四级图画作文

四级图画作文

ByCUGWritingWorkshop2021/5/91作文四大要素根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》，大作文四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。2021/5/92写作框架：1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象。3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的习惯。2021/5/93议论文框架结构：3段，12句，120－180词，3－5个关联词，3－5个从句

第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句

1.总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境

1句

2.挖掘细节词、串连成句：1句

3.文字说明/象征寓意：1句2021/5/94第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句

1）因果论证

2)影响论证

3)举例论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段1句2021/5/95第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句1.结论句：1句2.针对双方提建议：2句3.包装结尾、展望未来：1句Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.2021/5/96

第一段套话如何描述2021/5/97首段写法其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段，也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论，容易导致低分。阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是:首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境；次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网打尽；（根据情况而定）末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，最好不要太多。2021/5/98描述图画的常用词有关图画的名词描述图画的形容词修饰动词的副词“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？2021/5/99替换picture的词语drawing指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。cartoon指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusingdrawinginanewspaperormagazine,esponethatcommentssatiricallyoncurrentevents(报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺画。)portrait指肖像，只用于指人。illustration插画2021/5/910描述图画的形容词thought-provoking发人深省的enlightening有启迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣profound含义深刻=far-reachingimplicationsinstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,quite）amusing令人发笑的，ridiculous荒谬可笑的illuminating(particularlyrevealingorhelpful)富有启发性的；很有助益的；impressive印象深刻的，exaggerative夸张的2021/5/911修饰动词的副词：graphically/vividly生动地symbolically象征性地conspicuously/clearly/explicitly清晰地subtly巧妙地，精细地2021/5/912寓意：moral/implications/messagehaveaprofoundimplication2021/5/913字幕:Caption:wordsprintedwithanillustrationoraphotographinordertodescribeorexplainit（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“___”.2）Thecaptionreads/indicatesthat“___”.2021/5/914

第一句描述图画怎么写？2021/5/915描述图画时需要遵循以下步骤：寻找出图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。2021/5/916屌丝版：Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinal.Thefinalisdefinedasanothernewstart.1.句型单一，2.不具备可复制2021/5/917Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman.2021/5/918Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构

+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinnal.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinnal.2021/5/919Asisshowninthepicture,+完全倒装结构（主系表表系主）+非谓语动词结构+定语从句Thereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinnal.Thefinalisdefinedasanotherstart.Ontheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinnal，whichisdefinedasanotherstart.2021/5/920某个位置有中心事物中心事物什么样周围事物什么样完全倒装非谓语动词非限定性定从2021/5/921常见可用于四级写作的完全倒装的系动词有be,come,run,walk,jump,sit,stand,lie,crouch蜷缩,float等表示动作的动词。2021/5/922屌丝版：Asisshowninthecartoon,acandleisshininginthedark.Itspreadsbrightnessarounditself.女神版：Asisshowninthecartoon,inthepicturestandsacandle,spreadingbrightnessarounditself.2021/5/923屌丝版：Asisshownabove,ayoungmanwasaskinghisbarbertohavehishaircutlikeDavidBeckham.女神版：Asisshownabove,inthechairsitsayoungman,askinghisbarbertohavehishaircutascoolasDavidBeckham.2021/5/924屌丝版：Asisvividlydepictedabove,thereisabottlefallingtotheground,thewinespileout.Onemanthinksit'sallover,whiletheotheronethinksitstillleftalittle.女神版：Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthepictureliesabottle,fallingtothegroundwithwinespiltout.Onemanwholooksverysadthinksit'sallover,whiletheotherone,happilyrushingtothebottle,saysitstillleftalittle.2021/5/925练一个呗2021/5/926Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,

inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroomfirst.(33words)2021/5/927Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,infrontofblackboardstandsateacher,teachingmathematics,however,oneofherstudentsholdstheopinionthattheknowledgeheislearningmightbeoutdatedbythetimehe'sinthejobmarket.(42words)2021/5/928Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,intheclassroonstandsateacher,askingherstudenttoreadaworkofliteratureasifhewerereadingalongtext-message,whilethestudentfeelsratherunpleasant.(37words)2021/5/9292021/5/930Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonstandtwomen,dressedintraditionalArabclothes,watchingtheconstructionofancientpyramid,whichistheamazingachievementofteamwork.2021/5/931Homework2021/5/9322021/5/933Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoon

standtwotravellers,travellingacrossmountainsandgrasslandswithheavybaggagesontheirshoulders.2021/5/934第一段常用首句句式Asisshown/depicted/portrayedinthepicture/cartoon,....Thepictureabovevividlydescribe....Thedrawingabovedoesdemonstratecertainthought-provokingsocialphenomenon.Whatdoestheauthorintendtoconveybydescribing...isthat....2021/5/935第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓意的阐释2021/5/936由浅入深之句型Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthat....Thepictureimplicitly含蓄地，暗示地

raisesthequestionoftheimportanceof....Thepictureseemstobehumorousatfirstglance/sight，butonsecondthoughts(=afterreconsideration),youcanfindthefactthat_____.Theprimarypurposeofthepicturesaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidto....2021/5/937Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,inthepicturestandsaboy,worriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste,whilehisfatherinstructshimtoemptythedustbininhisroomfirst.Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingbig.2021/5/938Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,infrontofblackboardstandsateacher,teachingmathematics,however,oneofherstudentsholdstheopinionthattheknowledgeheislearningmightbeoutdatedbythetimehe'sinthejobmarket.Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionoftheimportanceofthefundamentalskillsstudentslearninourclasses.2021/5/939看累了，练一个呗~2021/5/940Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,intheclassroonstandsateacher,askingherstudenttoreadaworkofliteratureasifhewerereadingalongtext-message,whilethestudentfeelsratherunpleasant.Theprimarypurposeofthepictureaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidtotheimportanceofbasicskills.2021/5/941Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonstand

twomen,dressedintraditionalArabclothes,watchingtheconstructionofancientpyramid,whichistheamazingachievementofteamwork.Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthatteamworkliesafundamentalbasetothesuccess.2021/5/942Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthecartoonstandtwotravellers,travellingacrossmountainsandgrasslandswithheavybaggagesontheirshoulders.Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionthatlife,whichisfullofupsanddowns,happinessandsorrow,oppotunitiesandchallenges,isneveraeasyroadtotravel.

