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ContinuationWriting

七市州调考优秀作文23.5 AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye.ItwassuchalovelyonethatGradycouldn’tresiststeppingforwardtogetclose.Hethrewaglanceatthebearcub,pettinghisheadgently,withexcitementoverflowinginhismind.Hewasoverwhelminglyimmersedinplayingwiththebearcub,notrealizingwhatwashappeningaroundhim.”Grady,itistimetogoback.”Behindcamehisfather’svoice.Reluctantashewas,hedecidedtofollowhisfather.Allofasudden,hisfathershouted,”Watchout!” Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim.Nervousandfrightened,Gradystoodstill,notknowingwhattodo.Atthecriticalmoment,hisfathergrabbedhisarm,runningandclimbingontoatreetogether.Ittookseveralminutesbeforethebearleft.Climbingdownthetree,tearsrollingdownhisface,hethrewhimselfintohisfather’sarms.Notuntilthendidherealizehowmarvellousitwastounitewithhisfamily.ItwasatthatmomentthatGradydecidedtoenjoythecampingwithhisfamily.WhatmakesagoodpieceofContinuationwriting?

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straighttothepoint(主题,观点）2.completecontent 3.appropriate

(恰当的)wordsandphrases4.diverse（多样的）structures 5.logicalconnectionsbetweensentences6.neathandwriting

continuationwritingskill1facialexpressionsphysicalresponsespatsbontheshoulderwinkatsbwithabiggrincastaglimpseattrembleheavilyalookofconcernspreadingacrosshisfaceonthevergeofcollapsingleapwithgreatjoysparklewithenthusiasmChi-biMarukocriedbitterly,tears__________________________.streamingdownherface/cheeksMarblesmiledfromearto_____,________

hiswhiteteeth.

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Waitinganxiouslyfortheteachertoannouncetheresultoftheexam,I________atthepaperheldintheteacher'shands.Uponhearingtheresult,Ifeltthatmyheart_______________.Overwhelmedwithdisappointment,Ihidthepaperand_______________myhead,thinkingwhatIshoulddonextsinceIhadalreadytriedmybest.Atthatmoment,Iwasseizedbyasenseofsadnessandcouldn'thelp____________.staredbeathard/sanklowered/hungcryingbitterly嘟囔：whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur结结巴巴地说：stutter/stumble/stammer宣布：announce/declare保证：promise/assure建议：offer/propose/suggest；问与答：ask询问/answer回答/reply回复喊叫：cryout喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫）其他的说：add补充说道=continue继续说道/retort反驳道；explain解释道/state陈述道；/protest抗议道/sob哭诉道/agree同意地说/comfort安慰道/blurtout脱口而出/insist说的具体词闪烁（某种感情色彩）：shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinklewith+excitement/joy/pride等表示感情色彩的名词各种哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burstintotears/burstoutcrying/fightbacktears抑制住泪水睁大眼睛：one’seyeswidened/grewwide眼睛的具体动词露出笑容：asmileappearedon/spreadacrosshisface焕发光彩：one’sfacelitup/brightened/glowed脸红：flush/burn（withembarrassment）各种笑：smile微笑/laugh出声笑/chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥讽地笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑脸的具体动词各种打：pound/thump/punch猛击;beat连续击打；slap打耳光；tap/pat轻拍各种抓：seize；grasp；grab;clutch;takeholdof;catchholdof;holdonto其他的动作：pull拉/掏；push推；reach伸；drag拽；pinch捏wipe擦；rub揉；hug/embrace/holdsbinone’sarms拥抱；press按压；roll摇；pickup捡起手的具体动词sit坐；lie躺；bend/stoop弯腰；leanagainst..倚靠；drop/hang/lowerone’shead低头各种心跳：beat/thump/pound/pump(withexcitement/fear)其他动作：miss/skipabeat漏跳了一拍；break心碎；melt融化；ache疼dash/rush冲；risetoone’sfeet站起来;struggletoone’sfeet吃力地站起来;jumptoone’sfeet跳起来;kneeldown跪下;getdownononeknee单膝跪地;slip滑到；sneak/creep偷偷走；crawl爬；wobble/limp/stagger/stumble摇摇晃晃地走身体的具体动词心脏的具体动词脚的具体动词continuationwritingskill2naturalenvironmentThemanstoodfrozentothespotwiththerain__________downfromthedarkness.pouring

Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.

Showthereaderseverything,tellthemnothing.——ErnestHemingway——continuationwritingskill3diverse（多样的）structuresA、BandC(动作链)Themomentthebellrings,anumberofstudentsputdowntheirpens,closebooksand

rushtowardsthedininghallrapidly.A+B+非谓语Overwhelmedwithdisappointment,Ihidthepaperandloweredmyhead,thinkingwhatIshoulddonextsinceIhadalreadytriedmybest.

Atthecriticalmoment,hisfathergrabbedhisarm,runningandclimbingontoatreetogether.形容词及其短语作状语Embarrassedandnervous,Irushedoutofthehouse.Nervousandfrightened,Gradystoodstill,notknowingwhattodo.Concernedabouttheexamresult,shecanhardlyfallasleeplyingbedawake.

Aboutteno'clockinthemorning,exhausted

andhungry,Iwasdraggingmyselfalongthestreet.

倒装句so...that...Notonly...butalso...as引导的让步状语从句Innoway/Bynomeans/neverOnly+状语（介词短语/副词/状语从句）Somovedwashethathecanhardlyspeak.Never/Innoway/BynomeanswillIgiveup.Panickedaswewere,ElliandIscreamedatthetopofourlungs,andwavedourfistsathiminanattempttoscarehimaway.Notuntilthendidherealizehowmarvellousitwastounitewithhisfamily.With的复合结构/独立主格Hethrewaglanceatthebearcub,pettinghisheadgently,(with)excitementoverflowinginhismind.Shecriedbitterly,(with)tearsstreamingdownherface/cheeks.begrateful/thankfultosbforsthexpress/voice/conveyone'sgratitude/thanks(concern/congratulations)tosbapologizetosbforsthmakeanapologytosbforsthbeconcerned/worriedaboutcongratulatesbon