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现代传统对比

环境类别：

1）自然环境保护

2）人文家庭环境现代与传统对比（MODERN

VSTRADITION）

第一 现代与传统不同之处

第二 现代与传统的公共设施对比

第三 现代与传统的通讯方式对比

第四 现代与传统的食品与农业发展对比

第五 现代与传统在价值观方面对比

现代社会发展对自然环境的负面影响

Advanced

science

and

technology

as

well

as

theexpeditious

development

of

modern

society

haverendered

the

whole

ecosystem

and

natural

environmentvulnerable. The

significance

of

the

maximization

ofeconomic

profit

has

been

unjustifiably

highlighted

andemphasized,

and

resulting

from

which,

sustainabledevelopment

has

always

been

neglected.

However,

intraditional/conventional

society,

the

harmonious

co-existence

between

the

human

beings

and

the

naturalenvironment

was

always

given

the

top

priority.现代与传统对比（MODERN

VSTRADITION）

现代社会发展对人文环境的影响

The

development

of

modern

society

has

also

imposed

a

significantlynegative

influence

upon

the

interpersonal

relationship.

People,

especially

those

youngsters,

usually

focus

upon

competition

andindividual

achievement

instead

of

cooperation

and

collective

interests.

They

spend

a

great

deal

of

time

upon

working

and

learning

and

little

uponsharing

quality

time

with

their

friends

and

family

members. In

turn,alienation

with

family

members

and

indifference

towards

others

may

ensue.

In

traditional

society,

people

were

living

in

the

close-knit

community

andrelied

upon

each

other

in

their

daily

lives

and

could

not

possibly

live

withouteach

other. They

also

tended

to

care

much

about

others’

wellbeing.现代与传统对比（MODERN

VSTRADITION）

现代传统：图书馆/博物馆/艺术陈列馆是否可以被替代

Although

advanced

science

and

technology

can

surelycome

up

with

amazing

convenience

and

efficiency

tousers

and

visitors

of

libraries,

museums

or

art

galleries,these

public

facilities

and

institutions

cannot

bereplaced

by

these

modern

devices. The

veryreasonseems

to

be

that

these

facilities

and

institutions

areable

to

provide

an

outstanding

atmosphere

for

learning,studying

and

researching,

which

is

what

moderntechnologies

fail

to

supply.现代与传统对比（PUBLIC

FACILITIES）

In

addition,

compared

with

technologies,

thesepublic

facilities

are

more

accessible

for

thegeneral

public. For

example,

illiterate

peoplecan

receive

assistance

and

support

fromworking

staff

at

museums

and

thoseimpoverished

can

read

newspapers

ormagazines

in

libraries.

However,

if

moderntechnologies

prevail,

they

would

have

to

worryabout

paying

the

high

computer

expense

andadditional

Internet

connection

fees.现代与传统对比（PUBLIC

FACILITIES）

信件是否会被手机或电子邮件取代？

Correspondence

letters

are

more

acceptable

on

someformal

occasions,

such

as

job

interview

and

weddinginvitation. Otherwise,

using

email

or

text

messages

canbe

deemed

as

lack

of

proper

respect

and

courtesy.

In

addition

to

this,

correspondence

letters

are

moreavailable

for

those

people

who

are

either

poor

or

old,because

theymay

not

afford

or

understand

the

use

ofmodern

communication

devices.现代与传统对比（COMMUNICATION）现代与传统对比（FOOD

AND

AGRICULTURE）

现代传统：科技对农业和食品行业的影响

Advanced

science

and

technologies

havesignificantly

enhanced

the

agricultural

yields,which

further

help

to

solve

food

shortage

andfamine

among

other

crucial

social

issues.Otherwise,

social

order

and

stability

may

beendangered

and

undermined,

which

wouldimpose

a

considerably

negative

influence

uponliving

condition

of

ordinary

people.

However,

these

technologies

are

not

flawless

andthey

also

have

some

apparent

blemishes.

