2022届高考英语书面表达读后续写高三模拟练习一写作指导和解读含范文

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一、续写原题

Mikelickedthelastofthemintchocolatechipicecream.Itwasalmosttimetoleave.Hejumpedintothecarwith

hisparentsandheadedofftotheOlympic-sizedpoolforthe

bigswimmeet.

Whenhisracecameup,Mikewasconfident.Hewasstrongandswift.Mikeclimbedoutthepool,smiling.Hehadjustwonfirstplace,makinghimthefastestboyinhisagegroup.Congratulations,son,hisfathersaid.Hismomgavehimahug,eventhoughhewassoakingwet.

Aweeklater,itwastimeforanotherswimmeet.Likebefore,Mikedecidedtoenjoyhisfavoriteicecreamflavor.Mikerememberedthatthelasttimehehadwonarace,healsoatemintchocolatechipicecreamfirst.Maybehe'dwinagain.

He'stakenfirstplaceagaininhisrace.Mikewasfeeling

prettygood.Asitturnedout,Mikedecidedtohavesomemintchocolatechipicecreambeforeeveryoneofthenextfewswimmeets.Hebegantothinkofitashisluckycharm.Afterseveralmonthsoffeeling

wasMikeswam,heraceeveryofpositionstoptheinplacingunbeatable.Andhewouldn'tadmitit,butallthaticecreamwasaddingafewpoundstohisathleticswimmer'sbuild.

Itdidn'ttakelongafterthatforMiketostartcominginsecondplace-andthenthird-andthenlastplaceinhisraces.Theluckymintchocolatechipicecreamhadlostitsmagic.

Onthedayofhisnextswimmeet,hismothersatdownatthetablewithhim.Mike,weallloveicecream,butit's

nothealthyforyourbodytoeatsomuchofit.Maybeit'stimetoquitthesweettreatsforawhile,especiallybeforeyougoswimming.”

Mikeunwillinglyagreed.Hewenttotheswimmeet,and

didn'tperformwell.Hisfatherofferedtogorunningwithhimafewdaysaweektohelphimfeelbetterandstrengthenhismuscles.Theextraweightsoondisappeared,andMikefoundhimselfbreathingeasieratswimpractices.

注重：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开始语已为你写好；4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikewasn'tsurewhattoexpect.

Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.

二、下水续写

“7+7”模式

Paragraph1:Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikewasn'tsurewhattoexpect.

↓1.Heonlyfeltaqueersenseoflossthathehadneverexperiencedinhislife.

↓2.Worsestill,allthepeoplethereseemedtobewhisperingabouthim,whichmadehisheartthumpingevenmorewildly.

↓3.Atthatmoment,hisparents'wordsofencouragement

echoedinhisears.

↓4.Nowcametherealtest,hethought.

↓5.SoMikeswallowedhard,tookadeepbreathandthenwaitedcalmlyforthestartsignal.

↓6.Whentheracestarted,deafeningcheersbegantoerupt

fromthecrowds.

↓7.Likeafishinthepool,Mikeswamasquicklyashecoulduntilhewasfaraheadofalltheotherswimmers.

↓Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.

.Allthepeoplegotup,applauded,andcheeredloudly.

1↓．

firstthewon↓2.ItwasplainthatMikelaughedlast--he

inthelastmeet.

place.Asheclimbedoutthepool,roarsofloudapplausebroke3↓outagain.

.Asusual,hismomgavehimahugehug,eventhoughhewas↓4wetthrough.

↓5.Andhisfathergavehimsomeicecreamasarewardandsaidexcitedly,Congratulations,son!Whatamiracle

you'veperformed!.Withlipsshakingandtearsstreamingdownhischeeks,he

replied,Thankyou...

.Butinhisheart,heknewthatitwasnotlucky

charbuthealthyexercisethatmademagihappen.

Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikeParagraph1:Heonlyfeltaqueersenseoflosswasn'tsurewhattoexpect.

thathehadneverexperiencedinhislife.Worsestill,allthepeoplethereseemedtobewhisperingabouthim,whichmadehisheartthumpingevenmorewildly.Atthatmoment,his

wordsofencouragementechoedinhisears.Nowcameparents'therealtest,hethought.SoMikeswallowedhard,tookadeep

breathandthenwaitedcalmlyforthestartsignal.Whenstarted,deafeningcheersbegantoeruptfromtheracethecrowds.Likeafishinthepool,Mikeswamasquicklyashecoulduntilhewasfaraheadofalltheotherswimmers.

Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace.Allthe

peoplegotup,applauded,andcheeredloudly.ItwasplainthatMikelaughedlast—hewonthefirstplaceinthelastmeet.

Asheclimbedoutthepool,roarsofloudapplausebrokeoutagain.Asusual,hismomgavehimahugehug,eventhoughhewaswetthrough.Andhisfathergavehimsomeicecreamasarewardandsaidexcitedly,Congratulations,son!Whatamiracl