2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句-家庭关系、社会关系人与社会

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家庭关系社会关系（人与社会）

2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句

【读后续写】

1.（2023•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrench

toastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeff

knewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.They

decidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadethe

Frenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesinto

theeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Everythingwasgoing

smoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jenna

threwtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridge

boiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthe

stovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheponidge.But

Jeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshe

caughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

【答案】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father'sappearingwaslikea

saviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.

Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeyto

success.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousand

perfectbreaklastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforher

thatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn'texpect.The

childrensaidloudly,uHappyMother'sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.

【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，

做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。“可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指

导帮助他们准备早餐。

②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子

们的礼物早餐，非常感动。

2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动

3.词汇激活

行为类

①帮助：help/assist

②完成：finish/complete

③拥抱：hug/embrace

情绪类

①高兴：happy/delighted

②感动：moved/touched

【点睛】[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess,（which引导的非限制性

定语从句）

[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.（固定短

语notonly…but（also）和强调句型）

2.（2022•辽宁盘锦•盘锦市辽东湾实验高级中学（辽宁省实验中学辽东湾分校）校考模拟预测）阅读下面材

料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Myjobisjustoneoftheessentialjobs,asanitation（卫生系统）engineer,notaglamorousone,butis

consideredthealternative.Ofcourse,Ineverregarditasanashamedtasktobeinmyposition.Aboutthesecond

weekofthelockdownbecauseoftheCovid-19,1washavingtroublefindingasanitizingspray（1肖毒喷雾）formy

truck.Thenextmorningonmywaytoworkat4a.m.,Istoppedatoneofthefewstoreswhichwereopenthatearly,

hopingtopurchasesome.However,itwasonlyopenforthepoliceandmedicalpersonnel."Lookatmyvest

please,1beggedtotheclerk,"I'mnotjustbuyingitformyself.^^"I'mmorethansorry,sir.Butthisisjustthe

regulation,andIreallycan'thelp."repliedthesmilinggirl.AsIturnedtoheadbacktomycarwithdisappointment,

Inearlybrokedown.

Comingoutofthestore,mystomachbegantocallforenergysupport.Istoppedata7/11andorderedan

everythingbagel（硬面包）withcreamcheesetosatisfymypoorstomachandmyemptyheart.Itwastoastywarm,

andIcouldn'twaittodigin.ButasIleftthestorewithalittlejoycomingsweetlyfromthebagel,Inoticedascene

thatanoldmanwassittingatthebusstop,inrags.Knowingthatitwouldprobablybehisonlywarmmealofthe

day,Igavehimthebagelwithoutanyhesitation.JustwhenIwasreadytoturnaroundforanothersamebagel,

somethingwarmingmyheartcameintobeing.Anothercustomer,agentlelady,fromthe7/11offeredmehalfofher

bagel.<4Weeveryoneshouldbetakencareofatsomecertainmoment.^^shesaidwithatendersweetvoiceasI

smiledtothankhersincerely.IwasdelightedbecauseIrealizedthatinonewayoranother,wewerealllooked

after.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

SoIdecidedtogobacktotheformerstoretotrymyluckagainforthespray.

JustbeforeIgaveup,alocalpolicemanwasheadingintothestore.

【答案】So/decidedtogobacktothefannerstoretotrymyluckagainforthespray.Themorningsunlightwas

brightbuttenderasIwasdrivingbacktothestore.Hopingforamiracle,Ipulledupatthestoreandinchedcloseto

it.ButitwaswhenIgotthesamereplyasbeforethatIwasannoyedagainbythestrictrule.uPlease!Thereisn'tan

angelallthetimearoundyou.^^Iwhispered.Butallhopewasnotlostforme.

