,that

physicallimitationsdidn'thavetobeabarriertopursuingmydreams,andthatthe

loveforlifecouldtriumphoveranydifficulty.

•Hiswordsignitedasparkwithinme.

Para2:WithBob'sencouragement,/decidedtohaveatryatmydream.

•Insteadofwithdrawingintomyself,IfocusedonwhatIcouldachieve.Through

endlesstrainingandfirmcommitment,Ibegantoadaptmyskillstotheworldof

wheelchairbasketball.

•Itwasn'taneasyjourney,butwitheachmilestoneIreached,myconfidence

improved,andIrediscoveredmypassionforthegame.

•Isetoffonanewchapterofmylife,provingtomyselfandtheworldthatapositive

attitudecanconqueranyobstacle.

最终自测：

Oneday,Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketballgame.

令这对我来说是一次大开眼界的经历。当我看着球员们以令人难以置信的速度和精

确度控制他们的轮椅时，我对他们的钦佩不断增多。他们表现出了一种激励着我

的决心和韧性。

令Bob告诉我，一切都取决于我自己对残疾的态度，身体上的限制不一定是我追求梦

想的障碍，对生活的爱可以战胜任何困难。

令他的话在我心中点燃了一股火花。

WithBob'sencouragement,/decidedtohaveatryatmydream.

令我没有退缩，而是专注于我所能实现的目标。通过无尽的训练和坚定的承诺，我

开始让我的技能适应轮椅篮球的世界。

令这不是一个简单的旅程，但随着我每达到一个里程碑，我的信心都提高了，我重

新发现了我对比赛的热情。

令我开始了我人生的新篇章，向自己和世界证明，积极的态度可以克服任何障碍。

第二篇

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya'smother,Helena

lovedhostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'dmakeherSweet

Sixteenahundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededtobe.Theyselecteda

themeeveryyearandstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe“SnowWhite"andherninth

hadbeenthe“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthethemewasthedaybefore.She'djust

wakeupherbirthdaymorning,abrandnewbirthdayoutfit(一套月艮装)laidneatlyonher

dresser(anoutfitrelatedtothetheme,ofcourse)andshewouldopenherdoortoseethe

adventurethatlayaheadofherthatday.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.Aplayonthewords

“SweetSixteen“waslikely-acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe'dhadabakingpartya

fewyearsago-andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn'thaveanyinterestincars,

soshedoubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She'dtriedtolookthroughhermother9s

purchasehistoryonline,buthermotherhadbeencarefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.

Sotheonlyclueleftwasthebirthdayoutfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandshelovedtheday

thatherbirthdaytookplace.ItwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitneverrained.This

morningwasnodifferentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinherbedandlookedtoher

dresserbeforeslippingoutofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.Sheunfoldeditandhelditagainst

herbody,seeinghowitwaslike.Itreacheddown,justabovetheankle.Myadressed,eyed

herselfinthemirrorandfounditwasnotsomuchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.It

wastotallyoneforblue-collarworkers!

Paral:Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

Para2:everythingdone,herfaceshonewithaswee/smile.

范文：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

•Itwasmumandaunt,whoweredressedinthesameoutfitastheypreparedforMya.

“Readyforthisyear'sthemeparty,littleblue-collarworker?”Theylookedherdirect

intheeyeswithhighexpectancy.

•NeverhadMyaexpected/anticipatedsuchathemebirthdayparty.Concealingher

disappointment,shemanagedtoforceasmilewithgreateffort.Inchingherway,

Myafollowedmumandaunttoarosegarden.

•Uponarrival,bloomingrosescameintohersight,releasingapleasantfragrance.

Momrevealedtoherthattheirjobwastoremovetheweedssothattheroseswould

growmoreluxuriant.Thoughunwilling,Myarolleduphersleevesandbentdownto

pulltheweedsoutrowafterrow.

Para2：Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

•ExhaustedasMyawasaftertidyingupandweedingtherosegarden,shefeltan

unprecedentedsenseofaccomplishmentandjoysurgingthroughher.Severaldrops

ofsweattricklingdownherredandpinkcheeks,sheturnedtoMumandAunt:"This

isnotbad.AndIfeelFvegrownupenoughtohelpyouwithsomething.^^

•Auntsteppedclose,moppingthesweatfromMya'sforeheadwhileMumpulledMya

intoherarmsandplantedabigkissonherforehead.

