外研-高中英语必修4Module-2writing优秀课件26

Module2TrafficJamWriting外研版必修四Four(tooReadthepassageon1.Howmanyproblemtalkabout?BeijingTraffic

Whatisatrafficjam?Itmeanslotsoftraffictravelinginthestreetatthesametime.ToknowsomethingabouttrafficjamsTowriteapassageabouttrafficproblemsindividuallyBrainstormideasaboutthetrafficPre-writing2.Whatarethecausesoftheproblems?3.Howmanysolutionsdoesthewriterfind?Readthepassageonpage18andanswerthequestions.1.Howmanyproblemsdoesthewritertalkabout?Problemscausessolutions

while-writingSomeadvicehowtowriteapassageaboutthetrafficjamLearnsomevocaulary,phrasesandsentencepatterns

Practice最近，你班同学围绕“Howtosolvetheproblemofheavytraffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：此类文体为议论文；2．确定人称：主要人称应为第三人称；3．确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第二步：核心词汇和句型1．haveadebateabout就……展开讨论2．trafficjam交通阻塞3．tostartwith首先4．leadto导致5．lastbutnotleast最后同样重要的是6．respect/obeytrafficrules遵守交通规则7．dealwith处理，对付8．insiston坚持9．pedestrian

行人；步行者sentence

patterns1．Thereasonwhy…isthat…2．Sbholdtheopinionthat…3.Themostimportantreasonisthat…4.Onlywhen…cansb/sth…1.what'smore/besides/moreover/inaddition2.tobeginwith/firstofall...atlast...3.lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是...4.inaword/allinall...TransitionalWords第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)

Tostartwith,avastpopulationleadstoheavytraffic.2.最重要的原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that引导表语从句)

Themostimportantreasonisthatsomepeopledon'trealizetheimportanceofrespectingtrafficrules.3.为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)

Todealwiththisproblem,somestudentssuggestthatwe(should)buildmorewideroads.4.有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)Someoneelsethinksweshouldwalkandridethebikemore.5.减少私家车的使用。(privatecars)

Weshoulddriveprivatecarsless.6.行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)

Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrules.7.行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(ataredlight)

Pedestriansshouldn'tcrosstheroadataredlight.第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用insteadof合并句4和句5

Someoneelsethinksweshouldwalkorridethebikemoreinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.2.用and并列句合并句6和句7Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrulesandnotcrosstheroadataredlight.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇HowtosolvetheproblemofheavytrafficAlmosteverycityhasabigtrafficproblem.Today,ourclasshaveadebateabouthowtosolveit.Tostartwith,avastpopulationleadstoheavytraffic.Thereasonwhytrafficjamhappensfrequentlyisthatsomepeopledon'trealizetheimportanceofrespectingtrafficrules.Todealwiththisproblem,somestudentssuggestthatwe(should)buildmorewideroads.___________________________________________________________________

andmorebuslanesshouldbeopened.Besides,someoneelseholdstheopinionthatwehadbetterwalkorridethebikemoreinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.Lastbutnotleast,Pedestriansshouldobeytrafficrulesandnotcrosstheroadataredlight.

Inaword,onlywheneveryonestartsfromhimselfcanthetrafficproblemsbesolved.RelaxationRoleplay

假设你是北京世园会的一名志愿者，正在接受记者采访，就五一小长假期间市民去世园会游览的交通出行给一些适当的建议。比如尽量少开私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具；避开出行的高峰期；遵守交通规则，绿色出行You(Y)Reporter(R)AnexampleR:Hello.Y:hello.R:YouknowtheMayDayholidayiscoming,duringthisperiodthecitizensarelikelytotraveltotheBeijingExpo,whichmaycausetrafficjams,couldyoupleaseoffersomeadvice?Y：Ok.Y:SincetheExpoopening,therehavebeensomanytouristsaroundtheworldcomingheremanytouristsaroundtheworldcominghere,Whichwillbeabigchallengefortransportation.I’d

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suggestions：Firstofall,weshouddriveprivatecarslessandtakemorepubictransports,suchasundergrounds,travelbuses,bikesandsoon.Second,avoidtravelingattherushhour.Lastbutnotleast,respectingtrafficrulesisveryimportant.R:Thankyousomuch.Let’shaveagreentravelandenjoyourtrip.Bye.Y:Bye.SharingandappreciatingSafetransportationisthekey.安全出行是关键。Civilizedtravelbringsoutourquality.文明出行显素质。Greentravelisworthpraising.绿色出行需点赞。Beautyliesinthestateofmind.美不美丽在心境。Para1:problemsPara2:causesPara3:solutionsHomeworkWriteasimilarpassageaboutyourtown.Usethephrasesandsentencepatternsmentionedintheclass.1.美育包括美术教育和审美教育,文化是美育的底色和灵魂,不能忽视文化精神的培养。

2.欣赏中国绘画,应该了解其中计白当黑、浓淡生趣、意境天成等艺术手法和精神追求。

3.美育在中国近代历史上是一个很重要的概念,一直承载了爱国救亡、除弊振新的重任。

4.当下美育应重传统轻西方,融汇西方与民族、古典与现代的文化,形成好的审美教育体系。5.要推动人工智能规模化应用,就必须推动人工智能与各行业融合创新,在制造、农业、物流、金融等重点行业和领域开展人工智能应