JustbeforeIgaveup,alocalpolicemanwasheadingintothestore.Instantlyhecamein,thepoliceman

spottedmyvestandaskedmewhichcompanyIworkedfor,thencontinuedtothankmeforbeingoutthere.I

repliedthatitwasthepolicewhodeservedthanks.WhenaskedifIneededhishelp,Itoldhimmytrouble.Hewent

intothestore,purchasedthesprayandbroughtitouttome,drivingawaywithouttakinganymoney.Again,I

believedthatwewerealllookedafterinonewayoranother.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一名卫生系统的工程师，疫情期间想为自己的卡车买一个

消毒喷雾，却因为“只能卖给警察和医护人员”的规定，被拒绝。走出商店，他为自己买了点充饥的硬面包,

看见公交站台一个衣衫褴褛的老人，就毫不犹豫地把面包给了他。正当他准备重新买一个面包时，一位温

柔的女士主动把自己的面包分享给他一半，并说：“特殊时期，我们应该互相照顾。”

【详解】I.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我决定回之前的商店再去试试运气买消毒喷壶”可知，第一段可描写作者在商店买喷壶

被拒绝。

②由第二段首句内容“他刚要放弃，一位警察走进了店里”可知，第二段可描写警察为作者买消毒喷壶。

2.续写线索：开车前往商店——再次被拒绝——与警察对话——警察买喷壶——感悟

3.词汇激活:

行为类

①停车：pullup/stop/park

②缓慢移动：inch/creep

(3)一...就：instantly/immediately/assoonas/themoment/theinstant

④看见：spot/see/notice

情绪类

①生气的：angry/annoyed/upset/furious

②感谢：thanksbfor/showone'sappreciation/showone'sgratitude/begrateful

［点睛］［高分句型1］Hopingforamiracle,Ipulledupatthestoreandinchedclosetoit.（现在分词作状语）

［高分句型2］ButitwaswhenIgotthesamereplyasbeforethatIwasannoyedagainbythestrictrule.（强调句型）

［高分句型3］WhenaskedifIneededhishelp,Itoldhimmytrouble.（状语从句中的省略）

3.（2022秋•湖南长沙•高三长郡中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,

使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Alicehadjustbeenappointedinthemultinationalbank.Afteronemonthofseveretraining,todaywasherfirst

daytogotowork.

Shegotupabitearlierthanusual,anddecidedtoskiphergymworkoutasshedidnotwanttoriskbeingtired

orgettinglatetoherofficeonherfirstday.Shewentthroughhermorningroutineandspentalotoftimein

selectingwhattowear.Noneofherdressesseemedtoappealtoher-theywereeitheralittletoocasualortoodull

andshedefinitelywantedtomakeanimpressionrightfromthestart.Finallyshesettledonthewhiteembroidered

（刺绣的）dress.

Shewavedbyetohermomandsetoffcheerfullytowardsthebusstop.Butshesawabusleavingthestopjust

asshecrossedthestreet.Nowshewouldhavetowaitforagood15minutes.15minutespassedandthen30

minutesandtherewasnosignofthebus."Itmustbestuckinheavytraffic”,akindladywhowasalsowaitingfor

thebustoldher.Hearingthat,Alicegotanxious.Shehadtoreachherofficeontime.Thenshesawataxi

approachingbutwhenshetriedtostopit,thetaxidriverspedbywithouteventakingaglanceather.Alicewas

wonderingwhatshecoulddo.

Itwasthenthatacarstoppednearherandamanwavedtoher.Thedriveraskedherwhereshewasgoingand

afterAlicetoldhimthatshewasgoingtothebankatNarimanPoint,themansaid"Oh,myofficeisinthenearby

building.CanIgiveyouaAlicehesitatedforamomentandgotintothecar.Theyexchangednamesand

begantotalkforawhile.Thenthedriverswitchedontheradioandwasabsorbedinthesong.Alicelookedoutof

thewindowandimaginedherfirstdayatwork,worryingwhethershewascapableofthenewjob,andifshecould

getalongwellwithhercolleagues.Afterabouttenminutes,Alicerealizedtheywerenotonthefamiliarroutetoher

office.

注意:续写词数应为150左右；

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Shebegantoworrythatshemightgetintothecarofabadman.

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ThenthecarturnedaroundacomerandAlicesawthetallbuildingwhereherofficewasunexpectedly.

