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【2021年】福建省厦门市大学英语6级大学英语六级预测试题(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

1.中国已渐渐步入老龄化社会(65岁以上的老年人已占全国人口的7%)

2.我认为应如何对待老年人群(社会关爱与福利制度,家庭温暖,社区服务……)

3.我的结论

2.1.如今的大学毕业生面临的职业选择:兴趣重要还是工资重要

2.你的观点

3.结论

3.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLearntoGiveupWisely.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.我们应该学会明智地放弃

2.该放弃而不放弃的危害

3.在什么情况下我们应该明智地放弃

LearntoGiveupWisely

4.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:"WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?"Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.挑战的意义

2.如何迎接挑战

3.我的看法

5.Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayOnExaminations.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutinegivenbelow.

1.补考是大学教育的一部分

2.补考的利与弊

3.如何发挥补考的作用

OnRemedialExamination

6.

1.上图所示为我国近年来参加志愿活动的大学生人数,请描述其变化;

2.请分析变化的原因;

3.作为大学生,你对志愿活动有什么看法?

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人类面临的环境问题越来越多,如气候变化、环境污染、生态失衡等问题

2.但许多人仍然不懂得去保护环境

3.我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

8.1.在校大学生炒股的现象在一些地主很普遍

2.有人认为这种行为不利于学生的学习也有人认为这种行为也能让学生有所收获

3.你的观点

BuyingandSellingStocksasaStudent

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoWriteanEnglishResume?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.中英文简历有所不同,英语简历不是汉语简历的直接翻译;

2.写英语简历要注意:不要简单罗列,要突出重点;内容安排要合理;用词准确,认真检查等等。

HowtoWriteanEnglishResume?

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionwiththetitleofIstheExpansionofEnrollmentaGoodThing,givinganintroductionoftheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofcolleges'rapidexpansionandyourownpointofview.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.高校扩招是一件好事

2.高校扩招公带来一些问题

3.我的观点

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

Between1920and1940,somepeoplewereawareofthelinkbetween______.

12.

_______________carriesthesameburdenofpermanence,expressedthistimeinanegativeway.

13.

AccordingtotheAsiaFoodInformationCentre,to______candecreaseoverallcancerincidencebyatleast20percent

14.GlobalWarming:Causes,EffectsandSolutions

WhatCausesGlobalWarming?

Carbondioxideandotherairpollutantsintheatmospherelikeathickeningblanket,trapthesun'sheatandcausetheplanettowarmup.Coal-burningpowerplantsarethelargestU.S.sourceofcarbondioxidepollutiontheyproduce2.5billiontonseveryyear.Automobiles,thesecondlargestsource,createnearly1.5billiontonsofCO2annually.

Here'sthegoodnews:Technologiesexisttodaytomakecarsruncleanerandbumlessgas,modernizepowerplantsandgenerateelectricityfromnonpollutingsources,andcutourelectricityusethroughenergyefficiency.Itissurethatthesesolutionsareputtouse.

IstheEarthReallyGettingHotter?

Althoughlocaltemperaturesfluctuatenaturallyoverthepast50years,theaverageglobaltemperaturehasincreasedatthefastestrateinrecordedhistory.Andexpertsthinkthetrendisaccelerating:The10hottestyearsonrecordhavealloccurredsince1990.Scientistssaythatunlesswecurbglobalwarmingemissions,averageU.S.temperaturescouldbe3to9degreeshigherbytheendofthecentury.

AreWarmerTemperaturesCausingBadThingstoHappen?

GlobalwarmingisalreadycausingdamageinmanypartsoftheUnitedStates.In2002,Colorado,ArizonaandOregonenduredtheirworstwildfireseasonsever.Thesameyear,droughtcreatedsevereduststormsinMontana,ColoradoandKansas,andfloodscausedhundredsofmillionsofdollarsindamageinTexas,MontanaandNorthDakota.Sincetheearly1950s,snowaccumulationhasdeclined60percentandwinterseasonshaveshortenedinsomeareasoftheCascadeRangeinOregonandWashington.

