中学英语读后续写课件

Figuresofspeech读后续写微技能之修辞手法真题重现Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifecookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorse.Theylookedreallycool.真题重现Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper.”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.…

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.…ReadforbasicinformationAsummerafternoonfarm→towardsthemountains“I”,dad,UnclePaulAstorywhowhenwherewhatDuringahorseride,alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wegotlost.whyhowWhydidwegetlost?Howwouldwefindourwayback?ImpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorseReadforplotpointsAvisittoUnclePaul’sfarmSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.❓pleased,relaxedimpressed,wantedarideexcited,carefulAhorseridewithDadtowardsthemountainsWehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.❓Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper.”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.simile

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itstartledmyhorse,makingitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoffthehorseback.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,thehorseabruptlystoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.“Thankgod!You’resafe,”saidDadinrelief.Lookingaround,weweresoonawarethatwehadgotlostinthedeepforest.(83words)

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wedidn’tknowwherethefarmhousewas,norhowtospotitinsuchdarkness.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromthedistance.ItmustbeUnclePaul!Afeelingofsheerdelightranthroughme.Wecriedbackwithexcitement,andfinally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanunforgettableexperience!(77words)hyperbolepersonificationFiguresofspeechsimilemetaphorhyperbolepersonificationWithnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.……

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janeknewthatshehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Shefeltalumpinherthroat,tearswellingupinhereyes.ThenshethoughtaboutTom.“Hemusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybehewasinoneofthemandwillcomebackagain!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”Shefelthopefulagain.Thebreezegentlykissinghercheeks,shefellasleepanddreamedofseeingTomthenextday.(79words)

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shewalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Fortunately,shesawahugeflatrockinanopenareanotfaraway.Sheclimbedontotherockandwaited.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterappearedagain.Theneareritgot,themorewildlysheflaggedtheyellowblouse.Luckily,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandedslowly.TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrantowardsJane.Janeburstintotears,thehappysmileonherfaceshininglikeadiamond.(91words)metaphorFiguresofspeechmetaphorpersonificationsimile1.Althoughitwasautumn,thesnowwasalreadybeginningtofallinTibet.Ourlegsweresoheavyandcoldthattheyfeltlikeblocksofice.()2.Inthelateafternoonwefounditwassocoldthatourwaterbottlesfroze.However,thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.()3.Workersbuiltsheltersforsurvivorswhosehomeshadbeendestroyed.Freshwaterwastakentothecitybytrain,truckandplane.Slowly,thecitybegantobreatheagain.()4.Well,hewasnotgoingtoholdhisbreathforhertoapologize.Hewoulddrownhissadnessincoffee.()5.Andjustatthatmoment,themostextraordinarythinghappened.Thekillersstartedracingbetweenourboatandthewhale,justlikeapackofexciteddogs.()FiguresofspeechintextbookssimilesimilepersonificationpersonificationsimilePart1:usingsimilemarker“like”Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.

繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。SimilePractice:1.他就像一头生气的公牛一样冲我吼叫。

2.他僵在那里一动不动，就像一块石头。

Part2:usingsimilemarker“as...as”Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday.

她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。Fatherrushedtohisson’sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflataspancake.父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.

我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌;ashungryasawolf饥肠辘辘;asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀;asbraveasalion勇猛如狮SimilePractice:1.我们面前的景色美如一幅画。2.这辆公交车走得像蜗牛一样慢。

Part3:usingsimilemarker“asif”MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。Sheswepthersonintoherarmswithhereyeswetasiftheyhadbeenapartforaneternity.她眼睛湿润，把儿子拥进怀里，仿佛分离了一个世纪之久。Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。SimilePractice:1.他感觉整个世界都崩塌了。2.他感觉他的心脏被刀子捅了一刀。(stab)

Part1:using“be”Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.

她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。Thebeautifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.

美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。MetaphorPractice:生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。

Part2:usingverbsHedoesn’thaveanideaofhisown.Hejustparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.

他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。Theboywolfeddownthefood.小男孩狼吞虎咽。MetaphorPractice:飞机、火车、卡车等源源不断地运来医疗物资。

Part1:把自然现象当作人来描写Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞。Themistswallowedhimup.薄雾把他包围起来。Thevolcanospitoutlavafromitsmouth.火山口喷出岩浆。personificationPractice:1.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。2.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。

Part2:把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写Fearseized