【答案】ParagraphI:

Shebegantoworrythatshemightgetintothecarofabadman.Sosheaskedcautiouslywhethertheywere

goingtoherbank.Thedriversaidthattheytookanewshortcut,astherewasusuallyheavytrafficontheotherone

atthishour,andcontinuedhissong.ThatmadesomesenseandAlicedidn'tsayanythingmore.Anotherfifteen

minutespassed,andtheroadwasevenstrangerforher.ThatmanwasdrivingspeedilyandAlicebecamemoreand

moreanxious.Shedecidedthatwhenthecarnextstoppedatthetrafficlights,shewouldjumpout.

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ThenthecarturnedaroundacomerandAlicesawthetallbuildingwhereherofficewasunexpectedly.She

breathedasighofrelief.Withinminutes,theyreachedthegateofthebuilding."Hereweare!"thedriverpulledup

andsaid.Alicegotoutofthecar,herfaceturningred.Shefeltquitesorryforhavingdoubtedthedriver.She

believedtherewereindeedmorekindpeopleintheworld.Shesaid,"Thankyouverymuch!*',withabigsmile,and

hurriedtoherofficewithgreatexpectation.Sheknewshewouldhaveagoodday.

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了刚刚被任命到跨国银行的女孩Alice,顺利通过严苛的训练，即将

走上工作岗位。在第一天上班路上遇到交通拥堵，未能及时搭上公交车，情急之下搭上一位陌生人的顺风

车，在对司机的信任与怀疑中纠结，并在最后及时到达公司的事情。

【详解】段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“她开始担心自己可能上了坏人的车。”可知，第一段可描写女孩Alice认为自己可能遇

到坏人的忐忑的心理活动，以及判断司机是坏人的线索。

②有第二段首句“然后汽车拐了个弯，爱丽丝看到了她办公室所在的高楼。”可知，第二段可描写峰回路转之

后，Alice的欣喜之感。另外，对于怀疑司机的愧疚之感以及对司机的感激之情。

续写线索：被任命——选衣服——交通拥堵——搭顺风车——怀疑——担忧——感谢

词汇激活

行为类

①决定：decide/settleon

②看：see/look/takeaglanceat/glanceat/stareat/glareat

③担忧：get/becomeanxious/worry

情绪类

①开心cheerfully>say...withabigsmile/do...withgreatexpectation

②如释重负：breath/heaveasighofrelief/feelasenseofrelief

【点睛】［高分句型1］Itwasthenthatacarstoppednearherandamanwavedtoher.（Itwas…that…为强调句）

［高分句型2JAlicegotoutofthecar,herfaceturningred.（turning为非谓语动词作伴随状语）

［高分句型3］Alicelookedoutofthewindowandimaginedherfirstdayatwork,worryingwhethershewascapable

ofthenewjob,andifshecouldgetalongwellwithhercolleagues.（worrying为非谓语动词作伴随状语）

4.（2022,江苏南通•海安高级中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，

使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“MeetonemoreandI'lldefinitelyaskafavour.^^Ginathought,lookingupatthestreetlights,everything

immersed（沉浸在）inthedarknight.44Alas!ThisunluckyShesaidtoherself,helpless.

Behindhercamethejinglingofbicyclebells.HardlyhadGinaletout"ah"whenacyclingyoungmanswept

past.

“Why,thecyclistwasback?”Ginawhisperedtoherself.Theyoungmansuddenlyreturnedandwasalreadyin

frontofGinabeforesheknewit.Gina'sheartwaspoundingunderhightension.44Whatwillhedoonsuchadark

night?^^“Calledmejustnow?”Theyoungmangotoffhisbike.Ginashookherheadrepeatedlybutgently.Astrong

senseofself-defenseovercameherandsherefusedtosayyes.

"Somethingwrongwithyourbike?"Apairofsmilingeyesmethers.Ginabecamesomewhatcalm."Thefront

tirehasgonesheresponded,headdown,arayofhopearising."Well,Ican'thelpitwithnotools."Theyoung

manmanagedasmile.Gina'sheartsankagain.4€Doyoulivefar?”theyoungmansearchedherfaceforananswer.