•ThesuninMaywasstillshiningbrighter.Staringatthewell-keptgarden,Myacould

nothelpbutexclaim,"Thisisthebestbirthdaypartyever.^^

最终自测：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

令是妈妈和阿姨，她们穿着和给米娅准备的一样的衣服。“准备好今年的主题生日会

了吗，小蓝领工人?”她们满怀期待地直视着她的眼睛。

令米娅从来没有预料到这样一个主题生日聚会。掩饰自己的失望，她竭力强颜欢笑。

米娅慢慢地走着，跟着妈妈和阿姨来到了一个玫瑰园。

令一到，盛开的玫瑰就进入了她的视线，散发出令人愉悦的香味。妈妈向他透露她

们的工作是除草，这样玫瑰花才会长得更茂盛。米娅虽然不愿意，但还是卷起袖

子，弯下腰，一排又一排地拔掉杂草。

Para2：Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

令虽然在清理完玫瑰园的杂草后，米娅筋疲力尽，但她感到一种前所未有的成就感

和快乐涌遍全身。几滴汗顺着她红扑扑的脸颊流下来，她转向妈妈和阿姨:“这真不

错。我觉得我已经长大了，可以帮你们做点事儿了。”

令阿姨走上前，擦去米亚额头上的汗水，妈妈把米娅抱在怀里，在她额头上重重地吻

了一下。

令五月的日头依然炙热。看着精心打理过的花园，米娅不禁呼喊道:“这是有史以来最

好的生日派对。”

第四篇

OnSaturday,wegatheredatthehalltowitnesstheawardceremonyforthesenior

scouts（童子军）.Receivinganawardonsuchadaywasagreathonorforanyscout,andall

desiredtobethescoutselectedtogivethesummaryoftheyear'sactivitiesforthe

association.

Iwasnottheoneselectedtogivethesummaryandforthat,Iwasgrateful.Icouldhardly

standinfrontofalargecrowdtomakeaspeech,butSeancould.Hewasselectedtodothe

honorbecausehewasthePresidentoftheBoyScouts.Myjobwasmuchsimpler.Beingthe

Vice-President,Iwasverymuchbehindthescenes,contenttoensurethateverythingwasin

smoothrunningorder.

Itwasanhourtogobeforetheceremonybegan,andIhadputthefinishingtouchesto

thestage.Walkingdownthestage,Isawmyteammatesinastateofpanic（恐'慌）.Whenthey

sawme,theyrantometotellmethatSeanmetwithatrafficaccidentandwouldnotmakeit

totheawardceremony.Someoneelsehadtogivethesummary.Allofthemlookedhopefully

atme,andIcouldfeelmykneesbeginningtocollapse.

Alltheirargumentsagainstmyunwillingnesswerereasonable.Ihadacopyofthe

speechaswellasthebenefitofhavingseenSeanrehearse（排练）it.IwastheVice-President

andthereforeshouldtakehisplace.Finally,Iwasfirmlytoldnottoturnitdownanylonger

andtheysaidthattheywereconvincedthatIwoulddotherightthing.Isankdownontothe

floor,totallyshockedbythesituation.

IknewIwasnotaconfidentspeaker,andthethoughtofpresentingasummaryinfront

ofsomanydistinguishedguestshorrifiedme.Tothinkthatthefameofthescoutswouldtake

abeatingbecauseofme!Theburdenofresponsibilitytroubledmegreatly.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.Intheend,Iquicklyrehearsedthe

speechandgotreadytogoonstageforthepresentation.Ilookedcalm,butinsideIwasa

trembling.Althoughtheykeptencouragingme,Istillfeltveryworriedthatmypoor

performancewouldcostustheopportunitytowinanaward.Soonafter,Iwascalledtodothe

presentation.Havingbutterfliesinmystomach,Iwalkedontothestage.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.

As/stoodonthestage,myheartbeatviolently.

范文：

Pl:Buttherewasyeallynowayoutofthesituation.