Ofcourse,theimpactsofglobalwarmingarenotlimitedtotheUnitedStates.In2003,extremeheatwavescausedmorethan20,000deathsinEuropeandmorethan1,500deathsinIndia.Andinwhatscientistsregardasanalarmingsignofeventstocome,theareaoftheArctic'sperennial(常年不断的)polaricecapisdecliningattherateof9percentperdecade.

IsGlobalWarmingMakingHurricanesWorse?

Globalwarmingdoesn'tcreatehurricanes,butitdoesmakethemstrongerandmoredangerous.Becausetheoceanisgettingwarmer,tropicalstormscanpickupmoreenergyandbecomemorepowerful.Soglobalwarmingcouldturn,say,acategory-3stormintoamuchmoredangerouscategory-4storm.Infact,scientistshavefoundthatthedestructivepotentialofhurricaneshasgreatlyincreasedalongwithoceantemperatureoverthepast35years.

WhatArethePossibleConsequencesofGlobalWarming?

Globalwarmingisacomplexphenomenon,anditsfull-scaleimpactsarehardtopredictfarinadvance.Buteachyearscientistslearnmoreabouthowglobalwarmingisaffectingtheplanet,andmanyagreethatcertainconsequencesarelikelytooccurifcurrenttrendscontinue.Amongthese:

?Meltingglaciers,earlysnowmeltandseveredroughtswillcausemoredramaticwatershortagesintheAmericanWest.

?RisingsealevelswillleadtocoastalfloodingontheEasternseaboard,inFlorida,andinotherareas,suchastheGulfofMexico.

?WarmerseasurfacetemperatureswillfuelmoreintensehurricanesinthesoutheasternAtlanticandGulfcoasts.

?Forests,farmsandcitieswillfacetroublesomenewpestsandmoremosquito-bornediseases.

?Disruptionofhabitatssuchascoralreefsandalpine(高山上的)meadowscoulddrivemanyplantandanimalspeciestoextinction.

CouldGlobalWarmingTriggeraSuddenCatastrophe?

Recently,researchersandeventheU.S.DefenseDepartmenthaveinvestigatedthepossibilityofabruptclimatechange,inwhichgradualglobalwarmingtriggersasuddenshiftintheEarth'sclimate,causi

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Inorganizedexerciseprograms,exercisetherapistsorphysiologistscanexpertlyguideanexercisertotheproperwaytoincreasehisorher______withoutriskinginjuryorfatigue.

16.

Thevalueofgoodsandservicesinamarketisdeterminedbytheactionsof_________________.

17.

IntheviewofFreed,sometraditionalIndianpatternscanbeseenasanadaptationtothehigh______.

18.

Mostofparentstoleratedtheconstructivistprogramforitsfirstseveralyears,buttheyweregreatlyinfluencedbythetraditionalmaththattheyurgedteachertoteachtraditionalexams.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.

Manysellerstendtorefusepersonalchecksforfearof______.

20.

Ifachildonadiet______suffersfrommeasles,asevereillnessmayensue.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.(34)

A.Thegovernmentwasreplacedbythepartiesontheleftandright.

B.Thegoverningcoalitionfailed.

C.Thestockexchangefelldrastically.

D.Peopledemandedanimmediategeneralelection.

22.听力原文:Peopleenjoytakingtrips.Butwhatarethereasonstheyleavehome?Onereasonisforeducation.Peopletravelbecausetheywanttobroadentheirhorizons,tolearnaboutotherpeopleandotherplaces.They'recuriousaboutothercultures.Whenpeoplearetourists,theygetaquicklookatdifferentwaysofliving.Evenashortlookatanotherkindoflifestyle.isanimportantlesson.