“Me?”sheasked,keepingpushingherbikeforward."Well,ontheleftsideofthestreetendisarepairshop.Wish

youluck!”Withthesewords,theyoungmanrodeaway.Ginaalmostburstintotears."It'salmostmidnight.Where

canIfindarepairshop?Aliar."Shestartedtohatetheyoungman.

Almostattheendofthestreet,Ginacouldn'thelpbutlookup.Nearthesidewalk,therewasreallyashopwith

thelightstillon.

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Shepausedhesitantly,andoutoftheshopcameagirlinhertwenties.

Withthehelpoftheyoungmanandthegirl,thetirewassoonrepaired.

【答案】Shepausedhesitantly,andoutoftheshopcameagirlinhertwenties.6€Hi,there!Comeoverhere.9,thegirl

wavedtoGina.Ginasuddenlylitup,fearentirelygone.Ayoungmancameout.Ginabecameshocked,recognizing

itwastheyoungmanshehadiustcomeacross.4€Mybrothercamebackfromwork.Hetoldmetowaitforyou

here."Thegirlspokehappily.Ginasmiledgratefullyandthankedthemsincerely4tNothing,mybrotherwasafraid

youdidn'tdaretocomeandiustletmeupheretogreetyou."Thegirlreplied.

Withthehelpoftheyoungmanandthegirl,thetirewassoonrepaired.*4HowmuchdoIoweyou?"Gina

asked.ttMoney?^^Theyoungmansmiledwithabigdirtyhandstretchingout."Fiftydollars.,,tTifty?^^Feelingso

shocked.Ginahadtosearchherpurse."Brother...”,criedthegirlinaloudvoice.€lStopkidding!”Shewentclose

toGina,"Don'tworry,hewasjustkidding.Wedon'trunarepairbusiness.Infact,wewerejustherewaitingto

repairyourbike.”

【分析】所给文章讲述Gina夜晚独自一人在路上很无助，因为她的自行车轮胎坏掉这时过来一位年轻

人问她是否需要帮助，Gina由于害怕没有接受。年轻人只告诉她马路左边尽头处有一家修理铺，便离开了。

Gina认为他在说谎，但还是忍不住朝那个方向看了看，好像真的有一家店铺还亮着灯。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“她迟疑了一下，一个二十多岁的姑娘从商店里走了出来。“可知，第一段可描写Gina

鼓足勇气走到店里寻求帮助的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“在年轻人和女孩的帮助下，轮胎很快就修好了。”可知，第二段可描写Gina得到帮助

后表示感谢并且对年轻人为他人着想的品质所感动。

2.续写线索：走进店里——帮助修理——说出真相——感谢

3.词汇激活

行为类

①遇见：comeacross/encounter

②回来：comeback/return

③寻找：search/lookfor

情绪类

①开心起来：lightup/cheerup

②震惊：shocked/astounded

【点睛】[高分句型1].Ginabecameshocked,recognizingitwastheyoungmanshehadjustcomeacross.（现在

分词作状语；省略that的宾语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句）

[高分句型2].Nothing,mybrotherwasafraidyoudidn'tdaretocomeandjustletmeupheretogreetyou.（省略

that的宾语从句）

5.（2023•安徽黄山•一模）阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，

续写词数应为150左右。

Baskinwasa20-year-oldsophomoreattheUniversityofSouthCarolinawhoseparentsransmallrestaurant.

Ashewastheonlycollegestudentinhisfamily,hisfamilytriedtheirbesttosupporthim.Baskinalwaysworkedas

awaiterintherestauranttolightenhisparents'burdens.Hewassohardworkingthatmanycustomerspraisedhis

hospitableservice.Hisparentsalsoappreciatedandtrustedhimalot.

Itwasabusynightattherestaurant.Afterafewguestswalkedinandsatdown,theyorderedabottleofthe

ChateauPichonLonguevilleComtesse2001-avaluablewineworthalmost€6,000.

