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WelcomeWhatarethemostdifficultpartsinwritingasummary?1.Howtofindoutthetopicsentenceofeveryparagraph?2.Howtoparaphrasethekeysentences?3.Howtoconnectthem?Part1:Howtofindoutthemainideaofeveryparagraph?

Skill1：

(1)atthebeginningofit(2)inthemiddleofit(3)atboththebeginningandtheendofit(4)attheendofitPeoplehavedifferenttastesinfood.Somefeelthattheyhaven'teatenamealunlesstheyhavehadsteakorotherredmeat.Somepreferchickenorfishandeatoneortheotherateverymeal.Othersprefervegetablesandfruitsorgrainsandwouldenjoyamealofspaghetti,eggplant,andfreshfruit.Otherscouldliveonwhatwerecalledfast--foods:ahamburgerorhotdog,Frenchfriesandasoftdrink.atthebeginningofit

Peoplewholiveincountrieswithmanydoctorsandmodernhospitalsareworld’shealthiestpeople--right？Notnecessarily.Somegroupsofpeoplewhohavenodoctorsorhospitalsatallareamongtheworld’shealthiest.Forexample，peoplewholiveonsmall,farawayislandsgetveryfewdiseasesbecausetherearenooutsiderstobringingermsornewillness.

inthemiddleofit

Ahumanbodyappearstoberathersoftanddelicate,comparedwiththatofawildanimal,butitisactuallysurprisinglystrong.Indeed,itsverysoftnessandloosenessisanadvantage;itmakesmangoodatmovingaboutmovementofalllivingthingsofhisownsize,becausehecandosomanydifferentthingswithhislimbs(armsorlegs).Man’sgamesshowhowhecancontrolhisownbody.Nootherlandcreaturecanswimasskillfullyasman;morehassuchvariedbehaviour;veryfewlivesaslongashe;noneissostronginitsnaturalresistancetodisease.Therefore，manhasagreatadvantageinhisbattleagainsttherisksofdamageanddeaththatthreatenhim.

attheendofit

Goodmannersareimportantinallcountries，butwaysofexpressinggoodmannersaredifferentfromcountrytocountry.Americanseatwithknivesandforks；Japaneseeatwithchopsticks.Americanssay“Hi”whentheymeet；Japanesebow.ManyAmericanmenopendoorsforwomen；Japanesemendonot.Onthesurface，itappearsthatgoodmannersinAmericaarenotgoodmannersinJapan，andinawaythisistrue.Butinanycountry，themannersthatareimportantarethoseinvolvingoneperson’sbehaviortowardanotherperson.Inallcountriesitisgoodmannerstobehaveconsideratelytowardothersandbadmannersnotto.Itisonlythewayofbehavingpolitelythatdiffersfromcountrytocountry.Atthebothofit1.Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.…………2.Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家)，encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter（后者）positionisgainingsomeground.当出现两种或两种以上的观点时，过渡词（however,but,yet,onthecontrary,bycontrast,inthisinstance等后引出另一观点，一般转折后的观点是作者的观点，作者的观点才是全文主旨。Skill2Let’shaveatry!Findoutthetopicsentenceineachparagraph

keypoints1.Advertisingplaysamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.2.Advertisingencouragespeopletobuythingstheydonotwantthroughmisleadingideas.3.Advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.4.Advertisingplaysapartinhelpingcustomerstocompareaproductintermsofprice,quality,reliabilityandsoon.Howtoparaphrasethekeysentences?Part2:1.Usewordsofsimilarmeanings

同义替换法1.Sincetheyargued,shehasbeengiventhecoldshoulderbyherfriend.Sincetheyargued,shehasbeen_______byherfriend.ignored语态变换：Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise.Childrenshould__________morepraise.begiven

2.Changefromtheactivetothepassive3.Changethepositiveintothenegative改变正负Youwillfail.Youwill____________.notsucceed4.Changethepartofspeech

词性转换法Patienceisveryimportant.Patienceis_____________________.ofgreatimportance(5)

ChangecomplexwordsintosimplewordsWeshouldencouragechildren.Weshouldnotscoldthem.Weshouldencouragechildren__________scoldingthem.insteadof(6)Changetheorderofthewords.

词序改变法Thesecretofsuccesswaspatience.________was___________________.PatiencethesecretofsuccessWaystoparaphrase1.Usewordsofsimilarmeaning同义词2.Changetheorderofinformation改变顺序3.Changefromtheactivetothepassive主动被动4.Changethepositiveintothenegative改变正负5.Changecomplexwordsintosimplewords6.Changepartofspeechdependingonwordformation词性Foodcanbemanufacturedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.manufacture;cheaply;improved;better;manufacture-----cheaply-----(improved;better)------Peoplecanproducefoodmuchmoreeconomicallythankstomoreadvancedfertilizersandmachinery.economically/inexpensivelyadvancedproducePractice1.Advertising

playsamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.Advertisements

makeagreatdifferencetobusiness.areofgreatsignificancetoarebeneficialtoarevitaltoarecrucialto2.Advertising

encouragespeopletobuythingstheydonotwantthroughmisleadingideas.

Advertisementscanattractpeopletopurchase

unnecessaryandinadvisablethingswithitsfalse/untruthfulinformation,likecigarettes.3.Advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.Advertisementscanhaveaneffectoncustomers'choicesofpurchasinggoodsintheirdailylife.Advertisementscanpersuadecustomers,especiallyteenagers,intomakingunwisechoices,suchaseatingjunkfoodandsoon.4.Advertisingplaysapartinhelpingcustomerstocompareaproductintermsofprice,quality,reliabilityandsoon.Theyhelppeoplegetsmartbyprovidingusefulandcomprehensiveinformation.

Point1:Advertisementsmakeagreatdifferencetobusiness.Point2:Advertisementscanattractpeopletopurchaseunnecessaryandinadvisablethingswithitsfalseinformation,lik