2021/5/943第二段：即主体段落如何写？2021/5/944第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句

1）因果论证

2)影响论证

3)举例论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段1句2021/5/945topicsentencedevelopment:subidea1

development:subidea2briefconclusionLinkingdevices2021/5/946主题句（全段核心，全文关键,必写）Thesymbolicmeaningofthepictureistoshowusthatimportanceshouldbeattachedto....Thepurposeofthedraweristoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidto....Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningof....Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife,....ThecartoonconveysthemeaningthatAisliketheprocessofB.(比喻类)Thepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceof....2021/5/947过渡句(“原因如下”）的表述：①Severalfactors,(bothindividualandsocial),couldaccountforthe(negative/positive)phenomenon.②Thereasonsforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent，ascribe/owe/attribute(归结于)ittothefollowingfactors.2021/5/948Thepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceoffundamentalskills.（主题句）Thereasonsforthephenomenoncanbeattributed

tothefollowingfactors.

（过渡句）找原因！2-3条1.学习基础知识不但能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。2021/5/949masteringthebasicskillscannotonlyhelpusacquiretheadvancedskills,butalsocultivateourcharactersalongthewaywelearnit.thebasicskillswillneverbeoutofdateandtheyremainverypracticalinourdailylifeandwork.1.掌握基础知识不但能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。2021/5/950下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用Amongthemostimportantreasonscitedbypeopleis….Obviously,avarietyofcomplicatedfactorscontributetothephenomenon,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.第二个原因可以用：Anotherimportantreasonis….Alsoplayingapartis….第三个原因可以用：Thethirdreason,whichcannotbeneglected,isthat….Inaddition,(名词)isalsoresponsibleforthephenomenon.lastbutnotleast,....2021/5/951Amongthemostimportantreasonscitedbypeopleisthatmasteringthebasicskillscannotonlyhelpusacquiretheadvancedskills,butalsocultuvateourcharactersalongthewaywelearnit.Moreover,thebasicskillswillneverbeoutofdateandtheyremainverypracticalinourdailylifeandwork.(55words)foronething,foranotherontheonehand,ontheotherhand2021/5/952Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningofdealingwithtrivialthingsfirst.（主题句）Severalfactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon.（过渡句）找原因1+21.做小事不仅能够培养我们的情操，而这正是做大事所需要的，而且还能磨砺人的耐性。2.正如一句言语所说，细节决定成败，成功往往取决于小事情上。2021/5/953Doingsmallthingscannotonlyhelpuscultivatethegoodqualitiesthatweneedinundertakingimportanttasks,butalsodevelopourpatience.Asaproverbgoes,itisdetailthatdeterminessuccess,whichwasmadeupofbysmallthings.2021/5/954Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningofdealingwithtrivialthingsfirst.（主题句）Severalfactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon.（过渡句）Foronething,doingsmallthingscannotonlyhelpuscultivatethegoodqualitiesthatweneedinundertakingimportanttasks,butalsodevelopourpatience.Foranother,asaproverbgoes,itisdetailthatdeterminessuccess,whichwasmadeupofbysmallthings.(66words)2021/5/955主题句（6选1）+过渡句（2选1）+原因分析1,2（,3）2021/5/956主题句（6选1）+过渡句（2选1）+原因/影响分析1,2（,3）2021/5/9572021/5/958列举影响Itwillexertaprofoundinfluence.Thepositiveeffects,whicharewidelyaccepted,canbelistedasfollows.Thenegativeeffects,whicharegenerallyacknowledged,arepresentedbelow.Tobeginwith…,tomakemattersworse…,worstofall…2021/5/959列举影响法的模板如果全段都讲的是正面影响，主题句可以写成：…isbeneficialinmorethanoneways.如果全段都讲得是负面的影响，主题句可以写成：…isharmfulinmorethanoneways.具体到连接全段的框架可以套用如下句型：Theimmediateresultitproducesis…Theinfluenceisnotconfinedtowhatismentionedabove.What’smore….Perhapsthemostseriousconsequence(obviousadvantage)is…

2021/5/960主体段落万能角度2021/5/961物质回报...canprovidepeoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionablecolthesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeaotomobiles.individualsandorganizationscanmakemoney,takeprofitsandevenobtainwealthbydoing....Itcanimproveone'slivingstandardsandmakeaneasyancomfortablelife.2021/5/962提供快捷信息...providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation....canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents,smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.2021/5/963安全角度...canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaults....cansecurepeople'sfood,healthandshelter.2021/5/964身心角度...canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblemfromisolationandsolitude.Itcanlessenpeople'sstress,pressureandtension.Itcultivatesanoptimisticviewtowardtheworld,andextendspeople'slifespan....canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone'sknowledge,givingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.2021/5/965受益角度Itcanbroadenone'smind,enrichone'sexperience,enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone'swork.2021/5/966有助