Havingtoserveanothertable,Baskinthenaskedaworkmatetofetchthebottle.However,sincetheemployee

wasnew,sheaccidentallytookthewrongbottleofwine.Insteadofthewinethatwasorderedbythecustomers,she

servedtheChateauPichonLonguevillePomerol2001,whichcostabout€5,000.Asthebottlesandnameswere

similar,noonenoticedthemistake.

Baskindidn'trealizethemistakeuntilthecustomerswantedtoorderasecondbottleafterfinishingthefirst

one.Hecheckedtheorderquicklyandunderstoodwhatwaswrong.Hecleverlysuggestedtheyorderadifferent

one,withoutlettingthemknowwhathadhappened,whichcouldgivehimtimetothinkabouthowtosolvethe

problem.

Everythingseemednormal,butBaskinwaslostinthought.nWhatshouldIdotosolvethisproblem?"he

askedhimself.Ifhedidn'ttellthecustomersthemistake,hecouldkeeptheextra€1000secretly.Ashewasalsothe

cashieroftherestaurant,noonewouldknowwhathappened.€1000wasthetuitionfeeforthewholeschoolyear

andhisparentsneedn'tworkhardtoearnmoneyforhim.Orhecouldusethemoneytobuyhisfavoritelaptop

whichhisparentscouldn'tafford.Thisextramoneywasreallyahugetemptationtohim.Butinthisway,hewould

losehishonestyanddignity.

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Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.

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Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.

【答案】Possibleversion:

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Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatherasked

himwhatwashappening.Baskincouldn'thelptellinghimthetruth.Hisfatherlistenedattentivelyandgavehis

advice.HetoldBaskinheshouldtellthetruthandadmithismistake.Baskinthoughtthecustomersprobably

wouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuchattention.Hisfathersaidthatheshouldalwaysbe

honestandthatwayhewouldalwaysbetrusted.Baskinnoddedseriously.

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When/hecustomerscametopaythebill,withhisfather'sadviceinmind,Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.

Heexplainedthesituationtothecustomersandapologizedsincerelyfortheerror.Thecustomersweresurprisedat

thisandsaidtheyhadn'tnoticedthemistakeatall.Instead,theysaidthatthewinetheywereservedstilltastedvery

goodandfinishedbygivinghimalargetip.ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,saying

thatnoharmhadbeendoneandthecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeserviceThinkingback,Baskinwasgratefulto

hisfatherforsuchgoodadviceandalsolearnedanimportantlifelesson.

【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。Baskin是一个为学费在饭店打工的大二学生。一次工作当中的疏忽把6000块

的酒误上成了5000块的红酒。由于无人察觉这个失误，他有机会将一千元的红酒差价据为己有，但又无法

忍受内心道德的谴责，这时父亲走过来了。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“正当他苦苦思索如何选择的时候，他的父亲走了过来。“我们得知，父亲指导了Baskin

如何处理这件事情。所以第一段建议主要通过语言和动作描述Baskin和父亲之间的互动，即父亲如何劝说

他跟客人说出事实。

②由第二段首句内容“顾客们来结账时，巴斯金心里想着爸爸的建议，决定做正确的事。“可知，第二段主要

描写Baskin在父亲的指导下如何解决这一问题。解决方法可以写向客人说明事实并道歉。升华可以写诚实

和自尊拥有任何事物无法比拟的价值。只有诚实才能获得内心的平静。体现人与自我和正确价值观的主题

渗透。

2.续写线索：困惑——求助——真相—解释—满意

3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）

行为类

承认错误：admithismistake/accepthismistake

道歉：apologizedsincerely/makeasincereapology/saysorryto

【点睛】【高分句型写范文中的就可以，至少2个高分句型】

［高分句型11Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatheraskedhimwhatwashappening.（现在分词作时间状语，且

句中使用what引导的宾语从句）

［高分句型2JBaskinthoughtthecustomersprobablywouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuch

attention.（句中使用as引导的原因状语从句）

［高分句型3］ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,sayingthatnoharmhadbeendoneand

thecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeservice（现在分词作伴随状语，且句中使用that引导的宾语从句）

6.（2021秋•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

AworriedcallcameintoJimmyGill'sbarthispastMarch.Anewlymarriedwomanwhohadspentthe

afternoonatthebeachbarcouldn'tfindherwallet.Shedidn'tcareaboutherID,creditcards,or$150incash-but

herweddingringwasputinside.