•Feelingitmyresponsibilitytobeconfrontedwiththereality,intheend,Iadjusted

myselfpromptly,gotdowntorehearsingthespeechandwasreadytogoonstageforthe

presentation.

•ThoughIappearedcalmandcomposed,tensioncamefloodingovermeinside.Withmy

teammates9encouragingwords,Istillfeltveryworriedthatmypoorperformancewould

costustheopportunitytowinanaward.

•Notlongafter,Iwascalledtodothepresentation.Havingbutterfliesinmystomach,I

walkedontothestage.

P2As/stoodonthestage,myheartbeatviolently.

•Myfaceturningpaleandmymindgoingblank,IcouldnotrememberwhatIwas

supposedtoutter.

•WhenIwasatalosswhattodo,Isawmyteammatescasttrustfullooksatme,which

relievedmealot.ItwasthenthatIrealizedIshouldtrymybestforourteam.

•Notfeelinglikesittingonpinsandneedlesanymore,Ireorganizedmythoughts,

andproceededtospeakintothemicrophone.WhenIwasfinished,allmyteammates

stoodup,theaudienceburstingintothunderousapplause.

最终自测：

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.

令觉得有责任面对现实，最终，我迅速调整了自己，开始着手排练演讲，准备上台做

表演。

令尽管我显得镇定自若，但紧张情绪涌上了我的内心。有了队友们鼓励的话，我仍然

非常担心我糟糕的表现会让我们失去获奖的机会。

令不久之后，我就被叫去做演讲。我很忐忑地走上了舞台。

AsIstoodonthestage,myheartbeatviolently.

令当我站在舞台上时，我的心怦怦直跳。脸色苍白，头脑一片空白，我不记得我应该

说些什么了。

令当我不知所措怎么做时，我看到我的队友们信任地看着我，这让我松了一口气。就

在那时，我意识到我应该为我们的团队尽最大的努力。

令不再感到坐立不安了，我重新组织了我的思想，继续对着麦克风讲话。当我完成后，

我所有队友都站了起来，观众席中爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。

第五篇

Thoughhisfather,grandmothers,uncles,auntsandcousinswereallgoingtobethere,it

wouldbethefirsttimeforHasan,athoroughlypampered（娇生惯养的）child,tobewithout

theconstantmotheringofhishelicoptermother.

AtfirstHasantriedtoemotionallyblackmail（要挟）hismotherintonotgoing,butafter

shepromisedtobringbackhisfavoritetoysandcandies,heunwillinglylethergo.

Whenhewenttodropoffhismotherattheairport,hehadtearyeyesashewondered

howhewasgoingtosurvivewithoutherforthenexttwoweeks.Althoughhefeltlikecrying

likeababy,hewastooembarrassedtocryoutloud.Butwhenhisfatherhuggedhim,Hasan

could'tstopcryinginhisarms.Whentheyreturnedhome,Hasan,whohadalwaysbeentold

byhimotherwhattodo,nowhadnoonetotellhimtowashhishandsorfinishhisdinner.

Thoughhewasveryupsetabouthismother*sleaving,suddenlyhealsorealizedthepotential

forpartying,awayfromhismother'sdiscipline（管教）.Therewouldbenochecksorbalances.

Hecouldstayuplate,eatjunkfoodandusetheInternettohisheart'scontent.

Backfromschool,hewouldthink,"'Homework?Pllmakethemostofmyfreedomand

havesomefuninstead!,9Hasanstartedtostayuptillhecouldnolongerstayawakeandthen

wokeupwithalotofdifficultyatseveninthemorning,barelymakingittoschoolontime.

Butafterafewdays,hispartyingstartedcatchingupwithhim.Inschool,hewasbarely

managingtostayawake.Thingsstartedgettingoutofcontrol.Hishomeworkremained

undone.Hefailedhistests.Hefeltweakfromeatingonlyjunkfood.

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedto初owwasgoingwithhim.

Theteacher'swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

范文：

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

UnabletofigureoutwhyHanson'sonce-promisingschoolperformancehadtakenanose-dive,

hecalledHasantohisofficeandinquiredaboutitwithconcern.Headdroopingandtongue

tied,Hasanstammeredoutwhathadhappenedrecently.UponhearingHasan'sreply,the

teacherutteredindisbelief,“Hasan,youareruiningyourbodyandsoulandevenyourfuture.

