高中英语-短文改错教学课件设计

高中英语短文改错解题策略

Teachingaims:1）了解高考短文改错题的命题规律2）掌握短文改错的应对策略方法3）提高篇章结构分析和语言纠错的能力4）培养学生的规范答题习惯PapercuttingartDearJack,IamwritingtotellyouIhadlearnedChinesepaper-cuttingart.NowIcan’twaittoshareitwithyou.Whatiswellknown,papercuttingisoneofthemostpopulartraditionalfolkartwithalonghistory.SocrazyamIaboutitthatIhavecreatedagreatmanyofartworksandI’dliketopresentyoumyfavorite.Inthecenterofthepaperisamonkeyplayedamongbambooswithbeautifulflowersaroundit.Moreover,youcanseesomeChinesecharacters,representinglucky,blessingandsuccess.Isincerelyhopeyouwilllikemygift.Ifyoudesiretoknowmoreinformationsaboutthischarmingart,wecanvisitwww.paper-cut..Lookingforwardtohearfromyou.

DearJack,IamwritingtotellyouIhadlearnedChinesepaper-cuttingart.NowIcan’twaittoshareitwithyou.Whatiswellknown,papercuttingisoneofthemostpopulartraditionalfolkartwithalonghistory.SocrazyamIaboutitthatIhavecreatedagreatmanyofartworksandI’dliketopresentyoumyfavorite.haveartsAswith∧Inthecenterofthepaperisamonkeyplayedamongbambooswithbeautifulflowersaroundit.Moreover,youcanseesomeChinesecharacters,representinglucky,blessingandsuccess.Isincerelyhopeyouwilllikemygift.Ifyoudesiretoknowmoreinformtionsaboutthischarmingart,wecanvisitwww.paper-cut..Lookingforwardtohearfromyou.playingluckinformationyouhearing高考短文改错命题特点用来命题的短文内容与学生的学习生活非常贴近,难度接近学生的习作。以书信、日记、记叙文为主。长度均在100词左右。新课标卷的设题通常是：。1：1：8错多缺

考纲解读文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:

⑴每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；⑵只允许修改10处,多者不计分。（从第11处起）

高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广。主要考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力，考察学生的发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力。短文改错的能力要求：考纲解读真题感悟：【2015·新课标全国I】WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.感悟真题：2015课标卷IWhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.andthe

thought时态连词冠词Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.

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介词语态形容词Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.our/thefindManyair名词形容词动词代词近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表动词（时、语）连词代词介词形容词副词名词冠词2011（全国卷）122101112012(全国卷）411200102013(全国卷）411110012014(全国卷）312101112015(全国卷）31120021

合计156771254近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表项目年份Howtodoitwell?

解题策略1.词法2.句法3行文逻辑一、词法口诀1、非谓动词细辨别

2、动词形

3.名词数

4.注意形和副5.留心冠介代6.习惯用法要记住常考的考点

1.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovides

abridgebetweenlunchanddinner.［2013课标II］

2.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundthathisparentsweremissing.［2015课标II］（一）非谓语细辨别________Havinglooking3.Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits［2015陕］4Meanwhile,Ifoundoutthatwithmorepatience,Imustmakemytoystolast.［2012]5.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.［2013陕西］

to___∧Feeling6.Hehadtimeforaproperbreakfastandwasstillthefirstreachthefactory.(2010重庆卷)to7.Ontheboxwasacard,said“25cents”.

(2010全国卷)8.Inoticedmotherlookingatthenearbytableoccupybyanelderlywoman.(2010浙江卷)__saying∧____occupied非谓语点拨：1.分清谓语和非谓语：句中已有谓语动词，再出现动词，其前面又没有并列连词时，该动词应为非谓语动词。2.确定用具体的形式：根据该非谓语动词在句中所作句子成分，找出与逻辑主语的关系。IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.

(2011·全国卷1)__felt

Today,IgotaletterthatsaidIhadbeenadmittingtoacollege.

