-2023年5月Z20名校联盟2023届高三第三次联考读后续写讲义-2023届高三英语写作三轮冲刺

2023年5月Z20名校联盟2023届高三第三次联考

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1试题原题·SHITIYUANTI·其次节读后续写〔总分值25分〕阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“SAIBABA!SaiBaba!SaiBaba!Hahahaha!〞

“TodayisShimla’sbigday!Wehaveacelebrityvisitingourcity!Hahahaha!〞Rani’scheeksburnedwithembarrassmentandtearsstunghereyesassheelbowedherwaytotheexitthroughthecrowdofteasingboysinthepackedschoolbus.Itwasn’tthefirsttimeshe’dbeencalledSaiBaba,afterthefamousHinduholyman〔印度圣人〕she’dseenonTVwithhistrademarkafro〔爆炸式卷发〕toweringoverhishead.

Butthistimehadtobetheworst.Ranijumpedofftheschoolbus,angrythoughtshoveringinsideRani’sheadasshemarchedhomeinthedrizzlingrain.Whydidherhairhavetocurllikeagiantcottoncandyballoonjustwhenshewantedittobehave?Why,why,why,fumedRaniassheturnedthebackdoorkey.

“Rani,isthatyou?〞

Mamacalledfromthefamilyroom.SuddenlyRani’scousins,AmitandSumit,camechargingtowardher.“HowmanyeggsdoesRanihaveinthatnestonherhead?〞screamedAmit.“Letmegetthatwig〔假发〕offRani’shead!〞

shoutedSumit.Beforeshecouldthink,Ranihadfledoutthedoorandwentbackuptheroadshe’dwalkeddownminutesbefore.Halfwayup,sheslidunseenbehindagreencurtainofbamboo.Tearingthroughthewildgrowth,shemadeherwaydownanarrowmudpathintoaclearing〔空地〕.Shethrewherschoolbagonthegroundandbreathedhard.

“Ihatemyhair!〞shecried.Collapsingonherschoolbag,shebitterlyrememberedthetimeshe’dspenttryingtosmoothherhairinvain.Beforelong,shefellintoafitfulsleep.

“RANI!RAAAANI!〞

RaniwokeuptoMama’scalls.Shesoundedanxious.“I’llnevergohome,〞

shepromisedherselfdarkly.MamaletAmitandSumitmakefunofme.Papawouldneverhavedonethat.Hewouldlistentomeandstandbymyside.Theminutesworeon.Aloneinhersecrethideout,RaniwatchedtheshadowofMamnagetlongerandbegintodisappearasduskfell.留意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.

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ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.______________________Part

2试题分析·SHITIFENXI·●写作分析1.主要人物〔角色〕：①Rani:“Ihatemyhair!〞②Mama:MamaletAmitandSumitmakefunofme.③Papa:Papawouldneverhavedonethat.Hewouldlistentomeandstandbymyside.2.主题：人与自我——如何正确熟悉自我Rani由于她的头发，常常被人欺侮笑话。有一天最终忍无可忍，被称赞后，她逃到一个隐藏的地方躲避并思索自己的问题。最终，在父亲的关心下，她对自己有了全新的熟悉，走出了心理的“逆境〞。

3.续写情节支配：●第一段：Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.

①〔与开头句连接〕当时的心情：可怕？懊悔？......②但想到之前的经受，预备连续隐藏③〔与下文开头句连接〕在感到特别无助的时候，父亲消失了●其次段：ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.

①〔与开头句连接〕父亲怎样挑起开导的话题？②与父亲怎样沟通③最终在父亲的关心下走出了头发的“阴影〞Part

3·XIASHUIZUOWEN·●下水作文

Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.Sofrightenedwasshethatherheartbeatfast.Fearaswellasabitregret,shekeptstill,notknowingwhatwouldhappennext.Indeed,whatsheexperiencedintheverydaycontributedtoherdeterminationthatshewouldnevergohome.However,asthesoundofthestepsapproached,therecameafamiliarfigure.ItwasPapa,holdinganumbrellawithanxiousexpressions.Ranicouldn’twaittorushoutofhersecrethideoutbeforePapaknewit.Shedashedoverandhuggedhimtightly,burstingoutcryingwithgreatsadness.ItseemedtobedecadesbeforeRanicalmeddown.(101words)

ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.WhatsurprisedhermostwasthatnoblamecamefromPapa.Instead,Papa’swarmwordsmelther“frozen〞

heart.“Iamhereforyou,Rani!〞

Papasaidasifnothinghadhappened.“FromMama,Iknowwhatoccurredtoyou.Ireallyunderstandyouruniquehair,whichapparentlyhasbroughtyousomuchtrouble.Butletitgo!You’realwaysagiftedgirlinourhearts!Itisyourgoodperformanceandtalentthatshowwhatyouare!Cheerup,mygirl!...〞

Onthatgloomyday,nothingwasbetterthansuchwordsfullofloveandunderstandingthatgavehercouragetofacelifewithconfidence.(108words)参考范文：Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.Ranifroze.Sheknewaboutthedangerousanimalsthefoxesandsnakesandevenmaneaterleopardsthatlurkedinthelushjungles.Ashiverwentdownherspine.Huggingherselfclose,shecrouchedlower,notdaringtomoveamuscle.Tinynightbugsbitintohersoftfleshandhungerpangswrackedherbelly.Raniwastorturedbysuchadisastrousday!Sheheldherbreathastherustlinggrewlouder,hereyesscanningthebushesfrantically.Suddenly,thethickleavesparted,andadarkformsteppedintotheclearing.Rani'sheartleapingwithfear,sheopenedhermouthtoscream.(99words)ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.ReliefandjoyfloodedthroughRani.SheflungherarmsaroundPapaandclungtohim.“Rani!What'swrong?〞avisiblyrelievedPapaasked.Ranihesitatedatfirstbutthenbrokedownintears,“ihatemyhair!〞Shepouredouteverythingaboutteasing.“Andthat'snotall,Ranisobbed.“MamaevenletAmitandSumitgetawaywithit.〞Papasighed,strokedherdisheveledhairandplantedasoftkissonherforeh