Gilldidn'tliketheideathatatheftcouldhaveoccurredathisplace.Sohesetouttofindthewallet.Hespent

hoursscanningfootage（影片片段）from16differentsurveillance（监控），cameras,watchingthewoman'severystep

inthebaruntilshewenttositonabenchoutsideandleftwhenherridearrived.Withinminutes,ayoungmanina

jacketapproachedthebench,putsomethinghurriedinhispocket,andwalkedoff.Gillpostedacliponthebar's

Facebookpage."Ididn'twanttoaccusehim,“hesaid.4tIjustaskedifanybodyknewwhotheguywas.”

Withinhours,Gillgotatextfrom17-year-oldRiversPrather,who'dheardaboutthepostfromoneofhis

friends.PratheradmittedhavingtakenthewalletandtoldGillhe'ddoneitbecausehehadn'teatenintwodays.He

saidhesawtheringbutthoughtitwasfake,sohetookthemoneyandthrewthewalletoffthedock（码头）intothe

ocean.Thenheboughtasandwich.

Gill,unsurewhetherhebelievedPrather,toldtheteentomeethimatthedock.There,theygottotalking,and

Pratherrevealedthathewasn'tgettingalongwithhisfamilyandhadbeenlivinginthewoodsforaweek.Gill,a

fatheroftwowithanotherontheway,lookcloselyatPrather-hissmallbuild,hispalecheeks-andsawhimforwhat

hewas:moreofakidthanacriminal.

Butthepolicewerealreadyonthecase,andbecauseofthemissingring,Prathercouldbefacingcharges.4tHe

wouldbegoingtojail,“Gillsays.44Ihadtohelphimsomehow.^^

注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使的关键词语。

Para1:

Thenextday,Gillhiredtwodiverstosearchthewaters.

Para2:

Suddenlyadivercameoutofthewater.

【答案】Thenextday,Gillhiredtwodiverstosearchthewaters.Apolicewaswaitingforthemthere.Acrowdhad

togethertowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.Morethananhourpassedwithnosignofthering.

Gillgrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeginquestioningPeter,tryingtogethimtoadmitkeepingthering.

Suddenlyadivercameoutofthewater.Inhishandwasthewallet,andinsidewasthering.Cheersbrokeout

inthecrowd.WhenGillcalledthewallet'sowner,thewomanburstintotears.Shewasmorethandelightedand

promptlydroppedthechargeagainstthePratherforstealingthering.Butitwasn'toverforGill.He'dbeentroubled

aboutPrathersleepinginthecoldwoods.GillknewhishomewasbigenoughtogivePratheraplacetoliveinfora

while.Hetoldtheteenhecouldstaywithhisfamilyuntiltheboygotonhisfeetagain.

【分析】这篇续写以故事情节发展为线索，海滩酒吧的老板Gill接到投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，里面有

