第三组议论文

第三组：议论文(一)Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschool.IreallywantsharewithyousomeproblemsI’vebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.

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Wehangouttogetherwhenevertheycan.We’vebeenspendingmuchtimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasawastingactivity.

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Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktothem?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace

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(一)这是一封求助信，表达了作者的困扰。作者交了三位新朋友，经常一起闲逛和K歌，实际上作者并不想出去，但又担忧失去这份友谊，因此她想寻求一些建议。1.在want后加to

因want后用不定式作宾语。2.tell→told

由后面的时间状语lasttime可知应用一般过去时。3.friend→friends

由前面的three可知要用复数。4.they→we前后都是第一人称复数，应将they改为we，前后人称才一致。5.sing→singing

由固定结构spend…(in)doingsth意为“花费……做某事”可知。6.many→much

根据句意“它真的花费了我很多钱”，故用much指代钱(不可数)。7.so→but

此处显然存在转折关系，故用并列连词but。8.How→What

因作do的宾语，故要用what。9.are→were

此处是虚拟语气。虚拟条件句中的系动词是be(对现在事实的虚拟)时，要用were。10.去掉help后的with

因动词help是及物动词，可直接带宾语，不需加介词with。注意：helpsb.withsth.意为“帮助某人做某事”。wastingadj.

浪费的hangout闲逛karaokebar卡拉OK房sharewithsbsth与某人分享某事/物seethisas…把这看作……(二)

IhavelearnedthatyoueagertolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Herearesomelearningresourcestosharetoyou.Newspapersaresuitableforthemtostudythelanguage.Theycontaincorrectwordsandgrammar,thatisofgreatbenefittoyourare

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readingandwriting.Inaddition,readingmagazinesisalsoagreatlychoice.ArticlesinmagazinesprovidesmoreinformationaboutChineseculture,enablingyoutounderstandthiscountryfarther.Besides,youcanlistentoChinesesongsaswellaschatwithnativespeakers.

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Ihopemyadvicescanhelp.Itisoutofthequestionthatyou’llknowChineseculturebetter,foryouaresosmartorhardworking.

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(二)本文是对外国友人学习中国文化的途径给予一些建议。1.eager前面加are因eager是形容词，不能充当谓语，因此eager前加be。2.share后的to→with因sharesthwithsb为固定搭配，意为“与某人分享某事/物”。3.them→you人称与上下文的you保持一致。4.that→which引导非限制性定语从句并在从句中作主语，先行词指物，用which。5.greatly→great在名词前作定语用形容词。6.provides→provide因为主语articles是复数形式，一般现在时，谓语动词用原形。7.farther→further指具体的“更远”可用farther或者further；但此处指抽象的“更深入的，更进一步”，通常用further。8.advices→advice因advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。9.去掉question前的the因outofquestion为固定搭配，意为“毫无疑问”。注意：outofthequestion意为“不可能的”。10.or→and因smart和hardworking是并列关系，应用and，而or表选择关系。beeagertodosth渴望做某事beofgreatbenefittosb=beverybeneficialtosb对某人很有益inaddition此外providesthforsb=providesbwithsth给某人提供某物enablesbtodosth使某人能够做某事outofquestion没问题，毫无疑问outofthequestion不可能的，不允许的(三)SeaWorldisoneofthemostfamousparkintheworld.Thousandsofpeoplevisiteachyear.Mostofthemgotoseethedolphinsandwhalestoperformtricks,itissomethingtheycouldneverseeinthewild.

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SeaWorldhasbeenunderalotofpressurelate.Thousandsofpeoplehavebeenagainstthepark.Thesepeoplesaythatdolphinsandwhalesshouldnotbeforcetoliveinsuchsmallspace.

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Theyshouldalsoneverbeforcedtoperformmeaningtricks.Mostpeoplearestartingtoagreedwiththis.However,SeaWorldwillhopefullystartlisteningtotheprotestersandmakethechangesoon.

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(三)本文介绍了海洋世界公园面临的困境，人们希望不要强迫海豚和鲸进行商业表演了。1.park→parks

在oneof后的可数名词应当用复数形式。2.visit后面添加it

因visit是及物动词，其后需增加替代SeaWorld的it作宾语。3.删除perform前的to

由seesb.dosth.可知，用省略to的不定式作宾补。4.it→which或it前添加and

因两个单句之间需要连词，可以it前加and构成并列句，也可改it为which，引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为前句中的thedophinsandwhaleperormtricks。5.late→lately

句中表示“最近”，故将late改为lately。比较两个副词：late迟，晚；lately最近。6.force→forced

用过去分词构成被动语态。7.meaning→meaningless

由句意可知，是不应被迫表演“无意义的”把戏，故在meaning后加表示否定的后缀less。8.agreed→agree

由starttodo(开始做某事)可知，to后跟动词原形。9.However→Therefore

前后两个句子之间是因果关系而不是转折关系。10.change前的the→a

短语makeachange表示“做出改变”。trickn.

诡计；花招；把戏pressuren.

压力；压迫agreewith同意protestern.

抗议者；提出异议者(四)I’vereceivedyouremailandknowyouaretopayfour-dayvisittoChina.I’mgladtotravelwithyouasyourguide.WecanstayedinBeijingfortwodayswhileinanotherdestinationforjustoneday.

stay

aOnthefirstday,wewillvisitsomeplacesofinterestsinBeijing,explorethecultureofthiscity.Thenextday,weweregoingtomakeatouroftheGreatWall.Inthethirdday,we’lltakethehigh-speedrailtoShanghai.

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Hainanisourlastdestination,whichwecanspendhourssunbathingonthebeach.Final,we’llgetpartedandreturntohomeseparately.Areyousatisfyingwiththesearrangements?

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(四)这是给外国朋友的一封回信，作者在信中谈到将带对方游览中国的几个城市的安排。1.在four-day前加a

由词组payavisitto可知，four-day只是visit的定语，a不能少，故增加a。2.stayed→stay

情态动词后用动词原形,所以将stayed改为stay。3.interests→interest

因placeofinterest(名胜古迹)是固定词组，其复数形式是placesofinterest，故把interests改成interest。4.explore→exploring

因本句已有谓语动词willvisit，所以explore应为非谓语动词；又因we与explore是主动关系，故用现在分词形式作伴随状语。5.were→are

因这是计划将来的事情，应为aregoingtodosth。6.In→On“第三天”是具体的某一天,用介词On。7.which→where

这是一个定语从句，该从句中不缺主语和宾语，因此不用关系代词，要用关系副词。又因先行词是表示地点的destination，故改用关系副词where。9.Final→Finally

修饰整个句子要用副词形式。9.去掉home前的to

因习惯上说returnhome，其中home作副词，故去掉to。10.satisfying→satisfied

因besatisfiedwith(对……满意)是固定搭配。destinationn.

目的地explorev.

探测；探险railn.

栏杆；扶手；铁轨sunbathe

v.

沐日光浴arrangementn.