Truefreedomcomesfromself-disciplineandresponsibilityratherthanindulgenceinyour

owndesire.Youneedtotakeyourresponsibilityforattendingyourself/9

Theteacher'swon/ssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

Nowherecognizedtheconsequenceofhisrecklessbehaviorandneededtomake

amendswithoutdelay.Fromthatdayon,determinedtogetbackontrack,heassignedtime

forstudy,setupasleepingtimeandsaidnotojunkfoodandcomputergames.Gradually,he

becameactiveinclassandimprovedhistestscores,whichsurprisedhisfatherandteachera

lot.Thisexperiencewaslikeawake-upcall,alwaysremindinghimthatdisciplineand

responsibilitymatteredmostinhislife.

最终自测:

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

令因为不明白汉森曾经很有希望的学校表现为什么急转直下，他把哈桑叫到自己的办

公室，关切地询问此事。

令垂着头，舌头打结般，哈桑结结巴巴地说出了最近发生的事情。

令听到哈桑的回答，老师难以置信地说：“哈桑，你正在毁掉你的身体和灵魂，甚至

你的未来。真正的自由来自于自律和责任，而不是对你自己欲望的放纵。你需要承

担起责任好好照顾自己。”

Theteacher勺wordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

令现在，他认清了自己鲁莽行为的后果，需要立即弥补赎罪。

令从那天起，他决心回到正轨，分配了时间学习，安排了睡觉时间，对垃圾食品和电

脑游戏说不。渐渐地，他在课堂上活跃起来，提高了考试成绩，这让他的父亲和老

师非常惊喜。

令这段经历就像一个警钟，一直提醒他，纪律和责任在他的生活中是最重要的。

第八篇

Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse.Iwastenanditwastwoweeks

beforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mtheyoungestinthefamily,

allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasa

cookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonlycentreofattentionanditwasfeeling

good.

MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearIknew

whatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,

anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.

ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydearmother

toldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldme

thatIhadasisternow.ButIdidn'twantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdays

wentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthat

mylifeisnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabig

brother.Butitjusthappenedinaninstant.

OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewborn

sister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskmeanythingaboutthegift.

ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedto

sleep.Ihadanightmare（噩梦）andwokeupatthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereall

aroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.Iranintomyparents9bedroombutcouldn't

wakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,trying

nottocrywhenIsawher.Shewasawakeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmall

bed.

Paragraph1:SuddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestaHedcrying.

Paragraph2:颂erhavingcomfortedher,somethings/ow/ychangedinsideme.

范文：

Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestartedcrying.

■Feelingpanicatfirst,Ithenrealizedthatitwasjustacarpassingby.Butshefeltuneasy,

hermouthwide-opened,armswaving,andlegskickingintheair.

■Ithoughtshemightbescaredtoo,soIheldoutmyhandtoholdhers,pattingheronthe

backwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whisperingmyfavourite

songtoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.

■Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoherbigeyes,

Ibreathedasighofrelief,somethingmeltinginmyheart.

A力e?havingcomfortedher,somethings/ow/ychangedinsideme.

•Thesenseoflonelinessfadedawayandwasreplacedbytheresponsibilityofbeingan

elderbrotherandthebondbetweensiblings.Eventhoughherarrivaltookoverthecentre

ofthewholefamilyinitially,shestartedtobecomethecentreofmyattentiontoo.

■Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcareforher.I

lookedaroundandfoundmyparents,awake,smilingatmewithmistyeyes.

■Withashadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,Ifeltmylittlesisterwasthebest

giftrdeverreceived.

最终自测：

Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestartedcrying.