她的订婚戒指。Gill查了酒吧的监控，找到了线索，并将视频片段传到网上，想通过网络的力量找到拿走钱

包的人。几小时后，一个叫Prather的17岁少年主动联系了他。两人见面后，Prather讲述了拿走钱包的缘

由，作为两个孩子的父亲，Gill决定不追究其责任，觉得Prather更是一个孩子。但警察正在跟踪此案，Prather

有可能面临严重的指控。Gill决定帮助这个少年，他请了两个潜水员去Prather扔钱包的地方搜寻。

【详解】段落续写：

由第一段首句内容“第二天Gill请了两个潜水员去Prather扔钱包的地方搜寻。”可知第一段描写潜水员在水

里搜钱包的情况，以及岸上等待搜寻结果的警察、Gill和Parther的情况。

由第二段首句内容“突然，一个潜水员露出水面可知第二段描述搜寻情况，按照读后续写积极向上的导向，

应该是找到了戒指，Prather免除指控。

续写线索：潜水员搜寻——一直没搜到——警察审问Prather—潜水员搜到戒指——失主解除指控一Gill

继续帮助Prather

词汇激活

行为类

①.审问：question/interrogate

②.撤销指控：dropthecharge/cancelthecharge

③.恢复：getononeselffoot/recover

④.突然大哭：burstintotears/burstoutcrying

情绪类

①.担心：beworriedabout/troubleabout/grewworried

②,开心：morethandelighled/extremelyhappy

【点睛】［高分句型1］Gillgrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeginquestioningPeter,tryingtogethimto

admitkeepingthering.

（运用了when引导的时间状语从句；运用了现在分词短语作的伴随状语）

［高分句型2JHetoldtheteenhecouldstaywithhisfamilyuntiltheboygotonhisfeetagain.

（运用了省略that的宾语从句；运用了until引导的时间状语从句）

7.（2021秋•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。续写词数应为80左右。

Windwhistledroundthecornerofthehouse,thunderrolledandrainbeatagainstthewindows-notanight

tobeoutsidebutrathertositbythefire.Thankstothesolidwallsandroofoverhead,IcouldimagineDr.

Frankenstein'sfrighteningcreationwanderingonsuchanight.Iwasalone,myhusbandawayandthenearest

neighboraquartermilesdowntheroad.Alone,thatis,exceptforLassie,ahairy,blackandwhitedog,whosatwith

herheadonmylap,herintelligent,browneyesgazingupatmeasiftosay,don'tworry,we'llbeallright.

Throughtheyearsshewaswithus,sheprovedtimeandtimeagaintobeasuperbjudgeofcharacter.Wenever

knewifitwasaresultofhersenseofsmellorsound-but,whateveritwas,shedefinitelypossessedatalentwe

humanslacked.Onfirstmeetingshewouldeitherwagthetipofhertailacoupleoftimestoindicatethatthevisitor

wasacceptable,orslightlycurlhertoplip,exposinghersharpteethwhichtoldyoutobealert.Alwaysaccurate,her

giftwasnevermoreobviousthanonthisnight.

Thedoorbellrang.Idecidednottoanswerit.Itrangagain,muchlongerthistime.Whoeverwastherewasnot

goingaway.StillIhesitated.Onthefourthring,withLassiebymyside,Ifinallyansweredthedoor.Myheartbeat

fastandmymouthwentdry,forthere,stoodthemonsterhimself.Atwistedbodyunderaheavyovercoat,one

shoulderbumpedhigherthantheotherandhisheadleanedslightlyforwardandtooneside.

“MayIuseyourphone?^^Thevoicecamefromsomewherebackinhisthroatand,althoughtherequestwas

polite,histonewasrude.

Reachinginhispocketandproducingapieceofpaper,hehandedittome.Irefusedtotakeit.Believinghe

mighttryandforcehiswayin,IlookedatLassietoseeifshewasreadytodefendthehome.

Surprisingly,shesatbymyside,thetipofhertailwagging.

【答案】Apossibleversion：

TherewasnodenyingthatItrustedherjudge,basedonpastexperience.Unwillingly,Isignedtothestranger

intothehallwayandpointedtothephone.Hethankedmeashepickeditup.Unashamed,Istoodandlistenedtothe

conversation.Fromhiscomments,Ilearnedhiscarhadbrokendownandheneededsomeonetorepairit.Lassie

alwaysfollowedanyoneshemistrusteduntiltheyleftthehouse.Tonightshepaidnoattentiontoourvisitor.Instead,

sheranbackintothelivingroomandcurledupbythefire.Finishinghiscall,themanpreparedtoleave."Pmsorry

ifIfrightenedyou.IknowIlookstrange.Andthanksagainfbrtrustingandhelpingme“hesaidwiththesewords,

thestrangerheadedoutintothenight.

【分析】本文以一个风雨之夜为线索展开，讲述