读后续写好词好句积累进阶拔高二讲义

读后续写---拔高体验演讲人2022-01-05“感到悲伤”的细节描述“感到害怕”的细节描述“感到生气”的细节描述“感到羞愧”的细节描述“感到焦虑”的细节描述“感到开心”的细节描述“其他情绪”的细节描述最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。目录“感到悲伤”的细节描述01“感到悲伤”的细节描述【好词好句积累】“感到害怕”的细节描述02“感到害怕”的细节描述【好词好句积累】“感到生气”的细节描述03“感到生气”的细节描述【好词好句积累】“感到羞愧”的细节描述04“感到羞愧”的细节描述【好词好句积累】“感到焦虑”的细节描述05“感到焦虑”的细节描述“感到开心”的细节描述06例如：Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)【好词好句积累】“感到开心”的细节描述“其他情绪”的细节描述07“其他情绪”的细节描述背景描写（此部分的讲解老师带学生翻译佳句，生词讲解，语法结构剖析，帮助孩子记忆，最后强制要求学生背诵，才容易出效果）“其他情绪”的细节描述背景描写（此部分的讲解老师带学生翻译佳句，生词讲解，语法结构剖析，帮助孩子记忆，最后强制要求学生背诵，才容易出效果）【早上】【黄昏】【晚上】【即学即练】Para1:Para2:【早上】01020304（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.甜美的阳光，沁人心脾。Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI’mthere.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。【早上】21Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入.【早上】ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.【早上】Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。（部分描写也可用于其它时间）【黄昏】Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.

Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。

Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.

Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。

Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。【晚上】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）

Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的灯光)inthevillage.从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，狂风大作，雷声隆隆，我完全被它们的力量控制住了。Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinah

【即学即练】1Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.2Thegentlebreeze(微风)strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.3Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.【即学即练】radioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.【即学即练】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.过关检测2020年浙江卷Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.【即学即练】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.【即学即练】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.【即学即练】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).【即学即练】radioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；fewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Para1:Para2:01020304Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望→惊恐→放松。剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。【解析】由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，例如“Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.”这不仅合理地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.”Para2:最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。08最后，结尾部分