Forexample,

fertilizers

and

pesticide

have

alreadyposed

a

danger

to

the

sustainable

development

ofecosystem

by

polluting

underground

water

and

soillayer. In

addition,

because

of

ubiquitous

poisonresidue

left

on

the

agriculture

crops,

ordinarypeople’s

physical

health

has

also

been

threatened.Finally,

though

some

genetically

engineered

food

is

considered

as

the

future

for

food

industry,

itspotential

dangers

have

yet

to

be

identified

andexamined

in

a

large

scale.现代与传统对比（FOOD

AND

AGRICULTURE）

Traditional

games

do

not

bear

many

factors

of

technology

support

->focus

upon

the

significance

of

individuals

in

games

and

usuallyhappen

outdoors

->

much

better

in

fostering

practical

and

socialskills

especially

for

children

(chess)

Traditional

games

focus

upon

teamwork

rather

than

private

influence->

build

up

teamwork

spirit

->

help

to

learn

how

to

get

along

well

witheach

other

and

work

with

others

in

an

effective

way

(tug

–of

–

war)

Modern

games

consist

of

a

large

amount

of

information

and

depictthem

in

a

vivid

way

->

help

children

to

get

access

to

an

increasingamount

of

knowledge,

such

as

computer

technology现代与传统对比（价值观现代与传统游戏）自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环保中突出的言行不一致现象

原因一：环保重要性的理解肤浅

Many

individuals

are

clearly

aware

of

thesignificance

of

environmental

protection;

however,they

are

constantly

reluctant

to

take

any

action.

Itis

apparent

that

many

individuals

alwaysunderestimate

the

possible

influence

that

theiractions

may

give

rise

to. For

example,

when

onedumps

a

button

battery

into

a

lake,

he

may

notrealize

that

the

lake

water

would

be

heavilypolluted

by

heavy

metals.自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环保中突出的言行不一致现象

原因二：环保活动的费时费力

In

addition,

protecting

the

environment

can

bequite

time-consuming,

and

at

the

same

time,

itcan

be

quite

troublesome

and

may

need

agreat

deal

of

efforts. Therefore,

manyindividuals

are

unwilling

to

make

efforts

thoughmany

of

them

deem

it

as

both

necessary

andmeaningful.自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环保中突出的言行不一致现象

解决方法：政府应当站出来承担责任

First

of

all,

the

government

needs

to

put

moreefforts

to

publicize

the

significant

difference

onecan

make

to

the

environment

protection

in

theirdaily

lives.

Secondly,

it

is

also

liable

to

establish

morerecycling

facilities

and

provide

necessary

rewardsto

ensure

ordinary

people

enjoy

convenience

andreduce

costs

when

they

attempt

to

protect

theenvironment.自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环境保护是否只能由政府和国际组织负责？

As

a

global

issue,

environment

protection

should

be

dealt

with

through

a

systematic

approach.

Itmeans

that

it

needs

joint

efforts

from

all

parties,including

international

organizations,

governments,environmental

institutions

and

individuals.

Tosimply

emphasize

any

single

part

of

them

is

justunwise

and

unreasonable,

and

cannot

effectivelysolve

the

environmental

issues.自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环境保护是否只能由政府和国际组织负责？

Each

individual

may

be

quite

limited

in

power

andthus

he

could

only

make

limited

contribution

to

theenvironment

protection,

however,

we

cannotunderestimate

the

colossal

influence

when

billionsof

individuals

around

the

world

unite

together

andmake

joint

efforts

to

protect

the

environment.

Itwould

fundamentally

change

the

whole

world

andreverse

the

environment

pollution.自然环境问题(NATURAL

ENVIRONMENT)

环保问题解决是否可以简单了事？

常见问题：建议大幅度提高燃料价格，来保护环境？或者建议限制民用飞机的飞行，来减少污染

回答：因噎废食的做法不可取人文环境(FAMILY

RELATIONSHIP)

老龄化问题aging

problem/ageing

problem

Aging

problem

may

need

an

increasing

amount

ofpension

or

medical

aid,

which

would

usually

leadto

a

significant

burden

for

the

social

securitysystem.

Also,

it

creates

the

shortage

in

labormarket

and

thus

may

slow

down

the

economicdevelopment.

Ageing

population

may

on

some

occasions

bebeneficial

as

the

social

experience

from

the

elderlycan

be

a

huge

asset

for

their

offspring’s

growth.人文环境(FAMILY

RELATIONSHIP)

现代社会压力对家庭关系的巨大影响

Increasing

pressure

from

the

social

competitionshould

be

held

liable

for

overtime

working.

Manyenterprises

push

their

employees

to

work

extratime

to

enhance

production

and

achievement.

Apart

from

that,

on

some

occasions,

employeesthemselves

are

eager

to

work

harder

by

spendingmore

spare

time

on

work.

Facing

demanding

workduties

and

fierce

competition

from

their

peers,they

have

to

devote

increasing

time

and

energy

toworking

as

much

as

possible.人文环境(FAMILY

RELATIONSHIP)

现代社会压力对家庭关系的巨大影响

The

consequence

t