中考英语作文指导课

Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考写作指导课2021/5/91basicstructure(基本结构的安排)2021/5/92DearMr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Let’sgoforit!

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）2021/5/93basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautifY(美：谚语/例子)2021/5/94健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork2021/5/95

如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用

简单的句子列出文章的要点。2021/5/96

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)2021/5/97Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。2021/5/98Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)2021/5/99Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用高级词汇2021/5/910Whichisbetter?

他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.2021/5/911

我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.2021/5/912方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2021/5/913

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…2021/5/914方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2021/5/9151.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)2021/5/916Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast2021/5/917Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)2021/5/918Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)2021/5/919Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（谚语）/saying2021/5/920集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2021/5/921加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2021/5/922Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

2021/5/923Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水难收。一天一苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。2021/5/924方法四:妙用谚语和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）2021/5/925青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子2021/5/926加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.2021/5/927Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!结尾：提出倡议或号召2021/5/928

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用说)answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!1234652021/5/929DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.Yourturntogoforit!（试填一填）2021/5/930DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYourturntogoforit!（check）1232021/5/931Let’spractise.2021/5/932Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so2021/5/933满分作文标准：第一档：（17~20分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）2021/5/934

规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写2021/5/9352021/5/9362021/5/937

随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。

要求：

1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；

2.提示的内容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(练练笔)2021/5/938Let’sHelpOurFriends（满分作文赏析）

Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!2021/5/939Thankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+

Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end2021/5/940HOMEWORK:书面表达（共20分）根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意：1．字数60一80。

2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）

3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答题卡上）假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。发言稿（介绍）2021/5/941name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.

That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.

2021/5/942Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介绍）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野营）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物学家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.2021/5/943Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.

Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/Iwillbehappinessplayinggrow2021/5/944

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!（满分作文赏析）2021/5/945Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthd