高中英语说明文概要写作公开课一等奖市赛课获奖课件

概要写作whatthesummarywritingis

1requestsofagoodsummary2howtowriteagoodsummary3Afterthisclass,wewillbeabletoknow:4skillsofsummarywritingAsummaryisa

shortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsomething,notthedetails.《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》Itisabrief,complete

and

objective

restatement(重述)ofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.01Whatisasummary?

提炼要点整合concordance

删除细节omitdetails删除详细例子omitspecificexamples防止反复avoidrepetition

同义转换:近义词、同义词等替代语言

句子重构:调整词类、语态(activevoice;passivevoice)等

逻辑：衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接）

02SkillsofSummaryWritinga60-wordsummaryuseyourownwordsinthethirdperson(第三人称)withabriefsentenceconnectionbetweensentences(句子衔接)03RequestsofSummaryWritingStep1.Readforthestyle,topicsentenceandstructureStep2.FindthekeyinformationofeachparagraphStep3.Paraphrase(改写)Step4.Writethedraft(草稿)andbetterit04StepsofSummaryWriting

MissLiisagracefulteacherwhoisalwaysreadytohelpstudentsinneed.ShehelpsstudentswhoneedimprovetheirEnglish.Shelooksafterstudentswhodon’tfeelwell.Missli,ateacher,iswillingtogiveahandtostudentsneedinghelp.Let'stry!Style：Topicsentence

：

Structure：ANarration

BArgumentation

CExposition

Haveyoueverwonderedwheretheycomefromandwhattheymean?11

A.2.3.4B.2.3

4Step1Readforthestyle,topicandstructureexpositionFind:

thefirst/lastsentence/jointhemtogetherStep2.Findthekeyinformationofeachparagraph

There’saquestion

that

has

millions

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correct

answersintheworld.That

question

is

“What’s

your

name?”

Everyone

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different

answer,

and

everyone

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correct.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Clarameans“bright”;Beatricemeans“onewhogiveshappiness”;Donaldmeans“worldruler”；Leonardmeans“asbraveasalion”.Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.AfamilywiththenameBrookorBrooksprobablylivednearabrook(小溪).SomeonewhowascalledLongstreetprobablylivedonalong,pavedroad.

Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairorskin,orsize,ortheirspecialabilities.WhenthereweretwomenwhowerenamedJohninthesamevillage,theJohnwiththegrayhairprobablybecameJohnGray.OrtheJohnwhowastallcouldcallhimselfJohnTallman.JohnFishwasprobablyanexcellentswimmerandJohnLongfootwasprobablyafastrunneroragooddancer.Step2.Findthekeyinformationofeachparagraphexamplesexamplesexamples…

is

correct.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Step3:Paraphrase(改写)originsmeaningscomeintobeingwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymeanHoweverthoughasAstopeople’snames,variousoriginsandmeaningsareinvolved.Facedwithavarietyofnames,peoplemaybecuriousabouthowtheycomeintobeing.Step3:Paraphrase

Variousaspeople’snamesare,theyhavedevelopedgraduallyinsomecommonways.

整合、提炼

Paraphrasesupportingpoints1,2&3onyourownandthensharethemwithyourdeskmate.Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Step3:Paraphrase

Somepeople’sfirstnamesmaycarryfamilymembers’wishesandblessings(祝愿).

Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.Step3:Paraphrase

Placenamesarewherepeoplegottheirinspirations(灵感).Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairorskin,orsize,ortheirspecialabilities.Step3:Paraphrase

Otheroriginsincludepeople’shairorskin,theirsizesaswellastheirspecialabilities.1.Astopeople’snames,variousorigins

andmeaningsare….

2.wishesandblessings(祝愿)3.Placenamesarewhere….

4.Otheroriginsinclude….Step4:writethefirstdraftandbetterit表转折：but,however,though,although表递进：inadditionto,notonly...butalso,besides,what’smore表对比：meanwhile,ontheotherhandChecklistWhetherdoeshe\shebeginwithasentencethatstatesthemainidea?usehis/herownwords?avoidaddinghis/herowncomments?userestatementtoemphasizethemainideaandunifyhis/herwriting?anymistakesinspelling,grammarandpunctuation?Ifso,pleaseunderlineandcorrectthem.ShowTime

Multipleaspeople’snamesare,theyhaveevolved

insomecommonways.Somefirstnamesoriginate

fromfamilymembers’sincerehopesandblessings.Placenamesarewherepeoplegotinspirationforsomeearlysurnames.Meanwhile,otherearlysurnamesarerelatedt