高考英语复习之读后续写【高效备课精研+知识精讲提升】 自我成长类：爬山时意外受伤但继续坚持课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习自我成长类：爬山时意外受伤，但继续坚持1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IoftengoclimbingwithmyfriendMelOlsen,whomI'dmetinaFace-bookgroup.Twoyearsago,onDecember30,whenIwas16,sheandIdrovetoOregontotackle11,240-footMountHood.MyparentswerehappyI'dfinallyfoundahobby.It'ssafertostartwinterclimbsatnightwhenthere'slessriskofthesunmeltingthesnowpack.Thatday,westartedat3a.m,followingthepathsalongsidetheskiruns.Thetemperaturewasabout14degrees.Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedontogether.Afteraboutfivehours,wereachedDevil'sKitchen,aplateauatabout10,000feet,justbeforethefinalpushtothetop.Bythispoint,thewindwasviolent.Myexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.Theotherclimbersdecidedtoturnback,butMelandIwentahead.Wehadiceaxes,helmets,andcrampons(冰爪).Wewerepreparedfortheclimb.Thetrailwefollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper.Suddenly,Iheardacrack,andawholeblockoficebrokeofftheicestep,rightundermyfoot.4续写原文Inaninstant,Ifellbackward.IcouldhearMelcallingmynameasIrolleddownthemountainasifIwereacharacterinavideogame.Istuckoutmyarmsandlegs,grabbingatanything.Myclothesweretornintopieces,myhelmetwasbroken,andmyfacewasbloodiedfromcutsandscratches.ThenItookasurveyofmybodytoseewhereIwashurt,startingwithmyhead,thenmyneckandarms.Forthemostpart,Iwasfine,exceptthatIwassufferingfromasharppaininmyleftleg.AsMelmadeherwaydown,Ishoutedforhelp,andotherclimberscametoassistme.AcoupleofthemweretrainedEMTs.TheyfixedmylegandcalledPortlandMountainRescue.MelstayedbymysidewhileItriednottocryfromthepain.5段首句Para1：I'dbeenlyingontheiceshakingandachingforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.Para2：Thefallonamountaincanchangeeverything.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和好友梅尔·奥尔森爬山时突发意外，严重受伤，康复后仍坚持爬山的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：I'dbeenlyingontheiceshakingandachingforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.由第一段首句内容“救援人员赶到我身边时，我已经躺在冰上发抖疼痛了四个小时。”可知，第一段可描写作者最终获救并入院接受治疗。10续写思路分析Para2：Thefallonamountaincanchangeeverything.由第二段首句内容“从山上摔下来会改变一切。”可知，第二段可描写这次意外事故引起的关注、作者坚持爬山以及感悟。11续写思路分析续写线索最终获救——入院接受治疗——媒体关注——坚持爬山——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①尖叫、大喊：scream/shout②.到达：arriveat/getto③.回到：gobackto/returnto情绪类①.咬紧牙关（克服困难）：withmyteethclenched/setmyteeth②.热爱：love/bekeenon13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Stepbystep,withmyteethclenched,wefinallyarrivedatthebottomofMountHoodwhereIwasloadedintoanambulanceandtakentoahospital.（运用了with的复合结构以及where引导的定语从句）[高分句型2].Ithinkhandlingallthatatsuchayoungagehelpedmegrowup.（运用了动名词作主语）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现I’dbeenlyingontheiceshakingandachingforfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.Theygavemefirstaidquicklyandpulledmedownthemountain.Iscreamedwitheachmove,butstillIhadaprettyhighpaintolerance.Stepbystep,withmyteethclenched,wefinallyarrivedatthebottomofMountHoodwhereIwasloadedintoanambulanceandtakentoahospital.Istayedthereforfourdays.ThedoctorstoldmeitwouldbeayearbeforeIcouldclimbagain,butIwasdeterminedtogobackclimbingassoonasIcould.16范文呈现Thefallonamountaincanchangeeverything.Buttheexperiencealsomademegrowasaperson.Therewasalotofmediaattentionfollowingtheaccident.SomesaidIshouldgobacktoIndia.Ithinkhandlingallthatatsuchayoungagehelpedmegrowup.Sincetheaccident,I’veclimbedanother60mountains.I’mnotgoingtoletonefallanditsaftereffectkeepmefromdoingmyfavoritethingintheworld.Ilovedthechallengeofconqueringsomethingbiggerthanmyself.17范文译文当救援人员找到我时，我已经躺在冰上发抖疼痛了四个小时。他们迅速对我进行了急救，并将我从山上拉了下来。我的每一个动作都让我尖叫，但我仍然有很高的疼痛承受能力。我咬着牙，一步一步地，我们终于到达胡德山的底部，在那里我被抬上救护车，送往医院。我在那里呆了四天。医生告诉我，我还需要一年的时间才能再次攀登，但我决心尽快回去攀登。18范文译文山上的坠落可以改变一切。但这段经历也让我成长为一个人。事故发生后引起了媒体的