Onatrip,apersoncanlearndirectlybyvisitingmuseumsandhistoricspots.Whatdoesatouristlearnwhoseestheartmuseums,visitsthehistoricpalacesandotherscenicspotsinParisshopsalongtheriverSeine?Hegetsavividpicture,areallifeoneoftheFrenchpeople.Helearnsabouttheirattitudes,howtheyfeelaboutbusiness,beautyandhistory.

WhataboutthetouristwhogoestoHongKong?Doeshegetthesameinformationthathecouldgetfromabook?HemightreadthatHongKongiscrowded,thatthere'slessthan200squaremetersofspaceforeachperson,butseeingandfeelingthelackofspacewillimpresshimmuchmore.Hemightreadthatthere'venearly200vehiclesforeverykilometerofroadway,butthesightofsomanyvehiclesparkedalongtheroadsidewillbeamuchmorevividlesson.ThetouristtoHongKongwillneverforgetthecontrasts.thestraightverticallinesofthetallmodernbuildingsandthemovinglinesofboatsthatpeoplelivein.

(32)

A.Tolookforadifferentlifestyle.

B.Toenjoythemselves.

C.Foradventure.

D.Foreducation.

23.(32)

A.Becauseitgivespeopleasenseofachievement.

B.Becausemostpeoplelikedoingiteveryday.

C.Becauseitisneitherbiochemicalnorpoisonous.

D.Becauseitincreasestheheartrateandcirculation.

24.(44)

25.(16)

A.Hecouldn'tmakeanysenseoutofhiscourse.

B.Hehash'ttakenmorethanonephilosophycourse.

C.Heisaphilosophymajor.

D.Hehasn'ttakenanyphilosophycourseinthatdepartment.

26.听力原文:WeknowthenthatintheUS,it'sthejobofCongresstoproposenewlaws,whichwecallbills,andperhapstomodifythesebillsandthenwriteonthem.ButevenifthebillispassedinCongress,itstilldoesn'tbecomealawuntilthePresidenthasachancetoreviewit,too.Andifit'snottothePresident'sliking,thebillcanbevetoedorkilledineitheroftwoways.Oneisbyavetomessage.ThePresidenthastendaystovetothebillbyreturningittoCongress,alongwiththemessageexplainingwhyit'sbeingrejected.ThiskeepsthebillfrombecomingalawunlessoverwhelmingmajoritiesofbothHousesofCongressvotetoover-rightthePresident'sveto.Sometimestheydothat.Often,lawmakerssimplyrevisethevetoedbillandpassitagain.Thistime,intheform.thePresidentislesslikelytoobjectto,andlesslikelytowanttoveto.TheotherwaythePresidentcankillabillisbypocketveto.Here'swhathappens.IfthePresidentdoesn'tsignthebillwithintendays,andCongressajournsduringthattime,thenthebillwillnotbecomelaw.NoticethatitisonlyattheendofanentiresessionofCongressthatthepocketvetocanbeused,notjustwheneverCongresstakesashorterbreak,say,forasummervacation.Afterapocketveto,thatparticularbillisdead.IfalawmakerinCongresswantstopushthematterintheirnextsession,they'llhavetostartalloverwithabrandnewversionofthebill.

(33)

A.HowthePresidentproposesnewlaws.

B.HowabillispassedbylawmakersinCongress.

C.HowthePresidentcanrejectaproposedlaw.

D.HowlawmakerscanforcethePresidenttosignabill.

27.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2longconversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbeaskedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichisthebestanswer.

听力原文:M:AreyoubusyFridaynight?Ifnot,wouldyouliketogototheconcert?

W:Ihaveafewcommitments.ButIthinkIcanpostponethemforanothertime,ifyou'dreallylikemeto,

Q:Whatwillthewomanprobablydo?

(12)

A.Gototheconcert.

B.Gotowork.

C.Seeherfriendsasplanned.

D.Finishherhomework.

28.

【B7】

29.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

听力原文:(26)MelissaPoewas9yearsoldwhenshebeganacampaignforacleanerenvironmentbywritingalettertothethenPresidentBush.Throughherownefforts,herletterwasreproducedonover250donatedbillboardsacrossthecountry.