(2006·天津卷)IftheywillgivemesomeinformationIwilltellyou.【2015·新课标II】______admitted1.时态、语态(二)动词形点拨：在时间、条件、让步状语从句的复合句中，主将从现__is

Asisknowntousall,rememberingEnglishwordsarenoteasy.1)就近原则:therebe…;or;either…or…;neither…nor…;not(only)…but(also)

就远原则:aswellas;togetherwith;with;ratherthan;like;but2)

动名词、不定式和主语从句做主语，谓语用单数形式。

Katia,likemanyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.

__is2、主谓一致：

【

2011·全国】Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.【2015新课标全国II】Oneday,littleTonywentto

ashoppingcenterwithhisparent,whowerebusylookingatthevarietyofgoods.

luggageparents不可数：advice,equipment,information,furniture,,baggage\luggage（行李）,fun,access,work(工作),harm,news=word（消息）,progress,traffic,company可数名词单数形式不单独使用，要么用复数要么前面加冠词(三)名词数【

2011·四川】Agroupofsheepsareeatinggrassandleavesatthefootofthehill.

sheephours’单复数同形：fish;deer;sheep;works;means;Chinese;Japanese等【

2011·浙江】Ihadoneandhalfhourclimbingandhadagoodtimeonthetopofthehill.工厂“’s”所有格的特殊表示形式有：(1)用于表示时间、距离、价格、重量等的名词后：(2)用于表示国家、店铺、家等地方的名词后:名词所有格点拨：today’snewspaperfiveminutes’walk(drive)atthebutcher’satTom’s二、句法口诀句子成分多分析，主句从句辨仔细1.Shehastwosons,andbothofwhomareteachers.2.Ifhewillcomeisuncertain.3.Althoughweknowlyingisbad,butwecan'tquitit.4.IwillneverforgetthedaywhenIspentinthecountrysideyesterday._whetherthat___them___yet___※Iwillneverforgettheday____hewashired.5.Heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.

6.Iknowthatheisdiligentandheseldomdependsonhisparents.that或∨that句子成分多分析点拨：1.并列句中，并列连词的使用是否正确，有无遗漏并列连词的情况。2.复合句中，从属连词的使用是否正确,定语从句中关系代词和关系副词的误用，特别是which与that的误用；名词性从句中连接词的误用，特别是what和that的误用之间的误用。三、逻辑错误须关注

1.Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.【2014四川】2.HehadleftafterItalkedwithhimsohedidn’tknowthetruth.【2011陕西】3.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.【2014浙江】andbecause/since/as______before___句子之间逻辑关系的矛盾。在理解句意的基础上正确判断句子结构和层次，理清前后句的逻辑关系，特别注意and、or、but、after、before、however、therefore、besides、unless、if等词的使用是否正确。点拨：4.HewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknow.

【2013新课标全国I】5.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedtheretilltheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverasacardroveoutfartooquickly.【2012辽宁】everthere

否定词特别是not、never等的漏用、误用,herethere的远指还是近指。【2013川】Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher’soffice.【2012重庆】Howareyouthosedays?Ihavebeenmissingyouverymuch.【2012重庆】Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.

【2014辽】Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter【2015陕】Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.boththesethemsomething__your

代词的逻辑错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：

1)

代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.2)

“it”一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语).3)

不定代词或反身代词的误用.点拨：要严格按照示范规定的符号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“\”分别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌用文字说明或用箭头表示。注意事项：“四不改原则”注意事项：“四改动原则”(2013.新课标II)Inmyfamily,therearethreepeoples.Myfatherishardworkingbutgoestoworkinthefieldeveryday.Heisn’tgoodattalkbuthegetsonwellwithotherpeople.Mymotherisverymuchkindandisfriendlytoeverybody.SowhenIhavetheproblem,Iwillturntoherforhelp.MyfriendssayIamclever.Whentheteacherasksusverydifficultyquestions,I’llthinkquicklyandstandtoanswer.Athome,myfatheroftenthinksI’msilly.HesaidifIdecidetodosomething,