令一开始我很恐慌，然后我意识到那只是一辆路过的车。但她感到不安，张大了嘴

巴，挥舞着手臂，双腿踢着。

令我想她可能也会害怕，所以我伸出手握她的手，用另一只手拍她的背。我甚至离

她的小床更近了一点，对着她低声唱着我最喜欢的歌，就像我害怕时我妈妈所做

的那样。

令令人惊讶的是，她似乎听懂了我，也不再哭了。我望着她的大眼睛，松了一口气，

有什么东西在我的心中融化了。

Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

令孤独感消退了，取而代之的是作为哥哥的责任和兄妹之间的纽带。尽管她的到来最

初接管了全家人的中心，但她也开始成为我关注的中心。

令她那可爱的圆脸和闪闪发光的眼睛，也赢得了我对她的爱和关心。我环顾四周，看

见了我的父母，醒着，泪眼朦胧地对我笑。

令窗户上投着幸福家庭的影子，我觉得我妹妹是我得到过的最好的礼物。

钻A的

Thetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanning

forMother9sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfast

inbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheir

motherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietly

tothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwater

andleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandadded

insomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturned

onthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Everythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntil

Jeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.

Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,she

turneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenext

minute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayed

calmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanit

upsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJefFshandtouchedthehot

burnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaught

thesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

Pl:Asthe加加slookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

尸2;The加加scarriedthebre冰fastupstairsandwo左etheirmotherup.

范文：

Pl:Asthefw血slookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

・“Dad,sorry,wemadethekitchensuchamess."Jeffmurmured,loweringhis

headinshame.

•Takingaglanceatthekitchenandthedownheartedkids,fatherfetchedthemedicine

boxandappliedsomemedicinetoJenna'shand."Nevermind.Lefsdoitagainbefore

yourmumwakeup.”

•Potcleaned,thetwinsrepeatedthesameprocess,butthistimeunderthepatient

guidanceoftheirfather.SoonthedeliciousandinvitingFrenchtoastandchicken

porridgewereready.

P2:The加比scarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

・Beforeshecouldutteraword,JennaandJeffexclaimedinchorus,6tHappyMother's

Day!Thankyousomuchforwhatyoudidforusandthankyouforbeingour

•Asenseofdelightdeprivingherofallpowerofutterance,Momhuggedthetwins

tightly,tearsofjoywellingupinhereyes.

•"Ifitweren'tDad'shelp,wecouldn'tfinishit."Jennaadded.Atthistime,fathercame

frombehind,steppedforwardandthrewhisarmsaroundthem.

•Theyfeltblissfulasiftheywereinpossessionofeverything.Indeed,loveshouldbe

madeknowntolovedones.

最终自测：

Pl:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

令.“爸爸，对不起，我们把厨房弄得一团糟。”杰夫羞愧地低下头，喃喃地说。

令看了一眼厨房和沮丧的孩子们，父亲拿起药盒，把一些药涂在詹娜手上。“没

关系。让我们在你妈妈醒来之前再做一次吧。”

令洗了锅，双胞胎重复了同样的过程，但这次是在他们父亲的耐心指导下。很快，

美味而诱人的法式吐司和鸡粥就准备好了。

P2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

令妈妈还没来得及说话，詹娜和杰夫就齐声喊道：“母亲节快乐！非常感谢您为我们

所做的一切，也非常感谢你是我们的妈妈。”

令高兴得说不出话来，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水从眼里涌出。

令“要不是爸爸的帮助，我们也做不完。”詹娜补充说。这时，父亲从他们身后上前一

步，伸出双臂搂住他们。

令他们感到幸福，好像他们拥有了一切。的确，爱应该让你所爱的人知道。

第八篇

Therearelotsofchancesinfrontofus.Whetheryoucanseizethemornotdependson

thechoicesyoumake.ThisremindsmeofonechoiceImadeduringmychildhood.

Twotickets.Onlytwoticketstothefinalbasketballgame.

ThreepairsofeyesfocusedontheticketsinDad'sout-stretchedhand.Mike,theoldest,

askedthequestionrunningthrougheveryone'smind,“Onlyoneticketforusthree?But,Dad,

whichofuswillgowithyou?”Avery,theyoungest,repeatedthequestionquietly.Iasked

Dadiftherewasanychancetogetmoretickets.Imightbethemiddlesister,butIwasjustas

eagerasmybasketball-crazybrothersforanightoutwithDad.Dadsaidhe'dgotthetickets

fromafriendandtherewereonlytwoavailable.

Seeingthatnoneofuswouldgiveupthechance,Dadtoldushewouldchoosewhichof

thethreeofusdeservedtogobythefollowingmorning.

Thenextmorning,wehurriedintothekitchenandlookedforDad,onlytofindthathe

hadgoneout.Wewer