高中英语 慰问信写作及实战演练-

应用文慰问信写作及实战演练一、慰问信写作：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议或措施；3.表达愿望或祝福。慰问信是向遇到挫折、失败、生病、愁苦等的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真诚、尽量以乐观的口吻减轻遭受者的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后的生活或学习充满信心。二、慰问信常用句型1.

Iwas(awfully/extremely/excessively)sorrytohear/learnthat

you’retrappedinbadmood,whichisbecauseyoudidn’tmakeitinthedrivingtest.2.

Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwaswhenIwasinformedofyoursuddenillnessinyournewschool.3.I’msorrytolearnyou’rehavingdifficultylearningancientChinesepoems.However,there’snoneedtofeelupsetaboutit.I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.4.Havingknownthatyouareunderpainfulstateandgreatpressurenow,I’mwritingtoexpressmygreatcomforttoyou.5.Upon/Onhearingthebadnewsthat...,Ifeltseizedbyaburstofsadness/worry/sorrow/grief.6.无灵主语句Mysorrowisbeyondwordsforhearingyouhavetroublegettingalongwithyourclassmates.7.无灵主语句WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatyourleftleggotbadlyinjuredinancaraccident.8.It’snormalthatyoufeelitchallengingtofitinwiththenewschoolduetoculturaldifferenceandnewsurroundings.9.Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanshareyourexperienceswithothers,thushelpingthembecomefamiliarwithyouinashortperiodoftime.10.Actually,there’snoneedtoworryaboutit.SuchproblemisnotuncommonamongChineselanguagelearners.11.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow/don’thesitatetocontactme.12.

Remember,Iwon’tbefaraway/Iwillalwaysbehereifyouneedanyhelp!13.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.14.IfIcanbeofanyassistancetoyou,Ihopeyou’llletmeknowimmediately/instantly.15.Hopeyoucanhaveyourstroublesremovedsoon.16.We’rehopingforyourquickreturntohealth./We’relookingforwardtoyourspeedyandfullrecovery.三、优秀范本假定你是李华，你校留学生Jacky在学习中国古诗的过程中有困难，心情很沮丧，发来邮件向你求助。请给他回一封信，内容如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；DearJacky,I’msorrytolearnyou’rehavingdifficultylearningancientChinesepoems.However,there’snoneedtofeelupsetaboutit.I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.（表安慰）Tobeginwith,readanancientChinesepoemoverandoveragain,whichcanmakeiteasyforyoutounderstandit.Besides,you’dbetterlearnsomebackgroundinformationaboutpoem,thushelpingyoudiscoverthehiddenmeaningthepoemconveys.【Moreimportantly,it’sbeneficialtowatchaTVprogramcalledChinesePoetryConference,wherepoemloversexchangetheirexperienceoflearningancientChinesepoems.】(几点建议)Hopefully,you’llhavefunlearningancientChinesepoems.（表祝愿）Yours,LiHua仿写借鉴:假定你是班长李华，本学期你们班来了一个新西兰交换生Alice。由于环境变化和文化差异，她感到很难适应新环境，也无法融入新班级。请你给她写一封信，内容如下：表示安慰； 2.提出建议。DearAlice,__________________________________________________________(得知你心情沮丧我很难过).However,_________________________________________________(没必要为此难过).It’snormalthatyoufinditdifficulttofitinwiththenewclass____________(因为)culturaldifferencesandstrangesurrounding.__________________________________(我给你一些建议)._____________,____________________________________________________(积极参加不同的活动是有益的).Inthisway,notonlywillyouenjoyyourselfbutyoucanmakefriends._____________,itcan’tbebetterifyoucanshareyourstoriesoropinionswithothers,thushelpingthembecomefamiliarwithyou.Mayyoufitinsoon.Yous,LiHua慰问信赏析：）一）假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(TyphoonMujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1.表示安慰和关心；2.提供帮助。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）假定你是李华，你班来自美国的交换生Peter生病住院了。请给他发封邮件，内容包括：1.表示关心 2.提供帮助 3.祝愿康复。DearPeter,Knowingthatyouhadyourlegseverelyinjuredaccidentallyinthefootballmatch,Iamwritingtoextendsincerepityandcareforyou.Howisyourleg?Youmusthavesufferedfromtheunbearablepainwhentheaccidenthappened.Butyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry,whichisadmirable.Toourrelief,youhavebeendischargedfrom（dischargev.通知出院）thehospitalandarerecoveringwellathome.Asforthelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup.Iwishyouaspeedyrecovery.(100字)Best,LiHua(三)假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中，他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建议。DearMike,I’mverysorrytohearthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend.It’sunderstandableforyoutobeinabadmood.However,ifyoucan

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perspectives,thelossmaybeablessing.First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.【Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceuptotheresult?】Anyway,theessence(本质)ofcompetitionliesnotinvictorybutinparticipation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua(四)假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过。请你写一封信给他，内容包括:1.表示安慰；2.提出建议。DearDavid,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedtopassHSK.Ihopethattheunexpectedfailurewon’tletyoudown,forIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmet.Asweknow,languagelearningisneveraneasytask,butneedspainstakingeffortsandpatience.Personally,Ithinkyou’dbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressions,whichreallycount.Meanwhile,youmayaswellwatchmoreChinesematerialsasmuchasyoucanafford.Moreimportantly,youshouldlearnfromthemistakesthatyouhavemade.Anyhow,you’vealreadymadegreatprogressinyourlearningofChinese.Goodlucknexttime.Yous,LiHua仿写借鉴参考答案：1.I’msorrytoknowyou’redepressed.2.