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writingUnit3Howwasyourschooltrip?

writingUnit3WritingAims:1.Beabletodescribeyourtripwiththerighttense.

(能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行)2.Toenjoythefunoflife.

（学会享受生活的乐趣）WritingAims:1.Beabletode

Mytrip

wenttothezoorodeahorseatedeliciousfood聊一聊visitedthemuseumsawsomeanimalstooksomephotosMytripwenttothezoor

Talkaboutsomethingaboutyourtriponsummervacation.Makeaconversationingroups.Wheredidyougo?Whatdidyoudo?Howwasthetrip/theweather?…GroupWorkTalkaboutsomethingaboutyJune23rdYesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreally__________.Wewenttherebybus.Atthezoo,Isawalotof_______andItooksomephotos.MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothe________andboughtsome____.Itwasagreatday.3aJune23rdMyschoolwenttothezooyesterday.Thetripwas______.Atthezoo,I________________butIdidn’tlikethem.Ialsowentto__________withmyclassmates,butIdidn’tbuyanythingbecause___________________.Itwasaboringday.读一读interestinganimalsgiftshopgiftsboringsawmanyanimalsthegiftshoptheyweresoexpensive

Yesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreallyinteresting.Wewenttherebybus.Atthezoo,IsawalotofanimalsandItooksomephotos.MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopandboughtsomegifts.Itwasagreatday.thebeginningtheendingactivities&feelingsHowdidBobtalkabouthistrip?想一想（总）（分）（总）YesterdaymyschoolvisitedthbeginningendingIwentonaschooltrip./Ihadatripto…Talkabout“thetriptoShanghai”onyoursummervacationAllinall,Itwasanexcitingtrip./Ilikedthetripverymuch./Iwastiredbuthappy.beginningendingIwentonaschbeginningactivitiesendingIwentonaschooltrip./Ihadatripto…weatherwherewhoHowFeelings(感受)

…Allinall,Itwasanexcitingtrip./Ilikedthetripverymuch./Iwastiredbuthappy.（总）（分）（总）Talkabout“thetriptoShanghai”onyoursummervacationbeginningactivitiesendingIwen

假期期间你到哪里旅行了？请你运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程。注意文章的结构与时态的运用。开放性作文指令性作文要注意语言的连贯性及文章的基本结构，还要注意时态的正确运用哦！提示

上海之行weather阳光明媚，炎热where动物园/博物馆…who老师和同学how乘火车activities看见了熊猫和大象（friendly）照了一些照片骑马(exciting)给朋友买了礼物(notexpensive)吃了美味的食物feelingtiredbuthappy写一写假期期间你到哪里旅行了？请你运用所学语言谈开放性作文指令weatherSunnyandhotwherethezoo/themuseum…whomyteacherandclassmatesHowtookthetrainto…activitiesseethepandasandelephants（friendly）takealotofphotosrideahorse(exciting)buysomegifts（notexpensive）eat

deliciousfood…feelingtiredbuthappy说一说AtriptoShanghai先小组讨论文章脉络，然后小组每人2-3句，组成一篇完整的文章。注意

weatherSunnyandhotwherethez评价标准评价内容自评互评1.说明自己所去的地点2.和谁一起去的3.交通方式4.天气情况5.谈及自己的所见所闻6.自己的感受注意：先对照评价内容进行自评、补充，然后组内互评（1号4号,2号3号）批一批评价标准评价内容自评互评1.说明自己所去的地点2.和谁一起A档：六项内容齐全，错误3处以内。B档：含5项内容，错误在5处以内。C档：含4项内容，错误在7处以内。1号：A档达标。3、4号学生：C档达标。2号：B档达标。评价内容自评互评1.说明自己所去的地点2.和谁一起去的3.交通方式4.天气情况5.谈及自己的所见所闻6.自己的感受达标标准A档：六项内容齐全，错误3处以内。1号：A档达标。3、

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