TheresponsetoherrequestforhelpwassohugethatPoeestablishedKidsForACleanerEnvironmentin1989.Therearenow300,000membersofKidsF.A.C.E.worldwideanditistheworld'slargestyouthenvironmentalorganization.

PoehasalsoaskedtheNationalParkServicetocarryouta"Children'sForest"projectineverynationalpark.In1992,shewasinvitedasoneofonlysixchildrenintheworldtospeakattheEarthSummitinBrazilaspartoftheVoicesoftheFutureProgram.In1993,shewasgivenaCaringAwardforhereffortsbytheCaringInstitute.

Sincetheorganizationstarted,KidsF.A.C.E.membershavedistributedandplantedover1milliontrees!(27)Ongoingtree-plantingprojectsincludeKid'sYards—thecreationofbackyardwildlifehabitats—andnowKidsF.A.C.E.isinvolvedintheexcitingEarthOdyssey,whichisagreatwaytostarthelping.

"Startingtheclubturnedouttobeawaytohelppeoplegetinvolvedwiththeenvironment.Clubmembersstarteddoingthingslikerecycling,pickinguplitterandplantingtreesaswellasinvitingotherkidstojointheirclub."

(28)"Wetrytotellkidsthatit'snotOKtobelazy,"sheexplains."Youneedtostartbeingaresponsible,environmentallyfriendlypersonnow,rightaway,beforeyoubecomearesource-suckingadult."

26.HowdidMelissaPoebeginacampaignforacleanerenvironment?

27.WhatdowelearnabouttheKid'sYardsproject?

28.WhatcanwelearnaboutKidsF.A.C.E.?

(27)

A.ShewrotealettertothePresident.

B.Shecarriedouta"Children'sForest"project.

C.SheestablishedKidsF.A.C.E.

D.ShespokeattheEarthSummitinBrazil.

30.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2longconversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbeaskedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichisthebestanswer.

听力原文:M:I'venevertastedsuchtastysoup.IwishIhadtherecipeandI'dlovetobeabletomakeitmyself.

W:It'seasytomakeitaslongasyougetallingredientsinsupermarkethere.Letmegetapencilandpaper.

Q:Whatwillthewomanprobablydonext?

(12)

A.Gotothesupermarkettogettheingredients.

B.Sharewiththemanhowshemakesthefood.

C.Callthesupermarketfortherecipe.

D.Gotothesupermarkettobuyapencilandpaper.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Asampleofapopulationisoftenexaminedforthefollowingpurposesexcept______.

A.tomakeamoreaccuratepredictionoftrend

B.toimproveefficiencyandavoidunnecessarywork

C.tosavethetroubleofapproachingeverymember

D.topredictcharacteristicsoftheentirepopulation

32.

Anappropriatetitleforthispassagewouldbe______.

A.ManandtheUniverse

B.TowardaDefinitionofScienceFiction

C.ATypeofProseFiction

D.TheBug-EyedMonster

33.Thechieffunctionofauniform.istoprovidethewearerwitha______

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.

【S9】

35.

【S6】

36.

【S2】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S9】

38.

【S3】

39.【S3】

参考答案

1.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'predictionthisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.Firstthesocietyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfortheoldanywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostareathetraditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevailstherearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetridofthem.ThereforechangingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Secondbasedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysizeacombinationoffamilycarecommunity-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthiswayoldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamiliesthusrelievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Thirdoldpeoplenotonlyneedhelptheycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassetstheymaynotonlyliveafullerlifebutalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.AtpresentboththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'prediction,thisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.First,thesocietyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfortheold,anywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostarea,thetraditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevails,therearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetridofthem.Therefore,changingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Second,basedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysize,acombinationoffamilycare,community-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthisway,oldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamilies,thusrelievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Third,oldpeoplenotonlyneedhelp,theycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassets,theymaynotonlyliveafullerlife,butalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent,boththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.

2.SalaryorInterestUpongraduationvirtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyatoughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejobbutotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.AsformyselfIpreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeoplewithnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoneysalarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyviewourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuitiontheyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.AstheonlysoninmyfamilyIhavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshortsalaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.SalaryorInterestUpongraduation,virtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyatoughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejob,butotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.Asformyself,Ipreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeople,withnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoney,salarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyview,ourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuition,theyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.Astheonlysoninmyfamily,Ihavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshort,salaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.

3.LearntoGiveupWiselyInourlifepeopleusuallysay"Don'tgiveup!"andapersonwhoispersistentiswidelypraised.Howeversometimesifwedogiveupthingswillturnoutbetterthanwehavethought.InsistingLearntoGiveupWiselyInourlifepeopleusuallysay"Don'tgiveup!"andapersonwhoispersistentiswidelypraised.However,sometimesifwedogiveup,thingswillturnoutbetterthanwehavethought.Insisting

4.WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?Withthefastdevelopmentoftheworld.moreandmorechallengeisinstoreforusChallengemeansnotonlyhardship.Butalsoopportunity.SinceweyoungpeopleandhavebrightfuturebefoWhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?Withthefastdevelopmentoftheworld.moreandmorechallengeisinstoreforusChallengemeansnotonlyhardship.Butalsoopportunity.Sinceweyoungpeopleandhavebrightfuturebefo

5.[I]Remedialexaminationispartofcollegeeducation.[2]Mostcollegesallowatleastoneremedialexaminationonsomesubjectsforeverystudentinordertosecurehigherratesofgraduation.[3]Remedialexaminationhasitsadvantages.[4][I]Remedialexaminationispartofcollegeeducation.[2]Mostcollegesallowatleastoneremedialexaminationonsomesubjectsforeverystudentinordertosecurehigherratesofgraduation.[3]Remedialexaminationhasitsadvantages.[4]解析:作文题目是“论补考”,从outline来看,把“补考的利与弊”作为写作的重点可能更容易把握(有谁认为自己讨论“如何发挥补考的作用”更有心得的?)。“补考”作为一种教育手段,有什么作用呢?首先,学生会因为事假、病假等原因错过考试,补考是他们获得相应成绩和学分的必要措施。其次,应当承认,任何考试的信度、效度都不是完美的,学生不及格有可能是一时失误所致,而不一定是水平不够,补考就给了他们一次重新证明自己的机会。此外,即使对于真正的差生来说,从教育的目的来看,都应该允许学生改正错误。只要这些差生在一定的时期内通过努力掌握好了所要求掌握的知识,就应该给他们补考并证明自己的机会。(注意思考的逻辑性。这里把参加补考的学生分::三类,一一加以讨论,就比较严密。学生在考虑这种题目的写作时,也要学习类似的思维过程。范文因受字数限制只提到两类学生。)