布置；安排；约定(五)DearMary,Iamsorrytohearthatyouaredeeplydepressedrecentlyduetofailintheinterviewofthebroadcaststationinyourschool.Icanunderstandthatyouarefeelingnow.Itisratherdisappointedtofailinanimportantfailinghowdisappointinginterview,whichyoudevotedalongtimetoit.Butonefailuredoesn'tmeantthatyouarenotexcellent.Actual,youareanintelligentgirl.Youaresupposedtohaveapositiveattitudeatthefailure,takingadvantageofthischancetolearnaboutsomeinterviewskill.meanActuallyto/towardsskillsBesides,you'dbetterreflectonyourmistakeaftertheinterviewsothatyouwillbemuchexperiencedthanbefore.Ihopeyouwillhappyagain.Yours,LiHuamorebe(五)为了参加学校广播站的面试，Mary做了长时间的准备，但面试失败，她现在心情沮丧。李华给Mary回复邮件安慰和鼓励她，并提出一些建议。1.fail→failing因dueto中to为介词，后接动名词。2.understand后的that→how引导宾语从句，且在从句中作feel的表语，要用how。3.disappointed→disappointing表示“令人失望的”，故用-ing形式的形容词。4.把to后的it去掉因which引导非限制性定语从句，并在从句中作to的宾语，指代先行词animportantinterview，it是多余的，故应删除。5.meant→mean在助动词(doesn’t)后应接动词原形。6.Actual→Actually修饰整个句子，应用副词。7.at→to/towards因haveapositiveattitudeto/towards(对……持积极态度)是固定搭配。8.skill→skills前有some修饰，故用复数形式。9.much→more由thanbefore可知用比较级。10.在happy前加be情态动词后要用动词原形，而happy是形容词，故加be。intelligentadj.聪明的，有智慧的bedeeplydepressed极度沮丧dueto因为；由于failintheinterview面试失败devote...to把……投入到；致力于……besupposedtodo应该；理应haveapositiveattitude抱着积极的态度takeadvantageofthischance利用这个机会learnaboutinterviewskills了解面试技巧reflectonyourmistake反思你的错误(六)Doyoureadreviewsafteryouseeamovie?Iusetodothat,butIusuallyregretted.IreadsuchmuchaboutamovieinadvancethatIoftenendedupnotgotoseeitatall.

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Thewriterspointouteverythingthat’swrongwiththefilm,butseldommentionsanythinggoodaboutit.Theyalsotellmanythingandeventheendingofthemovie.LatelyIhavechangedwayIchoosemoviestowatch.the

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(六)本文作者就“看电影评论的方式”谈了自己的观点。1.use→used由固定短语usedtodo意为“过去常常”可知。2.such→so表示“如此多/少”要用somany/much/little/few，根据后面的much可知要把such改为so。3.go→going由固定短语endupdoing意为“以……结束”可知。4.mentions→mention主语是复数名词writers，故不用第三人称单数。

5.thing→things前有many修饰，故用名词的复数形式。6.在way前加the此处表特指，故要用定冠词。7.importance→important作表语要用形容词。8.people前的that→which如果先行词指物，那么介词后面的关系代词只能用which，不能用that。9.去掉like后的of因like是及物动词。10.yourself→myself由句子的主语I可知，是指我“享受自己”。reviewn.

评论regretvi.

后悔afterwardsadv.

事后pointout指出talkshow访谈节目evenmore更多地(七)Lastweek,studentsinourclasshelddebateonwhetherweshouldshoponline.Moststudentsareinfavorforit,thinkthatshoppingonlinecanhelppeoplesavetime.

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aBesides,shoppingonlinenotonlyallowpeopletobrowsemanyitemswithoutleavingtheirhomes,butalsoletsuscomparethepricesofgoodsinashorttime.

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Moreimportant,theInternetisopenalldaylong,soitisofgreatconvenientforthosewhoarebusyinthedaytime.However,specialattentionmustbepaytothesafetyofonlineshopping.Peopleneedtomakesureofthattheygetthattheyhaveorderedbeforepayingforthebill.

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(七)本文论述了网络购物的优点和缺点。1.在debate前加a

因debate是可数名词，故要加不定冠词。2.for→of

由固定短语infavorof意为“赞同”可知。3.think→thinking

分析句子成分可知此处think作非谓语，且与逻辑主语students存在主动关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。4.allow→allows

本句主语是shoppingonline，谓语动词要用第三人称单数。5.us→them

由前面的people可知要用them。6.important→importantly

作状语要用副词形式。7.convenient→convenience

因beofgreat+抽象名词=bevery+形容词。8.pay→paid

此处是被动，故要用过去分词。9.去掉makesure后的of

因makesurethat+从句是固定句型，此处of显然是多余的。10.get后的that→what

引导宾语从句，同时在从句中作谓语动词haveordered的宾语，要用what。debaten.

辩论browsevt.

浏览itemn.

物品comparevt.

对比goodsn.

商品ordervt.

订购；订(货)savetime节省时间inashorttime在很短时间内inthedaytime在白天paythebill买单(八)Comparedwithcars,bicycleshavemuchadvantages.Firstly,theyarenotasexpensiveascarsandalmos