读后续写具象构造大法（PPT课件版）

读后续写：具象构造大法1.关于天气寒冷cold的环境描写2.关于风wind的环境描写3.关于雨rain的环境描写4.关于雪snow的环境描写5.关于星星star的环境描写6.关于黑夜dark的环境描写7.关于安静quiet的环境描写8.关于祥和peaceful的环境描写例1：关于天气寒冷cold的环境描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：她觉得冷。Shefeltcold.具象描写：她觉得冷。她把衣领拉高，裹紧围巾，手插到口袋里并把脸侧开来躲避刺骨的寒风。练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：她觉得冷。Shefeltcold.具象描写：她觉得冷。她把衣领拉高，裹紧围巾，手插到口袋里并把脸侧开来躲避刺骨的寒风。Shefeltcold.Shepulledhercollarup,tightenedherscarf,shovedherhandsdeepintoherpocketsandturnedherfaceawayfromthebitingwind.2.概括描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。Thiswinter,theweatherisunusuallycold.具象描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。世界似乎在这一刻停住了，河流也停下了脚步。

2.概括描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。Thiswinter,theweatherisunusuallycold.具象描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。世界似乎在这一刻停住了，河流也停下了脚步。Thiswinter,theweatherisunusuallycold.Theworldseemstohavestoppedatthismoment,andtheriverhasstoppeditsfootsteps.02例2：关于风wind的环境描写用风衬托恶劣环境的时候，形容风的词常有：nowind无风,strongwind强风,bitingwind刺骨的风练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：这几天净刮大风。It’sbeenverywindytheselastfewdays.具象描写：这几天净刮大风。楼上的标杆在风中猛烈的摇晃着。练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：这几天净刮大风。It’sbeenverywindytheselastfewdays.具象描写：这几天净刮大风。楼上的标杆在风中猛烈的摇晃着。It’sbeenverywindytheselastfewdays.Thepostonthebuildingstaggeredviolentlyinthewind.2.概括描写：外面刮起了大风。Outside,therewasastrongwind.具象描写：外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.概括描写：外面刮起了大风。Outside,therewasastrongwind.具象描写：外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Outside,therewasastrongwind,andthebrancheswereblowingindisorder.Thedustonthegroundwasflyingindisorder,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.例3：关于雨rain的环境描写用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：aheavydownpour大暴雨，raincatsanddogs下倾盆大雨，becaughtintherain被雨淋练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：下着倾盆大雨。Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.具象描写1：下着倾盆大雨，雷声隆隆。(thunder)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写1：下着倾盆大雨，雷声隆隆。(thunder)________________________________________________________________________________Itwasrainingcatsanddogswiththundersroaring.具象描写2：雨倾盆而下，风吹着拍打着窗户。(windows)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：树在雨中随着风疯狂地飞舞。(wind)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：雨倾盆而下，风吹着拍打着窗户。(windows)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：树在雨中随着风疯狂地飞舞。(wind)________________________________________________________________________________Therain

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pouringdownwiththewindsblowingandbeatingagainstthewindows.Thetreesweredancingmadlywithwindintherain.例4：关于雪snow的环境描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下。It’sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling.具象描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落。________________________________________________________________________________It’sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingwindlesslydown.练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下。It’sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling.具象描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落。________________________________________________________________________________2.概括描写：雪花飘落在地上。Snowflakesdriftedtoearth.具象描写：雪花在微风中懒洋洋地雪花飘落在地上，公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Snowflakesdriftedlazilytoearthongentlebreeze.Theparkwascoveredinathickblanketofwhite.例5：关于星星star的环境描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。Onaclearnight,theskyappearstobefilledwithstars.具象描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。星星像一颗颗美丽的珍珠在夜空中闪烁。__________________________________________________________________________________________练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。Onaclearnight,theskyappearstobefilledwithstars.具象描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。星星像一颗颗美丽的珍珠在夜空中闪烁。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onaclearnight,theskyappearstobefilledwithstars.Thestarslikebeautifulpearlstwinkleinthenightsky.2.概括描写：天上的星星在照耀。Thestarsareshininginthesky.具象描写：天上的星星在照耀，就像钻石般镶嵌在这深蓝的夜空中。________________________________________________________________________________2.概括描写：天上的星星在照耀。Thestarsareshininginthesky.具象描写：天上的星星在照耀，就像钻石般镶嵌在这深蓝的夜空中。________________________________________________________________________________Shiningthesky,thestarsarelikediamondsinlaidinthedeepbluesky.例6：关于黑夜dark的环境描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：黑夜降临了。（2016年浙江高考卷）Itwasgettingdark.具象描写1：黑夜降临了。一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。更糟糕的是，气温突然急剧下降。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itwasgettingdark.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydroppeddramatically.具象描写2：天很黑。太阳躲在山后，在黑暗中很难看到任何东西。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：那一刻，除了天空中的几颗星星发出微弱的光外，天已经完全黑了。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itwasdark.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.例7：关于安静quiet的环境描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：很安静。Itwasquiet.具象描写1：很安静，除了我自己的心跳，一点声音也听不到。________________________________________________________________________________概括描写：很安静。Itwasquiet.具象描写1：很安静，除了我自己的心跳，一点声音也听不到。________________________________________________________________________________Itwasquiet.Notasinglesoundcouldbeheardexceptmyownheartbeat.具象描写2：夜很静，只有钟摆滴答滴答地响。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：班上所有的同学都在写作业，没有任何人发出响声，安静得连根针掉在地上都能听得见。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：夜很静，只有钟摆滴答滴答地响。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：班上所有的同学都在写作业，没有任何人发出响声，安静得连根针掉在地上都能听得见。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenightwasveryquietexceptforthetickingoftheclock.Allthestudentsintheclasswerewritingthehomework,andnoonemadeasound.Itwassoquietthatyoucouldhearapindrop.例8：关于祥和的apeaceful的环境描写概括描写：那是一个祥和的地方。Itwasapeacefulplace.具象描写1：当我沐浴在阳光下，感觉琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________概括描写：那是一个祥和的地方。Itwasapeacefulplace.具象描写1：当我沐浴在阳光下，感觉琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。_____________