“补考”有什么弊端?在现实中,有的学生因为存在补考机会,所以在学习时就没有付出最大的努力。这就没有达到教育的目的了。

最后“发挥补考的作用”部分,要结合前面的分析,表明“既要做好补考工作,也要尽力避免补考的弊端”。

Analysis

[1]紧扣outline第l条。

[2]对[1]予以展开。

[3][6]正反两方面展开说明补考的利与弊。关联问是but。

[4][5]是[3]的展开句。从两个方面说补考之“利”。

[7]是[6]的展开句。

[8]用inmyopinion引出“我”的看法,提出补考措施应该予以约束,段末再次呼应说明这种看法。

6.CollegeStudents'ParticipationinVoluntaryServices[1]Statisticsshowthattherehasbeenagreatincreaseinthenumberofcollegestudentsparticipatinginvoluntaryservicesinthepastseveralyears.[2]Arecentsurveyrevealsthatmorethanthreemillionstudentstookpartinvoluntaryworkin2008comparedwithjustonemillionin2000.[3]Severalfactorshavecontributedtothisphenomenon.[4]Foronethingtherehavebeenmorepubliceventsinrecentyearscallingforvolunteers.[5]Forinstancethe2008BeijingOlympicGameshavecalledforthousandsofvolunteersfromhomeandabroadandmanyofthemarecollegestudents.[6]Foranothermoreandmorecollegestudentsfinditworthwhiletoparticipateinvoluntaryservices.[7]Theynotonlydeveloptheirworkskillsandmakenewfriendsinvoluntaryservicesbutalsotakemuchpleasureinhelpingothers.[8]CollegestudentsIthinkshoulddoasmuchvoluntaryworkaspossibleaslongastheycanbalancewelltheirschoolworkwithvoluntarywork.Itpaysinthelongrun.CollegeStudents'ParticipationinVoluntaryServices[1]Statisticsshowthattherehasbeenagreatincreaseinthenumberofcollegestudentsparticipatinginvoluntaryservicesinthepastseveralyears.[2]Arecentsurveyrevealsthatmorethanthreemillionstudentstookpartinvoluntaryworkin2008,comparedwithjustonemillionin2000.[3]Severalfactorshavecontributedtothisphenomenon.[4]Foronething,therehavebeenmorepubliceventsinrecentyearscallingforvolunteers.[5]Forinstance,the2008BeijingOlympicGameshavecalledforthousandsofvolunteersfromhomeandabroad,andmanyofthemarecollegestudents.[6]Foranother,moreandmorecollegestudentsfinditworthwhiletoparticipateinvoluntaryservices.[7]Theynotonlydeveloptheirworkskillsandmakenewfriendsinvoluntaryservices,butalsotakemuchpleasureinhelpingothers.[8]Collegestudents,Ithink,shoulddoasmuchvoluntaryworkaspossibleaslongastheycanbalancewelltheirschoolworkwithvoluntarywork.Itpaysinthelongrun.解析:[1]直接说出图表所揭示的大学生志愿者增加的趋势。重点句型,需要熟练掌握。

[2]用图表中的具体数字埘前一句的趋势加以支持。

[3]用来阐述原因的重点句型。

[4][6]用Foronething…Foran-other…列举两个不同的理由。

[5][7]用Forinstance举例说明第1个小点:用notonly…butalso…结构引出说明第2点的理由。

[8]结论,表示自己的看法。aslongas,inthelongrun是亮点短语。

[写作指南]

这是典型的图表作文题。根据图表内容以及题目给出的写作大纲,本作文的写作思路是:

第一段根据图表简要介绍学生参加志愿活动人数增加的趋势;

第二段从社会需要以及学生的自我认识两方面,分析大学生志愿者人数增加的原因;

第三段最后总结,提出大学生在顾及学业的同时,应该尽量多参加志愿活动。

7.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadayssuchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationismanypeople[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,andecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析:本文标题是“沦环境保护的重要性”,所以尽管outline中提到环境恶化、很多人不注意环境保护等内容,但这些内容似乎都不应该作为重点,而只能是不可缺少的“引子”,作文论述的重点应该还是正面阐述“重要性”。

环境保护问题当然是“老生常谈”,但动笔具体写的时候,却让人为难,可能总是转不出“环境保护对人类的生存至关重要”这么一条理由。如何阐述理由,使这些理由相互关联却又截然不同,显得层次分明,是考生写作思路训练的重点。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相应内容简要介绍一下。

[2]前一句中的让步结构(seriousasthesituationis)运用巧妙,而这一句就给出主题句。

[3][4]关于环保的重要性,能够给出什么理由呢?这里只列了两条:环保可以拯救地球——我们生存的家园;只有环保才能让我们拥有健康生存所需要的资源。理由只列两条时,可以使用foronething…foranother的套话引出。注意,这里的两条理由之间没有重复交叉。如果举出四五条理由,只不过分别说环保使我们得到干净的水、空气、土壤、粮食等等,虽然不算错,但内容上是重复的,说服力就不够。

[5]结尾段重复一遍主题是必要的,注意语言上要有变化。本文用到important,impor

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